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Jazmin

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Posted: 16 years ago

#61

Originally posted by: indiandoll89
that is long! 😳 Mine! 😃 kyun...you dont want long updates......i thought longer was better 😉😉

*edited*

Fine! He's not the kidnapper, but at least he's here to help! 😃😳 And now thank god!! Prem's back! 😳 *sighs* thanks you for accepting reality...lol...😆...

This story is reminding me way too much of Kidnap and it scares me! 😔 The minute she got the parcel I was about to freak out, remembering the stuff in the movie, but thank god you changed it! 😃😳 you know...i saw the movie but i cant for the life of me remember what happened...all i remember is that it didnt have a romanticly mushy ending...😳😳😳..what did that parcel have?

I just hope the whole thing gets figured out soon! 😳 all will be cleared out...sooner or later...😉

Love you, love u too gudiya!! 🤗

Meera😳

Originally posted by: 9rpatel
omg hun awesome part
continue soon!!!!!!!!!!

thanks...next part up soon 😃

Originally posted by: resham12345
That was really really gud
Heer and Prem together.........awwww
Thanks for the pm and update soon

thanks...im glad that you enjoyed it...watch for my next pm 😊

Originally posted by: Innocent02
Ooo....Thanks alot for a super long update !!!!!!!😃
aww.....Preet is there !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
great.....liked the way how he was being caring towards Heer👍🏼
for once I got irritated because Heer was again n again saying "ausko bachao"😆
hmm....but why does the kidnapper want Prem😛
kitni demand hai Prem ki🤣everyone wants him only 😆
woW....the ending was awesome.
Premeer HUG 😍
the whole scene along with the dialogues was superb👏
Prem knows about his Chahat....eager to know his reaction and how the story moves on.
best of luck for ur midterm...... TEST??
update soon😉

and Thanks a lot for the PM😊

glad you liked the update...and ya...Heer was getting on my nerves just writting it...but then again...she was the hysterically upset mother...some times the just need a slap...and we know...no one...not the Jhuneja boys anyway...were about to do that 😉😉😉...i know right...just like us...the rest of the world wants PJ too 😳 but can you blame them...😛😛...thanks...exams went really well! 😃😃...next part up soon

JAZ

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Jazmin

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Posted: 16 years ago

#62

Originally posted by: crosby
WOW!!!!!!!!!1 that was sooo gud
cant wait till the next part

thanks...next part up soon 😃

Originally posted by: shabo24
*mutters to herself* Fine, maybe Preet has an accomplice? *looking hopeful* oh god......what do i have to do to make you realize its not preet and he has no accomplice? 😕😕...manja yaar...manja...lol...

But this was an intense part, so much happened, and Preet is so sweet in this part! That parcel part was SICK! Oh my gosh, sick. I can't think straight right now, and than on top of that, Prem coming back - gosh, loved how he found out! I really hope he doesn't ask too many questions and just listens! :) see...would Preet have the heart to send such a parcel to Heer...even if he did have an accomplice...he'd never want Heer to suffer like that...kyun...sahi bola naa maine? 😉...aage aage dekho...hota hai kya 😃

Good luck on midterms! thanks luv...they went well...😃

--shabz

Originally posted by: cute_bear
oh..jaz...that was soo good....i cant wait to see what happenes next...and i hope chahats ok...i hope she comes back soon to heer and prem...and i hope that prem and heer come back together...oh....is the kidnapper ash...btw that thought just came to me..becooz if its ash then when they catch her then she can tell both prem and heer the truth about what happened...

glad that you liked it...so many hopes you have...ill see what i can do in making them true...but...no promises...😉😉😉...vaise...nice guess with Ash...that was different...but...ill just say...what happens next...is going to be a complete surprise 😛

Originally posted by: Lily Gurl
wOAH ! Prem jao Chhat ko bachao! Awsome update Jaz. it was long in a nice way. Kept me busy. Oh how i hope it was Preet but its okay. 👏

Love Lily

Ps Thnx for liking my name. 😳

thanks yaar...im glad that you liked it...next part will be up soon...and i think its just a tad longer than the last part...hope it doesnt bore you 😳

JAZ

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Jazmin

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Posted: 16 years ago

#63

Originally posted by: *Guli*
Okay... so i had to comment like now!! becuz u know me... omg had to do sooo much crap!!!... but i managed to read everything!!! MORPEECH!!!! 🤣...last night was short but fun...as usual...when we get together...there is no stopping us 😉😉😉...laughed so much...La-ta-blah! 😆😆😆

yay!!! prem is here! woohoo!!! to the rescue... uhh hello... why didnt u tell me he was coming to La.... man..... i wouldve like gone to Lax airport!!!😆... i mean... come on and miss this chance.. u know babe... airport is 405 freeway all the way down to Central!!!😆....... lol...i should have told you naa...you'd be waiting at LAX with phloon ka mala and aarti ki thali naa 😛😛...of course...i'd be there with you...drooling away!! 😉😉...

