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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: annwesha kayal

lovely update !!

waiting for next part..

thanks for ur pm.

i l updt soon dear
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: newt2007

nice update

thank God you got time to update. when are they going to each other identity. antaheen and love bird.
good that Prem came to save Heer on time.
"They didn't know a pleasant morning was waiting for them which will take them more near to darkness as aafter morning the darkness falls"
think has some problem coming on their way.

next updt everything will be revealed and it will be end i thnk then an epilogue
problem nahi anth aa raha hai wait and watch selvyyyy
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: NIMMY

loved it..............thank god u finally updated

Prem waiting 4 Heer so cute.........
but that Manav.......hate him.........
said all nonsese 2 heer............
heer later comforted by prem

hey nimmy
hihi they r really cute na par unhe meri hi nazar lag jayegiii m gonna enddd nowww
hope l updt soonnn tc
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: Heerbeauty

finally you updated
so nice and awesome part
loved love bird and anthaheen scene
so well..........wonderful
thanks for the pm
update soon

Paddo

aww thnks paddooo i l updt soon baby tc
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: premeer928

amazing update...👏 the premeer scenes were cute...😳 cant wait for the next part...continue soon...and thanks for the PM...😊



love
Afreen

i l continue soon dear afreennn
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Posted: 15 years ago
ANTAHEEN….

CH-14


Heer opened here eyes slowly and rubbed them with her hand and stared around her room and whatever she did, said probably yelled at him came rushing to her and she with a sudden jerk sat up straight on the bed and holded her temple with one of her hand and tears started flowing down her cheek
She was really ashamed of her act and was about to get up and rush to call when she saw the still figure lying beside her on the bed , sleeping soundly
Seeing him a fresh wave of guilt came rushing towards her again and flow of tears from her eyes started again
She took her hand to his hair and slightly removed it from his forehead but it again came back to his forehead giving him a childish innocent look
She went forward and kissed his cheek slightly and holded one of his hand and slowly murmured to him , I am sorry prem I am so sorry

Feeling s slight moist on his cheek prem suddenly opened his eyes to get the sight of her freckle minded love sitting beside him and crying
Suddenly the only thought which rushed into his mind was "she is something, beta prem galat ladki patayi hai ab gussa bhi saho par rote huye cute bahot lagti hai ye"
Thinking this a small smile crept on his face

She looked at him and saw that he was smiling looking at he , and she cant take it anymore she throw her arms against him and started to cry
" I am so sorry prem I acted so stupid last night I am so sorry"

prem just made his hand go through her hair and then her spine to soothe her
" its okk waise bhi koi to chaiye na apna gussa utarne ke liye pyaar nahi to gussa hi sahi ek ste to cross kiya maine aur waise bhi har pati patni mein jhagra hota hi hai"

heer broke the hug and looked at him
" hamesha mazak"

but prem again cuddles her into a bear hug taking her breath away and laughing loudly

heer sounded angry and said
"I love you bolne dene se pehle hi mar doge kya"

and prem suddenly frizzed
" kuch kaha tumne "

heer took her face near his shoulder and released a hot breath on his shoulder and said:
"I love u prem juneja"

saying this heer ran towards the other room closing the door after her and giggling from the other side prem too ran after her but was somehow late the door closed on his face
" heer open na plz"

" nope u go home"

" plz once"

" I said go home we l meet in the evening at some lonely place hmm near the bridge"

prem left with a disapproved look , but was happy that finally his day has come he thought in mind
"who kehte hai na har kutte ka din aata hai"

prem went back to his home to get ready and freshed up whereas heer too got a shower for herself and was smiling thinking about her confessions
when a signal blink on her laptop made her open it
love bird: u there ??
antaheen: yes I am
love bird: kaam dhanda nahi hai kya
antaheen: nahi tumhare jaisi berozgaar hun
love bird: really u know today m so happy
antaheen: kyun ?? lottery lag gayi kya
love bird : hmm keh sakte hai zindagi ki lottery u know my girl friend confessed I love you

and then antaheen was about to say tht she too confessed her love when it clicked to her , how come all their life incidents matched , from love tales to confessions to broke ups to patch up

antaheen: ok if I ask u something will u let me know?
Love bird : anything for u friend
Antaheen: whats ur name ?
Love bird: ahh so now u r eager hmm okk its prem juneja …

And then it happened she was staring at the laptop screen with so much shock , there he was , they both were friends from along time and they didn't know that ohh god , they were always the one understanding each other without any if and buts
Antaheen: ok I will talk to u later ..
Love bird: that's not fair u know my name but I don't
Antaheen: u l know soon

Saying this she just closed the screen of her lappy and rushed to her balcony , inhaling some deep fresh air
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=dk38pDTGCro

there she was standing and smiling to herself , the unknown was so much known to her still she was so far away to the nearer , s stood their for a few seconds thinking and then thought that today she will let him know how much she loves him and even their relationship so far and will ask him to be hers forever …

………………………………

In the evening heer got ready in a whit silk skirt and a white shatin top which got strings over her collar making her back somewhat exposive , she let her hair loose making them fall down her back with a wet look
She came out and called him to which she got an answer that he will reach there soon and even heer set drove herself to the bridge

It was quite empty with cool breeze blowing she came out of the car and stood watching the water which was flowing down the bridge in the dark
She was watching silently when she heard of a footstep , she faced the person with so much enthusiasm thinking him prem but as she faced a sharp pain pulled up on her head and then a warm liquid started flowing down one side of her head and she knows he wasn't him , it was someone else with a log of wood in his hand , she moved forward with her drowsy eyes to caught hold of him but everything blacked out , she was far far away from him ….

The guy called his owner and informed
" sir I did my work now she wont be able to open ur case nor ur stories , no more questions on ur illegal goods selling …

……………………………………………..

prem got abit busy with his cases but his heart was somewhere else , he drove fast as he knows he was a bit late , actually not a bit , he was badly late
and he thought she must have left but to his astonishment when he reached there he saw her car parked there , he opened his door fastly , fixed his sleeves and took out the bouquet he brought and rushed to her car
there she was sitting still not talking to her

" I am so sorry I am late "

her car door was open so he knelt before her there
" arre now talk to me I said m sorry"

but she didn't moved nor responded
so this time prem just tried to grab her hand when he felt the coldness and then her body collapsed making her strike her head on the steering wheel and then prem saw blood was all over her white dress and she was lying there lifeless , eyes open

prem got feared and pulled himself back
' heer"
he called her name and then tears started flowing down his eyes and he yelled, pleaded her to get up but she was far away , far away from him

antaheen

luv
aishu

ok now juttas chappals are invited but m runningg…..






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Posted: 15 years ago
at last heer confessed
thank god heer know he is prem
but what happen to heer
eagerly waiting for next part
thnx for pm

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Posted: 15 years ago

Prem is so sweet and funny.............

Heer is she all right ...........

and madam plz update ur other FFs also

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Posted: 15 years ago
nice start and scared ending
Heer confession is so cute.
altalst she knows the unkown and her lover is same.
but what happened to her now?
halo stop update the next part then run. you have the habit of running around.
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Posted: 15 years ago
Awesome update !
Loved it !
Finally Heer confessed !
Prem was soo cute !
I hope she is alright !
Waiting for next !
Update soon !
Thnx for pm !

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