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Posted: 15 years ago

#41

awesome and lovely OS. tooooooooo good

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Posted: 15 years ago

#42

Originally posted by: premeer4rever
awesome
i like the song a lot
the confession part was nice
thanks for the pm

Thank u so much...

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anoushay khan

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Posted: 15 years ago

#43

Originally posted by: v_nikhita18

nice one.....loved it!

you described heer's jealousy very well.....

do write more!

Thanx a lot...i m happy dat u likd it....thanx again

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anoushay khan

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Posted: 15 years ago

#44

Originally posted by: luv_kdmhmd
awesome and lovely OS. tooooooooo good

Thank u soo much dear.. 😃

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anoushay khan

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Posted: 15 years ago

#45

Originally posted by: sweta2005
continue soon plzzzzzzzzzzzz waitinggggggggggg

Thanx dear for liking it so much...next part is cming 2day 😊 😊 😊

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anoushay khan

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Posted: 15 years ago

#46

Hi guyz!!!!
Thanku so much for likin ds OS ...here is anoter part.... Its for all of u esp. For SWETA2005 hope u will like it

A girl was standing near the window of her room. She was completly lost in her own world of thoughts. A cute bt strange smile was playing on her lips. Her almond shaped beautiful eyes were twinkling like stars. She was blushing. Her dark brown long hair was nw tied in a high bun,sum strands of hair were playing wid her pink cheeks. She was wearing a white top nd light blue pyjamas. Her right arm was arround her stomach and she was playing wid her necklace wid her left hand.
Dat girl is Heer Juneja daughte of Balraaj nd Teji Juneja. She is a very sweet nd kindheartd bt becoz of her temper she is known as LADY HITLER of Juneja House....

Ash enterd Heer's room. She saw Heer,completly lost. She came near Heer nd wavd her hand in front of her face bt NO REPLY

"Lag a hai IS ROUTE KI SABHI LINES WAIAST HAIN " Ash thought

She brought her lips close 2 Heer's ear
"BOOO" Ash screamd
Heer came on earth nd jumpd a lil. Her left hand was nw on her heart. She slappd Ash on her shoulder nd yelld "Oh my god Ash are u mad or what han???? Meri aadhi jaan hi nikal gai thi ....tera dimaag to jaga par hai k nai" Ash was laughng she said "Sorry....Sorry sorry... Bt luk at you man..."Ash said

Heer:- What???
Ash:- Your face???
Heer:- what...what happnd 2 ma face???
Ash :-You are blushing man....
Heer slappd her again nd said "Ash tera dimag sach mein jaga par nahin hai"
Ash :-Mera dimag to apni jaga par hai par lagta hai tera dil saath valay room mein hai
Heer:-Matlab????
Ash :-Matlab Prem kay room mein....Prem kay paas.....
Heer:-Ash tu sach mein pagal ho gai hai....
Ash:- Pagal mein nahin gagal to tu ho gai hai...Prem k Pyaar mein...bol na Heer...tu abhi usi k baaray mein soch rai thi na....bol na...soch rai thi na usi k baray mein...bol na Heer
Heer:- Haan baba...Haan Bas
Ash:- to tu us say pyaar karti hai RIGHT!!!!
Heer:- Nahin....i mean pata nahin????
Ash:- pata nahin ka koi matlab nahin hota heer Haan ya Naa???
Heer:- Chor na Ash....tu bata tu yahan kuen ai thi....
Ash:- Aray haan ... Mein to bhol hi gai....vo mein tujhay bulany ai thi....chal na
Heer:- Par kahan???
Ash:-Vo hum log neechay movie dekh rahay hain...Prem aur Preet ny mujhay bheeja tha tujhay bulany k liye...Chal na...
Heer:- nai Ash mera mood nai hai...tu ja
Ash:-chal na Heer....
Heer:- nai Ash mera mood nai hai....tum log dekh lo....
Ash:-Okay

Ash startd walking towards da door singing
Prem Meri Aankhon mein hai
Prem meri saansoon mein hai
Bani Bani Bani re Bani Prem Diwani Bani
Heer quickly grabbed a pillow nd threw it 2wards Ash
Ash ran out of da room closing da door behind her
Heer let out a laugh just dn Ash opend da door again nd said

