ff:a false commitment{I}part 1-34 - Page 13

Originally posted by: luv_kdmhmd

Hi aishwarya hey sia

U left me speechless.t It was soooooooooooo good. I loved every moment of it. And this time you didn't finish early and thank you for that. Now I can understand the situation a bit.thanks ya i thought of giving u a treat and was waiting eagerly for ur comment so i ddidnt finished earlier,,, ya dheere dheere u l know abt the situation and i promise next part will be a delicious treat and shock for u and all....



The way heer expressed her love to prem, I loved it. It totally stunned prem. And second kiss that was a treat for us. So heer is alone at farm house, huh? I guess that would give prem enough privacy to sort his problems with her.ya i thought of many ideas how heer will expalin her love but finally my mind went blank and i thought of this actually m too bad at writing romantic scenes..... ya stunned prem is hot to watch so i made him stunned ..... ya heer is alone and that makes the scenes seductive rght....



So arjun knows full truth, I hope he helps in bringing these two lovers together.ya arjun hi hamari aakhri umeed hai



So rishab tricked prem too. Oh he is so cheap. Prem did know about those goons and it was all planned. I just want to say one thing about it, I didn't like it prem.ya this rishab i really hate him so i l make his character worst he is a cheapstake...... yes all was planned abt goons.ya i also dont want to make him know abt the goons but it goes with the story so i had to do that dear



I feel rishab told heer everything before prem and she left from there without even giving him a chance to explain.oh u l come to know abt that at next part

but i l help u

heer wont leave like this there will be exciting scenes and the story will be different then two secrets

one abt prem

another abt rishabs revenge will be out



I loved that scene when prem realizes that he loves her.well i too love that but i thnk kaash woh ye bhi realize karta ki how much we love him chhodo meri kismat additi jaisi nahi hahhahahaa



Preet is really a good friend of heer. He cares for her. Good that he doesn't want her to be hurt. Let him with prem show rishab his true place.ya preet s character will be growing jst wait and watch

actually my aim is to take my story only with prem and heer all others r side charatcer so m not taking their lived ahead



Thanx for pm. Sorry for late replying as I was not well from last few days.oh what happened to u ????

ru fine now????

take care of ur health dear nahi to mere liye itne bade comments kaun likhega

and no sorry atleast u replied thats enough for me .....















Love

Sia

Originally posted by: Shruti11

oh my god aishwarya i just read whole ur ff right now and i just loved it very intresting concept dear

hey shruti m so glad that u read and liked dear

thanks for liking the concept

well i got this experience of handling past and presence by u only

i remember how u maintained khwaish

i hope i l do good job and impress u all

thanks for hte comment

note:

hey frnds sorry for being late to update

actually navratri has started and as m bengali my family use to worship idol of durga ma in home so m busy in preparations

i l try to update today and if i fail then the update will be after 2 nd october

i hope u l spare me

hey frnds sorry for being late i m really trying to concenttate hard here in my ff but i really cant as nowi n kolkata lots of fun is going on everyone is busy in watching pandals and on ................................

but this update is only given for my frnd sia as she is leaving for a trip and cant read and comment on my update and her comments are really precious for me

sia this part is fully dedicated to u i hope u like it

and ya even i hope u all will like

its not a long one so plz spare me to the horror

and ya do click on like buttons plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz

ok enough of bla bla i have done now time for the update here u all go

part -----8

after the night

next morning

heer is still sobbing on the bed

and then she hears a knock on her door

heer: ya jst a min coming

she wiped her tears and came downstairs to open then door

heer: oh arohi

com ein

arohi: itni der kya kar rahi thi

heer: woh kuch nahi

arohi: heer tu roo rahi thi rght

heer: kyun meri life mein rone ki kya wajah hai

arohi: jhooth mat bol ur eyes reflects everythng

heer: plz yaar dont start now so yaha itni subha subah

arohi: look at the clock darling its 12:00 pm

heer: oops main itni der tak actually time ka pata hi nahi chala

arohi: ha ok now come on get ready and be fast

heer: for what???

