OS:Seven In the Evening:last part, pg11, 15/10/09

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masin

@masin

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Posted: 15 years ago

#11

aww that was brilliantt!!!! soo cute

kk so u have to turn this into a fanfic!!!!!!!!! PLEASEE!!!!!! i'd love to see what else u can come up with....i loveed it sooooo muuuuchhhhhhhhhhhhh

i loved how he smiled at her blushing...i loveedd preett......screaming like mad..esp. prem covering his ears beforehand..and asking preet to start asking him questions..their jodii is amazingg!!!!!!! please please please make this a ff!!!!!!

PLEEEEAASSSSEEEEEEEE

and please pm me if u write more ffs/oneshots or if u continue with this one

love

Samra

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Dr.Smart

@Dr.Smart

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Posted: 15 years ago

#12

That update was wonderful....My favorite part was the screaming session. Haha Prem thinks that he is going to become bhera. I sometimes feels like that when my brother screams. Trust me, he's pretty loud and annoying. Anyways,back to the story. I loved each and every part of it. It was wonderfuling described. Please do pm me if you write any other ones. You're a great writer. Take care and Love ya!

Palchin

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441240

Suspended

Posted: 15 years ago

#13

Hey Nikhita............
another awesomeeeeeeee and brillant update...................⭐️
loved meet's role in this part..............😊
and definetly loved prem's cute confession........😍
can't wait to read more of ur oneshots.....

Yaz
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tina

@cpervaiz

Voyager

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Posted: 15 years ago

#14

that was soo lovey..................mujhe bhi khushi ke ansoo aa gaye......................😉..................thanx for the pm and do write more os

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Aashifa

@curledup

Rocker

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Posted: 15 years ago

#15

updated comment on page 1
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Angie

@angel82

Dazzler

Posted: 15 years ago

#16

WOW, beautiful !! loved it

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dreamysouls

@dreamysouls

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Posted: 15 years ago

#17

Hey Nikhita,
Loved the sequel. The first part was awesome and u followed it with a gr8 update. Meher's interaction with heer and prem was really cute. loved it.

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...Nikhita...

@...Nikhita...

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Posted: 15 years ago

#18

Originally posted by: curledup
me

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hey nikhita hiiiiii aashifa!
you, yaz and hiba need to be arrested for doing this to me... I was again in a sighing dreamy phase...... 😆 😆 😉 😉thanks dear..... i'm really glad you feel that way! 😳the sequel was g-r-e-a-t...I loved prems confessions...seriouslly I did!...he was so cute i know....he always is!
and preet 🤣 hats off to preet and meher...they played a really important role in this update!!!
Preet and his 'Kya' and baujis 'aag lagi hai kya'

mindblowing..PHantabulous!! thanks a lot! I'm so glad you liked it!
-aashifa-