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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: alisha_harshad

Sandy DI!! Omg Omg!! Sucha awesome part...thanks dear.. Misuderstanding cleared.. *yeah!!! Thank god Heer didn't suspect Prem ....i didnt want unnecessary MU.. adn prem is soooooooo romantic and cute..i know.. he s soooo cute:)..
He loves heer and chahat so much.. hope he doesn't change when he comes to know abt Shreya 😡.hehe.. She calls herself Juneja !! nahi!!!! you should have killed her in that accident Sandy DI 😆Kidding..oh no..i love shreya man..😛..
Omg new twist darn it.. i feel like i m watching some show... i can actually picturize the things here .. feels nice to read these kinda of FF's...thanks darling.. thats a big compliment..waise kisko picturise kar rahi ho shreya ke place mein??????!..
Shiv didn't say anything to Prem about Heer and Heer didn't to prem about what she knew...
Prem😭he is feeling guilty of not telling Heer but she already knows that..he he..it happens na.. u wanna tell something to someone but then stops thinking it will hurt that one..n other one also wil be in same situation!..
Moonlight Date.. awesome .. that was the most romantic thing ever...Here too Prem knows Heer very well... Thats what i call is Love.. which may/may not be in real life... i doubt it is...it can be there..my couxin sis is tehre..my jeej is also like that..so romantic,,.n so understandin..
I love ur FF sandy di... its one of a piece.. and i again tell yuh the songs you choose is awesome on previous parts... loved it loved it!!!thanks..i put in all my effort with thse songs..feels good when yuh guys like it..
Update soon sandy di!yes..am gonna end this..may be an epilogue too!! thats t..
luv yuh!

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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: sinak

Gr8 update. Shreya still alive. Plz continue soon thanks dear,..yeah will finish off soon:))..

Originally posted by: prempadmasujal

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Originally posted by: nisha1984

awesome part thanks dear....

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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: kptl

omg its awesome...and da twist is amazing....luv it...thanks dear..
update soon...cant wait..now...yea sure..

Originally posted by: alisha_harshad

reserved

Edited
I quoted my own post instead of editing 😆😆my comment on page 36 😆he he..saw that😊..

Originally posted by: cuteangelgirl95

sandy jst an awesome update im speechless thanks dear.. do continue soonyea sure.. thankx 4 the pm

Originally posted by: -Pooji-

nice update thanks dear..

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Posted: 15 years ago
hiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii sandy
firstly sorry didn't get time to edit my last comment really i was so busy.
*ok back to update* awesome updates.
gosh u knw u made me more & more curious.
i m totlly in luv with this SS.
especially i just luv prem 😍
the relationship u shows b/w PremHeer is really so premeerish
prem forgets all abt his past good
heer also thinks its his past & moves on in life is great but i think once she should told all this to prem it would be nice.
premeers romance was cute 😳
gosh that shreya is alive + mrs juneja 😕
sandy u better dont create any misunderstanding plzz
wait for next
update asap


luv
fatima
Edited by -fsn- - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
hi sandy just read ur story in 1 go it was gr8 pls update next part soon and ad me in ur pm list
and ur sttory remind me 1 tamil movie of surya
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: yasu09

Sandyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy.....
plz plz plz do not reunite Prem and Sneha.......*shaking head vigorously*..........
hahah..lets seee what happens..
anywayz another fabulous update.......⭐️
⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️thanks yaz..
really enjoyed reading it....
can't wait 4 da next part.......

Originally posted by: sweet_gurl93

omg...that was just AWESOME!!!thanks dear..
the whole part was great, I just cannot believe that shreya is alive, and is referred to as mrs prem juneja!!! i kno that was a schoker to yuh all..omg!! i know that prem doesn't have feelings for her anymore, but I just totally hope heer doesn't think anything negative, lollets hope fr the best..
neways great update
cnt wait for morewil update soon..
xx

Originally posted by: Kamal_23

awesomethanks dear..


cant wait to see what happens next


thnx 4 the pm

update soonsure dear :)..


Kamal

Edited by stunninstar - 15 years ago

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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: nspn.92

awsome.Loved it.thanks..

Whenever i would hear the new york nagaram song...(tamil song) ur ff comes to my mind. i had jo's hair cut sometime back..and my friend used to temme the song reminds him of me..and now its reminds yuh of my fic..i guess the song n i are really connected..Update soon...sure..
Thanks for the PM.

Originally posted by: dreamysouls

awesome update!!thankks yaar..
can't wait to read the next update!! yea sure..

Originally posted by: amu142

So Heer will give a Kurbani, and leave Prem , so that he can be happy with his first wife Shreya?haha...good guess :))).. and what abt Chahaat? will she also leave her with Prem and leave ??? oh dear...it sounds like a Tamil film with Surya,Jyothika& Bhumika...oh! and they had a kid in that movie too!that was cool, she invited the first wife home,and left the house with her kid! waiting to se, how you bring out the story!itz nspired from JOK only.. but only my fav parts :)) i like my story better..hehe..:P..

