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Posted: 16 years ago
#11

Originally posted by: Premeerxoxo

thanks alot and can you tell me how u pm???



just click on the PM button in the blue!!!! and pm us ur link!!!!!!!!! 😊
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Posted: 16 years ago
#12
wow awesome start to the update
loving it already
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Posted: 16 years ago
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awesome ff jst read it pm me when you update om thanks
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Posted: 16 years ago
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hey

part one was great!!! really good the way you described everything and do continue soon

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Posted: 16 years ago
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Hey
Sorry for late reply
the update was awesum
loved the precap
can't wait for next update
do pm me when u update
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Here is Chapter 2 Hope you Anjoy 😛

Recap- The class began and as usual guys looking at Heer while she was picked to go up to the class and draw a diagram. Heer was used to having every guy look at her but she never gave a dam because she wanted someone special and not a player.

The class was boring as usual. Heer and Veera passed notes like always and made fun of Mr. Rahul. Finally the class ended. Heer and Veera rushed out before anyone else trying to escape Mr. Rahul. Both of them went to their lockers to get their stuff for next class when Sapna came running towards them.

Heer ' "sapna aj kya teray ander koi athma gus gai hai jab dekho bagg baagg baagg' what is up with you man seriously chill." Sapna caught her breath.

Sapna ' " you guys wont believe it Shahid Kapoor is in our rose garden." Veera and Heer screamed and slammed everything into their lockers and ran to the "rose garden."

Rose Garden
When they got their they looked around and no one was their except for people staring and Veera. She felt wierd so she looked at Heer and surprised to see her smiling along with Sanjna.

Veera ' "Oh! Hello why are you to smiling I don't see Shahid KApoor anywhere" Heer just giggled and folded her arms around her chest turning towards Veera. Suddenly Nihaal came and went down on his knees in front of Veera. Raj also came and put his arm around Heers shoulder. Veera's mouth fell open with shock she couldn't believe what was gonna happen right now. Heer put a finger under her chin and closed her mouth.

Heer ' "close you mouth bhabi you'll catch flies." She said giggling. Veera blushed.

Nihaal ' "Veera ' umm ' well I was kinda wondering if you wana ' you know' I mean' Chill I am joking I am way more romantic then this' Veera iloveyou a lot and I promise to keep you happy and always complete your wishes ' will you Marry me." Veera was red as a tomato. Everyone else was whispering "YES YES" Veera just nodded and put her hand in Nihaal's hand. Everyone clapped and cheered around them. Nihaal got up and hugged Veera. Heer, Raj and Sapna hugged Veera followed by a lot of other students. Suddenly the bell rang and everyone headed inside. Veera asked Nihaal to come and visit her family with Heer and she would talk to them about their relationship. After school ended Heer said bye to Veera and told her she'll see her at her house since there was no school tomorrow.

Maan's Mansion

Nihaal and Raj eating dinner in the dinning room. They both loved to eat Heers hand made food. Heer came in and put her arms around Raj.

Dining Room
Heer ' "Bhahia kya hum dono subha shopping karney ja saktay hain mujhe apni collage ki party kay liya kuch kareed kay lana hai ' please" Raj smiled and turned a bit and kissed her cheek.

Raj ' "Heer I am so sorry but I have a meeting tomorrow in Deli and if you don't mind I wana buy your dress for the party my self." Heer came and sat beside him in the chair looking really happy.

Heer ' "Good! Now I wont have to do any shopping' thankyou meri jaan." She kisses him and goes to the living room. Raj smiled watching his little sister. He loved her with all of her heart and was the one person he would do anything for.

Nihaal ' "Raj humain Heer kay rishtey kay baray mein sochna chahiya' uske age ki hare k lardi ki shaadi ki baaath ho gayi hai or mein nahi chata kay Heer choses the wrong path." Nihaal dropped his fork and looked up at Nihaal.

Raj' "Nihaal yeh tum kya kah rahay ho' Heer meri choti se behin hai or uska rishta mein kud karon ghaa ' tu yeh nonsense mat kar Heer abhi bohat choti hai"

Nihaal ' "Raj kab tak woh tumhari choti se behin rahay ghee kabhi to uski shaadi karni hai kya sari ummer who hamray sar per jiya ghee" Raj got up in anger.

Raj ' "Haan jiye ghee ' meray sar par jiye ghee agar woh tum per uska boog hai to tum uski fikar mat karo mein usko sambaal loon ghe tumhari zindagi mein to Veera or sirf VEERA par meri zindagi mer sirf or sirf HEER hai got it." Raj storms out of the room in anger. Heer on the other hand hears all this and has tears rolling down her cheek. She follows Raj bhai. He goes to his room and lays on his bed in anger.