arohi: arre we r going for shopping

heer: mujh mann nahi hai u go

arohi: plz no dramas ok so get ready and be fats dramaqueen

heer: ok tujhse koi nahi jeet sakta

arohi: and ya plz wear somethng indian

heer: kyun m fine with western maine apni aadatein badal li hai

arohi:plz yaar mujhe meri purani dost hi pasand thi so plz

heer: ok ok

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arjun: hey preet yaar tune mera plan bigad diya plz yaar chalna

preet: nopw aaj main aur kashish apni purnai yaadein yaad karenge so no going with u

arjun: plz main akela kaise jaunga

pret : woh teri problem hai

arjun": shit ! ye tune thik nahi kiya kashihsh dost dost na raha hmhmhmhm

preet : chal nautanki ab plz hum couple ko akela chhod do

arjun : haha waise bhi mujhe adult scenes nahi dkehne

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abmain kya karu (ARJUN THOUGHT)

arjun: idea prem ko phone karta hun

hello! prem

prem: ha arjun bol

arjun: plz yaar tu mujhse shoppers stop ke bahar aake mil na mujhe kuch shopping karni hai

prem: par

arjun : tu aa raha hai bas

and he cuts off

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heer: arohi hum aa kaha rahe hai

arohi: shoppers stop

heer: ok aur wheres arjun

arohi: he said he l also go dfor shopping with preet

heer: kaunse mall mein

arohhiL: woh main poochna bhool gayi

heer: u r rediculous we would have done shopping together

arohi: no plz mujhe uske saath koi shopping nahi karni saare dull colours choose kart ahai woh

heer : okokoko

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in the mall

arjun: prem u r coming to the disc na today

prem : nahi main nahi aa raha

arjun: why dude:

prem: bcz she l b there and i dont want to hurt her

arjun : tu usse sach kyun nahi bata deta

prem: woh vishwas nah karegi

arjun: com eon dude mere liye aana plz aur waise bhi its a public disc waha aur bhi log honge main e book nahi kiya kyunki i want to remeber our college days jab hum public discs visit karte tha ur enjoy karte the

prem: plz yaar dont insist

arjun: tujhe meri kasaam tujhe aana hi parega

prem: arjun

arjun : ab no ifs and buts

prem: ok see m going to the watch section jab tumhara ho jaaye to waha milna

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arohi : heer tu perfume section se zara cinderella ka ek pack le aayegi

heer: kaha hai perfume section

arohi: 3 rd floor watch section ke bagal mein left lena

heer: ok

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prem and heer walking towards eeach other and then prem got a call he was facing his back from hi s backside heeer was arriving

and kis desh title track was playin

o rabba ! ish q walla kar de talla.............

prem was talking on hi sphone and heer jst moved from his back and her hand touvhed the arms of prem accidently

and she felt somethng different

and then her dupaata flew on face of prem

and prem jst took it from his face and turned to see but till then heer was gone gone gone.....................

prem: aia kyun laga ki heer yahi kahi hai

heer: aaj kuch alag ehsaas hai yaha pata nahi kyun

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they did their shopping and returned home

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on the night of party at disco

at disco

heer was wearing something like this

heer and arohi with pret and arjun and kahsish were chatting and someone interrupted

rishabh : hey hheer tum aur india mein

preet: its none of ur business and why r u here???

rishabh : its a public disco i hope and anyone can be here

oh heer ! m really sorry for u bechari last time jo hua but still u have guts u r here

heer: she gets up stands face to face of rishabh and thennnnnnnnnn

slappppppppppppppp !

rishabh: heer

heer: this is ur answer

last time to tumne revenge liya tha ab iss baar ke revenge ke liye i l wait

and with that rishabh stomped away

pret: heer relax

heer: iss jaisa battameez insaan maine aaj tak nahi ddekha

mujhe ab bhi koi pachtawa nahi ki maine isse aaj doosri baar thapad maara he deserved that

pehli baar isne usse use kiya apne revenge ke liye lekin is sbaar nahi main ab woh kamzor heer nahi jo pyaar mein kamzor ho gayi thi

arjjun: heer

heer: excuse me

and saying that she went to the bar

preet: heer listen dont drink plz

heer: pret tum

and when she was going to say

she noticed someone witht he same brown eyes , silky hair , wearing trousers with polyneck and half blazer com ein

and her eys widened

he was the same fellow who betrayed her

and she took the whole glass of wine

prem: i watched her sitting in the bar with a glass

and she was drinking

no this cant happen she cant drink my heer never used to drink or wear that kinda clothes

means whatever the media said abt her was true

i should be cursed as what i did to a simple girl i changed her and bcz of me she is harming herself..........

ok thats it frnds

next update will be later next week

sorry for leaving on the interesting part........

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and waiting for ur comments

regards : aishwarya gayen