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Posted: 15 years ago
hiiiiiiiii harsha
awesome update
finally prem confessed his love
yyayyy
but he is a vampire
thats y he is running away from heer
it was a litle bit sad too
but overall i enjoyed
pls update soon
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Posted: 15 years ago
awesomeeeeeeeee update!!!!
loved the dance and the lyrics you put in....
wonder whats up with prem......
glad premeer are falling in love.....
continue soon with such long updates!!!!!
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Posted: 15 years ago
awsome luved the song lyrice
it ws 2 gd
xxxxx
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Posted: 15 years ago
awesome i cant wait til the cnext part and i wonder whta is wrong with prem
please update soon thanks
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Posted: 15 years ago
very very very very very very very very good n awesome update
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Posted: 15 years ago
hey nice update
good choice of song
thanks for pm
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Posted: 15 years ago

Awesome and so cute because the way Prem sang to Heer and danced with Heer!Awesome your an excellent writer!

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Posted: 15 years ago

Hii guys sorry for updating after long ... busy and hand hurts so couldnt type, but me back with the update ... hope you like it ... Enjoy.

Next Part

Next morning Heer woke up early. She had been restless all night and the next thing she knew it was already 7:00am. When she changed and got out of the bathroom, there was a light knock on the door. She put down her towel and went to open the door in her pj's. Preet - "Good morning." he siad smiling. Heer smiled back. Heer - "Good morning." She said moving aside so he could come in but he stood frozen in the door. Preet - "Umm ma was calling you for breakfast .. so just get ready and come down stairs." Heer smiled and nodded as he winked walking away.

Prem - "MAaaaaaaaaaa." He yelled from his room probaly scaring any normal creature around him. Preet - "Any problems?" he siad rubbing his ears. PRem - "I cant find my jeans bro." he said looking at a pile of jeans. Preet scratched his head. Preet - "Umm ... am i seeing something your not ... what do you consider jeans?" Prem rolled his eyes. Prem - "I meant my D&G jeans ... all of these are laundry." G3 - "Preem kya hua?" Prem - "Ma Jeans?" she shook her head as Preet walked out.

Meher - "Nahi Heer." Heer - "Liken Di school?" Preet - "Heer who cares like you want to go to school ... plus it our wedding ... so just this week no school then you are free." he said siding meher and convining Heer into staying in their house for this week since it was their wedding and all of the ceremonies. Prem - "Morning." he siad walking in looking at his phone. Preet - "Veera Call yet?" Prem - "Naah ... plus i called her number and its unavilable so not sure." Preet looked worreid.

Prem sat beside Preet and across from Meher. Meher - "Umm Preet me and Heer are going shopping later so we're gonna need you to give us a ride to the mall." Prem shot a glance at Heer who was looking down at her plate. Her cheek resting on her hand and weight on her elbow as her fork danced around her plate. Preet - "I have to meet up with the decoration people so take Prem." Prem - "No NO No Way .... i am not going shopping ... most of all i am not gonna carry anyones bags." he siad getting up and leaving with his breakfast. Preet - "Dont worry he will." he siad looking at Meher.

Meher - "Heer try it." she siad pulling Heer towards the bathroom. Heer - "Dii Why .... this is for you." She siad trying to get away. Meher was asking her to try on the dulhan lehnga ... which she made all of her friends dried. Meher was missing Veera so she had made Heer her little sister. Meher - "Please Please Pleasee.... for me." Heer - "Dii this isnt fair ... your making me feel like a crimanl." Meher smiled pinching her cheek and locking her in the bathroom.

Meher - "How long Heer?" she said waiting outside the door. Heer - "two second ...." she siad tieing her dori and fixing her bindiya. Prem - "Why are we here again?" he said to PReet who was standing with Meher. Preet - "Prem your taking the picture and i am going to be the judge ... so Hassssh." Prem rolled his eyes looking at the camera. Heer unaware of who was outside opened the door slowly trying not to trip over her shoes. She slowly opened the door as Prem's eyes looked up from the camera.

He placed the camera in front of his eye and placed his finger on the snap button. As she opened the door and stepped out .... his hands stopped in one placed as his head moved up from the camera.

Heer looking down holding the lengha in her hand, her arms filled with bangles, wiast bare, neck filled with jewllary, lips light pink, eyes with light makeup and hair in a joda with the chunrai on them. She looked up as her gaze met with Prems.

Aanhko mein teri ajab ajab si aadayein hai
HOh, Aanhko mein teri ajab ajab si aadayein hai


Heer moved her gaze away from Prem's and looked at Preet and Meher who stood shocked. Both of them examined Heer and complimated her making her blush and laugh. Meher - "Chalo .... MA ko dekatay hain." Heer - "Nahi Nahi ... " Preet - "Stop being a baby .. lets go." he said as Meher pulled him. Heer looked at them walking away and Prem standing in front of her. He looked down as she walked past him.


Kitna kuch kehana hai phir bhi hai dil mein sawaal kahein
Sapno mein jo roz kaha hai woh phir se kahun ya nahin

AS she walked past him her hand brushed against his, making him jerk up and sending a electric shock threw his body.

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Prem - "Bhabi hurry up." he siad walking to her room. Meher - "Prem sorry ... but i cant go ... Preet and me need to meet up with some people so i gave Heer the list." Prem - "So?" Meher - "So what? ... Take Heer she knows what i need." Prem looked at Meher in disbelife .... the more he tried to stay away from her the closer she was pushed to him.

