[FF] Rab Ne Bana Di Jodi [Part 4, Pg 14] [21/7] - Page 9

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Posted: 16 years ago
#81

Originally posted by: -Ravjot-

=)

=) back atcha! 😆

Originally posted by: indiandoll89

My spot! 😛 And congrats! *hugs*

*edited*

It was short...I'll admit....but after reading Nonee's SS nothing can make me sad...except the throbbing pain in my hand, but that's okay!😆😳
😆 Nonee's SS...That was the Magical Interlude thingie right? 😆
I LOVE how Preet is simply just NOT interested! *jumps for joy* Now he can focus on Meher! 😃
WHEE yep now he can! 😆
Yes my comment sucked! 😔 but you know I love this FF! 😳😳😃 and so I will say Update soon! 😃 And (I shall def leave longer comments! 😛)
Your comment didn't suck Meera! *hug* I'm just happy you commented! 😳
Love you,
Love you too!
Meera😳

@ Radz: Waiting!

Originally posted by: nityatarlapally

hey..i just read ur ff and it's aweeeeeeeeeeeeeeesome!!!

the prem and heer "jaan" scenes were just awwwwwwwwww!*sighs*
the grape scenes..i can't believe that another woman was feeding the god of love(truly he is the god of love) grapes and heer didn't mind at all!!..i would be the complete opposite of her!..but still...prem and heer seem soo cute as the god and goddess of love!*jumping excitedly*
meher..seems to be like the exact replica of rani from TPTM..not that i mind..i loved rani in that movie!!
i'm guessing that meher is going to end up falling for preet just as rani does with saif!
add me to you pm list!..pretty plzzzz
and thanks in advance!!! ~nitya
Thank you so much! 😳 I'm glad you liked it! And as for the PM list, added! 😊

Originally posted by: egle

Preet's back!!! Yay!🤗🥳

WHOO yes he is!
So how come he's so disgruntled all the time? Aaand he isn't showing any interest in Ash and her bloody eyelashes ... which I am TOTALLY happy with 😃😃. I have nothing against Ash but when it comes to Meet, all bets are off!
😆 'Cause he's a workaholic! I dunno, that just seems to explain why...😆
About that Meher handshake...yeah... I tried it on my friends and they just said it was solid proof that I had lost my mind . I travelled back home and tried it on my sister and she goes - "Oh! So you did notice my manicure!" I can't win. 🤪
🤣Your sister takes the cake!
And funny you mention 'Schadenfreude', which I believe is German.... I found out this when I googled it :
Schadenfreude is defined as a "largely unanticipated delight in the suffering of another which is cognized as trivial and/or appropriate". Now...really.... schadenfreude? You're gonna have to rethink your words 😛
🤣 I realised that I confused Schadenfruede with Bildungsroman. 😳 Thank you for the meaning! 😆
~Cheers😎

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Posted: 16 years ago
#82

Originally posted by: noneeM

Oooohhhhh!!!! I didn't see this.....My spot. Gotta go have lunch....Will be backkkk:) Love:-Nonee

Seriously B, you need to go have your mind checked out.....Why did you think its a terrible part? You have so lost it. It's such an adorable part. It read so well. I could picture the whole thing as it happened and you know what, you got Ash so perfectly, that is totally what I imagine Ash as. Superb stuff. Although I wish you had put Meher in as well somewhere.....meet are so adorable
😆 I have no idea why I thought it was terrible...!
I just totally loved it Bhav. It was perfect. can't wait for meet to fall in love*sigh*
Me neither! 😆
You write so beautifully, I wish you would update every day (wait a minute, what about three times a day....after all, when we talk about sustenance for the body (aka food) we have to have that three times a day (an average) so why should it be different when it's sustenance for my Preet...oops, I meant Meet, of course, starved soul 😆[LOl][LOl] Don't blame me, I'm insane, remember!!!!!😆
You're trying to kill me, aren't you? 😛
Loads of big hugs:)
Big hugs back! 😳
Can't wait for the next part:)
The next part shall be up tomorrow! YAY!
Love:-Nonee

Originally posted by: shabo24

I just had an image of Ash trying to seduce Preet and him looking straight past her and seeing (imagining) Meher in a simple white churidar. ☺️
Oooh nice! 😆
See what your updates do to me? :) And Nonee - FANTASTIC logic. :)
Oh, sure, blame me! 😛 And dude, don't encourage her!
--shabz

Originally posted by: blackdaughter

quack!!! Make way, the.............. quacker is here!! =D

😆 MEOW!
Wat are you on about!?!?! It was short yes, but also simple and sweet!!! Very nicely done!! Yeah i don't really see the magic between Preet and Ash anymore!!! What were they even called!?!??! Prash, Presh, Aset!?!?!? 😆
Thank you! I have no idea what they were called, 'cause when I was there, there was no Preet-Ash!
I like Ash's confidance but at the same time feel bad for poor Preet!! Seems as if uska bad luck bhi kharab hai!!! 😆
Ahh I love that line! 🤣
Great update and i can't wait till the next part!!! Hope you update soon!!!
*hides* I'm sorry?
Love you! *hug*
Love you too! *hugs back*

Originally posted by: crosby

ooo thas exciting congrats

im starting uni in fall tooo
Thank you! 😳

Originally posted by: Aaliyah01

Hey Nice update, short sweet and simple.