Ab Kya karay Dil Diwana

"Ash ki bachi...."Heer said nd Ash ran 4m there

"I m in love????? Mein Prem ki diwani hoon????" Heer questiond herself "Yes i m in love....I am in love wid Prem....I love him"

Living Room

Here Prem was sitting on da sofa anxiously w8ing 4 her Lady love HEER his HEER. He was in love wid her 4m 3 weeks when dy came India 4m Canada at their father's cousin nd best frend's Home. He was in love wid her at 1st sight. He love her bt he never expressd his feelings. He love to spent time wid her, fight wid her, irritate her. And dat was his idea 2 watch da movie becoz he knw dat being KUMBKARANs Ash nd Preet will soon asleep nd he will get a chance 2 spent time wid Heer he had sent Ash 2 call Heer nd its bn 15min nd there was no sign of Ash nd Heer. Prem got up 4m da sofa in frustration nd said
"Enough is Enough yaar....yeh Ash Heer ko bulany gai hai ya nai Heer banany...."
Preet who was going thru da CD's 2 decide a movie 2 watch said
"Chill Bro....aa jae gi...."
Prem:- kb aye gi yaar....
Preet:- aa gai.....
As he saw Ash coming dwnstairs
Prem:- Um....Heer kahan hai....
Ash:-vo nai ai....
Prem:- KYUN??????
Prem was lyk he will cry any momnt
Ash:- madam ka mood nai hai....choro na....Preet kya hoa koi movie mili k nai????
Preet:- Haan yeh wali deekhain????
he said giving da CD 2 Ash
Ash:- DDLJ
Prem:- What DDLJ???? Its psumthng lyk...Dil....waalay....dhul...dhulhaniyan lay jaengay...
He said taking da CD 4m Ash nd reading da title a new hope rise inside Prem nd He smild
Ash:- Same thng....nd dnt tell me ky tum ny yeh movie nai dekhi
Prem-Preet:- NAI DEEKHI.,..
Ash:- Holy Cow man!!!! Tum logon ny DDLJ nai deekhi
Prem:- Ash ab tu yeh apni bakwaas ko STOP kar aur movie PLAY kar....
Ash:- acha baba...

And they startd watching da movie

After an hour or so
Prem got up 4m da sofa nd said "Itr so boring yaar...."

"WHHAATT????"Preet nd Ash said at da same time

"Anarth....ghoor Anarth.....Agar Heer ko pata chala na k tu is movie ky baaray mein kya keh raha tha to vo tera murder kar dy gi" Ash said

Prem:- kya matlab?????
Ash:- kuen kay yeh us ki fav. Movie hai aur vo is k khilaaf ek shabd bardaasht nai karti

"fav. Movie....tbhi nai ai" Prem thought nd said "Tum sb log pagal ho....mein soony ja raha hoon"

Ash:- Hum pagal...teri to...
Preet:-Ash....chor na.....hum movie....deekhtay hain...
Prem left 4m there

Heer's Room

Here Heer was still standing near da window nd was smiling....Her thoughts were disturbd by tune of 'tujhay dekha to yeh jana sanam' tana..nana..nana..naaa..naaa...nana
"Yeh log DDLJ dekh rahe hain????" Heer said

Here Prem
As his room is next 2 heer. He was walking 2wards his room doing sumthng on his iphone...Suddenly he bumped into sumone....he lukd up 2 c da person...He saw heer staring at him angrily...sum packets of chips were on floor....He bend down 2 gather those packets.....After picking up all those packets...He gave those packets to Heer who was still in da same position..staring at him...
Prem :- WHAT!
Heer :- Andhay ho????
She askd softly
Prem :- nahin to...
"TO DEKH K NAI CHAL SAKTY KYA..ANKHAIN HAIN K BUTTONS....." Heer yelld She lovd him bt her temper is lyk.......