Originally posted by: suryavni

sandy....

too gud👏thanks dear..
shreya is alive...and she is keeping Prem's surname.....
oh no.....what will Heer do now.....Iam waiting eagerly...and just 2 parts left.....!!!wow....yap..two more parts..i am running shrt of time..so endin this..
tc
surya

Edited by stunninstar - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: riks1

omg shreya is alive!!!

can't believe!yea...sorry fr te shocker!!..
plzz update asapsure..

Originally posted by: Additi...

That was Awesome.........thanks dear..

Loved it...Thank GOd Heer forgave prem....and nothing went wrontg
except that Shreya......I knew it she will be alive....

Maybe nihaal told shreya that prem died thats why..😕haha..lets see whats happenin!..
Will be waiting for your next update....and here am!..

Originally posted by: crosby

awesome SS thanx..pls add me to the pm list sure dear..

Originally posted by: blueocean_787

huh, shreya is still alivee???????????????? NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO....why yaar? she s my favourite :))..

Edited by stunninstar - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
🤗 Waves...............................................
Di, finally I am here I know you don't care for my comment nor my comment hold any value for you *sad face* but sorry to that was immature part of you, I know you always wait for my comment, for my token of appreciation and you also i always does and I know you sent me your update before posting, 5 mins earlier *narrowing eyebrows* and I wanted to comment but kya karoon had my exams and you well that my last pre was disastrous and this time I had to make that out and for telling about it only I pmd you but you like a small kid deleted my pms n nt replied to them, now that was not good on your part if we readers understand you writers then you writers also should understand circumstances due to which we couldn't able to comment, so that part hurted me alot and all the time it shouldn't be me caring bout ur hurts you also should.....................
Anyways, moving to the updates I really loved the last update, gosh I was fanning during their kisses☺️ and you don't consider them hot then what according to you are hot & intimate scenes, can u xplain😆😆 *showing tongue*. Yeahhh finally Prem is back and so is happiness of the family and from coming only what effect on Heer, he surely can weakened her legs😳.
Sorry moving to last to last update, Shiv -Gauri kewl you were a fan of Karam Apna Apna, well I hvn't seen Iqbal there only Yash as seen few epi so here it was Yash naa😛, well I like his friends, truly a lucky guy in every relation Prem is, from getting a friend to wife to best baby in the planet.
And as I told you before I really liked Heer's potrayal so real, so easily connected, an adorable wife but with dignity, totally understanding and strong and can go to limits for her family, I wanna 👏👏 on that note. And what a woman drive all the way at night only to know the full history of his husband's life which he hid from her through out their realtionship though for good but still he hid and that hurted Heer which was but ovious.
Then Prem belonged to some other girl, I kill you for this though I know you love Shreya but I don't I haste each & every girl around Prem Juneja except Heer Maan😡😡 okay😆😆 on a serious note you asked me for my view on Shreya's character but frankly still you hasven't given a proper sketch, beauty and innocense is not onlty the criteria, you xplained her relation with Prem very nicely but on that part Shreya was a dumb as was not knowing Preet's intention and once kept even Preet above him though that time Prem hurted her but still he was protected about her and want no harm to her. Then Preet a bad man, couldn't you have choose kunal or shiv for that role 😡😡 why Preet, you know how much I love him.
Anyways maybe I might not correct with my vision on Shreya but seriously I am still not getting even head or tail of her character or maybe I m just too biased towards her.
Ad now that was a shock you clearly twisted a tale in a great intersting manner, when you wrote about that predicition of card reader I assumed to be another girl will make her way but no it was his back for whom Heer is making way for, gosh why the hell she needed to know about shreya, where is she? how is she? .............that chapter is over can't she get that but okay can understand as in the person Prem loved more than himself and the girl who went against to her family for the person how can suddenly disappear like wind.........................Prem had an aciident n you mind revealing us who was he? but I consider it to be good as Heer got into his life only after this *devlish smile*.
Towards the present it was their baby who brought her mumma- papa together and made his Papa to love her Mumma more than his life, more than his world, to love her as no1 ever loved anyone. And I like your line "But the day Heer had announced that she was carrying his baby in her womb " don't know this line has some spark which instantly made me like this maybe it defines the love and a string between Husban-Wife and truly described a love of a father for his child even before its birth but on point I am shocked normally in such marriages wives do not get their right but I am happy Prem gave to Heer which brought his baby to his world, dfon't hv any knowledge but what seen in shows n Movies🤣.

