FF-Broken Soul, Chapter-2 and precap, Pg-17 & 18 - Page 6

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Posted: 15 years ago
#51

Originally posted by: dreamysouls

wow. Gr8 teaser.....
Can't wait to read....Continue soon.

thanks 😃
we will
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Posted: 15 years ago
#52

Originally posted by: --Sarah--

Awesome teaser Sia and Ayysha 👏 👏 👏
loved it and very well written!!!
Sian and Ayysha together!!! then surely you guys wonders together
waiting for the first update

hi sarah thanx a lot😃 thanx sarah for trusting and liking our work so much
we will update soon
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Posted: 15 years ago
#53

thanx for all who all pressed like button:

nspn.92, suha_hasini, cassie, Gops94, dreamysouls, sweetanu2314, sanju_veni, addiction, ahana2009, dryflower000, v_nikhita18, meeshi., Reemz93, --Sarah--, sereaishitedare, newt2007, nityatarlapally, nehara, sanyoprithviraj, Momana, rit435, Har_is, Kamal_23, Aaliyah01, fungrl, tasnime, Additi..., premeer4rever, curledup, yasu09, amu142, Nitty2910, maha_k, -Pooji-, sweta2005

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Posted: 15 years ago
#54

Sorry guys for being so late in giving the shock 😉, ok I mean coming with this update. The next time we will update soon.

The teaser that you all read was in flashback, since then 3 years have passed. And this character sketch is in present.

We already have written next chapter and will update it in a day. Till then get an idea what this ff is all about:

Character sketch- In Present

Mr. Prem Juneja – a successful businessman, who believes in giving his best in whatever he indulges into. Only son of his parents, he is very close to his parents, and is ready to do anything for them. He was known to be a big flirt in past, but everything changed with one incident in his life. Everybody believes that he is very happy in his married life, but it is biggest lie that he is living with. His life was far from perfect. In reality, there was something that was holding him back, from being a good husband.

Ms. Heer Maan – the gal once known for kindness and sweetness, is very reserved and unfriendly now. Competent in her work, handles her job with efficiency. She is very quite and likes to be independent. Does not believe in partying and socializing. Her parents died in a car accident. She does not trust anybody anymore and like to live in her world. She is a beautiful girl, and every guy wants to date her, but the last thing she ever thinks about Is BOYS.

Mrs. Sanjana Juneja – Very pretty and cute who was in love with Prem since her teenage days and ultimately got married to him. She is very close to her in-laws. A very loveable person to be with and an apple of an eye of her brother Preet Kapoor. She was a very traditional person but something happened in her life that made her very out going girl who loves to socialize now.

Mr. Preet Kapoor – Very sweet and funny, loves his sister a lot. He and Prem are very close, that they don't hide anything from each other. They best of pals and business partners. He is always trying to pull pranks and have fun. He does anything to keep his family happy and loveable.

Ms. Meher Khan – Very cute and sweet, best friends with Heer and loves to pull pranks. She is a very cute person. Loves to make Heer happy but also forces Heer into parties.

Mr. Raj Malhotra – An employee of Prem Juneja, who works in UK.

Gaytari – Lalit – Prem parents, rich, very kind and sweet.

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So how was it guys?😕, we are dead sure you all are very shocked.

*hide in the bathroom* please atleast let us speak *peeps out*

See if you kill us today then how are we gonna update next part, then how will everything fall into place.😛

We hope you liked it. Waiting eagerly for your comments and press the 'like' button.

Take care

Ayysha and Sia

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Posted: 15 years ago
#55
Okaii just so we are clear 75% of the work is done by SIA =)
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Posted: 15 years ago
#56
Mein ne toh sirf socha tha tumne toh karke dikahaya...
rukho iim coming

it was a very nice sketch minus sanjana
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Posted: 15 years ago
#57

Originally posted by: xoHarshaxo

Okaii just so we are clear 75% of the work is done by SIA =)

tum ab shuru mat ho jaana😆
it is our combined effort😛
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Posted: 15 years ago
#58

Originally posted by: premeer4rever

Mein ne toh sirf socha tha tumne toh karke dikahaya...
rukho iim coming

it was a very nice sketch minus sanjana

kavya dekh mene tujhe chod diya tha
ab mera saath dena
thanx dear😆
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Posted: 15 years ago
#59
SIa bathroom se bahir niklo..............😡😡 Warna wahee par aki marongiii 😡😡


Ab jaldi update karna ...........Waise mujhe yeh part Theek laga.....Except that

MRs.Sanjana prem juneja 😲 Continue soooooon
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Posted: 15 years ago
#60

Originally posted by: sereaishitedare

this is so angstyy =)..me likes

plz continue and add me to ur pm list plzz<333

Thankyouuu dear will do....😃

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