|| Zara Zara || Surprise One Shot! - Page 2

Originally posted by: noneeM

My Spot! 😳 Yes it is yours! 😃

Wow Meera! What a beautiful shot. It's so beautifully written that I immediately slipped into a day dream... 😍 Sigh! Do guys like this exist 😍 Sigh! Awwww thanks N! 😳 With chuck? 😉 And I hope they do! 😳

Your descriptions of Prem and Shifali, your attention to detail, the intensity of emotion between P and S and just the way the whole shot progressed, everything was flawless...The magical moments they spent in the rain, then in the blanket 😳 Wow, really beautifully penned down Meera.... Awww thanks! 😳😃 I'm really glad you liked it! 😛

And I loved this line: "Almost all; the rain happened naturally." Awesome!!!!!! Thanks! 😃

Love:-Nonee

Originally posted by: Dark Love

mine :) Yup! 😛

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wooooo. so i have SOO many reserved spots 😳 No probs! 😃

i decided to comment on this first, it'll take awhile to reread the 100th and comment 😆 Awww no probs! 😃

so i've already told you how cute i thought this was...it was pretty hottttttt! that song is justt ☺️ Yes....thanks! 😳

it was all incredibly cute, and to be honest, it's the mostttttttt fluffiest and romantic one from you in awhile! Yeah....you're right, I haven't been feeling all fluffy lately...

have i ever told you how i have a thing for forehead leaning? God, it just sounds sooo. bleh i can't describe it. 😍 I know EXACTLY what you mean! 😳 I love it too! 😛

the roses was sooooooooooo cuuuuuuuuuute! even though i'd begun to accept it when i read about that one tall rose 😉😆 I'm glad you liked it! 😛😳

the rain scene was cuuute! ☺️ *giggles* Thanks! 😃

i love prem :) Who doesn't? 😛

- Madiha

Originally posted by: Anhdara13

my spot. And remind me to edit it. I didn't have to! 😛

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I think this was utterly beautiful, the emotions, the essence of their relationship was sweet and very romantic. It was exactly how I imagined someone would be for Shifs. 😆 If she doesn't scare them away first. *ducks* Awww thanks! 😃😳 Na...she won't scare anyone away! 😃

You know I loved it. Yes I do! 😃

Love,
Radz

Originally posted by: SaNyA_21

my spot :)

PLEASE remind me to edit this tonight (if i forgettt) by dropping me a message on MSN. 😳

editt.

Okay, first of all, I absolutly LOVEEEE this song :D It went SO well with this shot, like seriously. The shot! OMG, it was just SO amazing. The rain, the roses, the ring, the romance! *sigh* oh-so-cute. And I LOVED Prem, obvi :) You wrote this so well! Shifali's very lucky :D As always, beautifulll. Looking forward to moree :)

-sanya.

Originally posted by: ash08

Meera 🤗Hey Ash! 😃

Beautiful!! What a proposal? 😍 Awww thanks! 😳

I loved how Prem knew what Shifali was expecting and how he played with her. And the way he proposed to her. Awww...... I love it when guys know what their girls want and make sure they get that done. Yup...Prem HAS to be perfect! 😛

I love your attention to detail. You cover everything so nicely that you never let the readers wonder what happened. Awww thank you so much! 😳

Love,
Ash