Prem :- I m sorry vo mein ny dekha nahin....
Prem apologizd becoz he knew dat it was his fault

"WHAT DO YOU MEAN BY DEKHA NAI???? BHAGWAN NAY YEH ANKHAIN DEKHNY K LIYE DI HAIN....INKO USE NAHIN KARO GAY TO SARR JAEN GI...IS LIYE APNI IN CHOTI CHOTI ANKHON KO KHOL K CHALA KARO..." Heer yelld again

"Hey..listen..." Prem said bt Preet cut him nd said "Stop it guyz....kya bachon ki tarha lar rahe ho...."
Prem :- Mein...Mein nai yeh lar rai hai ....mein ny isko sorry bola....
Heer was about 2 say sumthng just Then Ash screamd "CHHIIPPSS!!!!"
Ash :- How cheap Heer??? Mein ny pora ghar chaan mara in chips k liye aur tu in par sanp bn kar bethi hai....day na...
Heer :- Jis ghar mein tum jaisay Bhukar hoon...wahan cheezon ko chupana parta hai...aur Ash tu to mujh say bat hi mat kar....tu ny bataya kuen nai k tm log DDLJ dekh rahe ho...
Ash just smild nd came near Prem "Hum pagal naa....ab tu dekh" ash whisperd
Ash :- Heer chor na tujhay pata hai Prem DDLJ k baray mein kia bol raha tha....vo bol raha tha k..
Prem put his hand on Ash's mouth nd said "Mein bol raha tha kay Heer ki fav movie hai....to us ko bula lena chahiye...mein...mein to tumhain bulany hi aa raha tha....Chalo na...."
Prem's hand was still on Ash's mouth nd he went downstairs draging Ash nd Preet followd them... "How sweet!!!" Heer smild nd went downstairs

Living Room
Prem nd Heer were sittin on sofa nd Preet Ash were sitting on da floor

"Ash chal...start say play kar"Heer said in excitment nd Ash did as Heer said
"Heer tujhay pata hai Prem kya bol raha tha..." Ash said Prem gav her a 'SHUT-UP'look
"Ash just shut ur mouth nw...chup chap movie dekh nai to apne room mein ja..."Heer said Her eyes were fixd on da tv screen
"haan Ash chup chap movie dekh nai to apne room mein ja..."Prem said Heer gav hm an angry luk "Okay....Sorry"Prem said puting hs finger on his lips like a five year old child

MOVIE STARTED

interval
At interval day PAUSD da movie
Ash was making coffee Preet nd Heer were sharing chips nd Prem was lost in hs thoughts "itni deer ho gai hai aur yeh Ash aur Preet soony ka naam nai lay rahe....waisay to har waqt sotay rehtay hain...ab kya karon"
Heer nd Preet noticd that heer wavd her hand in front of his face. He came on earth "Movie itni bhi complictd nai hai k samaj na aye....." Heer said nd
Both of dm (Preet nd Heer) laughd nd shard high fives Prem was staring at dm as dy were laughing on dat stupid PJ
Prem :- Yeh kya tha????
Heer :-Joke!!!!
Prem :- I hate jokes...
Heer :-Nd i hate you....

Ash came wid da coffee nd they plyd da movie again

END
Movie ended Prem yawnd. Heer filld his mouth wid chips
Both of dm startd throwing Chips on each other
"tujhay pata hai Heer...Prem kya bol raha tha..."Ash said again

Heer slappd Ash on her head nd said "Shut up" nd went upstairs 2wrds her Room
Prem also slappd her nd went upstairs

NEXT MORNING
Balraaj-Teji and Lalit-Gaya3 were out of town nd all da youngsters were at home
Ash and Heer were making breakfast nd Prem-Preet were still in their rooms getting ready....

At Dining Table
Evry was eating breakfast just then da bell rang
"Mein dekhti hoon" Heer said