Heer ' "Raj bhai app Nihaal Bhai ki batoon ka bura mat mana who to bus asay hi hain app chinta mat karo." Raj gets up and hugs Heer.

Raj ' "Heer agar tumhari shaddi ho gayai to tum mujhe chor kar chali jayo ghee to mein bohat akela ho jayon ghaa ' or shayad Nihaal sahi kahta hai mujhe tumhari shaadi kay baray mein sochna chahiye." Heer's hearts break but manages to comfort her brother and get him to sleep. Heer leaves and goes to her room with tears rolling down her cheek. She stands in the balconey

Heer's Bedroom
Heer ' "bagwan ji ap ney sab ko unka payar diya hai ap mera ranjha kab layin gain."

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Preet ' " PPPPBBBBBB." A guy truned around, with an million dollar smile, great body and hair that anybody would do anything to touch or feel. It was the Hunk Prem JUNEJA.

Prems Outfit
He was holding his coat in his hands and a on the other hand dragging his suite case along with him. Prem stood in front of Preet annoyed.

Prem ' "What is your problem yaar? ' I am standing like inches away from you ' what the hell man you are planning on making me deaf."

Preet ' "Sorry I was just saying will be in India in 12 hours ' our flight is boarding so lets goo ' ma bauji are waiting for us." Preet pulled Prem with him as girls checked out both of them. Both of them boarded the plane. Preet got a window seat and Prem seat was right beside him. Both of them talked and enjoyed their flight.

After 12 Hours

All of them landed in India. Prem who couldn't wait to his little sister was eager to get home and play with her. All of them booked a taxi and drove toward their mansion, because they told Veera to stay home and they'll come by their selves. Their taxi was out of fuel so the driver had to go and get gas while Prem thought of going to a flower shop to get some flowers for Veera.

Flower Shop

Prem entered the flower shop and saw a group of people standing in a crowd. He moved towards the crowd and saw a girl standing beside an old man with her back toward him. Prem noticed a couple of guys standing in front of her and the old man.

Heer "Oh! Apney ap ko koi hero mat samjo '. Sharam nahi ati !! What do you think you are playing around with a man that age of your granddad's age' now before I blow my tops at you guys apologize to him and take his blessing." She said out loud.

Guy ' "Oh! Beautiful ' we will apologize and don't go thinking your all that and watch what your saying before i BLEW MY TOP OFF and I do mean my top" he aid pointing at his shirt. The girl finally got him to apologize and take the old man's blessing. Everyone blessed her and gave her a lot of beautiful prayers. Prem still didn't get to see her face. Heer took the old man's blessing and left form there looking for some flowers. Prem also looked around for flowers when he spotted some roses. Prem went and picked them up when suddenly some one else grabbed them.

Precap

Heer-"Woh! .... Sorry mujhe nahi pata tha kay app Veera kay bhai hain...isliye woh sab bol diya ...Sorry." Prem smiled.
Prem-"Thats okay.... but I have to say your a nice actor." Heer looked at him confused.
Heer-"Haan??"
Prem-"Oh come on Ms.Flower... i mean when you met me at the shop you were so mean and now in front of my family your all "ap sey mil kar bohat kushi hoi aunty...oooo aaaa i am soo nice" Prem said making a girly voice. Heer glared at him in anger.
Heer-"Mr.Kismat....first of all i dont sound like that and second i am always nice and i was mean to you because..i...ii..dont like you ... got it Mr.Kismat."
Heer said in anger and snatching the flowers away from him.
Prem-"Oh thats good to hear becuase i thought i had to be nice to you because you were my sisters friend but i am glad we feel the same way." Prem grabbed the flowers and left giving her a wink.😉
That's it for 2. hope you enjoy it please do comment and tell me how you like it and if I should continue. Thankyou and please enjoy.

Love-Ayysha❤️

Edited by Premeerxoxo - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Wow really good part!!! Hope prem and heer meet soon!! Nihaals proposal was sooo cute!!!Can u plz add me to ur pm list??
Edited by Premeer_chahat - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
#18
wow. awaasome part.. like prem nd preets entry.. 👏👍🏼
thnxs for the pm
plzz pm me again wen u update
update soon😛
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Posted: 16 years ago
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nice part!! loved the proposal !!!
continue sooN!
thanx for the PM!
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Posted: 16 years ago
#20
both parts were great
luv how veera is actually nice cuza u rarely see that
update soon
Kamal😃

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