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Hey frenz.. I am posting this story..hope u all like it....please gimme your views and press like button if u liked it..!

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"bhaiyya… jaldi karo naa.." prem said to the man at the pani puri stall. He was sure that he will have to work hard tonight to get heer talk to him. prem smiled to himself and took his phone out. He dialled heers mobile number and held it close to his ears.

'no prem.. I don't want to talk to you now!!" heers angry tone came from the voice mailbox. Prem smiled again looking at the watch. It was 11:30 and heer recorded the message and keeps it whenever prems curfew time of 10 extended. It was strict orders from Mrs. Prem Juneja that he should be home before 10.

Prem always listened to heer and tried to keep the time limit. He knew that in his busy life he was not giving her enough time. She knew his work details and adjusts well and never complained. But heer wanted prem at home for dinner everyday. It was the only time she had her husband to herself.

Prem knew this well and always cancelled every party thrown by his business partners or friends to be with his wife. He saw that those few hours made her the happiest person on earth. And the smile on her face makes him the happiest guy on earth.

But today the unexpected delegates from US had kept him busy at the office and he had not got a chance to talk to her too. He had even forgot to ask his secretary to call her and inform. He had seen the numerous miss calls in his cell from morning. He had asked the secretary to keep the land phone off as he didn't want any disturbance in between the meeting.

"yeh lo bhaiyya .." the small boy came and gave prem his packet. Prem smiled at the young boy and gave him the money. He turned towards the car when he saw a man selling gajra.

'thank God.. now I know how to make her happy' prem laughed to himself as he walked towards that man selling jasmine flowers..!

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'Its so late. Where is Prem?' heer wondered. 'Didn't pick up my call the whole day! I hope he is fine!' she turned on her side of the bed to check on the time. As she turned she slid from the bed. Heer had not realised she was already on the extreme left before she turned.

As she fell of the bed her head hit the corner of the table and a stillness was around her. heer touched the side of the head that hit the table. A silent cry escaped her lips. She tried to get up from her position but it felt impossble. Her legs were tightened and she understood that something happened to her right leg too.

The blood was flowing out soaking her hair and dress. The medico inside her told her that she had to do something soon before she lost her conciousness. Making some noise was not a solution. There was no one at home and the gate keeper would be far away.

Heer thought about the emergency alarm Prem had set up last month in case something comes up. '
no.. that is on the other side..' heer was confused now.
The darkness inside the room scarred her.

The only alternative left was to drag towards the telephone stand. She tried to drag herself. With much effort she moved an inch. It felt impossible to her to reach the stand on the left corner of the king size bedroom.

'prem.. I need you..where are you..' heers heart cried as she tried to move again trying to listen to the sounds outside wishing for the sound of prems car.

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Prem checked on the traffic lights and took the left turn towards his house. 'pani puri and gajra' two things heer loved the most! He knew that she wont be angry for long when he had brought these two!

Prem remembered his first date when heer had not shown any interest on going to the five star hotel where he had booked an entire floor for her. Instead she had taken him to a small pani puri stall. He had fallen more in love with her that very day. He had finally seen a girl who had not cared for the money or status of Prem Juneja!

Prem still remember the day he had seen her at the wedding of his best friend. She was the only girl in the whole auditorium who had not shown an interest in him. she was more interested in running around the wedding hall making people sit and also at teasing his best friend. He later learned that she was brides best friend and was the only daughter of Balraaj Maan, the famous Cardiologist in the city.

Heer was also in her final year of medicine when she had gotten married to Prem. It all looked like a dream for him even today. Balraaj had initially objected to a Business man marrying his only daughter. More than Prem being a businessman it was prem having no family that was a problem for balraj. Balraj had wanted his colleagues son Manmeet to marry her. It had taken a lot of talking for getting Balraj agree to the marriage..!

Prem took the next turn to Juneja house when his phone started ringing. He looked at the mobile screen.

'heer'.. the light flashed. Prem slowed down the car and attended the call.

'yes sweetheart…." prem said.

"prem.. prem.. me.." heers weak and soft sounded reached his ears and his legs hit the break!

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"prem.. don't let me loose my consiousness.. it will become complicated then.." heer whispered while prem held her close to his heart. He patted on her back and cried silently.

"jaldi karo.." prem asked the driver to drive faster.

"heer..tum chinta mat karo..we will be at the hospital now.." he held her more close and kissed her forehead. She looked pale and he looked at the blood still flowing out from the bandagehe tied on it.

"doctor.. we will reach the hospital now.." prem said to the doctor through phone.

In a few minutes they were at the hospital. An entire team of doctors and nursing assistants were there ready and they moved heer to the operation theatre immediately.

"prem…if something happens to me.. our baby.. look after her.." heer cried softly.

"nothing will happen to you or our baby.."prem tried to say consoling heer and more than heer himself.

"you can wait here Mr. Juneja.." said the doctor while taking heer inside.
"prem..save my baby..!!" she whispered while she was being taken inside.