At The Door
Heer opend da door nd saw a beautiful gal standing there she was wearing haltr neck royal blue dress which was above her knees Her hair was short nd open.
"PREM!!!!!"the girl screamd nd went passd heer . Heer turnd and saw Prem Preet nd Ash standing there
The gal kissd Prem on his cheek nd huggd him tightly. Prem smild nd huggd her bk. Here Heer was gettng jealous nd was fuming in anger...
"SANJANA!!!"Prem said
"Thank God tumhain mera naam to yaad hai...."Sanjana said
"Mein tumhain kaisay bhool sakta hoon" said Prem
"Hi Preet..." sanjana said hugging Preet
Heer nd Ash were just luking at dm
"Hy sanju meet dm...."Prem said luking 2wards Heer nd Ash
"Lets go in Prem....tumharay servents say mein baad mein mil lun gi..." Sanju said luking at dm as dy were wearing their night dresses
Nw heer was lyk she is going to kill her
"What....hum..."Heer was about to say sumthng bt Prem cut her nd said "Um....Sanju...yeh servents nai yeh Balraaj uncle ki beti Heer hai aur yeh Heer ki cousin hai Ash...." Prem said
"sorry....bt wat r u wearing...ewww" Sanju said Prem lukd at Heer whose temper was on cloud nine nd he knew dat nw sanju is dead nd was w8ng 4 Heer 2 say sumthng
"Thats none of ur business Ms.Sanjana....tum Prem-Preet ki guest ho is liye mein tumhari respect kar rahi hn warna abhi tak to mein tumhain is ghar say dhaky maar k bahar nikal chuki hoti....get it..." Heer yelld at Sanju
"how rude man??? I said sorry na" Sanju said Heer was about to say sumthng just dn Prem said
Prem :- urrmmm...Sanju tum nay bahar board nahin parha
Sanju :- kon sa board??? Bahar koi board nai tha...
Prem :- kya koi board nai tha....mein kaha tha balraaj uncle say k baha ek board lagva dein...par koi baat nai mein lagva doon ga...
Preet tu jaldi say ek board banva lay bahar lagvana hai
Preet :- kya likhvaon board pe????
Prem :- Likhvana k "BEWARE OF LADY HITLER"
Before Heer say sumthng Prem nd Sanju left 4m there
"Chill Heer....Chill...vo mazak kar raha tha..." Ash said nd left 4m there

After controlng her temper Heer also went 2wardz da dining table when Heer was about 2 pull her chair which was in front of Prem Sanju pulld it nd sat there Her anger was lyk.... Prem was enjoying da jealousy on Heer's face
Heer didnt say anythng nd sat beside Sanju. 2 irritate heer nd to make her feel jealous Prem startd staring at Sanju who was eating breakfast. Seeing dat Heer left da dining table in anger nd went 2wards her room Prem let out a laugh...."ab issay kya hoa... Prem tu ny phir kuch kiya na...." ash said
"mein nay....mein nay kuch nai kia" Prem said trying to control his laugh
"Acha guyz...mein tum logon ko invite karny ai thi aaj raat ko mere Dad ny mere Canad sy India wapis aany ki kushi mein ek party rakhi hai tum sb zaroor ana....Ash aur Heer ko bhi lana....bye"Sanju said nd left

Heer's Room
Heer was still angry....
"aap bhi Ekta Kapoor say kam nai ho...meri Love story start hony say pehli hi us vilan ko bhej dia..." Heer said luking upwards
Just dn Ash enterd Heer's room nd said "Heeeer i m so happy....its party tonight yaar...i m so happy"
Heer :- Party...kaisi party...konsi party...kahan hai party....
Ash :-aaj raat ko Sanjana ky ghar
Heer :-mein nai aa rahi....
Ash :-KYUN????
Heer :-kuen k yeh party us...us...us chudail ki hai...mujhay nai jana
Ash :-Tu usko chor na....itny dinon baad to koi party hai...chal na...tujhay meri kasam
Heer :-Emotional blakmailer....theek hai chalon gi...
Acha Preet kahan hai...
Ash:-Vo Prem ky room mein hai

Prem's Room
Preet was lying on prem's bed nd Prem was doing sumthng on his laptop
Preet :-Prem kon sa suit pehen raha hai
Prem :-Yeh black wala....
Preet :-aur shirt????
Prem saw Heer at da doorway bt he ignord and actd lyk he didnt c her. He startd irritating her
Prem :-White wali...kuen k white us ka fav. Color hai....
Heer smild as white is her fav color nd she thought dat Prem is talking abt her
Preet :-kis ka....
Prem :-arrey....Sanju ka aur kiska...
Nw Heer's anger was.....
Heer :-PREET MERA CELL KAHAN HAI
She shoutd
Preet lukd at Heer nd said "vo mein ny teri study table per rakh dia tha..."
Heer left 4m there

AT THE PARTY

Evry1 was luking gorgeous esp. Heer she was wearing a white nd silver dress which was below her knees. She wore silver earings wid light make-up Her hair was open nd was luking Simple yet stunning. She was luking like an angel. It was difficult 4 Prem 2 take his eyez off her bt he controld hmself just 2 irritate heer

