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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: nspn.92

awsome.

Loved the concept.😊
Will be waiting for the 1st part.
Update soon...
Thanks for the PM.

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Originally posted by: masin

OH MY GOSH!!!!!!!!!!!! YYYAAAAAAYYYYYYYYYY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! WHAT AN AMAZINGG CONCEPT KALI DI!!!!!!!!!!

kk....me done screaming!!!!! wait no...not yet........AAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :D:D:D:D:D:D:D
this is such a fabulous idea.....yaadein is one of my all time favourite movies!!!!!! and i never got a pm bout the summary, so i had no idea!!!!!!! oh my!!!!!! i can't wait to read this!!!!!! and meher's last line was just cherry on the top!!!!!!
please please please update soon!!!!! for the sake of my sanity!!!! pretty pleaseeeeee!!!!!!!!!!! and btw....the storyline isn't exactly the same is it? in terms of all the evil people being completely evil?? LOL...
can't wait to read moree
please keep me posted, and thanks for the pm!
lovee
Samra :) <33

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Originally posted by: amu142

love bhaiyaa??????

🤣
waiting for the 1st update

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Originally posted by: Additi...

It seems interesting Kali..please continue soooon.

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Originally posted by: crystall

Lovely start !

Love bhaiya that's soo cute !
So Prem and Heer love each othr secretly !
Sounds intersting !
Waiting for next !
Update soon !
Thnx for pm

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Originally posted by: prempadmasujal

Very nice
So Meher and Prem share a close relationship, cool

Will there be Meet in this too?

Thanx for the PM

Cant wait to read more
lekin how come preet kapoor rather than preet juneja

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Originally posted by: ahana2009

hey prem here plays the part of hrithic and heer kareenas part/?interesting...do update soon

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Originally posted by: aishwaryagayen

do try to pm me plz i loved all ur oneshots in ur creations specially soldier

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Originally posted by: kb_war

it is great...lukng 4ward for d 1st update

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Originally posted by: nehara

hey...
it's so interesting....
it was awesome.....
cnt wait to read more...
pls update soon.... :D

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Originally posted by: shirlys

wow love bahiya its nice
plz update asap
plz add me in ur pm list
tc

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Originally posted by: sonia7

hey awesome but update the forst chapter soon thanks for the pm

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Originally posted by: -fsn-

it seems really intresting...............looking forward to read further
continue soon
luv
Fatima

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Originally posted by: sweetanu2314

wow dear that was an awsome prologue....... do continue soon with the updates........thanks for the pm............prem loves heer but heer? might be hopefully.........meher is sooo bubly......what about kulraj? guess she is married right........u said so before............do update soon.......

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Originally posted by: 0711rokxoxo

oh me goshy, oh me goshy, oh me goshy!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

WOW!!! I really, really, really can't wait for the update. If this is the prologue then I am totally gonna be stunned with your update!
I just loved it, lol Prem is a cheesecake (I like cheesecake!) and omg loooovvvveeee MEHER!!!! Can't wait till our LOVE BHAIYA aur Heer ka SAIYAN comes....
please add me to ur pm list Kali...
Thnks
update sooon...

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Originally posted by: v_nikhita18

awesome prologue!

so meher calls prem 'love bhaiya'....cute!
can't wait for the first part......continue soon!

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Posted: 15 years ago
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From the window, Heer watched as the soft white, crystal petals swayed through the air and caked a clear, white blanket on the arid soil. She could feel the vicious wind attack the wonderful structure of her home with an intruding force. But the cozy comfort of her house kept her protected from the outside.

This was the standard weather condition in Simla. Every winter, the small town of Shimla would be coated in snow. The weather conditions did create several problems for all the residents in the city. But the beauty of the place took everyone's breath away. The scenery made the resident feel as they were in paradise. The prolonged beauty of the place was beyond their imagination.

As she watched the infinite amount of snowflakes down from the sky, she couldn't stop her thought from pondering over him. It felt like just yesterday when she had seen him.

