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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: Kamal_23

great


thanx 4 the pm


update soon



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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: additi10

Hey Thnx for the updateeeeeeeeeee i loved the updateee umm now what prem is going to do i hope heer gave them tight lesson
plzupdate soon
and thnx for the PM

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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: yasu09

fab update............⭐️......
so prem's a bad boy huh......
can't wait 4 da next part...........

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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: p.ggreeshma

hiii ashlesha..........

u have started a fantastic job along with maha

congrants............

PM me when u update

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Posted: 15 years ago

Finally the day has come when I am updating, I really couldn't remember the date of last update, anyways enough of me, here is the next part.

This one dedicated to Geeti2, her only wish which I cannot fulfill through OS
3rd SHOT
She can still recall each and every moment of that day, the best possible day in her life when she met him though on a sour note and she considered him as a spoilt brat but it should also be marked that First impression is not always the last impression atleast not in case of Prem Juneja, numerous times he proved her wrong in knowing him, understanding him and yet again today he proved her wrong and this time never to be right, what he did would be the last thing that she had ever expected. A fresh flow of water droplets made its way down her cheeks, the tears which hours before Prem used to hate to see but now he is the sole reason for it or that God who always just bestowed her life with curse, pain, tears & unhappiness but still she never lost faith in him but today she did, he made her to loose her faith from God, friendship and most important love.

"Why Prem Why" she yelled, her voice tormenting through the silence

"It took minutes for you to does that with me but even giving whole life time I would never ever be able to erase it off" she grimaced.

Tears were endlessly flowing and hugging her knees she was just crying, crying as if those tears would wipe off her fate. She threw the nearby picture frame on the wall which had their snap and again went down to memory lane.

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Sorry Babe your handsome hunk Mr. But is not among us, must be lost somewhere, he shot embarrassing her but there are many studs around you among us except me whom you can choose, he said leaning forward.

Stepping backward she was about to go when noticed bunch of people circumscribing her gawking with such an irritating shine in each one's eyes as they found another reason to laugh off.

"Girl am just asking about a boy among us, I am sure your choice would not be that bad" he smirked.

"Well it would have been if had opted for you or even thought" she stated. All shot up their eyes the first girl who dared to shushed up Prem "And since you were not even nearby in thoughts, so that indicated I do have a good taste" she mocked back, making Prem red with anger and embarrassing at the same moment.

She pointed her finger towards Prem making Prem to grin "Well I thought I told you not me and I think I heard some words about choice and taste seconds before" he teased. "There are lot more people around you the same way as they are behind you" she replied.

Well only Heer knew how difficult and suffocating it was getting for her to stand in the same place as that of him and that too soo many pair of eyes glued on her but she too knew that just by crying or trembling was not going to help so she has to confront him rather than standing there like a crying baby.

Slowly he turned around to see the Handsome guy of Ms. Maan and was shocked to see Preet standing there with the most innocent look on his face, hands folded on his chest but only he knew what wicked things was going inside his brother's mind which gave him the satisfaction that this ragging going to be great fun and to be remembered by Ms.Maan throughout her college life.

She was about to leave when she felt a hold on her hand and turned around to find Prem gently grasping it, she quickly shrugged him off "I think I am over with your ragging" she said though could smell something fishy as seeing these people she was sure that only that task was not enough for a new comer to be made fun off by these morons.

"You really think Miss, it was the only thing I wanted from you" he laughed and "wow not a bad choice if not me than my brother only" he grinned.

And that time Heer cursed herself at her stupidity for acting so over smartly and going on that innocent, cute face "Great trying to escape from well and moved towards Death Valley" she breathed.

"What more Prem, I hope nothing to do with you love" Naina muttered. But Prem just ignored and was busy on his target Miss. Heer Maan and that time Heer was just feeling like a chicken getting chased by bunch of choppers, that was ridiculous, half of the college was there for her ragging as if a national event going on there or as if she is some meaty dish getting ready to go into the belly of hungry beasts.

Preet soon joined him in front and was face to face with Heer and now she could clearly see that dirty smirk which she failed to recognize before and why not he is younger brother of that Jerk so must be his reflection only.

"What more you want, can you just tell me fast so that I can go for my lectures as here I have come to study not to dodge you and your stupid pranks" she barked.

"So Ms. Maan is more in hurry than us so lets gave a simple try, Preet will only decide since he is her Mr. Charming" he replied.

Preet made his way towards her and uttered "PB since Ms.Maan is in a hurry why don't we just let her go" tucking the strand of hair behind her ear.

His touching boiled her blood and she affirmed "Be in your Limits Mr.Juneja".

