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Posted: 15 years ago
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hey chahat-prem scene was really cute... plz update soon....😃
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Posted: 15 years ago
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"HEER!!!!HEER!!!!" Prem was shouting 4m his room wid a tie in his handz.
"Mama!!!!Mama!!!"Chahat said nd cme running in Premeer's room her hair was open nd she hd a comb in her handz
"Papa! Mama kahan hain"Prem was trying 2 tie da knot of hs tie he didnt listen wat chahat said "Papa!!!!!" chahat yelld loudly prem got scard 4 1 minute "Mama kahan hain"Prem was frustrated becoz he was calling heer 4m past 10 minutes becoz of dat tie nd she was nt listening nd 2ndly he was getting late nd nw Chahat in frustsation prem said"mujhy to yahan par tumhari MMAMMMA dikhai nai day rahi agar tumhain dikh rai hn to un say kaho k meri tie bandh dain mujhay late ho raha hai" "very funny" chahat said "waisay tumhain kya kaam hai" prem said

CHAHAT "mujhay apny baal bndhvany hain un say"
PREM lao mein bandh doon
CHAHAT(she was giggling) " aap aur bal hahahaha"
PPEM is mein hansny vali kon si baat hai mein baal nai bandh sakta kya
CHAHAT "Aap loori to sahi gaa nai sakty to aap baal kya baandho gay aur waisy bhi mujhy school aaj jana hai kal nai agar aap mere baal banao gay to kal tak hi banain gy"
PREM "Acha!!! Waisay tumhari mama kahan hain"
CHAHAT "Pata nahin mujhy baal bandhvany hain mujhay late ho raha hai"
PREM Mujhy bhi tie bandhwani hai mujhay bhi late ho raha hai"
CHAHAT " Mr.Prem Juneja aap say ziyada chahat ko late ho raha hai aap agar office late bhi gaye to koi fark nai parta kuen k office aap k papa ka hai magar agar mein late ho gai to Mam Chadda mujhay nai chory gi kuen k school mere papa ka nai hai na is liye jb mamma aye gi to pehly mere baal phir aap ki tie bandhay gi"
PREM "Ji nahin pehly meri tie phir tumhary baal"
CHAHAT "Shart laga lo HOTEL KE OWNER JI pehly mere baal"
PREM "ji nahin pehlay meri Tie HOTEL KI OWNER-NI JI lag gai Shart nd they shook their handz



~.~.~.~NEXT PART~.~.~.~

"MAMA!!!!" "HEER!!!!" Both of dm shouted at da same tym "Mama!!!!" "Heer!!!" they shouted again nd again

In The Kitchen

Heer was making breakfast as she woke up late she was panicing nd was running in da kitchen
Just then he heard Prem Nd Chahat shouting on da top of their nerves

HEER "aa rahi hn bs 10min aur"


IN DA ROOM

"Das minute aur" both said 2gthr
Nd started shouting again this time more loudly HEEER!!!! MAMMMA!!!!

BACK IN DA KITCHEN
Meher was helping heer nd was making PREM nd CHAHAT's lunch boxes while heer was making breakfast

MEHER "Didi is say pehly k aas pass k log humary ghar mein pathar phenkna shuru kr dein ja kr un dono ki baat sun lijye"

Just dn kulraaj cm in da kitchen sayin

KD "Heer!!! Heer!!!"

MEHER "Kuldi aap bhi"

KD "Aur nai to kya meher mere kaan phat rahe hain
Aur heer tu... Tu ja kr unki baat sun in donon nay poora ghar sar pe uthaya hoa hai is say pehly k poora HINDUSTAN sar pr utha lein tu...tu ja.... Breakfast.....breakfast mein bana doon gi"


HEER [I]Nai kuldi aap ko to pata hai na chahat ko mere hath ka khana hi pasand hai agar mein gai to aur late ho jae ga zaroor chahat ney baal bandhvany hn gay aur Prem ney tie plz kuldi aap ja kr dekh lijye na aur Kertan aur Tanu chaly gaye kya???


