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newt2007

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Posted: 15 years ago

#661

bit confusing but sounds wonderful.

continue soon.

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aishwarya gayen

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Posted: 15 years ago

#662

Originally posted by: angel82
ok i get bits and pieces of the story
heer tries to find out if it is her prem but she gets disappointed every time but still feels this connection to him.she tells him he looks like her prem but still he doesnt stay away from her making it more difficult for him..she gets jealous when he spends time with ridhimma
actually he is prem but with a memory loss.
worst of all, after knowing everything that he is prem and not harshad , he wants to go back to ridhimma? he loves ridhimma? that's cruel aishwarya....ghor na -insafi towards heer ....i guess he still hasnt regained his memory or else he can never do such a thing to his heer
plz do continue soon

hey angiee first of all thnaks for ur long and nooottt confusing comment hahaha
and finally i got some1 intelligent as my reader who understood what i tried to make u all understand
yeah the story line will be the same she l try but is disappointed but still u remember the pheras that words and promises will take a major place in the story
yeah jealous heer lolz wil lhave fun hahaha
main hun hi villain so to ghor na insaafi banta hai yaar
just see and read and understand yeah i l be back with an update soon

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aishwarya gayen

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Posted: 15 years ago

#663

Originally posted by: premeeristry
Ahhhhhhaaaa i came to know wads in ur mind aishu 😎
but the change would be a superb one yess he is prem ryt?? 🤔
and hope heer is not gonna die plzz.yeah baby i will b also busy
wid my xams in march 2nd week.but really eager to know wads next.

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saba

hi saba hahah yeah u now know my negative mind
yeha the change isgonna bringmore romanceandi promiseiwont drag
lets see waise heer mar gayi to fayda mera hi hai hihihihi

and yeah do well in ur exams

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aishwarya gayen

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Posted: 15 years ago

#664

Originally posted by: annwesha kayal
nice update !!!
plz cont soon........
thnx 4 ur PM.

yeah i l cont soon m glad u read

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aishwarya gayen

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Posted: 15 years ago

#665

Originally posted by: Heerbeauty
Love this
update soon

Paddo

hey paddo m glad that u liked

Originally posted by: additi10
awesomeeeeeeeeee promo and stroyline

plzz do update soon
he is prem na

thanks for liking and i l updt soon hahah lets see he is prem or not i gave u a hint

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aishwarya gayen

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Posted: 15 years ago

#666

Originally posted by: crystall
😕Great Promo and storyline !
Loved it !
Waiting for next !
Update soon !
Thnx for pm !

thanks m glad u liked i l updt soon

Originally posted by: PremHeer_Chahat
sounds awesome
please continue asap
thanks for the pm
pm me

i l cont soon and m glad u liked

Originally posted by: sonia7
awesome very confusing
thanks for the pm
update soon dear

tthanks for liking i know it was a bit confusing i did it so that the charm of storiy remains i l cont soon

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aishwarya gayen

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Posted: 15 years ago

#667

Originally posted by: -Pooji-
Great update

thanks pooji

Originally posted by: cuteangelgirl95
awesome continue soon thanx 4 the pm

i l cont ssoon ddear

Originally posted by: newt2007
bit confusing but sounds wonderful.

continue soon.

yeah it was confusing i l cont soon

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aishwarya gayen

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Posted: 15 years ago

#668

Authors note : hey guys I know u want good updates long ones but m too messed up in exams m trying but spare me if its not upto expectations
I know m late but u know exams I l be free after 11th march then will start preparing for 10th lets see how much more time I can give to IF

PART – 30

Heer : mujhe pata hai who tum hi the I felt u lekin kyun kyun tum chup rahe why u behaved like u dont know me ? I know its insane I mean I don't know what to do ? mind doesn't let me believe this but my heart knows u

I know what I have to do ? I l find out u r prem juneja or harshad chopra whoever u are ? I know u r prem but I want to know why u r behaving so absurd ? I cant let go of u I l seek the truth

I didn't said anything to preet as I don't want him to think m mentally overstressed but I l find out
I know u prem and I l get the truth
U will be mine I promise

But her inner soul has a question what if he is harshad chopra then what will she be able to accept the truth to be away from him ?????//////////

NEXT MORNING
OFFICE

Secretary : mam mr.chopra is waiting for u in ur cabin from a long time
That's it heer made up her mind last night to confront him and know about him but what now? He is there waiting for her it wont even take a minute to mess up everything , she will probably start sobbing and he will just call her a stupid and leave
And what did she said he is in my cabin what the hell ? if he sees his pic frame on my desk what if he is not prem and …
Why the hell m I thinking this if he is not prem I damn don't care what he does
But why will he not be prem he is prem BE OPTIMISTIC

Heer: why did u let him sit in the cabin ohh and is preet there in the office ?

