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@shabo24

Rocker

Posted: 16 years ago

#171

Your mind wants to go write something. :)

aha I win. *winning dance* And maybe. I actually just stuck that in there to make the part longer. 🤣 I might use it or Heer will just magically stop being pregnant. 😆

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Meera

@indiandoll89

Trailblazer

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Posted: 16 years ago

#172

*narrows eyes* I replied back to the YRKKH post...and explained my 'dilemma' there! 😆

Ahh that works for me...maybe...since I've seen this on an english show...you can show that she wasn't pregnant. Something about how her body makes her feel like she is, but it's actually just nothing there...😊 That way I won't feel bad! 😊

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And I should tell you because...?

@shabo24

Rocker

Posted: 16 years ago

#173

*angel smile*

LOL, too technical for me. I think since I wrote it, I'll use it. And I think I'm not being "loud" enough in my foreshadowing. I was positive someone would point something out, I put (or tried to :P) tons of foreshadowing in this part. :P

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Meera

@indiandoll89

Trailblazer

+ 3

Posted: 16 years ago

#174

Oh I could tell about some things...but I really don't wanna point it out incase I was wrong but you used it all anyways!😆 But the whole Ash taking Preet away physically hurt to read...and you know how sad I get! 😔