Junior Prem........Phingoli......Last Part pg11... - Page 4

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Posted: 15 years ago
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Thanx Pooji............Glad u enjoyed it dear............Next part asap...........Hope u like that one too..............😊
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Thanx Crosby.............Glad u enjoyed it dear............Next part asap...........Hope u like that one too..............😊
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Heer quickly keeps the paayal back on bed and goes in to get fresh……….she comes out after changing into a beautiful green saree………😊

Prem still stood at the dorrway and looked at Heer who moved to the bed….she looked gorgeous…..with her hai wet and open…………..

Prem smiles and turns to make sure there was no one in the corridor…………

Heer picks up the paayal in her hands and smiles as she remembers her first meet with Prem in the temple……….the song mar java from the movie fashion………..plays in the background………..

Here's a link to the VM I made on the song…………Hope u all enjoy it………… 😊

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=h681IN1_5jQ

There Prem stood all smiles………Heer says as the song ends---Tumhey yaad tha Prem?!............

Prem calls from his mobile and there heer's phone rings………..she picks up and before she says anything Prem says---YAAD KAISEY NAHIIN HOTAA HEER?!............. 👏

Heer was startled and she looks around the room wondering how Prem knew what she was thinking!?..........She doesn't fin him anywhere and she says---Prem tum ho kahaan..Subah se kitnii baar phone kar chukii hoon………… 😊

Prem replies---Busy tha Heer……….abb yeh sab chodo yeh bataao mera tohfaa kaisa lagaa……….

Heer turns around and walks upto te window staring at the moonlit night she says softly---Achcha………bahot achcha lagaa……….Magar……….aur bhi ACHCHA LAGTAA AAGGAR TUM KHUD ANEY HAATHON SE PEHNAATEY………….. 😳❤️

Prem smiles naughtly and he quietly walks into the room and goes upto heer behind her while she kept on saying Hello……….kyunkii Prem wasn't saying anything………..there Prem catches hold of heer from behind and whispers to her---Aapka hukm sar aankhon par………YAAD KIYA AUR BANDAA HAAZIR HAI AAPKI HIDMATT MEIN…………

Heer was elated……….she turns and freeing herself from prem she hug him tight saying---TUM AA GAYE………….MAINNEY TUMHEY BAHOT MISS KIYA PREM……….. 😊

Prem replies moving his hand across Heer's lips---mainney bhi………..BAHOT MISS KIYAA………..

Heer lowers her eyes as she could feel Prem coming closer……….and closer to her…………..she could actually feel Prem's lips on hers when she says---Prem!.......... 😍

Prem stops and looks at her lovingly---Kya hua Heer……….

Heer replies smiling---EK KHUSHKHABRII HAI TUMHAAREY LIYE………….. 😳

Prem looks at heer confused and asks her---Kaisi khuskhabrii Heer………….

Heer says smiling and lowering her face---Prem.........Iss ghar mein ek nanha mehmaan aaney waala hai...........

Prem replies almost shouting---Kyaaaaaaaaaaa..........Tumney maa baujii ko......sabko bataayaa............Main....main jaakar khud bataata hoon.............Kii bahot jald ek junior Prem aaney waala hai Chahat ke saath khelney ke liye............ 😉

Without waiting for Heer to say anything Prem quickly kisses heer on her forehead and leaves the room..........He actually runs out of the room.................into the hall..........

Heer stood stunned and walks after him when she realises what Prem understood!.........She goes in to tell him kii its not JUNIOR PREM BUT JUNIOR PREET WHO IS COMING TO PLAY WITH CHAHAT!............. 😆

Heer tries to stop Prem.........LEKIN MR.JUNEJA KAHAAN KISI KII SUNTEY HAIN!?...................

There evryone comeoutside and r surprised to see Prem calling out to them all excitedly................

Lalit asks him---Prem tu kab aaya?.......... 😊

Gaytri asks him---Kya hu betaa...........

Prem is all smiles and when heer is about to say---Woh maa........Prem ko..........galat...........

Prem interrupts saying---MAIN BATAATA HOON BAUJII.........MAIN AUR HEER........HUM CHAAR SE PAANCH HONNEY WAALEY HAIN............ 😆

Preet is elated as he steps forward patting his bro on his shoulder---KYA BAAT HAI BHAIYAA.........AAP BHI!?.............

Prem looks at Preet confused---AAP BHI MATLAB?!..........

