FF - RISHTA II Part - 76(04/03) 147 UPDATED!! - Page 2

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Congratulations for the new thread !!
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Part - 44

Gaya3, Heer and Megher are busy. Lalit,Prem and Preet is watching them from the couch. Chahat is helping her mother to arrange flowers. Prem is watching Heer and Chahat arranging flowers. He went to them 'can I help you?' he brushed his upper arm on hers.

Heer gave a fake angry face 'Prem, we are getting ready for the pooja.'

He picked up Chahat 'I thought I can help you with my Chahat.' In a disappointed voice 'I think you didn't like my presence here.' he put one step back.

Heer pulled his wrist 'you can help me but don't touch me.' she smiled.

Prem grinned but agreed. Chahat jumped out of his hand and ran to Lalit to show a flower to him. Heer was struggling to put a flower on the wall, which is in the height. Prem grabbed her waist and pushed her up to reach the spot. She started shivering when his hand touched her bare waist. She quickly placed the flower and he lowered her down to the floor. His hands are still around her waist. She is blushing and in low voice 'Premmmm.' She tried to release his hand. She is just staring at his cute face. He smiled looking at her cute face.

They came back to sense hearing Gaya3 calling them for the pooja.

No one gave any attention to their secret romance. Sanjana is the one who is fuming with anger. Sanjana rushed to Rishab in search of help. Rishab is talking to someone in the phone 'all the best.'

He cut the line and saw Sanjana standing with tension. 'Rishab, Prem is moving very close with Heer. He gave a kiss in the car to her. He didn't bother about others around them. First time I'm seeing him as romantic person. now he is '

Rishab smiled 'he is always romantic. You failed to notice.' Sanjana got tensed 'if Heer brings his memory back then we will be in trouble. You said Prem will get jealous seeing us together but I'm jealous now. Even after knowing that she is not his wife, he is sticking to her like a glue.'

Rishab with a confident 'don't worry Sanjana. Today, Heer is out for ever from Junejas. Prem will leave alone from here. All the stupid Junejas will believe she is Anjali and chase her out. Enjoy the day.' He kissed her. He moved his lips to hers 'I don't know why Prem didn't have attraction towards you. I going mad whenever I see your face.' she smiled and kissed his lips. He hugged her and they stayed for a while and broke apart sensing their closeness.

After Pooja, everyone decided to take rest for few hours before celebrating Lalit's birthday in the evening. Chahat was playing with Lalit and Gaya3. So Prem and Heer went to their room. Prem closed the door behind as soon as they entered the room. Heer looked at him with a smile.

He hugged her 'now the pooja is over I can do anything I want.' Heer smiled looking at his cute face. His hands are around her waist. She stroked his hair 'yes. but let me change my first.' He released her. She went to change. She came out wearing a salwar. Prem removed his shirt and leaning his head on the board and closed his eyes. Heer went to the couch and sat with a magazine. She pretending to be reading but she is looking at Prem.

Prem opened his eyes and saw Heer sitting on the couch. He grinned. 'Heer, come take rest.'

Heer smiled turning the pages 'no Prem. I slept nicely in the car. so I'm not tired.' Prem turned to other side showing the back to her.

Heer couldn't understand his sudden change. She got up from the couch thinking 'he won't leave until I go near him. but he didn't show any interest why?'

She climbed on the bed. she sat next to him. she gently stroked his hair. He turned and kept his head on her lap. he wrapped his hand around her stomach. Stroking his hair 'Prem, are you angry on me?'

Prem got up and sat next to her leaning on the board 'nope.' He wrapped his hand around her and pulled her closer. she leaned on to his chest. 'then why you turned to other side?' Prem nuzzled his lips on her cheek. 'to do this.' He kissed her cheek. 'why you went to couch leaving me here?'

Heer with a baby face 'I thought you will carry me to the bed. like you always do.' he playfully hit his chest 'but you didn't.' Prem face changed and eyes filled with tears 'I didn't remember Heer.'

Heer felt bad for hurting him 'Sorry Prem. I didn't mean.' He closed her mouth. 'I know about you Heer. But what I'll do. whenever I try to recollect our past, I'm getting headache.' Heer wiped his tears 'don't strain too much.' She moved closer to him. He hugged her tightly.

All gathered in the living room to celebrate Lalit birthday with a small family party. Lalit cut the cake. He feeds Gaya3. He picked up another piece and feeds Preet and gave the remaining half to Preet to feed Megher. He feeds another piece to Prem and gives the rest to Prem to feed Heer. Prem feeds Heer and Chahat. Chahat clapped. Others joined her. Prem kissed Chahat 'my cute girl.' Lalit and Gaya3 thanked God for happy family.

Chahat got down from Prem's hand and went to Lalit. He picked him up. Pointing the cake she asked 'Ma, caku.' Heer gave her a piece. She feed Lalit. He was happy. 'Only my grand daughter knows my wish.' With fake angry face 'Everyone hate from my hand but no one gave me a piece of cake.' he kissed her cheek 'thanks dear.'

