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Posted: 16 years ago
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Do NOT read this! PLEASE!😆 NO joke, no reverse psychology being used here, this is for a simple bet. So help me win, DO NOT read this and if god forbid you do, do NOT comment on it! I beg of all of you! 😳-Love Avi
Note: Mods, after I win my bet (which will be in a day max.) you can close this thread😳)
PS: The people that are reading this but aren't going to comment,(I love you guyz btw!) the hindi translation is done by Bhav and RInkz..so thank you guys! DO NOT COMMENT! heh..I hope you guyz listen for once...😕
Part 1:

The woman of my dreams

Late at night the soft wind blows,

Billowing clouds upon the soft sweet snow.

My heart grows wary with each new sigh,

given the insipid brightness that hangs in the sky.

Oranges, reds, purples, yellows, and was that a hint of green she saw there on the perfect canvas? She smiled to herself and carefully folded her hands together as she let herself fall back down on the wooden ramp with her feet dangling down towards the water.

Here and there she dances before me,

Quick as the robin that darts before his tree.

Her hair as dark as the bark I lay under,

Who's leaves provided the soothing shady slumber.

A year ago, if she was asked if she would consider splattered paint art, she would have laughed in that sweet voice of hers and very softly would've replied no and then would've given a long reason while studying the other person's body language to make sure that she did not hurt his or her feeling.

But ever since she moved from New York to this heavenly place, her perspective on everything had changed completely.

Her laugh as melodious as a cool breeze,

Playing and teasing her lock of hair; free.

Given the daze that I had fallen under,

With the pale hypnotic eyes which reflected the golden amber.

Oh in the late of night, where the soft wind blows,

Billowing clouds on the soft sweet snow.

She let out a giggle at seeing the seagulls diving into the water to her left and then rising up to the top again, as if playing hide and seek. The amusement and the little happiness she got everyday from these small animals did do wonders for her and yet left her in awe as to how that was possible. How could seeing the same dark silhouettes of the seagulls against the brightly decorated lit sky could bring her so much peace again and again. She had no answer to this question and nor did it matter, all she knew was she loved it here and couldn't live without her new furry friends.

She had named them already too; the one that always stayed in the water the longest was Shifali, and the one that always stole the food Shifali caught was Maddy. Nonee was the one that always pecked Maddy's head; always joyful. The ones to the left that were always together were Kimmu and Rinkz, they looked like twins, with the same location of that black spot on their heads. Ravjot was the one flying towards them all right now, she was the randomest one of them all. She smiled as she recalled the time when she went up close to them and the seagull started hissing like a snake at her; yep that was Ravjot for you! Bhav and Radz were missing at the moment but those two were like Kimmu, Rinkz and Ravjot combined; crazy yet close as sisters.

The touch, the innocence, the utter beauty,

God did his job well, he did his duty.

Made her eyes as deep as the deep blue sea,

Keepsake of her secrets, her desires, her soul carefree.

She had been coming to the beach every day, to this exact same spot she lay on now; on a ramp that went mid-way into the water and had rocks outlining the end of either side of it. By the edge of the ramp, where only she sat, lay a white porcelain- like rock beside the pale peach pillar that was used to support the ramp. It was on that pale peach pillar, where her prince charming came every 3 months to add to his poem. And that white porcelain-like rock was probably where he sat and wrote it.

She sighed inwardly as she closed her eyes and quietly recited the poem he wrote for his dream girl to herself and soon fell asleep.

She prances to her own melody,

No one to stop, no one to see her, apart from me; nobody.

Oh how she wish, she was the one he was writing about, the one he dreamed about, the one that danced under the billowing clouds on the soft sweet snow, the one he was in love with. This was another thing that had changed since she moved from the city a year ago, she, Meera Dave, was completely and utterly in love with a person that she did not even know, not his name, nor his occupation, nor his age, all she knew was that he was the prince of her dreams.

Oh how in the late of night, the soft wind blows,

Billowing clouds on the soft sweet snow.

She slowly opened her eyes as she felt a gush of wind waltzing over her, creating a blanket of frosty reminder. She frowned as she saw the dark sky above her. Like all of the other 352 days that she had been coming here, she had missed the sunset...again. Meera sighed as she got up, dusted off her royal blue sundress and left for her house, alone.

The stuff in Italics is the poem. And Meera by god I hope your happy!*grumbles. And NO comments..Part 2 is below.
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Part 2~~

At home.

"Meera beta, tu aa gayi?" a lady in her mid forties called out.

"Huh? No mom I'm still outside." Meera smiled at the confused look on her mom's face and hugged her. "Haan ji mom, mai aa gayi"

"Why didn't you just say that before than instead of..."

"Sorry ma!" Meera replied while heading upstairs to her room.

"Ruk!" her mom yelled out and hurried up to her daughter, grabbing her by her arm to drag her to the sofa.

Where has she gone?

Meera listened in shock as her mother very carefully told her about the arranged marriage she had set with a well known and extremely successful business man; Prem Juneja. He sounded great...for someone else that is, not her though. How could she possibly marry him, this Prem Juneja when she was in fact in love with someone else?