awww... poor heer and chahat!!!!😭.... hope those stupid cows didnt do anything to her!!😡 they make me so mad!😡😡😡 haila...😲 these cows are maha intelligent naa...wah wah...kya baath hai...😉😉😉 cows...cows kidnapped Chahat...and cows are making ransom demands...

now everyone... go kick some butt!!!!😡oh butt kicking is coming honey...then you can do the morpeech to celebrate...CANDY CANE!!!

plz cont soon jaani!!!

but haila... i dont know wats gonna happen!😲 how mean!😭 i know...this is my frist ff where you have no idea what is going on...i like it...i have power 😈...and oh ya...saturday is D-day!!! 😛😛😛

😭😡

Originally posted by: Momana
awasome update...

thanks 😊

Originally posted by: Magpie
Preet rocks ! He was a god-send. Now I'm sure Prem's going to move heaven and earth to save his precious little girl.

Waiting for the next update.

i know...i love him too!! oh you just wait and see what prem does 😃...for his chahat...anything!! 😉

Originally posted by: sweetness4eva
This was once again an awesome part!!!!!!! the wait is totally killing me!!! And what i love most is, that even though prem and heer have been separated for 6 years, they still know that one's distress is relieved by the other!!!! LIke how heer ran to Prem!!! I LOVED IIT!!!!!! COntinue soon jaz!!! Absolutely awesome!!!

thanks luv...im glad that you enjoyed it...😳😳😳...sorry for the wait...but school has to come first...sometimes 😉...but with exams over for now...next part will be up soon 😳😳...next update will have more premeer...just you wait and watch...or in this case...read 😆

JAZ

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Meera

@indiandoll89

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Posted: 16 years ago

#64

The parcel had Minisha's fingernails in it! 😔

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Jazmin

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Posted: 16 years ago

#65

Originally posted by: -Pooji-
hey
hmm preet is not the kidnapper hmm
prem is back yay
awesum update
emotional
goood luck for ur midterm examz

thanks yaar...glad that you liked it...exams went well...so next part coming soon 😃

Originally posted by: meiskan
Hey Jaz! really like this SS ! Cant wait for the next part 😊 You leave us readers craving to read more! Very nicely written !

thanks...im glad that you are enjoying it...thats the idea...if i dont leave you guys craving...you dont come back 😆😆...thanks again

Originally posted by: premeer928
hey
just read the two parts of the story....its amazing. 👏 aww...I feel so bad for heer...hope they find chahat soon. love how she ran to prem...that was so cute. 😃 continue soon. 😊

thanks for taking the time to read my long updates...im glad that you enjoyed it...next part up soon 😳😳😳

Originally posted by: brainychild92
i loved this aprt.. hamari chahat prem...hamari chahat..... prem ki chahat:D:D

thanks for the pm.. im getting more sure that this is rishab, only he is this heartless..

continue soon!!!

yup...Chahat is like...just...the symbol of premeers love...literally and figuratively...nice guess with rishab...i wont promise or deny anything...just expect a HUGE twist...😃😃

JAZ

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Jazmin

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Posted: 16 years ago

#66

Originally posted by: amu142
cani make a guesS?? this kidnapper is RR for sure...no one else....

but awesome work...waiting for the drama to unfold....pls update soon

oooh...nice guess...good guess actually...just watch for a major twist!! 😉😉😉...next update will be posted soon...just as soon as i finish responding to comments 😃

Originally posted by: Anhdara13
Jaz, my heart's racing, and not in a good way. You've built such a suspenseful story, why'd you stop?? Seriously? You'd better update soon, nahin toh - I'll kidnap you!

Love,
Radz

"Race sasoon ki...Race chahat ki"...haila...perfect song...it popped into my head when i read you wrote "my heart's racing" 😆😆😆...sorry for the delay...lekin main kya karti...exams thi naa......but they are done for now...so next part up soon...vaise bhi...i dont want to be kidnapped...haila....vaise if its you...chalo...we'd have fun! 🤣

Originally posted by: Soaps1
Oh my God what will happen next? Can't wait to read ... loved the concept and you write really well ... after reading the first part i too thought it would be Preet but now i am not sure who it is may be RR? 🤣 But you have build the suspense really well ... waiting anxiously for next part ... update soon

thanks yaar...the concept just came to me..and im such a drama queen...thats all that is in my mind...day and night...i have so many crazy ideas in my head...😆😆...next part will be up soon...hope you enjoy it as much as you enjoyed the last two parts 😳

Originally posted by: kis desh Rocks!
WOW!!! Intersting... so prem got to know abt Chahat.... waiting to read furher how will he save her...

thanks...prem did find out about Chahat...how could he not...itni badi nainsafi prem ke saath main nahin kaar sakti...next part up soon 😃

JAZ

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Jazmin

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Posted: 16 years ago

#67

Originally posted by: Ayesha24
Superb Update....!!👏👏
I was damn sure tht preet is not the kidnapper...😃
ohh my god i cant wait for next part...😲
How vil prem react...😲
hush i cant wait ...😆
wht vil prem do now...🥱
how vil he save...
Really curious to know...😛

Ayesha😉

yaar...you are like the only one that didnt think Preet was the kidnapper...👏👏...saab ko laga ke Preet ne yeh kiya hai...😆😆...aage aage dekho hota hai kya...next part up...bohot jaldi...im working on it...just needs final editing...