Secretary : mam he is there even the kids are there too

Then heer remembered she left chah to preet and she must be waiting for her how can she be so irresponsible

Heer wanted to see him so she went towards her cabin but she feared whats going to happen next ?
Life has taken a u –turn and she have to face it , he have to confess he is prem

She with strong determination went towards her cabin but she frozed into the spot outside her cabin at the sight

There he was and with him her small angel what the hell they are doing

IN HEERS CABIN

Chah and subh were searching for heer and they landed on heers cabin

Chah entered the cabin yelling

Chah: mommyy ! mommy !

Prem turned to see who the hell was shouting like an idiot in the office

Prem : who the hell is behaving this way ?

He too shouted and turned back to look two kids standing in the cabin, one with aa look of irritation the boy who has put his small arm around the small girl kid who was standing beside him with bright eyes and a happy face like she has seen what she always wanted in her life
And it clicked to harshad she was the same girl … that angel type looking /noooo the monster type behaving kid who made him run after butterflies

Harshad: uuuuuuuuuuuuu

Chah: hiiii

Harshad: hi ?? uss din u were yelling at me and now hii hmm

Subh : einnn don't shout on my sissy talk properly

Harshad: really and who r u ? and what the hell u two doing here its not a playground

Subh : m the son of preet juneja and she is my best friend and sissy

Chah : subh bhaiya ssshhhh

Subh : kya sssh

Chah: preet uncle gussa karenge if u wont lespectt eleders

Harshad : its not lespect its respect and u made sound elders like elephant eleders

Subh : chah ye ajj pitega

Chah /: bhaiyu u go and sit outside I l wait here okk

Subh : okay but iff he shouts just gimme a call by shouting loudly

Chah ; jao bhaiyu

And then subh was coming outside and heer was standing at the door of the cabin seeing her daughter talking with harshad

Subh : aunty
Heer: ssh
Subh : aap yaha hoo chah is waiting
Heer bent down and holded subh in her arms
Heer: yeah I was going inside but I saw a strong brother trying to protect my daughter so I was watching it okk subh aap bahar khelo I l just send chah okk
Subh : okay
Saying that subh ran outside and heer still waited on the door hearing their conversation

Harshad: so u didn't answered my question what are u doing here ?and whats
Ur name ?

Chah : I am chahat

Harshad: ok

Chah was still staring at him and she then shyly started moving towards his chair and stood just infront of him

Chah : I missed u ,

Harshad : but I don't my god our last meeting was not quite good so that I have to miss u sweetheart ohh no monster will be abetter word for u

Chah went ahead and put one of his small palms on his shoulder like she was requesting him to pick her up in his arms

Harshad : ohh u keep ur dirty mud playing hands off me yesterday u just ruined my new tux u understand that

Chah : u don't love me na

Harshad : no really m not insane why should I love u ? I don't like kids argghh they all are little monsters

That was it , the kid got heart broken she just stared at him for few moments and then she could not stop her crying she knows and even she don't wants her papa to call her a crybaby so she murmured her last words and ran out of the cabin

Chah : papa don't loves chah but chah loves papa
And she ran out

Heer was also having tears listening this
Chah ran out and saw he mommy standing there and that's it she broke into her arms and started crying hugging her
Chah : mommy chah bilul acchi nahi hai na that's why papa hates chah
Heer: no baby u r the best kid plz don't cry plz papa loves u u r his angel kid
Chah : no he said he don't mommy I never asked about him because ut hurts uu butt chah loves papa and misses him
Heer: I know sweetheart mommy too misses him , u r a good kid m the bad one who cant make u meet ur dad

Heer broke the hug and curdled her daughter into her arms and just rubbed her tears
Heer: ssh my kid is not a crybaby is she ?? see mommy is also crying seeing u and now if bhaiyu will see u he will also cry so ssh quiet
Chah was sobbing now
Heer: plz dear u go with subh bhaiya and evening I promise u and me will go to video game parlour plz

Chah nodded and left
Heer know that her daughter is hurt and she is not that kinda kid who forgets easily