Prem sat on one of the chairs his head on his hands.

"Mr. Juneja.. please come with me.." an assistant came to prem and led him to the main doctors room.
The doctor was waiting for prem and as soon as prem entered he said..

"Mr. Juneja.. we have very less time. So please listen carefully. Your wife is in a critical stage now. She has lost a lot of blood and her water has also broken. At this state we cant wait for her pain to start. We need to take the baby out as soon as possible as the baby wont get to breathe if not done so. We need to operate on her and for that we need your permission. If not mother atleast the child can be safe this way." doctor waited for prems reply.

"if not mother atleast the child can be safe.." doctors words striked him.

"prem.. save my baby..!" heers words came to him.

Prem felt like he died that moment. He didn't know what decision to be made. He wanted them both in his life. If heer was his life their baby was the reminder of their love. he couldn't turn his face to either of them.

He looked at doctor and then at the paper. He signed the paper with shivering hands.
"doctor.. I need them both.." he cried.

"don't worry Mr. Juneja.. we will try everything we can.." doctor walked away while prem cried hard.

The hospital scene when last time he came to the hospital came up in his mind. He was just five years old then and he had lost two most important people that day. His parents, the only ones he had in this world whom he could call his own. Prem cried at the destiny. Today again he was at the same hospital and again two lives which he can call his own are again fighting for their life inside. Prem fell on his knees praying to god for his heer and his baby!

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"congratulations Mr. Juneja.. Mrs. Juneja gave birth to a baby girl.." doctor said to Prem.
"and ..heer..?" prems voice shivered as he asked.

"she is also fine.. still in sedation.. it will take a few hours before she gains her conciousness.." Doctor smiled.

"thank you doctor.." prems joy had no bounds.

"you should thank God .. it was very difficult Mr. Juneja.. but then her will.. and she was bought here on time.." doctor walked away.

Prem looked towards the door. After some time the door opened and the nurse came out with a small bundle in her hands. She smiled seeing prem and showed him his daughter.

Prem looked at the baby covered in a white cloth. She had her eyes closed. She was in a deep sleep. Prem held her in his arms. When prems hands touched her skin the baby moved in her sleep as if sensing her fathers touch. Prem looked at the tiny fingers that held his finger tightly as if asking him to never let her go. He held the baby close to his heart and kissed her fore head.

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"noo.. I don't want to take any risk this time.." prem said in a final tone and took heer with him.

"but prem.. " heer asked stopping prem.

"no buts.. you just listen to me.." prem said.

"oh ho papa.. why do you worry.. main hoon naa.. mama and bro ko mein dekhoongi.." chahat came and stood next to heer.

"haan Prem Juneja.. your daughter is there.. she don't even let me move from my place.. you both. Father and daughter are the same.. always after me.." heer complained.

Prem looked at his daughter and then took her in his arms.
"that is like my daughter.." prem said kissing chahat..
"and ..one for .." he leaned to kiss heer with chahat in his arms.

"prem.." heer leaned away trying to escape.

"arre.. I wanted to kiss my son.." prem chuckled and kissed her stomach sending a shiver through heer.

"and then his mamma.." saying this both chahat and prem kissed heer on heers cheeks..! and the song played silently in the back ground..

tum ho toh gaata hai dil, tum nahi toh geet kaha
tum ho toh hai sab haasil, tum nahi toh kya hai yaha
tum ho toh hai sapano ke jaisa hasin ik sama
jo tum ho toh, yeh lagata hai, ke mil gayi har khushi
jo tum na ho, yeh lagata hai, ke har khushi me hai kami
tum ko hai maangati....... yeh jindagi........!!!!!!!!!!!!!


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Posted: 15 years ago
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unreserved the reserved place
OMG sandy it was soooo phantabulous
really u wrote all the things so beautifully
love this os soo much
do write more
luv
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awesome....
you are a fabulous story teller Sandy... trust me...
keep rocking...
thanx for letting me know about this...
regards,
Suhana.
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wow.....that was a really sweet oneshot....it was pretty emotional too.....loved it....waiting for more!
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It was touching. G8.
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when heer fell down.i was like if u make it a tragic one.i was soooo going to kill u.......but then....happy ending....
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wow it was perfect...loved it!
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THAT WAS TOUCHING AND LOVELY
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it was awesome
i thought you're gonna make heer die but thank god nothing happened
it was so beautiful.
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Originally posted by: Suhana Ahmed

awesome....

you are a fabulous story teller Sandy... trust me...
keep rocking...
thanx for letting me k now about this...
regards,
Suhana.thanks dear..😊😊..

Originally posted by: v_nikhita18

wow.....that was a really sweet oneshot....it was pretty emotional too.....loved it....waiting for more! thanks dude..i will let u know if i write more..!😊..

Originally posted by: premheermy

awesome one shot thanks anjali..😊..

Originally posted by: Kutimani

It was touching. G8.thanks dear..!😊..

Edited by stunninstar - 15 years ago

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