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Hello Everyone!!! How are you all? I know we all are super duper depressed with whatever is happening to the show, The leap, premeer Separation and All..So here's a oneshot I have been thinking about ever since I read about the Leap 2 days ago..Hope this cheers you all up!!
"Prem beta, Yakeen nahi hota...Ke, Heer, jisse hum apne ghar ka Gharoor mante thay uss ne Ye sab kiya... Hamare Pyaar aur vishwaas ka najaiz Faida uthaya..Sab umeedain tor di Heer ne... Yakeen nahi hota, lekin Ye saboot? Ye Sab saboot toh saaf bata rahe hain Ke heer ne, Teri heer ne apni maryada laang di..."
Prem just looked at his mother..His tears flowing down his cheeks, and then he looked at all the "saboot" that was yelling out that Heer had Betrayed him..His Heer...
Prem had come home from work still wondering why heer was not confiding in him? Heer was troubled and he knew that for sure, because she'd been lying to him for the past few days about everything... He had just stepped in the house when he saw that the entire family was standing tense in the main hall... In one glance he saw Meher crying,with Preet consoling her with his hand on her shoulder, Gayatri standing with a heap of things lying on the table infront of her, while his father looked very upset...Veera was as usual standing with Maya and was continuously shaking her head, and looking at Prem with Pity in her eyes...Prem wondered what was wrong? And then He saw her...Heer, was standing right infront of the stairs, her head bowed down and her shoulders shaking...He immediately started walking faster to get to heer, to know what was wrong that she was crying...As he was crossing the room to get to heer, he heard his mother say...
"Ruk ja Prem" Prem looked at his mother with a puzzled look on why she was stopping him?
Prem then asked "Kya hua Maa?, Yahan ho kya raha hai? Meher ro rahi hai, Heer ro rahi hai? Huwa kya hai Yahan? Koi bataye ga mujjey?"
That was exactly when Prem's world started crashing...
His mother had told him that Heer was having an affair with Rajveer...She had said that maya had caught Rajveer and Heer together, red handed...To further strengthen her case, she showed him a video of Rajveer and heer sitting in a cafe All alone...Then the Credit card Bill receipt of the hotel room which was booked under the name of Mr. And Mrs. Prem Juneja with rajveer's signature on it...Rajveer's coat with Heer's diamond ring in it...
Prem stood stunned... What was all this? Where did all of this come from? He felt like he was stuck in a nightmare.... and he wanted to get out of it...immediately....This surely could not be reality....
Then he heard his mom say,"Teri heer ne apni maryada laang di.." Thats when he turned around and looked at heer....
Heer had been waiting for Prem to look at her...She wanted to tell him the entire truth..But most of all she wanted to beg him not to believe any of the evidence...it was all a lie... When she had first come downstairs, Maa had started her accusing her infront of the family, Heer couldn't believe it...Maa, why was she doing all this? Maa knew the truth, she knew why heer had been meeting Rajveer..It was because of Sameer...and maa knew everything yet she was saying all this about heer? Heer couldnt understand anything...She had stood there shocked, until maa had started saying things about how heer had betrayed Prem's trust...that heer did not deserve, Gayatri Juneja's "son".....that was when Heer had lost all self control and started crying..
Maa had said, "Tu Mere Bete ke Qabil hi nahi hai..Na tu qabil hai, na tere bhai meri beti ke qabil hai...Mujjey Yakeen nahi hota ke tum donno Teji aur Balraj maan ke bache ho....Hum ne kitni bari ghalti ker di insaan pehchane main..."
Then Prem had come home....And the accusations started all over again..Everything was against heer at that moment, she had no proof to prove her innocence...and she knew, she wouldnt be able to prove herself...
Then Prem turned and Looked at heer, He saw her eyes brimming with tears, pleading... Her eyes were begging him to give her a chance to speak up for herself...They were asking him to listen to her once..Those eyes were telling him that SHE needed him to BELIEVE her..To Trust her, one last time...