KD "Han bus aa gai thi vo chaly gye tu fikar mat kr chahat ko prem chor dy ga . Mein ja kr un dono ko dekhti hn

IN DA ROOM
"Mama!!!" "Heer!!!" they were still shouting dn dy heard sum footsteps

CHAHAT "Lagta hai mama aa rai hain get ready han"
PREM "Ready!!! Aur shart to mein hi jeeton ga
CHAHAT "Aap ki bhool hai shart to chahat hi jeetay gi"

PREM " waisy bara maza aa raha tha na chilany mein last time chillaen chahat nodded nd gav him a big smile nd here dy go again "Mama!!!" "Heer!!!"

Just then kuldi enters da room she war annoyed nd said angrily

KD "KYA HAI!!!!!!"

"Bua!!" "kuldi!!" dy said at da same time nd dy were shockd becoz dy were expecting heer

KD " Kya hai kuen chilla rahe ho tm dono kaan phat gaye hain mere kya kaam hai" she said angrily

PREM---CHAHAT
"kuldi vo chahat" "bua vo papa"

"chahat ky baal" "papa ki tie"

"meri tie" "mere baal"


KD "HY bhagwaan is liye chilla rahe the tm dono aur prem itna bara ho gaya hai ek tie bandhny nai aati" she said while tying da knot of his tie here chahat was standin on da bed nd giggling secretly nd prem pulld her hair
CHAHAT "AHHH!!!!" "la ab tere baal baandh don" KD said nd take da comb 4m her handz after doing her task she went downstairs 2 help heer

Here chahat nd prem were sitting on da bed wid their sad faces prem's head on chahat's shoulder nd chahat's head on prem's head

PREM "Hum dono shart haar gaye"

CHAHAT "HAAN" "NAAA" (she said after a pause) an idea 2 win da bet popped in he cute lil head nd she gave a naughty smile 2 prem

PREM "Na Kya koi bhi na jeeta its a tie hm dono haar gaye hain" he said raising his head 4m her lil shoulder

CHAHAT "Haary hon gay aap Mr. Prem Juneja , Chahat Juneja kabhi nai harti shart to mein hi jeeton gi" she said proudly

After 5 minutes or so heer came into da room yelling
"Chahat!!! Prem!!! Break fast ready hai jaldi kro nai to aur late ho jao gay"

Chahat smiled wickedly nd opend her hair
CHAHAT " Mama bua ny baal theek say nai bandhy aap bandh do na"
HEER "O mera bacha lao mein bandh deti hoon"
While heer was tying chahat's hair prem was staring at chahat wid his mouth wide open nd here chahat was very happy after tying her hair heer said "yeh lo ab tm dono jaldi say neechay aa jao" nd she went down stairs
Here prem was still in shock
CHAHAT "Chahat aap say ziada intelligent hai mein ney kaha tha na shart mein hi jeeton gi"

PREM "Par..,par....yeh cheating hai"

CHAHAT [I]"yeh cheating nai hai aur agar yeh cheating hai to evrythng is fair in war aur CHAHAT JUNEJA SHART JEET GAI HAI" she said nd ran awy 4m there


Hope u guyz will lyk it plz do comment/critisize nd hit da *LIKE*
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Posted: 15 years ago
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aww soooooo sweet
very well writen
anoushay u should write more
loved it

luv
Fatima
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Posted: 15 years ago
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it was soooooooooooo sweeeeeeeeeeeet
amazing yaar. chahat is very smart akir papa ki hi toh beti hai.
you should write more of it
it was fun reading
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Posted: 15 years ago
#25
very lovely and cute OS...
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Posted: 15 years ago
#26
wonderful again....loved it...😊
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Posted: 15 years ago
#27
wow that is so cuteeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee awesomeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
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Posted: 15 years ago
#28
that was soo cute ...luved it

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Posted: 15 years ago
#29
great idea and great one shot.
Loved it
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: -fsn-

aww soooooo sweet<br>very well writen<br>anoushay u should write more<br>loved it<br><br>luv<br>Fatima<br>



Thanx i'll surely write more thanx a ton

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