True that they were childhood friends, but after he moved to America there was no possible way for her to see him. He had left for America when he was seven and she was only five.

As she watched the white snow coat over her large window, she could paint a childish version on him over the coated snow. He had dark brown hair, bright, coffee warm eyes that warmed up your soul, his sugary smile that cheered her heart up, and his tall, muscular figure which gave him the image of a gentleman.

Regardless of his physical features, she admired all the important qualities and the values that were filled in him. His politeness, his respectfulness towards everyone, and the way he looked at her. Every single thing about him made her think that he was just an illusion of her dream man. But true enough, he was way more then an illusion.

He won her heart not by just being the sugary sweet boy that he was. But he had won it all by his actions. After a break of eleven long years, she had encountered him. It didn't even take her a nanosecond to figure out who he was. In the crowd of millions, she can easily sort him out of nowhere. Prem Juneja just had that quality.

She knew that there was a reason behind the fact that Gayatri Aunty had named him Prem. However, Heer didn't know it until the day she had witness the "Prem" inside her Prem.

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Four Years Ago
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It was early Saturday morning and the Mann Residence was in absolute chaos. People running around everywhere, trying to get as much as possible accomplished for the wedding that was scheduled to take place that the end of the week.

::

Balraj Mann was negotiating with the caterers and the wedding planners for the entire week's plan. The Sangeet, the Mehendi, the Haldi, and the Satya Narayam pooja had to be organized for the next few days.

Being a respected and well educated professor at the St. Xavier's College in Simla, Balraj Mann had everyone person in the town on his side. Even though Balraj had no blood relatives in the world besides his daughters, the entire town of Simla was like his family. His colleagues were also very supportive and understanding. They had all roped themselves in to help Balraj Mann wed his beautiful daughter away.

The town was full of generosity and full of love. Everyone cared about each other. They were in to help the other in no time. For Balraj, the common town people had done the biggest and the tinniest things to make the tension easy for Balraj. That's how Simla was. Everyone will be there to celebrate your happiness as well as give you a helping hand whenever it is necessary.

As he handed the list back to the caterers with a satisfied smile, he got up and glanced around the house. This was the house which he had gifted his dear wife Teji before their marriage. As his eyes gazed over the beautiful silver and golden drapes, the shimmering chandelier, and all the walls decorated by glittering, gold flowers, he couldn't stop the smile from forming on his lips.

Upon securitizing the beautiful house, his eyes fell on his first angel, Kulraj. Tears instantly formed in his eyes. He couldn't believe it. His baby is about to get married to one of the most respected industrialist's son, Kiran Gill. Though he had only met the guy once, he had complete trust in him.

Balraj watched as his Kulraj was surrounded by all her friends and the ladies of the town. She was busy selecting her dresses for each function. Mrs. Sharma, a good friend of Teji, had brought in an exclusive collection of bridal wear just for Kulraj.

Balraj watched as she stood in front of the mirror and draped herself with the dupatta. He couldn't help but release the tears of joy as well as sorrow. The daughter that he had raised was now getting married. She would soon be away from him. He watched Kulraj's eyes which were flickering in happiness. Her skin was glowing off such a beautiful radiance. He was happy, his family was happy, his heart was happy. All this was due to the efforts of only one person, Prem.

::

As the tears rolled down his face, Heer couldn't help but wiped them away. She watched as her father looked at her with a proud smile. Heer smiled back at him, her eyes filled with the same amount of tears.

"Please mat roye Papa. Verna mai bhi rooh dungi." Heer said with a sad pout. Balraj laughed at his second angel's innocence and pulled her into a hug.

Balraj felt blessed to have Heer as his daughter. Heer was the absolute shadow of Kulraj, just a bit more stubborn. But he nonetheless loved his baby. Out of all the things, he was happy that the sixteen years old had always been mature and understanding. Yes, she was stubborn at times, but never against her Papa. Heer was his innocent and soft child.

