New Premeer Oneshot: Amusement Park - Page 2

Originally posted by: curledup

OMBF *oh my blasted fire crackers* .....that was an amazing one-shot!!.....I LOVED every minute of reading it.....Roller coasters..I literally hate the name of them forget the sight!...that was full of premeer jadoo.....it was great...prem was great...he stole my heart as usual!....really really fantastic...I wonder....hmm.....*thinking...how, if you ever write an ff will turn out?* hmmm

Great one shot definetly one of my faves!!
do pm me if you right another one!

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I forgot this: 👏

and one question
why is it always me who is starting a new page?

-aashifa-

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Did Prem purposely add the fact that tanu was his niece?

Originally posted by: v_nikhita18

thank you so much for such a lovely comment! i'm really glad that you liked it....i will surely pm you if i write more! and i haven't yet thought about writing an ff.....

Originally posted by: curledup

aww thats ok!......good good do please do......hmmm well than never mind

Originally posted by: v_nikhita18

you started a new page again!😆😆

Originally posted by: masin

woww!!!! that was really gooddd!! u should definitely write moree!!!!!!!!!! i'd lovee to read theemm!!!!!!! and def. pm me if u do write more for premeer :DD

keep up the fab job!!

love

Samra

Originally posted by: maha_k

really nice dear continue plz .awesommmmmmmmm👏