My ff!!! Pg25 - Page 6

Originally posted by: hajoo00

Meeshu I used red clur as well

hey just read ur FF....really loved it......but i dint understand 1 thing........dint heer get shocked wen she saw prem lying next to her???????pls dont make rishab marry heer.......pls add me to ur pm list........hope ul cont soon.......

add me 2 pm listtttt plzzzzzzzz!

Will give a hitting update

Originally posted by: anishajk99

hey just read ur FF....really loved it......but i dint understand 1 thing........dint heer get shocked wen she saw prem lying next to her???????pls dont make rishab marry heer.......pls add me to ur pm list........hope ul cont soon.......

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Originally posted by: Ayesha103

add me 2 pm listtttt plzzzzzzzz!

Originally posted by: JoeJonasRoks

Hey Hajs,

Loved your ff so just joined the site for your ff its outstanding

Awesome dialogues especially

YUPP full attention to our family

Prem: One second............. One second..........hold ur breathe............ Hamari family......... matlab.......................Mein aur tumare sath wo b aise. That will be a nightmare meri aur tumari family. Never I won't even dream that

Heer: Yeah yeah like i m interested in a hidden flirt no 1. Our family meant k Barrey papa bari Maa Herman Preet Mumma Papa Meher Nihaal n TT. Got it

Prem: Heer tum ne pehle kya kaha tha NO what

The way prem tells that he had 4got her bday wow

AFTER THE LEAP

Raising his head He kissed her teary eyes. Though she was silent but her eyes could speak alot.Prem always love her more when there was a chance for a him to have an eye to eye convo with her.

Heer: Take the towel and go

(Heer's hand was in the towel so taking the advantage he pulled her hand with towel his lips were just saying Aao Na) Dont do that.

WoW fabulous work

Prem: Sho shweet of you

Fantastic you r the best Haj's

Heer sirf two days hain tumhein dekhne k becuz phir aap kahan hum kahan

Heer: Yeah yeah I know. I will be on cloud ninety nine I will be far away from you.

What duz that mean Hajs some hidden work huh. Is he the same but you had wrote hez changed whats this. the way he kalls her maid

He made his hand curl around her neck and the other below her chest. He tickled her on neck. She felt the tickling alot that she just tried to jump and opened her mouth. Prem put his thumb into her mouth. She bit his thumb when Prem screamed then she took it in her hand and after pressing it she put in her mouth n then sucked it.

Superb.

Its da Best of Both worlds.

You are my sweetest angel that I can ever get. My saviour. My most trustworthy.

Ab muje khana de do na please

Prem beging 4 food . spectacular bachelor pleading. hmmm

He pulled her hand and made her sit on his thighs. His left hand was swaying around on her neck n chest. Heer's hair stood on one end.

Prem: You look cute in this leotard

She was wearin a leotard amazing

Prem: Then here it goes. I mean comes.

He kissed her passionately🤬 His heroic kiss had done something great to Heer.🤗🤡

Thats fabulous.......😛

Everything was👏 superb👏 👍🏼Heer brushing pj'z hair👍🏼 g3 mking him eat food. the washroom part excellent. Precap😭 se kahin🥺 dil na💔 tut 😔jayye🤪

But on one hand precap was good

OVERALL RATING

🥳9/10❤️

CORRECTION PLEASE

hey hajra .....

awesome update did he really slept with her?