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Posted: 15 years ago
#71
OOh!! another twilight junkiee!!
luv ur descriptions!! n this is gonna b the start of an interesting new journey!
cant imagine prem as a vampire though!!
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Posted: 15 years ago
#72
ohhhhhhhhh.......just loved it.....Prem and heer..they are so cuteeeeee:)
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Posted: 15 years ago
#73
hey
that was awesome...loved it....👏 continue soon and thanks for the PM...😊



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Posted: 15 years ago
#74

Hii guys ... sorry for keeping you waiting, this FF will be liked this much i really didnt know that, plus thanks for the PMs to update but please avoide because i have to delete them and it gets very annoying when i delete my IMP Pm's byt mistake so please avoide .... for now here is the first part.

IMP NOTE - " Okay guys Prem is NOT a vampire .... i can never imagin that, but he will just be like Edward, but how he is different from everyone will be revelad soon, and also the whol pale skin thing, guys he lives in Forks and everyone is pale so dont get stressed . Sorry to those who wanted him to be a Vamp."

Next Part

Prem and Heer stood staring at eachother in shock. Suddenly the bell rang bringing them out of shock as they looked away from eachother. Prem - "How sick." he siad thinking of what the girl said. Heer - "Exuse me." Prem - "What?" Heer - "Did you just call me sick?" Prem - "Stop ease dropping." Heer - "Well then keep your thoughts to your self." Prem - "Why dont you keep your ears to your self Ms.Maan." Heer - "Whatever loser?" Prem - "Whatever." they both said walking away from eachother annoyed. Heer - "Stupid moron." Prem - "Idiot, annoying chick." they said as they went different directions without looking back.

Gym was toutre for Heer, and it was even worse when Prem laughed everytime she messed up, when Prem laughed all the girls did too, acting as if he was the funniest person in the world. Heer never got as much annoyed as she was today. Prem was such a jerk and annoyin person, Heer didnt get why people liked him. Nick - "Heard about you and Prem." He siad leaning beside her locker. Heer - "Heard what?" she siad not caring. Nick - "Cute couple." Heer dropped all her book all of sudden as he said that. Heer - "People know?" Nick - "Heer not a big school, and plus anything realted to HIM always goes around fast." Heer looked even more annoyed ... could her day get any worse, Yes it could becasue after school ....

Heer walked to ther car after school, but stopped when she saw Prem laughing with his friends. Heer - "Look at the loser laugh his ugly laugh .... stupid person." she said hissing under her breath. Prem looked at her giving him dirty looks. Prem - "If you wana stare why dont you take a picture." he said yelling across from her for people to hear. HEer looked at him anger as everyone stared at her in giggling. Heer got angry and walked upto him. His friends moved aside as Prem and Heer came face to face.....

Heer - "What do you think you are?" Prem - "Something your not." he siad smiling a bit. Heer - "Dont try to be cool okay ... your not." Prem - "Correction .... i am cool." Heer - "Ya it doesnt count when you think your cool your self." Prem - "Awww really ... i am proud of you ... finally learned something other then falling down all the time." Heer - "Whats your problem?" Prem - "Nothing expect for you." Heer- "What did i do to you?" Prem - "Why dont you go out with me tonight and i'll tell you." He said smiling and leaning into her. Every - "Ooooo" they said laughing. Heer looked at Prem in anger, annoyance, and a look you have when you wana kill someone. Heer - "You wish." she said walking away. Prem and his friends laughed as Heer walked away. The whole parking lot filled with laughing people and going OoOoOoOo.

Apprently her day did get worst, so now she knew to never think that, her life was always about her being surronded by people laughing at her or watching her trying to kill someone. She came home and went straight to her room. Heer - "Stupid, idiot, annoying, retarted, low life, and a UHHHHHHH." she said throwing her bag on the bed in anger thinking of what Prem said in the parking lot. Heer - "What does he think of him self ... salaa kahin kaa." she said putting her hair in a pony tail.

Juneja House

Preet - "Yoo that was sick ... you should of seen her face." Prem - "She is such a drama queen." he said eating his apple. Meher - "That wasnt nice thou Prem." Prem - "Ohh come on Meher .... she knows i was joking and so does everyone plus did you hear the insults she sent towards me." Preet - "Ture Ture ... but what you sick was off the top yaar Too Good." he said patting Prem's back. Prem - "That always shuts up a girl." Meher - "You better think about what you said Prem ... sometimes it really hurts girls." Prem - "She wont care, not like she gives a damn about what i think ... plus she was insulting me so i just gave her a good anwser which shut her off." Meher rolled her eyes leaving the room. PReet - "She was hot thou." Meher - "I heard that PReet." Preet - "I didnt say anything Prem did." Prem - "Nice going blame the inocent one." he said gettin gup and leaving.

Maan House

Heer was laying on her bed reading a book when her phone rang. Heer - "Hello." Nick - "Hey Heer ...." Heer - "Hi Nick." Nick - "Nice scence in the parking lot ehh." Heer - "Yaa a camera scence did you record it." She siad annoyed thinking about Prem. Nick - "Wow someone is pissed." Heer - "I rather not talk about it." Nick - "Oooh okay ... so me and Jess and Jake were going to movies wana come." Heer needed something to take her mind off him so she agreed. Nick - "Okay so we'll pick you up at 9:00pm." Heer agreed and hung up.

