Socha na tha(meet)-Part18 pg 49 15/5/14 - Page 33

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Posted: 11 years ago
Waiting for the update you promised Rhea...it my turn to sit back and read something good for a change...and please make it long 😳...in fact...you make us wait so long...I demand at least 3 updates before I update again 😈
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Posted: 11 years ago
Update this ff and others soon : D
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: hangok

absolutly fantastic,
loved it how she easily talked to him as nothing happend before,

i like this

great work👏👏

thanks for pm


Thanks yaar...it feels gud to know u liked it!!😳

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: nikitagmc

Hey! Loved the two parts you wrote. Story seems to have picked up now. Very curious to know the reason behind Preet's behavior and what would make Meher fall for him.

Thanks for the wonderful parts! :) And thanks Fatima for the PM.


Yea thnks fr lemme noe dat d story is slow😆...well keep guessing abt wats gonna happen next...will update soon..
Thanks for liking it!😊
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Nidhirjgpt

Hey really nice one.
Specialy painting 1.
Waited 4 next update.
Thanks 4 d pm.


Umm i dint really understand wich part are u exactly referring to...but thanks anyways😃
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: AASUS

I got 2 pms from Rhea & Fatima. Ty 4 caring to share new chs.

Hey Rhea

Wow wow what an uodate😎
It's nice to see comfort level betw Meher Preet , it's mostly discussion than the usual taunt.
A progress at least on Meher's part for the relationship.
I guess they need to go on a date or may be few dates to clear the air betw them. But Meher doesn't think much of Preet except for his talent. Now that they talk a bit she is beginning it find out more about Preet.
You sprung a surprise there Prem, a thief nowredeemed himself. Sounds interesting.
Until today I didn't realize he was in this story.
Dialogues are amazing. I can't even belv ppl talk like this.😆 Kiss a cobra 😲 Omg. I guess it shows how annoyed Meher is to use such strong words.
I kind of understand Meher: why she is reluctant, afraid, her fears.
Preet I still hv now clue. He irritates me, when he irritates Meher. I'm always wondering, why can't he have a friendly approach, instead of threatening Meher, this is not cool.

Thanks Rhea. The painting scenes I hv. no clue or idea about. I'm actually learning stuff from your story. It's nice to know something new.

Tc and hope to see u soon.. 🤗




Noe those were quite some observations...i love the way you put in these details in your comments...it makes me feel elated about my work...ul be an amazing critic u noe...ur comments are a pleasure to read...thanks a ton for the lovely words!!😳
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: fansush

omg omg...fantastic...!!

now its gonna make me wait for more...
superb writing...keep it up...
as it is i m missing sushant sooo much...so am keeping away frm the forum a bit...makes me miss him more...

FATIMAA...🤗 🤗 thnks a ton for the pm sweetheart...would hv missed such a gud story... !!!

n rhea...👍🏼...waiting for the nxt update now...thnks...



Aww yea i miss him to...i feel happy for his success but at times i wish he was still workimg on tv...

Anyways thank you for reading and for the kind words of appreciation😃
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: haajuuu

trying to catch up :) with ur story just read this last update aand its lovelyy❤️ 👏 socha na tha k preet would be having such skills... quite different🤗
meher is really ummm reluctant, fearful and pta ni kya kya :p😕 and saying that kiss a cobra ...
and awww Prem went through so many personality changes... 👍🏼
update soon

Stay Blessed


Hahaha...thank u..those were some interesting comments about the characters...
Thanks for enjoying it and keep reading!!
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: ummesulaiman

Waiting for the update you promised Rhea...it my turn to sit back and read something good for a change...and please make it long 😳...in fact...you make us wait so long...I demand at least 3 updates before I update again 😈


Oh man fatima am scared of you...
Seriously i know il be killed if i dont continue soon...and yea il try and make it looong...but 3 parts...😲...bachi ki jaan logi kya??
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Posted: 11 years ago

Part-18

"Nearly finished"

Meher signed the last letter and added to the pile on her desk and turned to smile at Sameer , who stood by the window.

"There that's done. Now we can go for the lunch. Oh damn", she exclaimed as the phone buzzed.

It was her secretary, Jay.

"There is Mr.Juneja here to see you", he informed her...

Preet. Just what was he doing here. Meher prayed that the spasm of nervous tension that twisted in her stomach did not show up on her face as she returned an apologetic glance to Sameer.

"It must be something related to the painting"

"Not at all", the response came from the doorway. Preet obviously not having bothered to wait to be invited in."I just wanted to see where you worked"

"I don't recall asking Jay to send you in"

"No", Preet agreed."But I know you'd wanna see me.that you wouldn't want ME to wait. Morning Mr.Khandelwal", he added, his casual and belated acknowledgement of Sameer's presence a calculated insult...

