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prem already started having feelings for heer. good. continue soon.

great update !

guys I have one more part ready.......so I thought of putting up.....next parts may be a little late...

After dinner Prem took leave…he bent to take ashirvad from Veera and eyed heer…she was standing at the corner .his warm eyes assured her that every thing will be okay….and her wide eyes accepting his assurence.

As Prem walked away from Mann mansion. He felt as if he had lost an important part of himself and felt so incomplete………

Chapter 6

Heer was serving Balraj,and Veera sat beside him talking about how the day went for her…Heer was looking at her mother and her husband and the love and respect they shared with each other." Bua sahi thi ki mujhe apni identity chupake rakhna chahiye…yeh log aapas main itna pyar karte hai…agar sir ko pata laga ki unki patni ki ek aur beti hai to in donon ki zindgi toot jayegi…aur mere bhai aur behen ki life bhi bigad jayegi…"She was happy that her mother was happy,even though she couldn't be a part of it.

She returned to kitchen and finished all pending works.Veera came to kitchen and watched Heer sometime standing at the door."tumhe yahaan koi pareshani to nahi hai na"Veera asked her."ji main theek hoo"

"Good….to kal se sab kuch tumhe sambhalna hai…abhi ghar main mai aur Balraj hi hai.Hume subah 8 baje tak nashta chahiye aur9 baje hum office keliye niklenge.dopeher ko hum khana office main karenge aur shaam ki baat to tum ab tak jaan gayi hogi…."

"ji"

"aur kabhi kabhi guests honge hamare saath .to unka bhi khayal rakhna padega tumhe…theek hai"

"ji..main poori koshish karoongi…aur aapko shikayat ki mauka nahi doongi"

Veera smiled"acha ab jaake so jao.bohot raat ho gayi hai"

As Heer lay in her bed she thanked God for being so kind to her.sleep over took her tired mind and unknowingly she saw a pair of caring eyes assuring her that everything will be alright.A smile played at her lips …and she slept peacefully…..

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Heer was an early riser.she freshened up fast and went to kitchen to make coffee.She took 2 cups to the master bedroom along with news paper and slightly knocked the door.

"M'am"Veera opened the door."oh thank you Heer ….tum itni subah uth gayi…hum abhi tayar hoke neeche aate hai"

"ji"

Heer went down to mandir and made preperations for pooja .Veera and Balraj came down smiling.

"dekho heer kitni smart hai.mujhe yeh bohot achi aur sulchi lagthi hai.I feel sorry for her…apni bachpan yeh apni ma aur papa ke bina kaisi kati hogi….tumhe kya lagtha hai?"Bal raj asked Veera.

Veera who was eying Heer was in deep thoughts…she didn't know why she had such a weird feeling when Heer was in front of her eyes.

"Veera…"

"Ha Raj…..kya….kuch kaha aapne?"

"yahi ki Heer kitni suljhi aur achi hai.dekho kaise mandir ko sajaya hai..bilkul vaise jaise shadi ke baad tum kiya karthe the…with an eye of an interior decorator…."

"haan bohot acha hai…"

"Waise Veera bura mat manna tum se bhi achi sajati hai…"Balraj laughed and Veera hit him playfully"Raj …mujhe chidao mat….."

Both went to heer who was standing near mandir.she gave the aarti ki thali to Veera."Nahi heer aaj tum is ghar main pehli bar pooja kar rahi ho …aarti tumhi karlo"Heer looked at Bal raj who nodded and smiled.her face lit up with happiness.

As she was doing aarti she sang a beautiful bhajan.both Veera and balraj were very happy with her melodious voice.In the middle Heer felt some ones presence….some one other than Veera and Balraj was watching her…..and …..she turned.

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All night Prem was restless….After coming from Mann mansion Lalit and Gayathri had grilled him with so many questions about Heer and Veera……He answered them patiently but his mind was not with him.Gayathri was eying her son and sensed his restlessness."Prem beta…tum dinner karke aaye ho to change karlo aur so jaao"

"lekin Gayathri….."lalit started to say something.she nudged Lalit who obeyed his wife's directions" acha, chal so ja"

As Prem left the room Gayathri looked at Lalit with glowing eyes and raised her brows as a question.

Lalit : lagtha hai ki ise pyar ho gaya hai…….!!!!

Gayathri: "kyu nahi hoga….meri bahu hai itni pyari….!!!

And both of them laughed hugging each other…….

Prem couldn't wait to see Heer .He woke up early, freshened up and sneaked out.Gayathri was coming out of her room and saw Prem downstaires all dressed up.she was about to call him but Lalit held her hand.

"let him …."

"lekin Veera kya sochegi?"

"main thodi der baad ballu ko phone karega…okay?"

As Prem entered Mann mansion he heard her sweet voice which felt like honey….he was mesmerized by her voice and stood still staring at heer who was doing aarti.Balraj and Veera stood with their back to Prem.

Heer could feel the intense staring as she sensed that someone has come and she turned……her face lit up, her eyes widened….there stood Prem…in a pale blue shirt and black pants….looking dashing….his hair was still wet…and added innocence to his face.

Balraj andVeera were surprised at the sudden change that came over Heer and together turned to see what was the cause…….

Both were surprised to see Prem and looked at each other in confusion..Her suddenly sensed the situation and moved to Veera and Balraj with prasad."sir yeh prasad…"she gave it to both and hesitantly walked to Prem to offer prasad.

"tum theek to ho? His eyes asked.

"haan,I am okay…."her's replyed.she dropped her gaze in shyness and left to the kitchen immediately.

hi all......i would like to have more readers to view and comment...i am planning to bring meher's and chah's track as well....so please guys....make me feel that my work is appreciated .thankyou all for viewing and commenting......😃

awesomeeeeeeeee too good very nice part waitinggggggg for next asap.

great ff so far!!!!! loved all the parts so far.....

prem already loves heer....

great part. good idea to bring meher and chahat,
bring preet into picture too.
continue soon.

Awsome.😊 I would love to read more Premeer part. Update soon...

awwww....prem is sooo desperate..........thank god gayatri and lallu know their son very well.........otherwise what if they take his rishta for some one else........loved their relationship..........heer started dreaming about prem well who won't right??..........i like the way they talk through their eyes..........do continue soon dear..........do pm me when u update............

fabulous fabulous fabulous.......
Great update......
really enjoyed reading it.....
can't wait 4 da next part............
keep up the fab work.... =D