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Hiii guys!
A lot of people were asking about a sequel for this oneshot....so here it is!
For those who haven't read the first part here's the link....
hope it is alright.....😳
SEVEN IN THE EVENING: PART TWO
After bringing Tanu home from Heer's house, Prem walked towards his room, a smile on his face. As he opened the door, he was greeted by the sight of Preet lying on his bed, watching TV. "Oh, toh aap aa gaye" he said, getting up.
Prem sighed, knowing that Preet wasn't going to leave him until he gave answers of about a million questions . Prem flopped down on a chair. "Poochna shuru kar."
"Nahin, zyada kuch nahin, bas ek sawaal hai bhaiya" said Preet. "Yeh aapka aur Tanu ki tuition teacher ka kya chakkar hai?"
Prem winced. Bas ek sawaal. That one question just about covered his life.
"Tujhe kaise pata chala?" he asked his brother.
"Tanu ko aaj ek badi chocalate bar di maine...in return kaafi information di usne mujhe" Preet paused. "Toh bataiye....aaj tak jis Prem Juneja ne ek ladki ki taraf dekha tak nahi, aaj woh kis ladki ka deewana ban gaya hai?"
Prem sighed. "I love her Preet" he said softly. It was true. He had just known her for about a week. He didn't know when, where, how, why he had fallen in love with her. He just knew that he had. Full stop.
After confessing that, Prem closed his eyes and put his hands over his ears, waiting for the explosion.
He wasn't disappointed.
"KYAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!" screamed Preet, shaking the whole house.
"KAMRE MEIN AAG LAGI HAI KYA!" Lalit Juneja's voice floated up, equally loud, as the house shook again.
"WOWWWWWWWWW PB I AM SO HAPPY FOR YOU!" shouted Preet excitedly, ignoring Lalit.
"TU ZARA CHILLANA BAND KAREGA?" yelled back Prem.
"Oh, sorry. Main kuch zyaada hi excited ho gaya tha.....waise PB, bhabhi se kab mila rahe ho?"
"Bhabhi?" repeated Prem in shock. "Kaun bhabhi? Maine ab tak use kuch bataaya nahi hai aur tu hai ki....". Prem put his hands over his ears as yet again another yell erupted from Preet.
"KYAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!"
"AGAR TU CHUP NAHI RAHA PREET TOH MAIN UPAR AAKAR TUJHE MAAR DALUNGA!" shouted Lalit.
Preet ignored him. "But why PB?" he asked. "I don't know if she thinks that way about me Preet" replied Prem. "Heck, I don't even know if she even thinks about me!"
"Woh aapke baare mein sochti bhi hai aur aapse pyaar bhi karti hai bhaiya." said Preet confidently. "Isliye aap kal jayenge bhabhi ko apne dil ki baat batane."
Prem looked at him in surprise. "Tujhe sach mein aisa lagta hai?"
"Aur kya?" said Preet. "Aakhir aap Preet Juneja ke bhai ho! Agar woh aapse pyaar nahi bhi karti hain na, toh bhi aapse shaadi ke liye toh zaroor maan jayengi taaki woh uss ghar mein aa sake jahaan Preet Juneja rehta hai!"
"Um...bhaiya...aap mujhe aise kyun dekh rahe ho...mujhe aap ke iraade bilkul theek nahi lag rahe!" "Bhaiya....." continued Preet nervously walking backwards as Prem continued to walk towards him, "Aap yeh kya kar rahe ho?"
"Kuch nahi.....main toh bas tujhe yeh dikhane waala hoon ki Preet Juneja ka yeh bhai kya kya kar sakta hai....chodunga nahi tujhe!" he ended as he started chasing after Preet who had already sprinted out of the bedroom.
"Bas Didi bas! Maaf kar dijiye, mujhse galti ho gayi!" begged Meher, putting her hands over her ears. Heer looked at her in surprise. "Kaunsi galti?"
"Yehi ki maine aapse Prem Juneja ke baare mein poocha! Maine toh sirf itna poocha ki woh kis tarah ke insaan hain aur aap hain ki bolti jaa rahi hain! Mujhe koi unki biography nahi likhni hai!" Meher ended and grinned as Heer immediately turned scarlet red. "Woh... mujhe pata hi nahi chala....." she stuttered. "Tujhe rokna chahiye tha na mujhe?"
"Rokna chahiye tha? Kam se kam das baar chilla chuki hoon-bas, bas, bas, lekin aap toh bas bolti hi jaa rahi hain-Prem yeh, Prem woh, Prem, Prem, Prem, Prem!" teased Meher. "Aur aap rukengi bhi kaise?" she continued. "Pyaar jo karti hain aap Prem jiju se!"
"Meher!" exclaimed Heer shocked. Blushing even more she ran upstairs, leaving behind a grinning Meher.
Just then the doorbell rang. Meher looked at her watch. 7 o'clock. "Iss waqt kaun hoga?" she thought as she went towards the door and pulled it open.
