FF: Jab Dil Miley (Chp. 1 Pg. 1) 4/29

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--Anna--

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Posted: 16 years ago

#11

hey garima,

lovely concept!! loved Heer and her sarcasm... continue soon

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-Garima-

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Posted: 16 years ago

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Originally posted by: @nup@m@
hey garima,

lovely concept!! loved Heer and her sarcasm... continue soon

Anupama

Heyy Anu!! Thank you so much!! lol yeah I like Heer's sarcasm too 😆 I'll update soon! tc!

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Mariam Butt

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Posted: 16 years ago

#13

hey i love the story a lot.. i agree with u all...
u did a great job...aw too cute ..
write more okay.......... 👏

Edited by msb988 - 16 years ago

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tina

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Posted: 16 years ago

#14

Jhansi ki Rani, it was hilarious i could just imagine the reaction of heer at that point...

well Preet is just life saver for evry1... even in the show i jus want to watch the show bcz of his lil tricks.. ok it was awsomely written and i cnat wait how the track of premeer gonna go.. plz add me to ur pm list...

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-Garima-

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Posted: 16 years ago

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Originally posted by: msb988
hey i love the story a lot.. i agree with u all...
u did a great job...aw too cute ..
write more okay.......... 👏

Aww! Thank you so much!! 😳😳 Ur so sweet! 🤗 I will definitely write more!! 😃

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-Garima-

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Posted: 16 years ago

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Originally posted by: Sunehari*Rose
Jhansi ki Rani, it was hilarious i could just imagine the reaction of heer at that point...LOL! Thank you!! Yeah I kinda stole that dialogue from K3G! 😉😆

well Preet is just life saver for evry1... even in the show i jus want to watch the show bcz of his lil tricks.. ok it was awsomely written and i cnat wait how the track of premeer gonna go.. plz add me to ur pm list...

Haha!! yeah Preet is definitely a big life saver! I love him! 😆 Aww Thank you so much Tina!!! Yupp I'll surely add you to the PM list! 😳😃 Thanks for commenting! 😳

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tina

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Posted: 16 years ago

#17

Originally posted by: Garima93

awwwww u r welcome😳

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vrinda16

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Posted: 16 years ago

#18

Hai,

Just read part 1.So, all are doctors? Wow, a dil mill gaye style .

The first part was cute especially, "Aur Main jhansi ki rani"😆😆😆

Prem has already nicknamed his Heer, hasn't he? "Chashmish" (That reminds me of Miley Jab Hum Tum)

Looking forward for future updates.

And do add me to ur PM list , if possible,plzzzzzz.

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-Garima-

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Posted: 16 years ago

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Originally posted by: vrinda16
Hai, Hi Vrinda! 😃

Just read part 1.So, all are doctors? Wow, a dil mill gaye style . Yupp! They're all doctors,like in DMG, but the story's gonna be different 😉

The first part was cute especially, "Aur Main jhansi ki rani"😆😆😆 LOL! yeah I like that part too! Glad to know it make u laugh!😆😆

Prem has already nicknamed his Heer, hasn't he? "Chashmish" (That reminds me of Miley Jab Hum Tum) Yes he has, oh yeah MJHT, I totally forgot about that, I didn't know it resembled to it..hehe😆

Looking forward for future updates. I hope you'll enjoy them too! 😳

And do add me to ur PM list , if possible,plzzzzzz. Yes definitely it's possible to put u on the PM list, u are now added! 😃 Thank you so much for the lovely comment Vrinda!😳

Vrinda

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Nikita

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Posted: 16 years ago

#20

Hey!!

Hai Rabba!!!*puts hand on heart*.. Garima??? Gosh kya deemag hai!!! very nice concept...👏👏

Dr.Heer, Dr.Meher, Dr.Preet...and oh oh oh oh ....Dr. Prem!!! i could imagine them as Doctors..especially the last 2..☺️

Amazing 1st part yaar!! again loving Heer's sarcasm!!! 😆

hmmmm...so i love lifesaver Preet. and oooooMeher is a cute friend..it seems as if they share alot with eachother, adn are really close..awwww..so cute*piches Heer, Meher, and Preet's cheeks*

i had a flashback moment...like when in Kabhi Khushi Kabhi Gham Kajol is all 'aur main jhansi ki rai'.. and then here Heer is like that..' aur main jhansi ki rani' , nice one Garima..loved it totally..

wait!!! wait...wait...wait..another flashback..*flashback*..just like in Kal Ho Naa Ho, when Shahrukh says 'Chashmish' to Preity..*flashback ends*..lol😆

alrite i kinda went a bit ahead..now about this Dr.Sharma..well obviously she is a toughy..now isnt she??lol. but i guess u got Preet to handle that no?lol kinda reminds me of my Math teacher..rofl!!! 🤣

haila!!! im gonna love this FF just like ur other one!!! i cant wait..but do take ur time on posting as exams,and School come first..

back to the update...( i noe im jumping in and out , everything is all jumbled but i hope u wont be confused).lol😆😃

Prem already looking..sry staring at Heer....hmmm yeh bechara tho phele nazar mein hi..gaye kaam se..lol which reaminds me of a song...Prem sings:.'pheli nazar mein aisa jadoo hai kiya..tera ban bahita hai meraa gia..'..okay ill stop..lol, or atleast il try..lol😆😆😆

sooooo Once again.. amazing superb, mindblowing beginning!! and do update wen u get a chance..

sooo how is NJ? whats the weather like?..lol its starting to get better here..not in the minuses anymore..lol.

i cant leave a comment too loong, as i still have to go comment a few more FF's, and i have to study for the anatomy of the Kidney... .so u take care till then..hopefully we will chat later..byeeeee

~nikki

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already lovin PREM, and PREET!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! lol, once again takecare...

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oops, i fogot to say plzzzzzzzzzzzzzz add me on the PM list!!!

byeeeee

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Edited by ~nikki1992~ - 16 years ago