All of them enterd da party hall "Welcome" Sanjana said
"u r luking gorgeous" Prem said
"thanx...." Sanjana repied Heer didnt say anythng nd movd 2wards da bar

After Sumtime
Heer was standing between sanjana nd Ash
Prem came nd kneeld dwn
"CAN I HAVE DA PLEASURE 2 DANCE WID DA MOST BEAUTIFUL LADY TONIGHT"He said luking 2wrds Heer. Heer just smild bt Prem let out his hand 4 Sanjana nd said "Shall we" he said luking 2wrds sanjana Heer closd her eyez,clenchd her teeth nd took deep breath. Prem nd Sanjana left 4 da dance floor
Dat was enough 4 heer She left 4 home

After sumtime Prem came bk nd askd Preet nd Ash "Heer....khan gai"
"vo ghar chali gai...." Preet said
Prem :- Ghar par kyun???
Ash :-pata nahin....
Prem :-kuch zayda ho gaya....
Preet :-Kyaa???
Prem :-tum log enjoy karo mein abhi aya
Nd Prem left 4 Juneja House

JUNEJA HOUSE
Prem came to JH nd went 2wards heer's room but she was nt there he lukd evrywhere bt unable 2 find her....
He went 2wards the terrece nd Here she was...her back was 2wrds hm

Heer was standing there crying. Prem put his hand on her shoulder. Heer quickly wipd her tears nd turn arround 2 face Prem
Prem :- Tum party chor k yahan kuen chali ai
Heer :-its none of ur buisness
Prem grabbd her by her waist nd said "It is my buisness Heer...bolo kuen aa gai tum yahan"
Heer pushd him away nw she was crying
Heer :- TUMHAIN IS SAY KYA HUN'???TUMHAIN IS SAY KYA???TUM JAO APNI US...US SANJANA K PASS...JUST LEAVE ME ALONE!!!!
Prem :- Heer..
Heer :- NAAM MAT LO MERA....MUJHAY TUMHARI KOI BAAT NAI SUN NI....JAO APNI US.....
Before Heer cud say more Prem lockd her lips wid his. His hands were cupping her face....dat was a hard nd a short one....

Prem :- JUST...JUST SHUT UP NOW...AB TUM CHUP RAHO GI AUR MEIN BOLON GA
heer was just staring at him in shock her eyez were wide open
" TUMHAIN KUCH NAI SUN NA HAI PAR MUJHAY TUMHAIN KUCH BATANA HAI....BATANA HAI KAY....KAY MEIN TUM SAY BOHAT PYAAR KARTA HOON....TUM HI SAY PYAAR KIYA HAI MEIN SIRF TUMHI SAY PYAAR...JIS DIN PEHLI BAAR TUMHAIN DEKHA THA TB SAY...AUR TABHI MEIN NAY YEH FAISLA KAR LIYA THA KAY MEIN HUMESHA TUMHARAY SAATH RAHOO GA...HEER MEIN TUMHARY SATH JEENA CHAHTA HOON...TUMHARY SAATH BOORHA HONA CHAHTA HOON....TUMHARAY SAATH MARNA CHAHTA HOON....AUR ROOZ ROOZ TUMHARI GAALIAN SUN NA CHAHTA HOON....I LOVE YOU IDIOT I LOVE YOU....." Prem continue His hands were still cupping her face

Tumhain Pata To Hoga
Tumhi Pay Mein Fida Hoon
Tumhain Hai Jab Say Chaha Hawaon Mein Urta Hoon
Tumhi Mere Har Pal Mein
Tum Aaj Mein Tum Kal Mein
Hey shona!!!! Hey shona

Heer hit him on his chest nd said "BUT I HATE U...U JERK..." "ITNA TIME LAGATA HAI KYA KOI BOLNY MEIN...." "I HATE YOU..." Prem's wrapped his arms arround her waist nd said "SORRY..."