Prem was so nervous that his hands were shaking as he rang the doorbell to Heer's house, cursing Preet for having forced him to come here. Pata nahi woh kya sochegi. Aaj toh Tanu ki bhi chutti hai isliye mere paas toh woh bahaana bhi nahi.
Just then the door was pulled open and Prem saw a girl standing there.
"Is she Heer's sister?" thought Prem. "Aur yeh mujhe aise kyun ghoor rahi hai jaise main koi terrorist hoon jo agle hi pal use goli maarne waala hoon?"
"Um excuse me! Can I come in please?" asked Prem finally, fed up of this girl who was staring at him.
"Oh, sorry! Mujhe pata hi nahi chala.....andar aaiye na! I'm Meher bythe way, Heer's sister."
"Oh....I'm..."
"Prem Juneja. Pata hai. Heer didi ne itne achche se aapko describe kiyaki hazaar logon ki bheed mein bhi aapko pehchaan loongi!" Meher muttered.
Prem stared at her. Heer ne describe kiya?
"HEER DIDI!" Meher was yelling loudly, as Prem put his hands over his ears. "Aaj lagta hai main zaroor behra ho jaunga. Ek toh Preet aur Bauji ko din bhar chillate rehte se fursat nahi milti aur ab yeh!"
"Aise chilla kyun rahi...." began Heer, as she came out of her room, and stopped abruptly as she saw Prem. Meher grinned as her cheeks immediately turned red. "Aap?" she said softly.
"Um...I'm sorry to disturb....."
"Nahin, nahin bilkul nahin" said Heer quickly. "Aap ne mujhe bilkul disturb nahi kiya!"
"Haan haan...din bhar aap hi ka wait karte rehti hai, aap kaise disturb kar sakte hain inko?" muttered Meher.
Prem smiled as Heer blushed.
"Woh..." Prem felt like an idiot. "I was wondering ki um...agar aap abhi free ho toh hum bahar jaa sakte hain? Dinner par" he added hurriedly as he saw her staring at him. "Woh kal maine yahaan khaya tha so I thought....um...agar aap free nahi hai toh koi baat nahi....I....."
"No, no i'm free!" interrupted Heer eagerly.
"Arre did kaise free nahi hogi" added a grinning Meher, "Woh toh kabse aapke invitation ka intezaar kar rahi hain!"
Heer turned crimson again much to Prem's amusement and said softly, "Woh..... main tayyar hokar aati hoon..."
"Lekin tum toh aise hi bahut khoobsurat lag rahi ho!" remarked Prem and grinned as Heer turned red and ran upstairs.
In the car.....
"Hum kahan jaa rahe hain?"
"Dinner par!"
"Woh mujhe bhi pata hai....lekin kahan?"
"Thodi der mein pata chal jayega" Prem refused to say anything.
"Hey bhagwan aap ne finally meri sun li....i can't believe main Prem ke saath bahar jaa rahi hoon...thank you bhagwan!" thought Heer happily.
She was so deep in her thoughts that she didn't notice where Prem had taken her. Prem parked his car and then asked her to close her eyes. "Jab tak main na kahun aankhen mat kholna!" he added sternly. Prem then slowly led her to some place and then asked heer to open her eyes. Heer did so and was shocked.
She was standing in the middle of a huge hall with red roses all around her. Soft music was playing from a corner of the hall, and there were mumerous candles all around.
"Heer......" she heard Prem's voice from behind and turned around. "I know you must be surprised to see all this...these roses...candles....well actually i didn't know how to do this...but then I had to somehow....Heer, I know we just met a week ago, we don't even know each other properly....but the moment I saw you, that first day when you opened the door to me, I think I fell in love with you....everything happened so quickly......in that moment you became my everything Heer....you became my life and my reason for living....you captured my heart and my soul...i don't even have words to tell you what you mean for me....my day starts with you and ends with you.....you're my life Heer.....and I don't think I can live without you....I love you Heer."
Prem closed his eyes as he waited for her to slap him or scream at him, or worse walk out on him. He waited a good five minutes and when he got no reaction, he slowly peeked through one eye and saw that Heer was crying.
"Heer?" he was at her side in a second. "Heer did I hurt you? I'm sorry Heer mera woh matlab nahi tha...I...."
Heer simply turned and launched herself into his arms, burying her face in his chest, sobbing. Prem's arms automatically came round her.
"Heer, tum aise ro kyun rahi ho....what's wrong Heer?" Prem was asking worriedly, as she continued crying.
Heer finally lifted her face from his chest and smiled through her tears. "Yeh khushi keh aansoon hai Prem."
Prem stared at her as a huge smile slowly appeared on his face. "Sach?"
She nodded. "Sach Prem. Aaj mujhe bhagwaan ne meri zindagi ka sabse bada tofa diya hai." She paused. "I love you too Prem.....I love you too!"
i hope that wasn't too bad...
do tell me what you think!😳
Nikhita
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