Movies

Heer - "Guys when is the movie starting." she siad asking them as they took their seats. Jess - "20mins ... i am going to the bathroom wana come." Heer - "Ya i need to go to." she said backing away. Jess - "We'll be back." she said to nick and Jake. They nodded. Jess - "So you and Juneja." she said asking as they both walked out. Heer - "Dont even ... he is sick ... i wouldnt even think about it." Jess - "Your a first its always Prem is Sooo Hoot." she said in a dramatic way. Heer - "I say what i think." she siad smiling. Jess smiled as they walked into the bathroom.

Jess went back but Heer decided to by nachos since she loved eating them. As she was waiting in line .... Prem - "Ahh so Ms.Heer did come to her date." He said as him and his friends walked into the theater. Heer turned around and saw him smiling a revenge smile. Heer - "You know what ..." Prem - "Actually i dont cant you please explain." He siad acting all cute. Heer - "Just shutup." she said turning around and looking away. Heer got her popcorn and left while Prem and his friends got tickets.

Jess - "I am sorry Heer it filled up." she siad as Heer looked at the seats all filled. Nick - "You can sit ...." Heer - "Nick no you stay i'll sit over there." Nick - " But Heer. " Heer - "Nick dont worry." she said smiling and walking away. Heer took a seat in the corner, while the seat beside her was the only one empty. She sat in the seat where another seat is attached and no more ... so like a love sofa Only two seats.

Suddenly the lights turned off and someone came and sat beside her. Heer didnt bother looking up since he would think she was staring. Heer didnt care who he was as long as she got her mind off of ... Prem - "Hey." he siad taking her popcorn. Heer looked at annoyed. She sighed and lay back on her seat. Heer - "Are you kidding me." she said looking up. Prem smiled and shook his head. Heer - "Cant you sit some where else." Prem - "Why is their a problem." Heer - "Ya there is ...." Prem - "Aww why dont you tell doctor Prem." he siad as if he cared. Heer - "Never mind." she said looking at the screen and ignoring him. As she watched the movie Prem ate her popcorns with her, which Heer didnt realise until the movie ended, but she let go of it because if she said anything he would start a fight and end up saying somthing stupid so she just let it go.

When the lights went up .... both of them got up at the same time. Since Prem was stretching Heer decided to get out but stepped in front of her trying to get out. Heer - "Let me go first then you can go." Prem - "Why are you the president of USA that i have to listen to you." Heer - "Haven't you ever heard of ladies first." Prem - "That's used for ladies not you." he said trying to get out as both of the squeezed together in the small pushing each other to get out.

Prem and Heer finally got up but still pushing, Heer slipped on her foot and grabbed Prem's arm. He wasnt paying attention as Heer Grabbed him. Both of them fell on the stairs, rolling all the way down from the top. There arms around each other. Heer's face buried in his chest and his face in her hair. They rolled down until they hit the floor. Luckily none of them got any serious injuries just scratces and scars. The whole crowd hurried to them. Heer noticed she had stopped rolling and she was laying on top of Prem. She moved her head up a bit and her eyes met with Prem's. But she looked away pushing her self off. Prem also got up.

Heer still felt dizzy as Nick helped her out of the theater. Nick - "Should we go to the doctor." Heer - "No its okay ... i am fine." she said holding her head. Prem and his friends also came out. Prem - "Shit ... damn my head hurts." he said rubbing his forehead and not looking up. And ofcourse soon he bumped into a parked car which was Nick's. Heer was standing in the side with Jess while Nick and Jake went to get some medication from the pharmacy near by.

Heer - "Do you like to hurt everything." she said to Prem as he bumped into car making it move a bit. Prem - "Oh and the girl who falls every two second is telling me this." Heer - "Whatever ... this is all your fault." Prem - "My fault?" he siad walking upto her again face to face.

Prem - "Who grabbed who?" Heer - "You pushed a girl." Prem - "Like i said i wouldn't do that if your were one." Heer - "Whatever, and now if i get sick its all gonna be your fault." Prem - "Yaa ever think about me ... i had a person on top of me with the weight of a ...." Heer – "Oh shut up." She said annoyed. Heer – "Jess lets go there is no point in talking to this idiot." Prem – "Hope you had fun at our date." He said walking away laughing with Preet and Raj. Heer – "How sick." She said in a disgusted way as she watched Prem walk away.....

Okay thats all for now guys .... me very tired and sleepy .... If you liked do Press Like button and dont forget to leave your commets.

Ayysha

Edited by xoHarshaxo - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#75
Awesome update
Thank you for not making Prem vampire
Thank you again for writing such a nice part
update soon

Paddo
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Posted: 15 years ago
#76
great


thank god prem isnt a vampire


it would be sooooooo awkward to think of him like that



thanx 4 the pm


update soon


Kamal
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Posted: 15 years ago
#77
hiiiiiiiiiiiii
awesome update
cute fight
update soon
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Posted: 15 years ago
#78
it would have been nice to see prem as a vampire.....but an awesomeee update nonetheless.........⭐️........can't wait 4 da next part..........
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Posted: 15 years ago
#79
you're right.......even i can't imagine prem as a vampire....
cute premeer fight......
continue soon!
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Posted: 15 years ago
#80
nice love premeer fight..........love it

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