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Hello Deshians........

Here is another OS which is Meet centric😃..............this is the first time i'm focusing on comedy rather than romance😊.........so plz go easy on me😆...........hope u all like it..............😳



Well there we were, me and my good pal Prem innocently walking back up to our college campus on a warm summers day. I look up and see Meher ahead of us. All I can say is wow! Oh My rab! She is so pretty! And I mean 'Oh my rab' when I say it. I'm not one of those people who says 'Like! Oh my rab' in every other sentence! She had just been standing under a tree with her friend, I dunno her name, blonde and with absolutely massive ti- I'm getting sidetracked! Anyway! The sun was so amazingly reflected off her hair as she moved by it. Her hair is so amazing, so coppery and just downright sexy! She has the most amazing skin ever, so soft. Well, I guess it would be soft, I can't say I've ever actually touched her face but I know it is. She is perfect. Totally and utterly perfect and- oh my rab, I love her. Oh my rab. I love her. Oh. My. Rab. How could I not see this before?! But this is amazing! I'm in love for the very first time! How absolutely wonderful for me! I'm walking that way towards her now, Prem is with me. I vaguely wonder what he's talking about, hmm, I think he expects me to say something. So I oblige.




"Uh yeah, I agree mate"

I'm so in love! I could marry Meher! She is the best girl! The most perfect person. The most amazingly sexy, and kind and loving person in the world. I'm gonna tell her now!

"You agree that you're gay?"

What's that Prem is saying? Oh who gives a damn! I'm going to tell Meher! I'm going to tell her I'm so in love with her and she'll love me back and we'll marry and be so happy! What will I call my child that we'll have? Arjun? No'

"Preet? You're gay?!"

Naitik? No' Ranvir? No' Karan? Rab no! Oh but what if it's a girl? Hmm'Priya? No' Oops Prem, he's still talking, better say yeah to make him happy.

"Yeah that's true mate, you're so right."

I wonder where we'd live. Well I'm going to inherit that house in Delhi , so I guess we could live there! It's a bit small, but it's nice.

"I thought you were just messing around when you came on to me. Wow. So you're really gay?"

Hmm'What's Prem on about? Oh that's right! I don't care! And why don't I care? Because'I'm in love with Meher Maan! Oh, Prem has stopped talking. Better say yeah again.

"Yeah, it's true mate, it's very true".

"But you don't like'fancy me right?"

Why won't Prem shut up? I've said yeah enough! If I say yeah forcefully enough, he'll shut up. Hopefully!

"Yeah look mate! It's true I agree. I have done for ages. I'm always thinking about this topic that we're talking about now! And I find that it's a very sensitive issue!"

That's gotta shut him up. I think it has too! He's not talking anymore. Nothing can upset me today! And I'm just going to keep walking up to her and tell her that I'm in love with her! I'm so happy! Nothing can make me sad today! Cause I am in love with Meher Maan!

"Err'Preet. I've gotta go'"

Yes baby! I'm feeling happy? Cause I'm in love with Meher Maan!

"Something'umm'I'uhh'Gotta do"

Oh Yes I am!

"So I'll see you'umm'later..."

Oh look,! My dear friend, Prem has left! Leaving me to ponder in peace how perfect she is! Did you hear? I'm going to tell her I love her! I'm almost there now! She is so perfect. The way her eyes are so hazel and, I just love her so much. It's now or never. She will love me back. How can a person love someone so much and it be unrequited? She must love me! I'm gonna tell her. She's looking at me now. I'm within 4 feet. So now I'm gonna stop. She's still looking at me. Okay. Now what? Right, Right! Tell Meher Maan that I love her. Got it.

"Uhh...Hey"

Both Meher and her friend are looking puzzled. I'm beginning to sweat a bit now. I've never been nervous around a girl before! Just tell her you idiot!

"Right well, basically'I mean'Well'Uhh'Okay, Let me start again. Right well, see the thing is'uhh-"

"What is the thing Preet?" She says, cutting me off.

I think she's enjoying the fact that I'm nervous. She just gave her friend a really pained look and her friends just walked off. Were alone now. Perfect time to do it. Just tell her.

"Okay, well the thing is that' err' lately, I've been thinking about the issue, of'umm'our relationship."

"We have no relationship Preet".

"No, but, what I mean to say is...is'"

"Spit it out!"

"I'I am'"

"An idiot?? Less useful than a square wheel?" She suggests.

"No, I mean-I'm trying to say'that, well-"

"Oh for crying out loud! Just say whatever it is!"

"I'm'I'm in'"

"WHAT?! YOU'RE IN WHAT?!"

"In love'with'uhh'you."

It kind of looks like someone's deflated her. A moment ago she was all red and fiery and now she's sort of small. She's not angry, I don't think. She's just looking at me. I stare in to her hazel eyes, her deep, beautiful hazel eyes and I know I truly love her.

"You love me?" She says very quietly

"I'well'yeah. I'I do. Sorry- I mean, you know, if it- if it, like, upsets you."

"It doesn't upset me Preet". She's looking at me in a way she never has before. There isn't any mistrust there, or a scowl. Just a soft, warm expression.

"I love you Meher Maan, more than anything else in the world. Ever since the day I met you, I have. I just'didn't know it till five minutes ago'"

She doesn't say anything, but she smiles. And it's that beautiful smile she gives her friends when they make her laugh or when she sees her family .

"Well Preet'I uhh-" She coughs slightly "I have always, No. Hang on. I'll start again. I have always'err'admired you and the way that you...are."

She's nervous! That's like the first time I have ever seen her nervous! Ever! Oh My Rab! I make her nervous!

"Preet'the things is'that-"

Well, I'm not sure what made me do it. But I kissed her. I just moved my head down, and touched her lips with mine, and she seems to melt before me. She begins to kiss me back. I reach around her with my arms and I feel that I am going to die with happiness. After a little while, she pulls away and just looks at me, resting in my arms.

"I love you too."

"Really?"

"Yes."

"You will never know how much I love you Meher Maan, because words can't express how much I do".



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My apologies if I forgot to include anyone, but anyone who wants to be added to the PM list, just press the like button below......

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Edited by yasu09 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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awww...........................dude hats off to your imagination, its brilliant.....loved how engrossed Preet was that he completely changed his gender preference😆
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Posted: 16 years ago
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that was too funny. and the 9 and 3 quarters platform thing from harry potter......very clever! you should have shown prem seeing them kiss and being confused.lol. anyways, verrrry nice as usual!!! please keep writing meet shots!
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Posted: 16 years ago
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he he... that was funny!! loved preet!!
it was really nice!! :)
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Posted: 16 years ago
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that was really funny!😆 totally loved the prem-preet conversation!
you're good at comedy too yaar! superb imagination!
waiting for more.....
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Posted: 16 years ago
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he he..that was nice...thanks fr the pm..😊
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Posted: 16 years ago
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*reseved*
*unreserved*
loved it
especially the part where preet says he is GAY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
thanx 4 the pm
do write more OS
Kamal
Edited by Kamal_23 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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hey, it was really superb........
nice to read something different.
continue writing..............
thanks for pm.
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Posted: 16 years ago
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i luved it!!!....."tussi te gr8 ho rasgulle di plate ho" 😆 😆 😆............thanksss!!!!
Edited by Rhea_401 - 16 years ago

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