Heer cut two pieces and placed on a plate and gave it to Sanjana and Rishab. Sanjana is already fuming with anger because of Prem feeding Heer. Heer teasingly smiled. Sanjana in lower voice to Heer 'don't laugh too much you end up in crying.'

Heer ignored her and went to Prem. He wrapped his hand around her shoulder. She leaned on to his shoulder giving a victory look to Sanjana. Prem gave a peck on Heer's head.

A man came into farm house. The man shouted 'Anjali'. Everyone looked at him with confusion 'who is he?'

Man walked towards Heer. Heer moved closer to Prem. Prem increased his grip around her. Man with anger 'Anjali, why are you staring at me like this. Can't you remember me?' He angrily pulled Heer out of Prem's hand. Prem got angry.

Heer in confusion 'who are you? I haven't seen you before.'

Man 'Anajli, I'm Manmeet. your husband.' Heer shocked. Prem gave a suspicious look to him. Heer stepped backward.

Manmeet 'How could you leave me like this. We love each other.' he kept his hand on her shoulder. She pushed it away and moved away from there and walked towards Prem. Prem standing there with shock thinking 'who is he?'

Manmeet turned and looked around others 'she is my wife. I love her more than anything in this world. we got married two and a half years back in Mumbai. Chahat is my daughter. We got separated during bomblast. I was searching for her from that day.'

Heer shouted 'no. I don't know you. I'm not Anjali.'

Manmeet 'Recently I came to know that she lost her memory and working in an office. I know you lost your memory but how can you forget me. We loved each other.'

Manmeet stepped forward towards Chahat and pulled her out of Lalit's hand. Lalit pushed him away. Heer shouted in anger 'Don't touch her. I'm not Anjali. Chahat is my daughter. Prem is her father.' Manmeet continues to pull Chahat out of Lalit's hand. Chahat started crying stretching her hands towards Prem 'Papa.'

Sanjana with a wicked 'Anjali, DNA test says Chahat is not Prem's daughter.'

Preet with anger 'Sanjana will you shut up?' he turned to Manmeet 'Mr, you have misunderstood and searching your Anjali in a wrong location. Just leave from here.'

Prem is thinking 'he is claiming Chahat is his daughter and the DNA test says I'm not her father.' He confused 'So you are Anjali, as Sanjana said you are playing game to get my property.' Heer looked at Prem with confusion and fear. She thought Prem will help her. She is shocked when she noticed confusion in his face.

Manmeet stepped towards Heer 'Heer, don't you remember that we got married in Mumbai? don't you remember the days we spent together?'

Prem stopped him 'Mr. Manmeet, do you have any proof that you are her husband.' Heer is shocked. 'why Prem is asking him like this? Prem believes his words and thinks as Manmeet is my husband.' her eyes filled with helpless.

Manmeet confidently 'yes. I have.' Prem 'Form your feelings I believe that she is Anjali but we cannot just send her with you because she is presently staying with us. Show the evidence then you can take her with you.' Heer is shocked by Prem's words 'still he thinks Anjali' her eyes filled with tears. she want to die. She wants to kill herself for hearing those words from Prem's mouth.

Gaya3 'are you mad Prem? you are doubting your Heer. That means you are doubting you. she is your soul. Don't you remember that.'

Prem 'Ma. I didn't remember anything. he is saying that she is his wife and he has a proof for that.'

Lalit 'Prem, you are doing the mistake. you cannot forgive yourself for doing this later.'

Prem 'Mr. Manmeet, show me the proof.' Manmeet pulled out a picture of wedding. Manmeet and Heer hugging pictures. Prem is shocked. he looked at Heer. Heer with tears 'Prem I'm yours. I'm not Anjali. I'm Heer. Your Heer.'

Prem angrily looked at Heer 'what are you going to say for this?'

Preet 'PB, anyone can make picture like this.'

Prem 'what about DNA test result? How it came negative. I checked the hospital. They said it is negative. Still i beleived you all and accepted her as my wife. but he has a proof that she is Anjali, his wife.' Sanjana breathed a releif. Rishab and Sanjana exchanged a victory smile.

Heer with tears 'Prem believe me.' she fell to the ground near Prem's feet.

Manmeet angrily walked towards Heer. He started dragging her. Heer shouted with tears 'Prem.' Prem turned his face away from her. Heer's hope shattered. Gaya3 and Preet begged Prem to stop Manmeet. Prem is stubborn and walked towards his room. Manmeet dragged her towards the door. Heer cried 'Prem, I'm your Heer.'

Lalit, Gaya3, Preet and Megher looked at Prem with anger. Prem continued to climb up in the stairs. Chahat cried 'Papa Ma.' Heer cried 'Prem. i'm your Heer.'
Manmeet 'shut up.' He pulled her up to stand on her feet 'go and bring Chahat.' Heer protested and about to run towards Prem 'Prem'. Manmeet stopped her and slapped hard on her face.

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Edited by newt2007 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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hey...
omg... manmeet!!!
y did he have to come???
and my god he slapped heer.....
i hope prem helps his heer.....
cnt wait 4 the next update...
pls update soon...😃
Edited by nehara - 15 years ago

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