Meera whined to her mother as she refused to budge from her decision without a concrete reason. Exasperated, Meera told her mother of her daily visits to the beach just to see if he had added a verse, a line to the poem.

And all her mother had said in turn was "Lakin, woh ek ajnabee hai Meera! God knows who he is, how he is, his age, his occupation. You know nothing beta! I don't care, I'm your mother and I'm not going to let you sit around waiting for this poet. Please Meera, Prem is perfect for you! I have known his family and him for ages!"

Dancing, laughing, in the oh so white snow,

Gone forever, in the midst of dawn.

Heartbroken, confused and angry, Meeru could not even begin to imagine how she could possibly make her mother comprehend what she felt nor what was going through her brain at the moment.

Today this stranger, Prem, was going to come see her and all she could think of was going to the beach. Maybe, just maybe, today, she would see him, the man that ruled her heart, the man who she belonged to and not this Prem. She had seen some pictures of him, and was surprised to find him fairly attractive but that didn't matter. Nothing did.

Late at night where the soft wind blew,

Meera looked at reflection staring back at her in the mirror. The tears that streamed down her cheeks gave a sense of hope and determination. Holding up her rosy pink lengha, Meera darted by her cousins, out the door, down the sidewalk and ran to the beach, to the pale peach pillar.
Billowing clouds upon the bare land where fresh snow blew

It was now or never. She just had to wait for him this one last time and then she would happily marry any stranger her mother threw at her; it wouldn't matter. But if there was someone waiting for her there today, she swore on her life that she wouldn't let him go, not until she breathed the last gust of breath in her.

Panting, breathless she bent down to hold her knees as she reached that same spot she came to every day. The wind darted past her, making her hair fly around recklessly. With her long hair in her face, Meera desperately tried to get a hold of it, to get it out of the way when she felt a shudder go down her spine. She looked in horror as she felt fingers lingering on her cheek, slowly pushing aside her hair behind her ears. With the hair out of her way Meera looked up into the strangers dark brown eyes smiling at her, shocked at seeing the same man look at her, the same man from the picture. "Meera right?"he asked after a while of staring at her.

Meera gulped and nodded, too shocked, too nervous to say anything comprehensible. He smiled at her expression and put forth his hand. "I'm Prem Juneja. I've seen you visiting here but never got a chance to speak to you."

Meera struggled to say something; anything. Was he the one she had been waiting for all this while? Was he the one she had been bursting out in tears for, was it really him? So engrossed in her thoughts, she did not notice him taking away his eyes from hers and shielding her from the sudden outbreak of rain.

The sound of the waves hitting against the ramp made it impossible for him to be heard. "Meera, Meera! Let's go!" he yelled out while pointing to his car.

Meera looked up at his worried face and began to move when all of a sudden he stopped and handed her the coat to keep above her head. She held on to it confused and watched the rain pour over him making his white shirt hug his built frame and reveal his muscles. Curious as to what he was doing, Meera walked behind him and was shocked as he picked up a stone and scratched out the poem, her poem. She went up to him, furious, "What did you do that for! Prem, STOP! Please!" she cried out.

He looked up at her and smiled before hurrying away. "Because that part of my life is over."

Meera looked after his retreating figure with tears in her eyes. What exactly did he think of himself? How could he just...and then she saw it. A little bit to the left of the poem, a title was engraved in the same writing.

The woman of my life.

"You coming?" Prem came back and said in his husky voice close to her ear, startling her. She turned around to face him, let go of his coat and hugged him while softly whispering. "It's you."

NO COMMENTS! I can say this a billion times😆Yay! If you read this even though I begged you not to..*glares..and if you have to say something REALLY important PM me...but NO comments!😆PLEASE! I BEG OF YOU! lmao...I'm begging random strangers, oh life is great!😆
-Love
Avi!😳
Edited by urworstnitemare - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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mine! 😛

And I'm telling you all NOW! 😳😃

If you want Avi to post all the other amazing work she's written than I suggest that you comment! 😃😳
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Ok fine if you wanna play dirty then "If you love me guyz..and think I'm a good friend then do NOT comment please!" *puppy wala face. (yes my hindi is improving *blush* overnight too! lol) Love you Meeru and I'm so gonna win this! *a smug muh...I shall go watch tv and then see my victory!
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Yes! *glares. Shifali, how could you!!!!!! *I'm hurt! I considered you a friend and just yesterday you said you loved me!!! *whines...your a mod, delete your own comment, QUICK before Meera sees it!
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Posted: 16 years ago
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I love you Avi! I will update my comment soon.

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Posted: 16 years ago
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NOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! That means you DON"T love me Shifali. Read comment above. "If you love me. DON"T COMMENT!" And ur a mod u should listen to ur peeps..meaning ME! Do not update comment, shoo! Come here when I send you a pm to delete the thread k? 😆 LOVe you too btw!
-Avi
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Okay. I won't comment. *glares*
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Thank you! Your the BEST! Have I ever told you that? Well..I'm telling you now then...Your the bestest! And me loves you! *sticks out tongue at Meeru..we're back at 0! *giggles
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I said I won't comment, I didn't say I CAN'T comment! So you guys are still at 0 but wait for my amazing timing...*hai*

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