Even heer was heart broken how can he call her daughter a monster , this is not prem , prem loved his kid even when he hasn't seen it , she was an angel for him

ON THE OTHER HAND HARSHAD WASN'T FEELING GOOD HE DIDN'T WANT THE KID TO CRY AND HE SAW THE TEARS GLISTENING IN HER EYES
But her last words were the most surprising and it wasn't the first time he listened those words PAPA yes the child called her papa didn't she or it was his mistake he understood wrong
jab se aaya hun tabse sab kuch gadbad hi hai
Why the hell I am having an encounter with that girl and all of my girl experience are so silly first that heer mann I can say for sure that day she acted like I am a ghost , and now this baby kid , she is sweet but I don't like kids and it was her fault why the hell she indulged herself with me that's the reason she have to cry , and now its making me feel bad that because of me she cried but PAPA ohh god I l get mad, these kids and their mood swingss

Just then heer entered the cabin
Harshad could witness he difference form other girls
She was wearing a pale saree whereas girls now mostly wear western outfits aand fast colors
No makeup and no heavy jewelleries just a chain and tow small earrings
She is pale looking and eyes are redd mostly
He got a full view of heer

An innocent llook in face but somethings wrong

On the other hand heer was angry , who the hell he thinks himself he made my small kid cry

Heer : u must have waited in the lobby

Harshad: lobby was quite hot soo I m sitting here and I needed to talk so …

Heer: yeah

Heer didn't met his eyes and wait straight onto her chair taking the picture frame and putting it to drawyer
Harshad looked her acting weird but remained silent , he could see her trembling and trying to act normal

Harshad: so heer
Heer: sorry its ms.mann
Harshad : but I prefer heer so heer yesterday our meeting was strange I mean it looked like u r so shocked to see me do I looj that bad ?
Heer: plz mr.chopra we r here for proffesionalism and I prefer work at office no silly questions

Harshad: well I came for other thing my PA is already handling the tenders and projects no need to worry of that i was specially sent by riddhima to invite u , we have a small get together of friends a welcome party and se wants u there tomorrow ahh she is too busy so she cant come probably but I am here inviting u

Heer: I don't know I am busy might be I cant come

Harshad : well I am not asking I am ordering I don't prefer noo u just be there and we will sign our deal what say ?

Heer: keep ur professional and personal life different

Harshad: that's what u thnk ,I don't

Heer: I l think of coming

Harshad: u should

Harshad just got uo from the chair and started t leave but his last words set everything on fire

Harshad: ms.mann well I need to say this u say u r very proffesional but u arent, kids roam in ur office , u don tlike talking to ur business partners , u kinda keep to urself and last ,u wear traditional clothes which mostly a business woman does not . this pale colour sarees cant set a very good image they just can gain pity and u think u don't need pity but ur acts shows it , it seems like u lack everything in life I know being ur business partner I don't need to say all this but still u need a piece of mind

This was beyond heers heers patience how could he be so harsh , she thought that she will know he is prem or not but he cnat be prem never he made chah cry and now all this crap

Heer: mrs . chopra told me that I l be glad to work with u but I am not its just because I know mr. Chopra from so long m keeping up with u but it doesn't means u l say whatever u like what u said kids roam in the office well its not ur office I l do whatever u like I saw that u made chhah cry that kid didn't had any fault okk she was in my cabin and she can do here whatever she likes , second u think people pity me why should they pity me huh u don't know a thing and u don't have a right to say anything about what I do or wear u r nothing to me so I damn don't care

Harshad: this is what I am saying u don't know how rude u are ? and this is what I am saying se urself u don't want to accpet the truth that u don't like to face the truth yeah relly I don't know anything about u and I don't even want to I can see ur image in our second meet and its just for mummas sake m keeping up I also don't have a keen ineterst to be with u I just came her for riddhimas sake

Heer: I already heard more than enough I want u to leave

Harshad: well u need ot change I give u a chance we should meet at the party and sign the deal think about it I don't want riddhima to get hurt

Saying this he left

As he faced his back to her the tears which she was trying to control welled up from her eyes she was hurt badly hurt he wants riddhimas happiness and what about her ? why god is torturing her like this her life was on but this turn has given everything on stake

That's all
Love
Aishwarya gayen

Ohh god I took the story forward this time next time I l welled up and will give u a shock for sure
This time spare me as m too busy in exams but still I got this one for u