Prem tried everything to get out of it ... but NOTHING. Prem - "Issey meray ghar mein hi ana thaa." he siad talking to him self as he walked to Heer's room. Prem knocked lightily but the door opened by his touch. Heer - "Umm ... Dad not fair." she siad in a babiysh tone. Heer - "Fine but no no no no no parties ... i am already annoyed by crowd of people." she laughed a bit. Heer - "Okay dad love you .. Bye." she siad hanging up. Heer put her phone down and got her purse. Heer - "Now starts tourture." she said picking up her phone and turning around. Prem raised his eyes brows as she looked embrassed.

PRem - "Lets go." he said walking away. Heer smiled taking a deep breath and walking out of the room closing the door. Prem walked ahead looking at his phone. Heer - "Prem." she said softly wondering if he had heard. He stopped at his steps, looking back. Heer smiled as he turned to face her. Prem - "Ya?" Heer walked upto him and stood in front of him. Heer - "I just wanted to ......" Eric - "Some friend you are." he said walking from behind Prem as if he was standing behind him the whole time. Prem rolled his eyes as Heer looked happy. Heer - "Sorry." she siad as he hugged her.

Eric - "Where you two going?" Heer - "Shopping." Eric - "I'll take you why bother Prem." he said holding out his hand. Heer looked at PRem who just smiled. She put her hand in Eric's as both of them walked away. Prem felt water rise in his eyes and felt someone stab something in his heart as he looked at there hands together. Eric started talking as usuall as Heer smiled. Prem stood in the same spot watching Heer walk away.

She turned her head back to look at Prem, but he disappered by then leaving nothing but empty space.

Prem went to his room closing the door and going to the window. Heer - "Eriiic." she said as he tickled her around the waist making her laugh. Heer - "Stooopp ...." she said pushing his hands away as he smiled. Heer - "You know your one of he most annoying people onn earth." She siad fixing her hair. Eric - "I like that." he siad opening the door for her as she sat in the car. Prem layed on his bed putting a pillow on his face.

Heer hadnt come back and it was already 10:00pm. Everyone was in their rooms and Prem in the living room watching t.v. He knew Eric was weird but someone who would take care of her. Prem heard a door slam and walked to the window.

Heer - "Dont touch me." she said moving her arm away from Eric's hand crying. Heer - "i cant believe you would do that." she said as he stopped her standing in front. Eric - "Heer i'm sorry ... look....." Heer slapped him across the face hard pushing him away from her. Heer - "Moron." she said wiping her tears. Prem walked to the door worried as Eric ran behind her stopping her again.

Eric - "Heer ... i said sorry." he siad holding her wrist. Prem walked outside towards them. Heer - "I have never met someone as disgusting as you." Eric - "Just come home with me and i'll explain promise." he siad pulling her towards the car. Prem pulled her back by placing his hand around her wrist. Eric looked at him shocked and so did Heer.

Prem pulled her against himself. He kissed her cheek softly which left her shocked. Prem - "Where were you .... i've been waiting for you forever." He said hugging her. Eric looked at them shocked. Heer looked confused. AS Eric looked down trying to figure out what was happing. Prem - "Act." he siad wispering to Heer who smiled. Eric - "your dating him?" Heer was still lost. Heer - " Uhh ... I mean .. Yea ..." she siad as Prem put his arm around her waist.

Eric - "Since when?" PRem - "I dont think we need to give you a interview ... dont ever touch my girlfriend again GOT it." he siad in a serious tone which made Heer smile. Prem totally scared Eric. Eric - "Heer why didnt you tell me you like him?" Heer - "No like LOVE." she said holding Prem's hand and meeting his gaze.

Teri nazaro ne dil ka kiya jo hashar, asar yeh huwa
Ab inme hi doob ke ho jaoon par, yeh hai duwa

Eric left confused as Prem and Heer went inside leaving each others hands. Prem - "What happened?" he said as both of them walked to the kitchen. Heer - "Nothing." she siad drinking water. Prem - "Didnt seem like nothing." he siad sitting across from her. Heer - "Like any other guys he's a jerk .... frikin loser kissed me." she siad thorwing the water in the sink as Prem looked shocked. Heer - "No matter what i eat or drink his discusting smell wont leave me." she said really low as talk to her self but not low enough for Prem to hear.

Prem got up and was about to leave. Heer - "Prem." she said stopping him once again. Prem - "Ya." Heer smiled. Heer - "Thanks." Prem - "I would say thats what friends are for but since all guys are jerks .... i'll just go with your welcome." he said smiling and walking out.

Heer - "So you dont consider me a friend?" she siad as he stopped again turning around. Prem walked up to her standing in front. Prem - "If you consider guys jerks what am i suppose to consider girls." Heer - "Uhmm ... that depends on what you think right .... by all guys i meant people i dont consider friends." she said walking away as he caught her by the waist pulling her back.

Precap

Heer finds out she is in love with Prem. PRem deines his love for Heer when Preet tells him that he loves her. Prem behaves rudley with Heer and she gets hurt by his words. Prem hugs Heer as she is crying and Veera's Death.

Okay guys thats all for now ... sorry for the short part will make it longer next time ... Do comment and press like button.

Ayysha

Edited by xoHarshaxo - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
great



thanx 4 the pm


update soon


Kamal

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