All in all a nyc update I really liked it

luv
Aqsa
Edited by Ashlesha09 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
*Don't rub your eyes* Its surely me thought of giving two comments on both updates separately so that it may bring down your always high temper, well I am a caring sis unlike others *turn face sideways* Well I liked this one tooo very much , finally Prem is back but I guess Heer was not that much happy as Prem who openly showed his love and how uch he missed her or maybe Heer was still trying to overcome the fact which wasa but ovious, he he he I am always supporting Heer😆. And knowing Heer's shyly nature it was maybe her awkwardness also but its on Prem that nobody bothers nowdays what people are doing around and especially on Airports and that too International Airports, I ahve seen most weird and shameful incidents😳😳. Anyways back to update Prem was surely not expecting such kind of bit cold behaviour from Heer after such long separation but still avoided it so as to create no issues *I want a man like him😍* haaye so understanding,loving,caring,roamntic and for getting Heer's state of mind he did not require her words he can say it precisely from her doings and Bingo he he knew that something was different , she was his usual Heer and sharp man Heer should have thought for a better reason to tell Prem for driving at Shiv's place. But anyways Prem enteringh home was too happy to see his baby and his home, now thats a perfect husband and even got a surprise from Heer though not a planned surprsie aciidentally become good surprsie and reason was Heer😆😆, why his happiness need to do with Heer only😆😆😛. And his stupid office staff can't they allow him to relax for a while to sit at his home to fresh up have breakfast but no stupos called him as soon as he stepped inside the house and he have to go making his poor baby again to miss her papa though for few hours but still couldn't even had a peaceful and playful time with her dad. And shiv what a friendcan even read his eyes he was so right Heer disturbed her with the landing and it was so clearly on his face and eyes as if Heer holds the power to make her happy then she is the only person who can distressed him but that reason of Heer was correct and Happy that she learnt that Past is gone and Present is only they three. I have a doubt in this Fic Prem was upper Middle class and such people don't own Mercedes, too costly for them to afford. Anyways Roamntic Prem, back on action, his comment was surely made her shy though they both truly miss all those☺️ but still not the thing to say☺️, his biceps😍 reminded me of his shirtless days though I ahte to look him or anyother guy shirtless but being shameless I assumed when during their last dance in the show Heer's hands travelled from his torso towards his chest very slowly, I just loved it😍☺️. And naught Prem always in opportunity and I got a quer again they living in a flat that means no personal roof it will be off whole apartment then How can Prem be there enjoying their intimate moments as in someone might see them, then what?. Finally it was his Heer who opened her up in front of him, who shriveled up in absence of him who was getting mad without him and who never want to hurt him even in weirdest dreams and there her Prem always by his side, protecting her giving her a secure feeling and then his kiss, they made it after so many days but is Prem mad what was the need to ask her at tht time only if he waited this long could have waited for the bliss to over officially but its fyn as he was worried and in shocked to ghear the reason for it though it was not for real but for him it was😆😆 and he love her so much I don't think this much love Prem would have ever give to shreya or may be he would have but got no opportunity Premeer's relation far ore above than his relation with shreya as he spent 6 long years with her and she gave his love, his very own part,his chahat. And chalo got brains again took the opportunity to shower his love with the lkove and affection and his love giving confidence to her that Prem was is and will always be off Heer. And not even Heer no1 could believe till now that Prem was a father of 5 year old girl, how perfect still he is actually both😍.Bck to update again a kiss😲, God Prem really had difficult time there without Heer😆😆 and again past started hovering them, documents of the very same house where Prem brought shreay s after their marriage and then from your flashback I got Shreays's sketch bit clear she indeed love Prem very dearly it was fully reciprocated from her
side also, what an understyanding girl everything for her love but not a single trace of tension for her love, Prem indeed is a lucky guy for receiving love of two girls in one life time who loved him more than themselves.
And even shreya was hurt so it was not Prem alone she too got injured on that accident and it was pre planned I wonder person behind it who separted them though good as for me but still who snatched his love aways from him, made him a lifeless being for many months not even allowed them to had their few days of happiness😡.
For present Prem truly accepted that he is now of Heer and Heer is his only life, how sweet to shrugged off the thought he went to have a shower, not a proper one but a typical one , ohhh wetty Prem, reminded me of chawl days n i really love wetty Prem😍. Then towards your end why the hell Heer need to open the knots couldn't she understand that shreys was his past, why to dig the coffins I just couldn't understand but u ended on a cliff hanger ................Shreya is alive and is Mrs.Juneja
hope to see next part very soon and I am warning you don't you ever dare to do that again😡😡
And you know for commenting this lond i had read again with each point in mind and what you do in return it truly hurted and haan i also want thjis long comment on my OS I don't know how you do it but I want *openly dhamkifying*
Luv
Aqsa
Edited by Ashlesha09 - 15 years ago

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