Thank you!
Ive just finished my first year of uni and found it alot of fun.
I got two bits of advice when i started
1) Talk to as many people as possible cos you never know how many will end up in the same course as you
I've already started that, actually! 😳 When I went for the medical exam, I met about three others, but of course, they were all in different courses. 😆 No one in their right minds would want to do Lit!
2) Make sure you study something that you enjoy (a friend of mine studied Psycology but is starting the first year again and is now studying photography with film and media)
Oh wow cool! Don't worry, I've wanted to do Lit since I was a kid! 😳
Thank you so much for your tips! 😳

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Posted: 16 years ago
#83

Originally posted by: munam_13

Bhav sorrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrry *holding ears and gives a big chocolate bar* are you mad at me? *pouts*
*accepts the chocolate bar* I'm not mad at you sweetie! *hugs*
I am really bad at unreserving, I must stop that. but before that lemme comment. I loved the last 2 updates. Specially the Meher Ash scene.... Ash seems quite cheesy to me, so I am hoping to see a lot of cheesiness ahead. now something worth wait will be to see how the brain of the lady cupid works😉.. will be waiting😊 and again sorry
Cheesy, huh? Hmm...I shall work on that! 😃

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Posted: 16 years ago
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Eh, I'm not going to unreserve. *sticks out tongue* And you can't make me!

Love,
Radz

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Posted: 16 years ago
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Would it bother you if I said it doesn't matter? 😛😳 As it is I'm tired and you tell me what you think of it when you beta it for me...😆

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Posted: 16 years ago
#86

Hello! It's been a month, but here I am! Shifs, here you go!

-||-

Rab Ne Bana Di Jodi

Part Four

Meher glanced at the little digital clock that sat at her desk. It was 7.45p.m. and Preet still hadn't left. She tapped her fingers against the desk. There had to be some way to get Ashlesha and Preet together. There just had to.

No sooner had that thought passed, than the idea struck Meher. She smacked her forehead. She couldn't believe she hadn't thought of it sooner. She got up and hurried to Preet's office, knocking on the door.

"Preet Sir, aap ab tak nikaley nahin?" she asked, popping her head in.

Preet looked up at her, frowning. His brow relaxed a little as he saw that it was Meher. "Meher. Kaam pura nahin hua hai, toh main kaise jaaon?"

Meher frowned. "Lekin aapko 8.30 ke liye Ma Maison par dinner ke reservations hain!"

Preet frowned again. "Kya? Kiske saath?" He rifled through some of the papers on his desk, before remembering that he had handed all his Post-Its to Meher.

"Woh…Ashlesha Ma'am ke saath!" she answered, eyes wide and innocent.

Preet's frown deepened, changing into one of confusion. "Ashlesha ke saath? Lekin main Ash ke saath dinner par kyun jaaonga?"

Meher shrugged.

"Dikha do," Preet instructed her, holding his hand out for whatever proof Meher could give him.

"Ek minute," she said, and she withdrew from the door, closing it. "Ab main kya karoon?" she murmured, looking around with a slight panic. She returned to her desk and picked up Preet's organizer, flipping through the pages, hoping that somehow, inspiration would strike. And it did. She rolled her eyes. "Meher, tum bhi na…Sometimes you're really not the brightest tool in the shed," she chided herself.

She opened the organizer to the day's date, then waved her hand over it, smiling as the reservations wrote themselves in the book in her rotund handwriting. She returned to Preet's office and handed him the book.

Preet studied it. He looked up at Meher, still frowning. "Post-Its kahaan hai?" he asked.

"Woh toh maine kab se phaenk diye they!" she answered. "Jab maine organizer mein sab kuch transfer kar diya toh maine Post-Its phaenk liye!"

Preet sighed. "Ash ko bulaao."

Meher resisted the urge to make a face. Why couldn't he just accept that he had dinner plans with Ashlesha?

Instead, she put on a smile. "Ji, Sir."

Muttering to herself, she left the office and went in search of Ashlesha. She spotted her at her cubicle, turning off her computer.

"Ashlesha Ma'am, Preet Sir aapko bula rahey hain."