As he released her from the hug, she revealed her nave looking face which was like an exact replica of her late mother.

He smiled at her to cheer up her mood. Seeing her father's attempt to make her smile, Heer formed a slight grin that relaxed her father.

Both Balraj and Heer stood in a corner and watched Kulraj sort out all her dresses.

"Didi kitni khush lag rahi hai naa." Heer said as she glanced at her sister's smiling face.

"Haan. Bahot khush lag rahi hai." Balraj paused for a second and then continued.

"Pata nahi isse door kaise rahunga." Heer didn't miss the sadness in his voice.

But their quiet conversation was disrupted by Moti.

"Don't worry Papa. Mai hu naa. Mai and Heer Didi hamesha aapke saath rahenge." Meher popped out from behind. A big ladoo in her hand. She hugged Heer from behind and literally squeezed the life out of Heer.

"Meher. Chod!" Heer shrieked. Being the delicate girl she was, Meher and completely crushed her in her hug.

"Sorry Didi." The fourteen years old giggled upon seeing her sister's angry face.

Heer turned around to look at Meher and was shocked to see her munching on a big ladoo which had been prepared for the pooja. Since morning Heer has been whipping Meher away from the kitchen like you do to annoying flies that hover over the food. And now, she was munching on the Prasad.

"Thair toh. Mai abhi tujhe theek karti hu!" Heer threatened her as Meher ran. Heer ran behind her to get back to her.

Balraj couldn't stop the smile from forming on his lips. Teji had gifted him with the three most precious diamonds in the world. They were his life.

::

Balraj was about to go and check up on how everything was being handled around his house by his fellow town people. But just then, he heard the door bell ring.

Balraj approached his steps towards the door and right upon opening the door, he was greeted by his brother cum best friend, Lalit.

Can't wait for comments! I know it's short but will increase the size don't worry. Let's see, if you guys can reach Page 10, then you'll get the next part! Promise!!!

Edited by -Kali- - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#43
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Posted: 15 years ago
#44
i love yaadein & a premeer ff based on
it is something i wouldnt miss.
nice part. i loved it.
heer has feelings 4 prem great!
continue soon.
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Posted: 15 years ago
#45

Originally posted by: -Kali-

LOVE THE GLITTERY TITLE...
From the window, Heer watched as the soft white, crystal petals swayed through the air and caked a clear, white blanket on the arid soil. She could feel the vicious wind attack the wonderful structure of her home with an intruding force. But the cozy comfort of her house kept her protected from the outside. Yes I feel the same way... Its jst soo cozy... dont feel like going outside in the snow. Just keep on staring at it.. .

This was the standard weather condition in Simla. Same in Canada, but its not always fun having snow Every winter, the small town of Shimla would be coated in snow. The weather conditions did create several problems for all the residents in the city. Sooo true...But the beauty of the place took everyone's breath away. The scenery made the resident feel as they were in paradise. The prolonged beauty of the place was beyond their imagination. U could literally paint the whole scenery... and it will look like heaven...

As she watched the infinite amount of snowflakes down from the sky, she couldn't stop her thought from pondering over him. It felt like just yesterday when she had seen him.

True that they were childhood friends, but after he moved to America there was no possible way for her to see him. He had left for America when he was seven and she was only five. Aaiii...haaiii... his older than her.... i knw heeriye...kitna bura lagta hai when ur frnd goes away... but lets blame tht on Kali for her immagination 😆😆... jokes... dont worry Kali ne judaa kiya hai soon she'ill bring him back.... well atleast I hope soo.. or maybe I know so.... kher... let me read...

As she watched the white snow coat over her large window, she could paint a childish version on him over the coated snow Awww........ He had dark brown hair, bright, coffee warm eyes that warmed up your soul, his sugary smile that cheered her heart up, and his tall, muscular figure which gave him the image of a gentleman. I'd give anything to get someone like him as my friend or someone like him in my life.... lekin meri kismat heeriye jaisi kahan...

