A Mistake Worthmaking Pg38 - Page 18

Originally posted by: shahrukh_divya

hajra surely i wil kill u....kya kiya????

Originally posted by: nehara

omg... so that means that was not heer in the last romatic update..???
hw come.....??
i'm confused nw....
cnt wait to read the next update....😃

@ AISHU :😆 😆 SLAP ME

@ DIVYA: 😛 First i need to find some1 caring then hang me to death

@ Harpreet: Love u yaar

@neharika:LOVE U

@ Sukrutha: thanxxxxxxx love u too

Oh

Helooooooooooo

Me here with a pleasing update

After a few weeks Prem and Devika Juneja(Lalluz sister=Premz barri Maa) are in Ambala. Prem gets up in the morning and leaves for the temple.

On the other side Heer Mann gets up from her bed and after bath leaves for the temple too as Heer climbs up the stairs Prem is after her. She quickly goes and tries to ring the bell which is high enough that she can't reach it. She tries to jump when Prem sees Heer and smiles. He comes and lifts her up she rings the bell happily but as soon as she feels somebody's hands around her tummy. She closes her eyes and tries to get down she in squeaky, adorable voice

Heer: Chuch…….choriye

Prem lightly puts her down nd moves a bit back When Heer closes her hands joining em up into one for praying. Prem moves closer and puts his hands over Heer's. Heer in irritation wrinkles her nose and forehead opening her eyes up.

Heer: Kya he aap ko koi problem he L

Prem J : U know be quiet Pooja chal rahi hai. Sh… Pundit G ghusa hongay

Till the pooja ended Prem kept on looking at the girl who vanished after the pooja. Prem turned back and saw her leaving temple hastily. He ran after her and held her drape holding her hand he asked Heer a firm question

Prem: Whatz your name???

Heer: Naam mein kya rakha hai.

Rishta toh dil say banta hai. Naam jesa bhi ho Dil acha hona chahiye. Because you never know what one has in the heart for you so you should have a nice innocent heart than a nice innocent name.

Prem: Phir bhi

He held Heers hands in his and moved more close to Heer

Heer: Aap chriye mujhay

Prem's phone rang and as he put his hand in his pockets Heer tried to run but her chain got stuck in Prem's kurta button. She looked angrily over Prem

hey nice

Originally posted by: -Sakina-

great job sis!

hey nyc part dear
really loving ur reading
so plzzzzz conti it soon
& plzzzzz write big 1
hope u dont mind
really gud work dear👏👏👏👏

oh for last update so that was not real heer..oh....

ohhhhh god.....just saw pg.26......

great update!

Originally posted by: shahrukh_divya

nyc yar...
luved it...