Tum jo gussa bhi karo to mujhay pyaar lagta hai janay kuen
Mein to jo bhi kahon tumhain iqraar lagta hai janay kuen

"I LOVE YOU TOO STUPID...I LOVE YOU..." Heer said nd nw Prem plcd a soft nd gentle Kiss on his fav. Place,on her lips, ds time da kiss was full of love .Heer also kissd him bk wid all her love

Choro Bhi yeh adaa
pass aa kay zaraa
baat dil ki koi keh do na
Hey shona!!!Hey shonaafter sumtime they broke apart Day restd their foreheads against eact other
Heer= I LOVE YOU PREM...I LOVE YOU...MEIN TUM SAY BOHAT PYAAR KARTI HOON...
Prem= MEIN BHI....

Sari Duniya ko chor k mein ny chaha hai ek tumhain
Mein ny Zindagi say manga hai to sirf maanga hai ek tumhain

Heer= AUR MEIN TUMHAIN KISI AUR K SAATH NAI DEEKH SAKTI
Prem= MEIN BHI....
Heer= AUR US CHURAIL SANJANA K SATH TO BILKUL BHI NAHIN...
Both of them let out a laugh
"PREM TUM HAMESHA MERE SAATH RAHO GAY NA...."Heer continued
"MEIN WAADA KARTA HOON HEER MEIN HUMESHA TUMHARAY SAATH RAHO GA GLUE KI TARHA CHIPAK KAY" Prem said both of them laughtd again huggd eachother Tightly

Ab issi rah mein
Ab issi chah mein
Zindagi bhar mere tum ho na
Hey Shona!!!!Hey shona

*Next Part*

Next Morning

*Juneja Mansion*

6:00am
Heer's Room

Prem enterd Heer's room 4m balcony. He saw Heer was sleeping peacfuly. Her face was in da opposite direction nd Prem was facing her back.His hair was wet nd messy he was wearing his track suit.
He walkd 2wrds Heer nd sat on the floor in front of Heer nd just stard at her She was luking damn cute in her white top nd light pink PJs. Her hair was tied in two ponies...sum strands of Hair were playing with her cheek... She had a cute smile on her face nd was slightly blushng...Seeing her blush Prem rememberd their kiss last night...... Prem smild nd removd the starands of hair 4m her face nd place a soft kiss on her cheek.... Heer slowly opend her eyes "Good Morning...." Prem said "Morning" Heer utterd softly nd closd her eyes again.... In the very next moment She opend her eyes quickly nd blinkd several times...She thought she was imagining Prem....She quickly sat up...Prem sat on bed in front of Heer..."Good Morning Heer..." Prem said again Heer rubbd her eyes nd touchd Prems cheek wid her hand. Then she came to knw dat she was nt imagning....."PREM!!!...TUM KAB AYE... AUR TUM YAHAN KYA KAR RAHE HO....!" She lookd at the door nd it was closd "AUR TUM YAHAN..AYE KAISAY.."
PREM="Heer kya subha subha PANCHVI PASS khel rahi ho..kab..kaha...kuen...kaisay.."
HEER="Prem tum sedhi tarha mere sawalon ka jawab dy rahe ho k nahin...."
PREM="OKAY...OKAY...OKAY...mein yahan tb aya jb tum so rahi thi....Mein yahan tum say baat karne ayaa hoon...aur mein Balcony say aya..."
HEER="Par inti subha...hum baad mein bhi to baat kar saktay thay na..."
PREM="NAHIN!!! bohat important baat hai. Abhi karni hai..aur waisay bhi baad mein sab jaag jaen gay aur phir moka nai milay ga to mein ny socha k jogging pe janay say pehlay tum sy baat kar loon..."
HEER="Ab bolo bhi kya baat hai..."
PREM="HEER..Tumhay pata hai...tum is waqt bohat cute lag rahi ho..."
He said kissing her cheek
HEER="Yeh tumhari...important baat thi..."
PREM="NAHIN!!! urmmm...vo mein tum say yeh kehny ayaa tha k...urmmm....TUM MERE SATH DATE PAR CHALO GI.."
HEER="Yeh tum ny Poocha ya bataya????"
PREM="Agar tum HAAN bolo gi to mein ny poocha aur agar....NAA bolo gi to samajna k mein ny tumhain bataya..."
HEER="Meri taraf say NAA hai..kuen k ab sab log ghar par hain ...hum nai ja sakty...."
PREM="Aaj shaam 7:00pm Sharp....be ready"
Prem got up nd startd walking towards the balcony
Heer laid down ..coverd her mouth wid blanket nd said loudly "Mein nahin aaon gi...."
"shaam saat baje yaad rakhna.." Prem said nd left Heer's room