Regardless of his physical features, she admired all the important qualities and the values that were filled in him. His politeness, his respectfulness towards everyone, and the way he looked at her. Ooooohhhh... she liked the way he looked at her??? 😆😉 Every single thing about him made her think that he was just an illusion of her dream man. But true enough, he was way more then an illusion. Of course his more than an illusion... he makes things seem like illusions

He won her heart not by just being the sugary sweet boy that he was. Love bhaiya is made out of all sugary sweet love... But he had won it all by his actions. After a break of eleven long years, she had encountered him. It didn't even take her a nanosecond to figure out who he was. In the crowd of millions, she can easily sort him out of nowhere. Prem Juneja just had that quality.

She knew that there was a reason behind the fact that Gayatri Aunty had named him Prem. However, Heer didn't know it until the day she had witness the "Prem" inside her Prem. Gosh!!! Love that name....

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Four Years Ago
::

::

::

It was early Saturday morning and the Mann Residence was in absolute chaos. People running around everywhere, trying to get as much as possible accomplished for the wedding that was scheduled to take place that the end of the week.

::

Balraj Mann was negotiating with the caterers and the wedding planners for the entire week's plan. The Sangeet, the Mehendi, the Haldi, and the Satya Narayam pooja had to be organized for the next few days. Weddings are hectic... and these rituals can sometimes get on ur nerves...but who cares...I LUV THEM....😆

Being a respected and well educated professor at the St. Xavier's College in Simla, Balraj Mann had everyone person in the town on his side. Even though Balraj had no blood relatives in the world besides his daughters, the entire town of Simla was like his family. His colleagues were also very supportive and understanding. They had all roped themselves in to help Balraj Mann wed his beautiful daughter away.

The town was full of generosity and full of love. Everyone cared about each other. They were in to help the other in no time. For Balraj, the common town people had done the biggest and the tinniest things to make the tension easy for Balraj. That's how Simla was. Everyone will be there to celebrate your happiness as well as give you a helping hand whenever it is necessary.

As he handed the list back to the caterers with a satisfied smile, he got up and glanced around the house. This was the house which he had gifted his dear wife Teji before their marriage. As his eyes gazed over the beautiful silver and golden drapes, the shimmering chandelier, and all the walls decorated by glittering, gold flowers, he couldn't stop the smile from forming on his lips.

The way u have described it... even I can't help but smile...

Upon securitizing the beautiful house, his eyes fell on his first angel, Kulraj. Tears instantly formed in his eyes. He couldn't believe it. His baby is about to get married to one of the most respected industrialist's son, Kiran Gill. Though he had only met the guy once, he had complete trust in him.

Balraj watched as his Kulraj was surrounded by all her friends and the ladies of the town. She was busy selecting her dresses for each function. Mrs. Sharma, a good friend of Teji, had brought in an exclusive collection of bridal wear just for Kulraj.

Balraj watched as she stood in front of the mirror and draped herself with the dupatta. He couldn't help but release the tears of joy as well as sorrow. The daughter that he had raised was now getting married. She would soon be away from him. He watched Kulraj's eyes which were flickering in happiness. Her skin was glowing off such a beautiful radiance. I am sure she looked very cute and sweet. He was happy, his family was happy, his heart was happy. All this was due to the efforts of only one person, Prem. Heeriye ki dil ki dhadkan...PREM....

::

As the tears rolled down his face, Heer couldn't help but wiped them away. She watched as her father looked at her with a proud smile. Heer smiled back at him, her eyes filled with the same amount of tears.

"Please mat roye Papa. Verna mai bhi rooh dungi." Heer said with a sad pout. Balraj laughed at his second angel's innocence and pulled her into a hug. Awww... I love doing that to my mommy

Balraj felt blessed to have Heer as his daughter. Heer was the absolute shadow of Kulraj, just a bit more stubborn. But he nonetheless loved his baby. Out of all the things, he was happy that the sixteen years old had always been mature and understanding. Yes, she was stubborn at times, but never against her Papa. Heer was his innocent and soft child.

