FF: Premeer/NihaalVeera/PreetMeher 5-21-09 part 2

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Posted: 16 years ago
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this story is preety opssote from everyone else
soo this is a story heres my intro..
oh an dim not gonna have alot of the other charcter in here like no onws in here except
meher preet ash heer veera prem nihaal-
meher is heer's bfff
and preet is prem and nihaals
but meher is not heer sis srry guyss

Heer Mann:
A 23 year old girl who loves her sister very mych, shes very like our heer.

Veera Mann:
She is heer's younger sister she totaly the opiste of veera she loves er sister soo much and will be able to do anything for her (22)

Prem:
He is a 24 year old guys whose like our Premmmm

Nihaal:
he is Prem's older brother(he look older) srryyy
Preet:
he nihaal and prem best fyoungest brother
cant find meher please send me if you ahve
Ok here let let mee beginnn
Heer: Veera hurry up and get up were gonna be late for collee
Veera: 10 min yaar
Heer: Nahi abhi utooo
Veera: Fineeeeee
Heer hurryied up and got ready
this is what she wore:
And than Veera came out and wore:
Veera: Heer di please hurry
Heer: Teek hai
They both ran out there house to get into college while Heer was running to school she ran into Prem
Heer: Cant you see
Prem: What you bumped into meeee
Heer just left and Nihaal was just confuzed
Veera and Heer had just reached to college just in timee
Heer: Meher mere jaan
Meher: Heer you look badd
Heer: what can i say i ran
Veera: GUys ill be right back i gotta get my scehdule
Veera was goingt threw the halls until she go t there and the gudance was like how many sibling you ahve..
Veera: Only one
Gudiance: BUt how come Meher and you ahve the same parent anme and blood
Veera was soo shocked and looked
Guidance: Yeah isnt she your sister
Veera: What
lol
so how do you guys like it plwase tell me
thanks for readinggggggg
Precap: Veera finds out Meher is her sister
And Prem Nihaal Preet Intro too


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Posted: 16 years ago
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its a preatty good start plz do continue

I like it how you make veera nice in this story it gives us a diff. view to look at her
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Posted: 16 years ago
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hii all this is part 2 i hope you like it an dty for reading

Chap 2.

Veera was walking threw the hallway and thinking I can't believe Meher is our sister

She cant on walking until she bumped into Nihaal and Nihaal caught her

Veera and Nihaal had a 10 minute eye lock until he snapped out of it and oh I'm soo sorry

Veera: Nahi mere galti hai I'm sorry

Nihaal: Anyways I'm Nihaal

Veera: I'm Veera

Nihaal: I'll see you later than

When he left Veera was like what was I thinking about she just remembered again

Veera thinking: How is Meher my sister I have to tell Heer di

-Nihaal and Prem and Preet Info-

Prem: Nihaal Bhaiya what took you soo long

Preet: We have been waiting for you since a long timee

Nihaal: I just ran into some girl

Prem: Pyar hogi hai

Nihaal: Shut up yaar

Preet: How does she look

Nihaal: I don't like her my brothers

Preet: Ok fine what every

Prem and Preet start laughing

Prem: This is our first day of college and its soo funny cause Nihaal bhaiya is in love

Nihaal: Prem that's enough and he ran after him

Preet was just starting and said GO PREM BHAIYA

While Prem was running he knocked down Heer and was on top of her

Heer was soo shocked

Meher was screaming

Prem got up and was like I'm sorry

Heer: Tum.. mere pyaish bar bar koi qar how

First you bumped into me and know this

Prem: Excuse don't give me that's this is all your fault

Heer: You know what you started it understand

Prem: Don't give me that

Heer: No you started it

Prem: You

Heer: You

Prem: You

Heer: You

Prem: You more

Heer: NOOOOO You more

And than they just left

Nihaal: Ab kiso ko pyar hai and Preet and Nihaal started laughing at him

Prem: Stop it

Nihaal: What ever and all of them left to class

Heer entered her class and say Prem

Heer thinking: Oh god know he's here.. Why is he following me

-Switch to Meher-

Meher was like today was the weirdest day every

Oh and she was wearing:

Meher had just entered class and was staring at the ceiling until her professor called

Pro: Meher you can give the answer

Meher: Um well mujhi nahi pata

Pro: If you weren't busy staring at the ceiling this wouldn't have happened

Meher: But

Pro: NO but

And on the other side Preet was laughing at her

Pro: You two could both leave the room

Meher: But

Preet: Whatt

They both were outside

Preet: I'm outside because of you

Meher: I didn't tell you to laugh did I

Preet: Nahi but still

Meher: Still qai

Preet: Its your fault

Meher: Nooo

Preet: Teek hai I'm Preet

Meher: I'm Meher

Preet: Do you always stare at the ceiling our it's a special occasion today he said giggling

Meher: Stop it

okk i hope you like it

heres the precap:Veera: Heer di Meher is our sister

Heer: What

-next part-

Prem: Im gonna get my revenge on what Heer did

Nihaal: Its not worth it i think it was by mistake-

netc part-

Meher: PREEETTTTT

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Posted: 16 years ago
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v. intstn mch mre hapier den wen kdmhmd strtin memer
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Posted: 16 years ago
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awesome part!!!!!
continue soon!!!!!!
PM Me when u update next!!!!!!!
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Posted: 16 years ago
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hey
nice ff
loved it
do cont soon...

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