My First New FF-Discontinued!!!!!!!Note p.1

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Jasmine457

@Jasmine457

Voyager

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Posted: 16 years ago

Note*******************************

Hi everyone!I decided to discontinue this FF and this time I can't answer why I'm discontinuing this FF!Anyways PLEASE MODS DISCONTINUE THIS FF!!!!!!!!Thank you!😊

Edited by buttercup123 - 16 years ago

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Shruti

@Shruti11

Inactive

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Posted: 16 years ago

i liked it pls post next part soon

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poonam

@P.Kamaljit.Sean

Stunner

+ 6

Posted: 16 years ago

hey
that was really goood
i loved it

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Rupeshika Singh

@RupeshikaSingh

Voyager

Posted: 16 years ago

hey nice ff...plz post d other chapter soon...luvd it

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JCluvs srk

@JCluvs srk

Dazzler

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Posted: 16 years ago

very nice....u kno....jus a few days back i was thinking of starting a fanfic of my own like this....u kno....harshiti falling for each other on the sets of kis desh mein hai mera dil....lol...but i'm glad u started this....i wont be able to start my fic until i go on summer break which wont be in another month and a 1/2....lol...but i'm really looking forward to reading this fic....is it ok if i give u a tip?....when u write ur story...try to avoid writing in 1 long paragraph....it gets kinda confusing for me to read...i mean keep you dialogues seperate from ur discriptions....

for example:

I quickly grabbed my car keys and headed off to work, but before I could go I decided to call mom and take her blessings. The phone was picked on the first ring.

"Hello..." I said.

"Oh swetty it's you how are you beta, are you seetled? Did you eat enough? Is your health okay? Sweety why aren't you answering me?" mom spoke rapidly.

"Mom you didn't even let me talk." heer answered.

"Oh yes you could talk now." mom replied.

when u seperate the dialogues it makes it easier to read and less confusing on who is saying wat...its jus a word of advise...i dont mean to critisize...i jus thought it might be helpful...😊

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sakshi

@smiles_sakshi

Explorer

Posted: 16 years ago

lmao i luv ur ff

cant wait for the next :)😃

-pnjbikudixxo

-Sakshi----------------------------
Sakshum❤️

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appumanila

@appumanila

Explorer

Posted: 16 years ago

Wow this is amazing FF almost sounds real !!!!!!

Can't wait for next

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Shruti

@Shruti11

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 16 years ago

oh loved it pls post next part soon

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Sunshine

@SunShine_A

Trailblazer

+ 6

Posted: 16 years ago

hey gr8888 ff👏........thr r lot of prem-heer ff but nw we hv harshad-addiiti ff..............n u knw wht u won't believe tht i wondered may times tht thr shuld be ffs of harshad-additi n nw here u r with tht......a big hug to u🤗🤗 waiting fr next update.................hope to see it very soon aqsa⭐️

Edited by eternal.beauty - 16 years ago