As he released her from the hug, she revealed her nave looking face which was like an exact replica of her late mother.

He smiled at her to cheer up her mood. Seeing her father's attempt to make her smile, Heer formed a slight grin that relaxed her father.

Both Balraj and Heer stood in a corner and watched Kulraj sort out all her dresses.

"Didi kitni khush lag rahi hai naa." Heer said as she glanced at her sister's smiling face.

"Haan. Bahot khush lag rahi hai." Balraj paused for a second and then continued.

"Pata nahi isse door kaise rahunga." Heer didn't miss the sadness in his voice.

But their quiet conversation was disrupted by Moti.

"Don't worry Papa. Mai hu naa. Mai and Heer Didi hamesha aapke saath rahenge." Meher popped out from behind. A big ladoo in her hand. She hugged Heer from behind and literally squeezed the life out of Heer. I love giving bear hugs to my bro and he hates them... but its jst too funny...😆😆

"Meher. Chod!" Heer shrieked. Being the delicate girl she was, Meher and completely crushed her in her hug. Meher... dekh... teri behen bohot dubli hai... kahan bichari ko apne hugs dekar maarne par tuli hui hai... 😆

"Sorry Didi." The fourteen years old giggled upon seeing her sister's angry face.

Poor meher...ek hug hi toh de rahi thi...I hate those looks...

Heer turned around to look at Meher and was shocked to see her munching on a big ladoo which had been prepared for the pooja. Hehe... love ladoos especially during weddings...khane ka maza hi kuch aur aata hai... Since morning Heer has been whipping Meher away from the kitchen like you do to annoying flies that hover over the food. And now, she was munching on the Prasad.

"Thair toh. Mai abhi tujhe theek karti hu!" Heer threatened her as Meher ran. Heer ran behind her to get back to her. 😆 Meher ko exercise karane ka irada hai Heer ka...

Balraj couldn't stop the smile from forming on his lips. Teji had gifted him with the three most precious diamonds in the world. They were his life.

::

Balraj was about to go and check up on how everything was being handled around his house by his fellow town people. But just then, he heard the door bell ring. Ab yeh kaunsi aafat hai?

Balraj approached his steps towards the door and right upon opening the door, he was greeted by his brother cum best friend, Lalit.

AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! IS PREM THERE????? OMG!!!!!!!!! CANT WAIT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Can't wait for comments! I know it's short but will increase the size don't worry. Let's see, if you guys can reach Page 11, then you'll get the next part! Promise!!!

Hope we get there soon...

Thanks sooo much for the update...
please add me to ur pm list...
Thanks again...
luv it...
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Posted: 15 years ago
#46
awesome
can't wait to see prem's entry. oh god.
so heer has feelings 4 prem umm. grt.
thnku 4 the pm.
hope v get to page 11 soon.
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Posted: 15 years ago
#47
aww...its wonderful luv da flashback...so meher was like tat not bad..her character sounds cute...bt heer on da other hand sounds cute with maturity plus stubborn well havent seen it though..bt cant wait to see watll happen...hope gay3 her character is interesting cause i really dont want her to be vamp...and luv meher .. and cant wait to see mehe's bhaiya and heer's "saiya".lol
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Beautiful update !
Loved it !
Soo its wedding time for Kulraj !
Lalit was on door means Prem must have also come !
Can't wait for Premeer scenes !
Update soon !
Thnx for pm !
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Heyy!!!
Yeshh....you updated!it was an amazing update!!! you described it so well....it felt like I was there!😃 Haii heer has feelings for prem! Can't wait till prem' entry.....lol awww meher is sho cute! loved ballu's and the sister's bondings! Well it's wedding time in the mann house...hmm i'm guessing prem had a part in how kulraj and kiran met? Can't wait till the next update!😃
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Posted: 15 years ago
#50
hey kali this is torture yaar..........u alwz do this😭stop in the middle

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