"Well I can't talk to you now".Unease at I knew you'd wanna see me' stiffened Meher's tone so that it sounded hard and brittle. What if Sameer took it to mean there was something more to Meher and Preet apart from their meetings for the painting.

"As a matter of fact we were just on our way out for lunch"

"Oh well the I'll"

"I can spare a few minutes Meher", Sameer put in a rather too hastily, obviously realizing , as Meher had that Preet was about to declare his intention of joining them in the restaurant.

"I thought you would ", Preet murmured , the dark irony lacing his tone revealing too clearly that he knew what they were thinking.

"Then why don't you sit Mr. Juneja"

Dressed in a superbly tailored black suit , Preet was fair too impressive a figure for comfort. Perhaps sitting down at her level he wouldn't have so much impact on her already frayed nerves.

"I thought we had agreed it would be Preet", a challenging glance was directed at Meher.

She had been completely wrong in her belief that he would appear somehow less imposing once he was sitiing down. Even without his height, the strength and power of his lean body and his dark brown eyes , hit her.

"Well, now that you have seen our office what do you think", Sameer's voice interrupted her thoughts.

"I'm impressed", Preet surprised Meher by saying..."It's a larger enterprise than I had imagined and the shops are well designed too and the containers are very elegant. Each with a different design and style"

"Well that's my philosophy. I believe that once something is used by someone, it loses its charm and is not fit to be used by anyone else. We have the initials of the person engraved on the bottle as well. So that they cannot pass it on. So either one has to use or throw it. "

"That is quite a philosophy I must say. It tells a lot about the kind of person you are Mr. Khandelwal", he said deliberately throwing a glance towards Meher.

"I am sure it does. But what are we in front of you Mr .Juneja...You must be owning a fortune. This painting talent surely must be fetching you quite a sum."

"Yea it does...But Painting is my passion and I do not paint for money"

At that moment there was another buzz from the telephone and Jay announced that there was a call for Sameer.

"I'll take that from Jay's office", he said hastily heading out of the room...

"Impressive company you keep these days Meher Mann", Preet murmured and Meher hastily gulped her annoyance at the way Sameer abandoned her .

"Sameer is a very kind man", she said stiffly, feeling uncomfortable at being with him alone.

"Kind .Is that all you have to say...I thought you wanted to marry the man and tell me Meher are you kind to him as too"

The sardonic intonation of the word kind made Meher flare up ...

"That is none of your business"

"It is if I chose to make it so", the warning note in his voice sent a shiver down her spine..."Though I have to admit that I did not know what you see in him. Tell me Meher, what is it the attraction in a cold fish of a human cash- register whose vision is completely blurred except when it comes to money"

"I couldn't expect you to understand it", Meher's declaration had more force than perhaps was necessary-"But believe me he's got a lot more appeal than-", her voice failed as she saw his face change, the flames of anger that flared his eyes.

"Than someone like me someone-who's not a gentleman"

Meher flinched inside at the bite of acid in Preet's voice, but then suddenly, unexpectedly, his tone altered, softening.

"Tell me Meher Mann. This blindness to reality- this refusal to see the truth, accept the world as it really is outside this cushioned existence that your partner suffers from- does it apply to his relationship with you"

"I don't know what do you mean!"

"Oh, but you do...why else are you so determined to play a part- pretend to be someone you're not. Can't poor Sameer take the fact that you've lived-that you had a life before you met him...What does he want from you- A wife or a pretty picture to hang on his wall"

"You have no right to talk like this!!"

Meher wanted to give Preet her a piece of her mind but the fact that Sameer was just a room away made her control herself.

"And now if you'll excuse me Sameer and I have a lunch appointment. Goodbye Mr. Juneja", saying so she left.

She thought that she'll forget about what he said but she was wrong , as what he said and the questioning look he gave her both came back to haunt her, when at the restaurant , she told Sameer that she received an invitation to Vikram and Shreya's wedding.(ref: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/kis-desh-mein-hai-meraa-dil/1234693/socha-na-tha-meet-part18-pg-49-15-5-14?pn=34)

"I'll accept for both of us, shall I"

"Not on your life!. I am not going to that fiasco"

"But he's your friend"

"Was my friend", Sameer corrected coldly. "If he's a fool enough to marry that girl then he's not not the man I thought he was"

One word he had used about Vikram caught her attention and hung onto her thoughts. 'Fool' he had said. 'Fool enough to marry her'. She realized that all that mattered to Sameer was his dignity , his pride , his so called ego in front of his friends. And he would never forgive someone who would in any way malign it...

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