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Rumsha

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Posted: 15 years ago

#21

awwww ii loved it =D

it wasss such a l0velyy OneShot ....omggg ii wouldd ttlyy lovee it if it were a FF ...hehee ......but it was phenomenal the way u havee it

heheeee.....ii lovee the wholee Flower thing lmao ..."it went to the neighbors".... ii was literally likee this 🤣 hehee

lo0vedd Ahista Ahista to bits

thnk u so0 muchh

luv Rumsha<3

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unknown18

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Posted: 15 years ago

#22

Thanks for the pm. really nice os. and i love your writing. do write more.

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Bhavna

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Posted: 15 years ago

#23

*squeals* Ohmygosh Tasha! So I just read your three shots (while realising that hey, I've read Distance earlier on!) and they are simply wonderful. You are such an amazing writer, and the shots you write are so simple in the ideas but they're so well-written. I am so looking forward to more! =D

Love,

Bhav (:

P.S. I shall check out your FFs if I have time too! =D

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natasha

@zzzzzzzzzzfffff

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Posted: 15 years ago

#24

Originally posted by: sourpuss
*squeals* Ohmygosh Tasha! So I just read your three shots (while realising that hey, I've read Distance earlier on!) and they are simply wonderful. You are such an amazing writer, and the shots you write are so simple in the ideas but they're so well-written. I am so looking forward to more! =D

Love,

Bhav (:

P.S. I shall check out your FFs if I have time too! =D

Aww thanks! you are too sweet! I started reading your stuff in I think July and I was like wow! So itried my hand at it! I am really excited about this new ff idea i have its going to be based on the break up and it's complicated. But I am not sure how to approach it yet. So i think I will figure it out after exams, 😆

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Monaghosh

@Sumaan_fan

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Posted: 15 years ago

#25

U R AN EXCELLENT WRITER,PLZ WRITE MORE MEET FF AND ONE SHOTS,ROMANTIC ONES PLZ.........

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natasha

@zzzzzzzzzzfffff

Voyager

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Posted: 15 years ago

#26

Imtehaan- Tragic Meet OS

( I wasn't sure of the hindi word for test, but that is what i meant!😆)

Preet stood still, He could not believe what he was hearing.

"Meher beta, we think it is time you settle down. We have a boy in mind for you. Agar, tumhe koi aitraaz nahi hai, hum usse fridayko bulaye?" gayathri said stroking meher's hair.

Meher scanned the room until her eyes rested on him. Preet looked away. "Ji, ma jaise aapko thik lage." meher said in a hushed tone. Preet's gaze immediately returned to meher's face.

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The next day, gayathri sent Preet and Meher shopping. "Uh, preet, tujhe aaj koi kam hai?" gayathri said hopefully. "nahi ma, kyun kuch chaye?" preet said concerned. "Haan, tum meher ko shopping le jaoge? Aur sab busy hain, aur usko friday ke liye shopping karni hai."

Preet didn't know what to say. Just then meher arrived. "Meher, preet will take you shopping!" gayathri said happily.

"Arre nahi ma, mein khud se chali jaongi" meher tried to protest. "nahi meher! aur waise bhi you need a boy's opinion and you two are such good friends."

Meher and Preet were unable to refuse gayathri.

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In the Car

"Meher....why are you doing this?" preet said.

"doing what?" meher said trying to evade the long due conversation.

"Damn it, Meher! why did you agree for marriage...when you know I love you!" preet said angrily.

Meher was startled, she had never seen Preet this angry, but she refused to let him intimidate her. "Preet, you don't love me. You love ashlesha. If you loved me, you would have told everyone a long time ago, instead of getting engaged to Ashlesha." meher said as she walked into the store.

As meher tried on clothes preet ondered meher's words. Preet knew Meher had a point. He should not have gotten engaged to Ashlesha- he didn't love her. But how was he to refuse his parents and he couldn't leave ashlesha right after her parents had died. He was going to tell his parents and Ashlesha eventually. He just needed time.

Meher stepped out in a green sari with a gold blouse. She looked gorgeous. She silently waited for Preet's approval even though she didn't want to ask him for it. Preet walked up to meher. Meher stepped back. He stood inches away from her. He looked into her big brown eyes.he carefully tucked a stray lock of hair behind her ear. He then leaned in and said "you look beautiful. "

For a moment meher was caught in his eyes. She stepped back and ran back into the dressing room. She closed the door and leaned against the door trying to cath her breath. How could she let him have this power over her? If he loved her, he would fight for her. He wouldn't let her marry someone else.

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Meher came down in her new green sari, fully adorned in gold jewelry. Lalit beamed at her and gave her ashirwad, hile gathri put a kala thika on her. Heer gave her hand a tight squeeze and prem patted her back. Harman stood up...he smiled at meher.

As the elders discussed their future, meher's wyes were in search of preet. This was his chance, it was their chance. She finally spotted him walk through the door hand in hand with ashlesha.

" Harman, kya tumhe ye shaadi mansoor hai?"

Harman excitedly responded, "Ji, mujhe meher se shaadi karni hai."

The elders laughed at his eagerness.

"meher beta, tum is rishta se khush ho?"

Meher took one last look at preet, his hand still intertwined with ashlesha's. "Ji, mujhe ye shaadi mansoor hai." meher said as each word took each ounce of strength she had.

Okay! So what do you guys think? I was thinking that i would show meher- harman's shaadi too, but I think this ending is less tragic. there is still hope for him to stop the wedding! Please leave comments and criticism! thanks!😃

Edited by tadashi - 15 years ago

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unknown18

@unknown18

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Posted: 15 years ago

#27

i m so enraged after reading Viren's name that i cant even comment right now 🤬 y cudnt u use a different name??!!!!

i will edit this later!! i was having such a bad time and now this tragic meet os with viren in it 😭 😭 😭 u r so evil!!!!its like i m getting bad news from everywhere

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natasha

@zzzzzzzzzzfffff

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Posted: 15 years ago

#28

Originally posted by: unknown18
i m so enraged after reading Viren's name that i cant even comment right now 🤬 y cudnt u use a different name??!!!!

i will edit this later!! i was having such a bad time and now this tragic meet os with viren in it 😭 😭 😭 u r so evil!!!!its like i m getting bad news from everywhere

aww! i am sorry! i didn't want to upset you! it is an open ending...so ypu can choose to believe that preet declares his love for meher! I promise to write a happy one soon!

At first, I wanted meher and viren to get married in this os, then he would die and she would go and live off on her own and then she would meet preet again. but i thought everyone would kill me for that so i decided against it! Seeing your reaction I think I made the right choice😆

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surya

@suryavni

Dazzler

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Posted: 15 years ago

#29

uff...yeh kya....Viren!!😡!

nice one dear.....and Preet is engaged to Ash as well!!!

waiting eagerly for Preet to sort out a way to get meher out of that 'eager'viren...😡

do continue soon

luv

surya

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unknown18

@unknown18

Rocker

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Posted: 15 years ago

#30

yes u made the right choice(well if u had gotten them married and then later meher and preet killed him then i wudnt b so mad at u😆)!! and dont b sorry.its not ur fault that i have so many problems going on right now.
i wud have asked u to write another one but u r so busy too so i wont! but i have a request.put some other name for viren plz! i cant stand that guy!!
i m sorry i m just in a very bad mood 😭

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