Prem just stood there, and he saw his past flash infront of his eyes...He remembered Her first declaration of love to him, how she stood by him, when his siblings had accused him of being"sautela" and how she had taken care of his family after he had left..How she had been ready to sacrifice her life, for his family, by marrying Rishabh...Then when she had found out that He was Gaurav, how she selflessly sacrificed herself again, by bringing him back to juneja house to act as Prem for his mother....How she had cried holding his picture the first night they had come home after she had found he was Gaurav, and not her Prem....He had pretended to sleep through it, but in reality she had had no idea he had saw her...crying her heart out by holding his picture close to her heart..And then when she'd found out that he was infact prem and had been acting to be Gaurav, because he had a Hole in his heart...Then too she had fought with him for his family...She wanted him to stay with them because the family needed him...She had cried day in and day out, she had suffered in her misery alone each and everytime...Because no one else had known about the truth..but never once had she asked him to stay back for herself...Then atlast things had cleared out and he had found out that he didnt have any hole in his heart, she had been there for him then too...Then Veera's miscarriage happened...And Maa had asked him to prove his love for her by choosing between His mother, and his wife...He had chosen maa over heer...and yet, Heer didnt blame him once...She somehow also then understood his position..She had left home and hadn't asked him a single question...
And now, there she stood with tears in her eyes again...It felt like the whole world didnt understand her...She looked so alone, and dejected..She looked lost...
Prem calmly walked over to Heer..She looked up at him, in his eyes...They both had tears in their eyes..It felt like eternity before they stopped staring into each others eyes...Itt felt like....One's eyes were asking for forgiveness, while the other's eyes were saying that he understood...that it was okay...
Then Prem reached out and took hold of heer's hand....Heer looked at him, suprised...Unable to comprehend what Prem was doing? Was he going to drag her towards the main door.... Was he not going to give her a chance to defend herself....
"Heer, Pehle Samjh nahi araha tha ke kya karoun?Kis baat pe vishwaas keroun.... Uss baat pe vishwas keroun jo mere kaan sun rahay hain, ya apne dil ki manoun? Uss dil ki manoun jo sirf tumhare liye dharakta hai? Jo dil baar baar yehi keh raha hai ke, ye sab jhoot hai..Meri heer aisi nahi hai...
Main janta hoon , ke sab saboot, ye sab baatein sab jhoot hai...Sab kuch jhoot hai...Main jis heer ko jaanta hoon, woh aisa kabhi nahi ker sakti..Meri Heer ki duniya mujh se shuru hoti hai aur mujh per hi khatam ho jati hai...Jis Heer ka pyar mujjey Maut ke moo se bacha ke le aya, woh heer bewafa kaise ho sakti hai? Uss ka pyaar jhoota kaise ho sakta hai? Main nahi maanta heer..Main ye sab saboot waboot nahi maanta...Heer aur Prem to aik hi hain...To un ke beech koi nahi aasakta...Koi Rajveer ,Koi Sach, koi saboot, kuch nahin.."
He Turned to Gayatri and very firmly said.."Maa ye sab jhoot hai..."
Gayatri looked shocked and furious at the same time...She couldnt believe that Prem was still siding with Heer!! She glanced at Maya, and gave her a nod to put their next plan in action...
Maya Immediately started badmouthing heer out loud, She had only gotten the first sentence out of her mouth, that Prem turned and glared at her...
And then he said. "Meri Patni ke baare main koi kuch bhi kahe ye mujhse bardassht nahi hota, aur main apni heer ko ache se janta hoon..."
He took hold of heer's hand, and started walking towards the main exit..Thats when Rajveer entered..Prem looked at him, and Rajveer very grimly smiled at him...Rajveer handed over some papers to prem..Prem started looking at them, and He turned and glared at Maya again...Preet then asked him what the papers were? Prem just handed them over to Preet...and said
"Ye woh saboot hain, jo sabit kerte hain ke hamare apne kabhi hamare apne ho ke bhi aisa dukh de jate hain ke hum soch bhi nahi sakte..aur jo dard us se milta hai woh bataya nahi jaa sakta.. Is mein Veera ke abortion ke documents hain, aur Sameer ka Bayaan...
Gayatri looked dumbfounded at the mention of Sameer... Did Prem know About Sameer?If yes then How much did he know? Did he know she was the one who had hired Sameer?
As if on cue,Prem just turned and looked at gayatri, and said,
"Maa, mujjey app se koi shikayat nahi hai, sirf apne app se shikayat hai ke shayad main hi acha beta nahi ban paya....Maa mujjey maaf ker dijye ga, magar, main uss ghar main nahi reh sakta jahan, meri Heer ko koi takleef pahunchye...Uss larki jo, jo duniya ka har gham mere liye khushi khushi seh leti hai...Har mushkil main mera saath deti ayi hai... Uss ki ankhon main aanssoo bardasht nahi hote...Mujjey maaf kerdijya Maa...
And then He turned back, put his arm around heer's shoulders and walked out of juneja mansion with heer's head on his shoulder...