Heer speaks up---Prem.....Tum......tum galat smjah rahey ho..........jaisaa tum soch rahey ho waisa kuch nahiin hai............. 😆

Prem asks Heer--LEKIN TUMNEY HII TOH KAHAA KII ISS GHAR MEIN EK NANHA MEHMAAN AANEY WAALA HAI.............. 😳

Preet who understood with others how Prem was mistaken says smiling at Prem teasingly---Excuse me bhaiyaa..........bhabhi aapkey nahiin mere aur Meher ke nanhey mehmaan kii baat kar rahii thi...........aap taao banney waaley hain!........... 😊

Prem smiles and was embaraassed too..........he congratulates Preet and KD says to him----Bhai Prem...........iss maamley mein toh Preet ne tujhey bhi peechey chod diyaa.................

Prem lowers his eyes embarassed and says---Dii aap bhi naa..........

Gaytri comes and embraces Prem's face lovngly saying---Kuch nahiin hotaa betaa..........galatfehmii ho jaati hai...........waisey mujhey achcha lagegaa kii aggar tum donon iss galat fehmii ko sach kar do.............. 👏

Heer blushes as Prem smiles looking at Heer................

There Shreemalini who was in the kitchen had heard all the noise in the hall and comes out cribbing---PATA NAHIIN KYUN SAARA DIN ISS GHAR MEIN SHOR HOTAA REHTAA HAI!............ITNS DHAMAAl MACHAATEY HAIN YEH LOGG........DEKHOON ZARA ABB KYA NAYAA FAMILY DRAMA HO RAHA HAI BAAHAR...........

She had come out to see gaytri smiling at Prem and Heer.............

Lalit was saying to Prem---Chalo Prem puttar abb tu bhi aa gaya hai toh iss jashn mein aur mazaa aayegaa.............. 😊

Prem smiles and nods his head............. 😳

There Shreemalini says thinking to herself---OH TOH YEH HAI PREM JUNEJA...........BADAA HII SONAA MUNDAA HAI...........(well said u dumb lady..........k baat toh sahii kii issney........wat say?!............)............... ISS HEER KAA RANJHAA HAI YEH MUNDAA...........WAISE JODI BAHOT ACHCHI HAI DONON KII.............Aur yeh toh bilkul main Prem kii diwani hoon kii hrithik kii tarah hai...........uncha lambaa..........aur body shody toh dekho...........bilkul Mainney pyaar kiya ke Salman kii tarah............waisey dikhney mein toh tu badaa bhola lagtaa hai...........pata nahiin mera khasam tujhsey itnaa ghbraata kyun hai...............(I hate doing this lekin I tried my level best to make this woman's dialogues as real as possible...........hope u enjoyed!............) 😊

There everyone leave from there to prepare for the evning bash............Prem stops heer as she turns to leave............He holds her hand and makes her move close to him..............and says playing with her wet hair which covered her face-----Heer...........sunaa Kul dii aur maa ne kya kaha?!.........ABB TOH YEH IZZAT KA SAWAL HAI!................ 😳😆

Heer frees herself from Prem saying all smiles---Prem!?.........Tum bhi naa...........

She leaves from there as Prem flashes that naughty smile of his...............


Kaisa laga?😊


Jaldi bataao...........😊

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Posted: 15 years ago
#34
awesomeeeeeeee too good very nice part waitinggggggg for next asap.
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Posted: 15 years ago
#35
What is this?!!!!!!!!!!
Please Leo.......tum aisa karo ke meher ka baccha na ho.
aur junior prem aajaye
meher ka koi problem ho jaye aur heer pregnant
waise Prem kyun kaha ke "HUM 4 SE 5 hone jarahe hai.
It means he remembered SNEHA!!!!!!
NAHI..............
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Posted: 15 years ago
#36
its awesome , ur the best.......
plzzzz do continue
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Posted: 15 years ago
#37
awesomee loved it but plz plz plz plz get rid of sneha she doesnt belong with heer prem and chahat get rid of her plzzzzzzzzz!! anywayz it was good ASAP!! :)
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Posted: 15 years ago
#38
beautifully written dear!!! I loved it...and u did a wonderful job in writing SM's dialogues...too funny, it kind of reminds me of DJ chachi's dialogue!!! Waiting eagerly for the next part!
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Posted: 15 years ago
#39
great part


prem is soooo silly



thanx 4 the pm


update soon

KAmal
Edited by Kamal_23 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#40
awesome update.....
cnt wait 4 the next 1...
pls update soon... : D

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