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Posted: 15 years ago
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hi guyz i was free so i thought of writing ds is nt dat gud bt please read

"Heer!!! Mere socks kahan hain! " Prem shoutd. He was standing in front of da mirror,combing hs hair..."mujhay nahin pata Prem...khud dhoond lo...football match tumhara hai aur subha say meri Prade lagai hoi hai...." A pregnant Heer said "OH!!!! Mood swings!!!" Prem whisperd "What!!!!" Heer yelld.
"N...nothng Heer!!!!"
Prem found da socks nd startd wearing them
Heer was wearing her earings Prem went towards her. He helpd her in wearing earings dn he kissd her forehead nd wrappd hs hand arround her waist Heer smild nd was blushng.."Heer.." Prem said moving closer Heer was just lukng at hm "Heer...mere joggers kahan hain.." Prem said nd smild "Prem...tum..tumhain pata hai.... tum bilkul pagal ho..." Heer said "Please day do na.." Prem pleaded Heer pushd hm nd went towards da show wrack just then
"Ahhhhhh...." Heer screamed nd sat on da bed
Prem ran towards her nd sat on da floor in front of her hs hands were on her lap "Heer...are u alright....Doc. Ko bulaon..." Prem said as he was gettng realy worried "No Prem i m alright...there is no need to call da doc." Heer said her eyes were closd nd her hand was on her belly..."What theek hn??? Mein abhi bulata hoon.." Prem said
"Prem doctor ko bulanay ki koi zaroorat nai hai...it was just da first kick..." Heer said as she was feeling a bit better nw "What kick??? Abhi to match shuru bhi nai hoa.." Prem said Heer hitd hr forehead wid her hand nd said "Hey Bhagwaan Prem...when will u grow up...i m nt talking about you??? Ahhh!!!!" Heer felt da kick again "Dn what r u talking about???" Prem askd Heer took hs hand from her lap nd palcd it on her belly...Prem also felt da kick nd smild "Our Baby's 1st kick..." Heer whisperd wid teary eyes...Prem smild nd lukd at hs hand which was on her belly..."Dats realy cute yaar!!!" Prem said in excitement
PREM="Once more....Once more.."
HEER="Ahhh!!!!!"
PREM="YAY!!!! Gud...once more.."
HEER="ahh!!! Prem kya once more once more...mujhay dard ho raha hai..."
PREM="Heer!!! Bacha khel raha hai to usay khelny do na...c'mon ma baby...one more time.!!!"
HEER="AHHH!!!!!"
Heer hit hm on hs shoulder nd said "kya...usko encourage kar rahe ho...It hurts..."
PREM="MEIN KYA VO KHUD KAR RAHA HAI...KITNI ACHI KICKS MARTA HAI...BILKUL MERI TARHA...U KNOW FOOTBALLER BAAP KA FOOTBALLER BETA...MEIN ENCORUGE NAI KARON GA TO KON KARAY GA...BETA..APNI MAMA KI BATOON MEIN NA AANA...JUST FORGET IT...ND ONE MORE TIME PLEASE..."
"Ahhh!!!"Heer said "There u go..." Prem said nd kissd her belly

"C'mon one more time" Prem said bt there was no reply "c'mon!!!" bt no responce nw Heer was feeling better "Please...Please...Please" Prem pleaded Heer let out a laugh nd said "Khel khatam hogaya Prem!!!" Prem made a sad face nd said "Only one time please!!!!" Bt no responce again Heer giggld "Mama ka chamcha!!!!"Prem said

Just then Preet came nd said "PB!!!! " Both of them got up "Heer tum beth jao..." Prem oderd nd Heer did as Prem said "PB!!! Chaliye sb wait kar rahe hain late ho raha hai...aap kya kar rahe ho..."
HEER="KICK-KICK khel raha tha..."
Prem lukd at her... shockd
PREET="KYA????"
PREM="P...P...PREET...VO PRAC...PRACTICE...HAAN PRACTICE KAR RAHA THA...U KNW KICK PRACTICE.." nd he lukd towads Heer angrily Heer smild nd blikd her eyes several times...Prem also smild nd shook hs head

"Bhaiyaa aap bhi na!!!...jaldi aao sab w8 kar rahe hain.." Preet said nd left 4m there
When he left Prem went toward hs locker nd took a cute hand made dairy out of it it was soo cute wid colord pages..he startd writing sumthng on it.. "Yeh Kya hai Prem!!!" Heer said nd went towards hm "Mein nai bataon ga.." He actid as he was angry "Heer movd closer nd said "Mujhay bhi nai batao gay???" Heer said innocently... Prem smild nd hold her hand nd take her towards da bed nd made he sit he sat on da floor he gav da dairy to her seeing da dairy Heer startd crying ... Prem also sat on da bed nd said wiping her tears "sshhh!!!! Why r u crying???"
HEER="prem...yeh..."
PREM="HEER MEIN IS EK EK PAL KO HAMESHA YAAD RAKHNA CHAHTA HOON...YEH PAL MERI ZINDAGI K SB SAY ZIYADA HASEEN PAL HAIN..."
HEER ="TUMHAIN PATA HAI PREM TUM..."
PREM="BIKUL PAGAL HOON...TUMHARAY PYAAR MEIN..."
Just then Prem lockd her lips wid hs nd day kissd eachother passionatly...

Wanna knw wat was in dat dairy...In dat dairy..Prem hd written evrythng abt Heer's Pregnancy...Da date,day,time when he came to knw dat heer is pregnant, about her carvings...date day time evrythng...nd nw he wrote abt da 1sh kick of hs 1st baby


Please forgive me for my mistakes...
Its nt gud at all i knw...i wrote it to pass my time
But still..
Hope u will like it do comment/critisize nd hit da *LIKE* button...
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XSilentPrayersX thumbnail
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Awwwwwwwwwwwwww soooooo sweeeet


""Please Once more"" heheheheheh not the kicks but One shots please doo write more......... it was soooooo sweeeeeet
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Posted: 15 years ago
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aww it was so sweeeeeeeeeeeeeeeet and cuteeeeeeeeeee
awesome dear...
keep on writing more
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: Additi...

Awwwwwwwwwwwwww soooooo sweeee


""Please Once more"" heheheheheh not the kicks but One shots please doo write more......... it was soooooo sweeeeeet



Thank u...thank u...thank u so much yaar 🤗🤗
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: premeer4rever

aww it was so sweeeeeeeeeeeeeeeet and cuteeeeeeeeeee
awesome dear...
keep on writing more



🤗
Thanx dear...thanks alot
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Posted: 15 years ago
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awesome OS
prem is so cute!!!!!
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Posted: 15 years ago
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awwwww.....that was really sweet....keep writing more!
and thanks for the pm!
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Awwwwwww So Sweeet<3
It was awsomeeee =)
Your such an awsome writer great job
really had fun reading it =P
I dont like alot of OneShots but this was awsomeeeeee=)
Loved every bit of it greattttt Jooob <3
Love Ayysha <3
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Posted: 15 years ago
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P.S. Thankssssss for the PM

Sorry double post =)
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: PremHeer_Chahat

awesome OS

prem is so cute!!!!!



Thank a ton 😊 😊

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