SO how is it? i haven't read it again!! I m sorry if it sounds horrible!! I couldnt sleep and i just had to get this done so I d feel better!!!! Lemme know how you guys like it? Comments are most welcome?
Mahrukh
"Prem beta, Yakeen nahi hota...Ke, Heer, jisse hum apne ghar ka Gharoor mante thay uss ne Ye sab kiya... Hamare Pyaar aur vishwaas ka najaiz Faida uthaya..Sab umeedain tor di Heer ne... Yakeen nahi hota, lekin Ye saboot? Ye Sab saboot toh saaf bata rahe hain Ke heer ne, Teri heer ne apni maryada laang di..."
Prem just looked at his mother..His tears flowing down his cheeks, and then he looked at all the "saboot" that was yelling out that Heer had Betrayed him..His Heer...
Prem had come home from work still wondering why heer was not confiding in him? Heer was troubled and he knew that for sure, because she'd been lying to him for the past few days about everything... He had just stepped in the house when he saw that the entire family was standing tense in the main hall... In one glance he saw Meher crying,with Preet consoling her with his hand on her shoulder, Gayatri standing with a heap of things lying on the table infront of her, while his father looked very upset...Veera was as usual standing with Maya and was continuously shaking her head, and looking at Prem with Pity in her eyes...Prem wondered what was wrong? And then He saw her...Heer, was standing right infront of the stairs, her head bowed down and her shoulders shaking...He immediately started walking faster to get to heer, to know what was wrong that she was crying...As he was crossing the room to get to heer, he heard his mother say...
"Ruk ja Prem" Prem looked at his mother with a puzzled look on why she was stopping him?
Prem then asked "Kya hua Maa?, Yahan ho kya raha hai? Meher ro rahi hai, Heer ro rahi hai? Huwa kya hai Yahan? Koi bataye ga mujjey?"
That was exactly when Prem's world started crashing...
His mother had told him that Heer was having an affair with Rajveer...She had said that maya had caught Rajveer and Heer together, red handed...To further strengthen her case, she showed him a video of Rajveer and heer sitting in a cafe All alone...Then the Credit card Bill receipt of the hotel room which was booked under the name of Mr. And Mrs. Prem Juneja with rajveer's signature on it...Rajveer's coat with Heer's diamond ring in it...
Prem stood stunned... What was all this? Where did all of this come from? He felt like he was stuck in a nightmare.... and he wanted to get out of it...immediately....This surely could not be reality....
Then he heard his mom say,"Teri heer ne apni maryada laang di.." Thats when he turned around and looked at heer....
Heer had been waiting for Prem to look at her...She wanted to tell him the entire truth..But most of all she wanted to beg him not to believe any of the evidence...it was all a lie... When she had first come downstairs, Maa had started her accusing her infront of the family, Heer couldn't believe it...Maa, why was she doing all this? Maa knew the truth, she knew why heer had been meeting Rajveer..It was because of Sameer...and maa knew everything yet she was saying all this about heer? Heer couldnt understand anything...She had stood there shocked, until maa had started saying things about how heer had betrayed Prem's trust...that heer did not deserve, Gayatri Juneja's "son".....that was when Heer had lost all self control and started crying..
Maa had said, "Tu Mere Bete ke Qabil hi nahi hai..Na tu qabil hai, na tere bhai meri beti ke qabil hai...Mujjey Yakeen nahi hota ke tum donno Teji aur Balraj maan ke bache ho....Hum ne kitni bari ghalti ker di insaan pehchane main..."
Then Prem had come home....And the accusations started all over again..Everything was against heer at that moment, she had no proof to prove her innocence...and she knew, she wouldnt be able to prove herself...
Then Prem turned and Looked at heer, He saw her eyes brimming with tears, pleading... Her eyes were begging him to give her a chance to speak up for herself...They were asking him to listen to her once..Those eyes were telling him that SHE needed him to BELIEVE her..To Trust her, one last time...
Prem just stood there, and he saw his past flash infront of his eyes...He remembered Her first declaration of love to him, how she stood by him, when his siblings had accused him of being"sautela" and how she had taken care of his family after he had left..How she had been ready to sacrifice her life, for his family, by marrying Rishabh...Then when she had found out that He was Gaurav, how she selflessly sacrificed herself again, by bringing him back to juneja house to act as Prem for his mother....How she had cried holding his picture the first night they had come home after she had found he was Gaurav, and not her Prem....He had pretended to sleep through it, but in reality she had had no idea he had saw her...crying her heart out by holding his picture close to her heart..And then when she'd found out that he was infact prem and had been acting to be Gaurav, because he had a Hole in his heart...Then too she had fought with him for his family...She wanted him to stay with them because the family needed him...She had cried day in and day out, she had suffered in her misery alone each and everytime...Because no one else had known about the truth..but never once had she asked him to stay back for herself...Then atlast things had cleared out and he had found out that he didnt have any hole in his heart, she had been there for him then too...Then Veera's miscarriage happened...And Maa had asked him to prove his love for her by choosing between His mother, and his wife...He had chosen maa over heer...and yet, Heer didnt blame him once...She somehow also then understood his position..She had left home and hadn't asked him a single question...