Originally posted by: *angel94*
Great FF!
So Preet isnt the kidnapper!

Can't wait to read more.

Please continue soon.

nope...not Preet...could he ever do something so disgusting to Chahat...i think not...😉...next part up soon...watch for the PM 😛

Originally posted by: sohail2additi
awesome plz update the artical so0nnnnnnnnnnnnnnn

thanks...haila...itni demand...im working on it...so soon 😛

Originally posted by: purplestar22
Reserved!!

Hmmmm ok its not Preet... I thought it was!! Maybe its RR?? I felt really bad for Heer!! But its great that Preet is there and he is helping out. Now that Prem is here now they can get Chaahat back!!

Cant wait for next chapter!!

RR...good guess...all im saying is...maha bada twist coming up 😛😛😛...next part will be up soon 😃

JAZ

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Jazmin

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Posted: 16 years ago

#68

Originally posted by: yoyojazzy
plz pm me the 3 part.......by the way that was alsome

thanks...😃

Originally posted by: ~Pachu*n*Abhi~
OMG...U started a Kis desh SS? Well u had told me..but dude..omg...kis desh ss? OMG... uff...how many times will you repeat the same thing!!!??? vaise...i just realized..i've missed your pink font...*sigh*...i have to admit...i miss the good old days of KS...before all the drama and politics started on the forum...woh bhi kya din the 😳

...omg...Chahat is soo cute..hehe..heer knew she wanted the ice-cream..dude u made me want some now..and its like 1am..sigh..u bad jazy!! .... chahat is soo cute...awwieee... hey...that is why its called a late night snack 😛😛😛...i wanted some too...but alas...i didnt get any...still havent had any...although i had a smoothie today...😆😆

..haila..some1 kidnapped her? i doubt its some1 from house...i think its that dude Heer was gnna marry...forgot the name..u kno the villan..when we had thought Prem was dead...yea wohi...hehe..i am sure its him..!! Grrrrrrrrrr!!! good...you used what few brain cells you have...its no one from the house...😆😆😆..j/k...i think u are talking about Rishab Rampal...good guess...im so proud...but just u wait for the twist...and u know..when i give a twist...i give a TWIST! 😛😛😛

Preet was in shock or what w/knowin abt chahat ! Hehe..i would luv to c those expressions on the screen... me too...i love sushant 😍

hailaa...Prem is here !! Wohooooo!! Ab aayega mazaaa !! Now those goons will kno who the REAL Prem Juneja is !! Woot woot !! I just hope its not some1 from the house !! those goons dont know what is about to hit them 😆😆😆...saab ke saab bohot bure phasne wale hai 😛😛😛

luv it jaani!!

Continue soon pleaseeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee i am naa...just like i promised 😉

Originally posted by: Suhana Ahmed
hey,
thanx for a long part...

awesome update....

loved the way you described Heer's reaction towards the sitution...

thanx for the pm...

update asap...

regards,

Suhana.

thanks yaar...glad that you enjoyed it...i try my best...im glad that you liked it...next update will be up soon 😃😃😃

Originally posted by: NNOOO
good work keep it up

thanks

JAZ

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Jazmin

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Posted: 16 years ago

#69

Originally posted by: angel82
oh jaz, i'm a late comer here....but i'm glad i caught up with this and didnt miss it...
As always , u have amazed me with ur writing and i am eagerly waiting to read ahead....

luv

Angie

as long as you got here...all is good...😆😆...iim glad you came though...thanks for liking my writing...next part will be up soon 😳

Originally posted by: stunninstar
awesome... plz update soon...

thank you 😃

Originally posted by: --Priya--
Pls update soon

will do

Originally posted by: natashaa46
well i just read it n only his i gotta say abt it: --
its gr8, WOW, fantastic, fabulous, superb, cute. thrilling..........i at loss of words but i truly LOVED IT!! thank you...thank you soooo much!!! 🤗...for you kind words...oh god...how old do i sound

the best part being of my CUTEEEEEEE PRETTTT!! who never got so much in the original 'coz of his 2nd serial PR>>>>>>> i love preet!!! he is like...wow...he he...he is the best naa!! 😳😳😳 i watch PR only for him 😉
but here.........
WOWWOWOWOWOWOWOWOWOWOW!!!!
👏

plzzzzzzz do cnt soooooooonnn
n if possible plzzz PM me!! of course...ill PM as soon as i post it...which should be soon...thanks again for reading...

LOVED IT!!!
⭐️ to u!!
Keep it up... thanks so much...i have other FF's going...if you are interested...😳
😊 😊