"Madam even know how to get angry and Ms.Touch Me Not know how to yell" Prem sneered

"So if Preet want to let you go, we will but just one thing from my side" he teased

"You just need to touch him, a simple mere touch" he completed

"What" she questioned

"Yes, a simple touch of your lips on his" he cracked leaving Heer rooted at the place.

"Is this a joke or what" she asked, tears welling up in her eyes.

"In case you have not figured, I mean a KISS, not a smooch but just a peck would be great" he smiled.

Wiping off her tears she was about to leave when Preet pulled her to his side "I think you have not heard what PB told" he barked.

He was stepping towards her while she was backing off and felt getting hit to a hard structure and ultimately got trapped when found Prem behind her and now she was between both the devil brothers.

"Ms.Maan where you are thinking you are going. Complete your work and then go wherever you want, I promise not to intrigued any further" Prem stated

His statement rattled her to the core, finally tears made their way down which she was fighting back from the second she entered the chamber with full force she tried to push Prem back but was off no use as he was stronger than her and secondly a wall was at his back.

She was now quivering with even that thought, that was the last thing she would ever thought off, she knew in college, ragging was a routine stuff for new students but this was surely not a part of joy or fun, it was as if a personal grudge against her.

She was sweating furiously and looking for a help but was disappointed to see people cheering Preet.

Meanwhile Preet was moving forward, her lips were trembling and she was trying hard to get out of his grip but was of no use as she was between two muscular forms holding her tight.

There was just centimeters gap between their lips and with every second Preet was just getting forward reducing distance to millimeters.

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But there suddenly the room echoed with a sound and Preet felt a sharp blow on his cheek and that's when Heer noticed a girl turning Preet around and placing her hand sharply on his cheek.

Everyone around was left dumbstruck, that girl whoever she is, is just a savior for her, she just slapped that Jerk in front of everyone.

She just pushed Preet aside and pulled Heer to her side, away from Prem, she saw the shivering girl whose legs were buckling due to fear and terror they all spread in fraction of seconds in her mind and body.

Gently wiping off the tears from her damped cheeks she put her hand forward and said "Hello, I am Ashlesha, Ashlesha khanna and you?"

With quavering lips Heer uttered "I am Heer Mann".

"Beautiful name and I must say for a pretty girl" she complimented in order to bring her pulse down.

"So, you mind going with me, if not then lets go" she questioned and commanded both at the same time with a broad & cute smile.

But before Heer could answer Preet whispered to Ash "Ash, it was not what you have seen" to which Ashlesha shouted "Keep your mouth shut, you guys have crossed your limits, doing fun and little bit enjoyment is a different thing but this, what was this, this was surely not done".

"No, Ash it was just random ragging that we were doing" Prem defended.

"Ragging, you all are out of your senses, ragging? You people have seriously losted, you tried to molest her" she grimaced

"Bhaiya you only instigating such nonsense and Preet how dare you to touch her, you tried to forcefully kiss her" she groaned

"It is true that you both are just big nitwit, you both just see only one thing in women and will always" she scowled.

"And I don't think I need to do a special mention that our relation is over Preet" she announced

Taking Heer's hand in her she made their way out of the chamber leaving everyone thunderstruck, Preet to denunciate himself and Prem to feel shameful over his deed.

I know it sucked but can't really help I am just that bad in update but hopefully next one will be good as this was the filler one
Will Love to see your views on it and don't frget to press the LIKE tab if you like it which I am sure you wouldn't
Mobzzz spare me this tym, I know you must be hating this update *dodging from her tomatoes*
Edited by Ashlesha09 - 15 years ago
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Edited...........

Masti Mazaq aik side pe aue tera FF aik side pe.....😊...........
AWesome Update⭐️, Very Well written, 👏.........Ufff these ragging na...
I wonder agar Ask sahee time par entry na maarti to kiya prem, Pret ko kiss karne deta uski Heeriye ko?? .............

NO wonder Heeriye is crying in present...😆..isse addmi se pyaar karegee tu yahee hoga...😆

Continue sooon

Neha

Edited by Additi... - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago

oh ho..finally...i m here..😆

yaar heer ko thoda bold toh bana deti ke woh apne liye ladiyi kere😆...u kwn whn i was reading this i thought y u choose preet for kiss😡 but aftr tht i m happy tht u choose preet..now waiting for cute moments between premeer😍thodi noke chok..usme pyar ka eshaas...hehe..😳 sho update soon...beta...
Edited by mireen19 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: Additi...

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nehaa😡comment kro
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: Additi...

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mujhey copy kar rahi hain, be real stupo🤣

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