same concept diff. story with a twist

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Posted: 16 years ago
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Hello everyone.Since the current track is trash, i thought i will write a different track of this eternal love story.

The beginning of the story is same as Ekta's story..

Two best friends ...
One in Canada and the other in India, who have fixed their kids marriage to strenghthen their friendship.Groom in Canada and the Bride in India

BUT.......

Both do not want to get married to each other.So when the groom & his family come to India , Prem with preet's help get into a secret arrangement with Heer (& of course Meher) to break off their relationship. They behave as if they fell in love at first sight in front of others.They try diff, ways to break of their rista but they fails at every attempt.


In between they will find that they have lot in common and will start respecting each other. They start to fall in love but they donot no wht they are feeling,they take it as friendship. Finally they decide that since they have to get married to some one some day so its better they marry each other since they are already friends


BUT....

while they were taking this decision their parents starts fighting regarding their altered status or ....
They will break off the rista.


PREM & HEER SEPERATE


Heer goes to Mumbai to continue studies and Prem and his family shifts their business to Mumbai.


After lots of Hide & seeks they will meet. both realizes that even though they were feeling something missing inside they didnt realize tht they have fallen in love until they meet.
They confesses their love and decides to end their parents hatred and then get married


Next follows prem's and heer's attempt to bring their family together, dissolve their hatred and then get married.




so everyone wht do u all think of my story line.


in this way we will get lots of fights ,lots of laughter, lots of romance, lots of emotional drama,lots of suspense and lots of lessons on social values


pls comment
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Posted: 16 years ago
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typical Ekta show must say.
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Posted: 16 years ago
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😭


Didnt anyone like my story?????????????😭🥺?????????????????😕💔

228 views , only 1 reply??????????

pls dont kill my creativity

even though u guys didnt like it pls add comments

Edited by smithasrk - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: cola_gul

typical Ekta show must say.




Almost all Ekta's stories are filled with evil women , violence and all kind of illogical ......

was there any such things in my story??????????????????

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Posted: 16 years ago
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I love it! 😃

I would love to see HC-AG act in something like this, pretending to be in love...there would be cute scenes! like a romcom or something...

ohh...and trying to reunite their families together! 😍

Its really goodd..you should continue 👍🏼
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: divya_p

I love it! 😃

I would love to see HC-AG act in something like this, pretending to be in love...there would be cute scenes! like a romcom or something...

ohh...and trying to reunite their families together! 😍

Its really goodd..you should continue 👍🏼




Thank You 😛
Atlast i got a good comment.👏

But the problem is i am not creative enough so if any one is interested they can.
👍🏼

And in this story every character will have something to do. even preet and meher love track can be added ❤️

they can also fall in love while trying to help heer and prem
right?
😳
Edited by smithasrk - 16 years ago
sonu0511 thumbnail
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Posted: 16 years ago
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nice story...would love to see hc ag in this......
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Posted: 16 years ago
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good work keep it up dear


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