7:00pm
Heer was helping Teji in kitchen...She was wearing a Red anarkali...nd was luking beautiful...Prem had never seen Heer in Indian outfit

In The Kitchen
Teji was making parathas nd Heer was making Tea...both of them had their backs towards the door just then Prem came in nd said " Good Mornin Auntie"
"Good morning Beta" Teji replied. Listening his voice Heer turnd arround nd Prem was shockd when he saw Heer his eyes were wide open in shock...He came bak to hs senses nd smild. He blew a kiss to Heer nd sat on the counter behind them...
"Auntie...bohat pyaas lag rahi...thanda paani milay ga..." Prem said said
"haan beta...Heer Prem ko fridge mein say thandy paani ki bottle nikal kar day...." Teji oderd Heer
Heer took the bottle 4m the fridge nd stard walking towards Prem..."Yeh lo!!!"Heer said Prem jumpd down 4m the counter nd quickly kissd Heer's cheek...Heer's eyes shot open at Prem action...She stard angrily at Prem...Teji turnd arround holding Parathas nd said "Aisay gussay say kya ghoor rahi hai Prem ko...sirf paani hi to maanga Becharay ny..."
HEER="BECHARA!!!! Aur vo bhi yeh Maa aap ko nahin pata is ny kya kiya...is ny...!"
PREM="MEIN NAY!!!!
He winkd at Heer...
TEJI="Haan...bol na kya kiya is ny...."
HEER="IS NAY....IS NAY..."
TEJI="Chup kar Heer ....jaldi say Prem ko paani day aur...chai ly kar bahir aaja..sb w8 kr rahe hain..."
Teji said and left towards the dinning table
HEER="YEH KYA THA PREM!!!"
She said angrily
PREM="KISS THI..."
He said making a pout
HEER="PREM TUMHAIN SHARAM NAI AATI..."
PREM="Heer u r luking so beautiful...mujh say raha nah gya"
HEER="Raha nai gaya...AUR AGAR MOM DEKH LETI TO..."
PREM="DEKHA TO NAI NAA....HEER TUM BOHAT CUTE LAG RAHI HO...."
He said pinching her cheeks
HEER="Prem kya bachon jaisi harkatain kar rahe ho..."
Prem grabbd her by her waist nd pulld her closer
PREM="To baron vali harkatain karon kya....."
He said naughtily Heer blushd nd then
"Heer chai le aa!!!!!!!!" Teji shoutd 4m da dinning table
"Abhi lai mom!!!!!!!" Heer shoutd nd pulld Prem away
"Heer... Tumhari Naa Haan mein badli k nai" Prem said
"Mein ny subha bhi naa kaha tha abhi bhi keh rahi hoon aur aagay bhi kahoon gi...got it"Heer said
"Heer sb w8 kar rahe hain kya kar rahi hai!!!!!!"Teji shoutd again
" PREM SAY LARAI KAR RAH HOON MOM!!!!" Heer shoutd
"Kitna chilatay ho yaar tum log...."Prem said Heer gav hm an angry luk Prem changd da topic nd said " So YES or again NO"
"NO!!!!"
Heer said
"SOCH LO HEER....JANA TO PARAY GA...AGAR NAI JAO GI TO UTHA K LE JAON GA...SB K SAAMNY.,ND I MEAN IT" Prem said
"OH REALY!!!!....!"
"YES!!!!"
"NO!!!!!" Heer said pickng up da tray of tea nd she left the kitchen

In The Evening
7:00pm

Heer was in her room reading a book. Prem enterd Heer's room nd said " READY!!!"
"PREM ZID MAT KARO HUM NAI JAA SAKTAY..."

"TO TUM NAI JAA RAI..."

"NAHIN!!!!"

"MEIN NAY TUM SAY KAHA THA HEER K NAHIN JAO GI TO UTHA K LE KAR JAON GA...."

Nw what will Prem do???? Wait for the next part

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Edited by anoushay_kdmhmd - 15 years ago