Ash nodded. "Usse kaho ki main do minute mein aa rahi hoon," she said without looking at Meher. She rummaged around in her bag with a frown on her face, one that disappeared as she pulled out a tube of lipstick. Meher watched, fascinated, as Ash held a mirror up to herself and applied the deep red colour to her lips.

Ash glanced at Meher, raising an eyebrow. "Jaao!"

Meher nodded and left, wondering why Ash had to use makeup when she was already so pretty.

She informed Preet that Ash was on her way and took a seat at her desk, shuffling around some papers. She smiled at Ash as the other woman breezed past her into Preet's office without even knocking. As the door closed, she hurried there, pressing her ear against it in an attempt to hear the conversation.

-||-

"Ash, hum dono ne aaj dinner ke plans banaye hai kya?" Preet asked, frowning slightly.

Ash stared at him, then burst out laughing. "Tum mazaak kar rahe ho, na? I've been trying to get you to go to dinner with me for years, aur ab tak tumne kabhi haan kiya hai kya?" she composed herself enough to say.

Preet rolled his eyes. "That's exactly what I was wondering," he muttered, turning away. "Lekin Meher keh rahi hai ki hume aaj Ma Maison mein dinner ke reservations hain." He glanced at his watch. "In thirty-five minutes."

"But I've got plans with the girls," Ash said, whisking out her Blackberry.

-||-

"Not if I have anything to do about it," Meher muttered to herself. She closed her eyes, murmuring something.

-||-

Right on cue her Blackberry beeped. She frowned as she read the text message. She wrinkled her nose.

"Wonderful," she groaned. "Jiya has food poisoning. Pura din fast food khati rehti hai, what else can she expect?" She looked up at Preet. "Well, I guess I'm free," she said with a shrug.

"Free or not, humne dinner ke liye plans nahin rakhe, na? That's all I want to know," Preet told her, hands in his pockets.

Rolling her eyes, Ashlesha checked her Blackberry.

-||-

"Can't You make things easier?" Meher hissed at the ceiling, hoping the god and goddess got her message. She prayed that her magic worked on smart phones.

-||-

Ash looked up at Preet in surprise. "According to this…we did have dinner plans for tonight!"

Preet stared at her incredulously. "We did?!"

-||-

Meher allowed herself a smug smile and a pat on the back.

-||-

Preet moved closer to Ash, taking her Blackberry from her even as she protested. He tapped random buttons. "Are you sure?!"

Ash snatched her Blackberry back, scowling at Preet. "Touch the Blackberry again and you're a dead man, Juneja. And the Blackberry is never wrong." She hugged the Blackberry. "I'm sorry, sweetie. I'll never let him manhandle you ever again, pakka!"

Preet rolled his eyes. "Apne Blackberry ko ek minute ke liye chodo, Ash," he said, earning himself another dirty look from her. "Does this mean we have to go for dinner together?"

Ash shrugged, carefully slipping her Blackberry back into her purse. "But you're paying."

Preet sighed. "Chalo."

-||-

Meher raced back to her seat as Preet and Ash emerged from the office.

Preet paused at her desk. She looked up at him, smiling. He cleared his throat.

"Meher, tum bhi ab ghar jaao," he told her.

Meher nodded. "Ji, sir."

As she stood up, she frowned. This was her first day on Earth. She didn't have a house.

Now what? she wondered.

-|end of chapter four|-

Hmm! What shall Meher do now? Anybody wants to offer to be Meher's roommate? 😃😳😆

Love,

Bhav (:

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Posted: 16 years ago
#87
You already know I loved it. And you know what I think about Meher's roommate no? I mentioned it to you right?

And my MSN is screwed. *pouts*

Love,
Radz

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Posted: 16 years ago
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Awesome update Bhav! Meher is so adoorable, poor thing doesn't have a house. It took her a while to realise she has magic powers didn't it? 😆 Poor thing, it was such an effort to convince the two that they had reservations but it all worked out =) Loved the update. Can't wait to read the next part =)
Posted: 16 years ago
#89
Meher's roommate? Either make it someone really quiet so Meher can scare them (🤣) or someone really...wild and stupid I guess to go along with her plans. 😆

I loveeeeeed it! Meher's thoughts and frustration at the gods above was really funny and than Ashlesha. Woah. Attitude problem no?

--shabz
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Posted: 16 years ago
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my spot! 😳

*edited*

Meher has a roommate? That would be HIGHLY amusing! 😆😳

But....😛 I have to say the way Meher magically got them to go out together was fab! 😳😛 And ohh ohhh I love Ash about her Blackberry!! 😊 *pouts* I want one! 😳 Anyways....I'm like that about my phone too!😆

I can't wait to see what's going to happen next1 😃

Love you,

Meera😳
Edited by indiandoll89 - 16 years ago

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