And now, there she stood with tears in her eyes again...It felt like the whole world didnt understand her...She looked so alone, and dejected..She looked lost...
Prem calmly walked over to Heer..She looked up at him, in his eyes...They both had tears in their eyes..It felt like eternity before they stopped staring into each others eyes...Itt felt like....One's eyes were asking for forgiveness, while the other's eyes were saying that he understood...that it was okay...
Then Prem reached out and took hold of heer's hand....Heer looked at him, suprised...Unable to comprehend what Prem was doing? Was he going to drag her towards the main door.... Was he not going to give her a chance to defend herself....
"Heer, Pehle Samjh nahi araha tha ke kya karoun?Kis baat pe vishwaas keroun.... Uss baat pe vishwas keroun jo mere kaan sun rahay hain, ya apne dil ki manoun? Uss dil ki manoun jo sirf tumhare liye dharakta hai? Jo dil baar baar yehi keh raha hai ke, ye sab jhoot hai..Meri heer aisi nahi hai...
Main janta hoon , ke sab saboot, ye sab baatein sab jhoot hai...Sab kuch jhoot hai...Main jis heer ko jaanta hoon, woh aisa kabhi nahi ker sakti..Meri Heer ki duniya mujh se shuru hoti hai aur mujh per hi khatam ho jati hai...Jis Heer ka pyar mujjey Maut ke moo se bacha ke le aya, woh heer bewafa kaise ho sakti hai? Uss ka pyaar jhoota kaise ho sakta hai? Main nahi maanta heer..Main ye sab saboot waboot nahi maanta...Heer aur Prem to aik hi hain...To un ke beech koi nahi aasakta...Koi Rajveer ,Koi Sach, koi saboot, kuch nahin.."
He Turned to Gayatri and very firmly said.."Maa ye sab jhoot hai..."
Gayatri looked shocked and furious at the same time...She couldnt believe that Prem was still siding with Heer!! She glanced at Maya, and gave her a nod to put their next plan in action...
Maya Immediately started badmouthing heer out loud, She had only gotten the first sentence out of her mouth, that Prem turned and glared at her...
And then he said. "Meri Patni ke baare main koi kuch bhi kahe ye mujhse bardassht nahi hota, aur main apni heer ko ache se janta hoon..."
He took hold of heer's hand, and started walking towards the main exit..Thats when Rajveer entered..Prem looked at him, and Rajveer very grimly smiled at him...Rajveer handed over some papers to prem..Prem started looking at them, and He turned and glared at Maya again...Preet then asked him what the papers were? Prem just handed them over to Preet...and said
"Ye woh saboot hain, jo sabit kerte hain ke hamare apne kabhi hamare apne ho ke bhi aisa dukh de jate hain ke hum soch bhi nahi sakte..aur jo dard us se milta hai woh bataya nahi jaa sakta.. Is mein Veera ke abortion ke documents hain, aur Sameer ka Bayaan...
Gayatri looked dumbfounded at the mention of Sameer... Did Prem know About Sameer?If yes then How much did he know? Did he know she was the one who had hired Sameer?
As if on cue,Prem just turned and looked at gayatri, and said,
"Maa, mujjey app se koi shikayat nahi hai, sirf apne app se shikayat hai ke shayad main hi acha beta nahi ban paya....Maa mujjey maaf ker dijye ga, magar, main uss ghar main nahi reh sakta jahan, meri Heer ko koi takleef pahunchye...Uss larki jo, jo duniya ka har gham mere liye khushi khushi seh leti hai...Har mushkil main mera saath deti ayi hai... Uss ki ankhon main aanssoo bardasht nahi hote...Mujjey maaf kerdijya Maa...
And then He turned back, put his arm around heer's shoulders and walked out of juneja mansion with heer's head on his shoulder...
SO how is it? i haven't read it again!! I m sorry if it sounds horrible!! I couldnt sleep and i just had to get this done so I d feel better!!!! Lemme know how you guys like it? Comments are most welcome?
Mahrukh
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