Creatives -A simple request regarding few dialogs

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Posted: 16 years ago
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Actually i am observing that since the time new creatives scriptwriter has changed the dialogs and scenes are getting more weird .I didnot liked the dialog atall the way heer converyed in yesterday's April 15th epsiode.
Even Husband and wife would not have said this after having year of relationship.
It did not suited the Character Heer.Dialogs should be written keeping in mind of Character sketch.Heer is shy , quite , introvert small town girl not the modern girl.Her upbrining was totally diff .She did had emotions , passions and love for Prem since childhood.Agreed that she has gone through so much of turbulence in her life that is more than enough to change one's personality.Heer should be changed but that should be on positive side.She should stand up , be independent,Bold enough to face the external world , should be aware enough of world' s functioning.She should become diplomatic But not to her family whom she loves.Changes doesnot make any person to go beyond her basics.I mean , change cannot make her open enough to show her desperation for having physical bonding.Right now for her prem being with her should be more than enough.Love does involves such desires but these desires can be expressed without saying such thing.Come , when prem and heer are together they can get cosy or loose themselves without needed to express verbally.
We all veiwers are simply aghast with the way cheapness rather than soberness in love is creeping slowly.earlier also we had so many romantic scenes between prem and heer but they were so innocent and full of love and passion.THATs our PREM and HEER.We are missng them.I thank you for uniting prem and heer but we REQUEST YOU TO BRING OUR SHY HEER AND CALM PREM.WE REALLY DON'T WANT SMIRKING HEER AND GS PREM.WE ACCEPT NAUGHTY PREM.
AGAIN
My ONLY SUGGESTIONS TO DIALOG AND SCRIPT WRITERS IS: PLEASE MAINTATIN DECENCY AND DON"T GIVE WEIRD DIALOGS TO PREM AND HEER ATLEAST.SEEING THE CHARACTERS THEY CAN NEVER GO AHEAD LIKE THIS.IF YOU would have shown that prem had surprise plan for heer on baishakhi and then without saying any thing they get more close and be together for the life would have been much much powerful and lovable.Don't Show them desperate for these things...They can never be desperate as they have been shown through out that they have full control on themselves.Now how come suddenly just because prem came back everything changes.
THANKS AND REGARDS
SVETALANA
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Posted: 16 years ago
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i dont think it was cheap at all, in fact it was very nicely done.....i mean theyre married, they should at leastthins much honestly....and the comfort level....please if anything they made it seem more realistic.....
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Posted: 16 years ago
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I agree with you sweta...I think the new creatives don't understand what premeer mean to us, they mean purity, they gave us a new definition of love, of being together, of being one.....a couple that does not need dialogues to prove a point......this is something creatives and dialogue writers need to understand.

@Nandi...how many wives in india talk to their husbands so openly abt this thing even if married for years and years and having done the act countless times? The shyness remains there no matter what...but this is just my opinion you don't have to agree ofcourse

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Posted: 16 years ago
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I completely agree wid wht u hav written.Prem and heer are becoming more vocal these days which is not sitting well wid me.Dialogues destroy the beauty of certain scenes and here they r penning down some cheap stuff which is not at all working for me.They could hav written the dialogues more better.I dont know who the hell is writing but plzzzzzzzzzzz check wht u r writing and whether audience wud like them or not.Whtever stuff u made heer utter earlier can be forgivable but now u r talking abt THE PREM and THE HEER for whom we hav been waiting for a long time plzzzzzzzzzzzz its my sincere request.
Thnx for this post

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Posted: 16 years ago
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Yea lucky earlier too they made heer say some really cheap stuff I was hardly able to over look it thinking she was on a mission to reveal prem's identity but now??? Please creatives and dialogue writers have mercy on us we remained loyal to the show for six long months and ignored the stupidest gs track ever.....only because we had hope that in the end we would get back our perfect prem and his perfect heer please please please have mercy on us. Human nerves can only take torture to a certain extent. Stop turning prem into GS and stop turning heer so cheap by giving her cheap dialogues
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Thank u for this Svetlana! I couldn't have written better about this.

Well I have written ample number of times on this so won't pen down again. U just voiced my feelings perfectly to the core.
Creatives please give us back the essence & soul of our Premeer with whom we fell in love with, we got attracted to! This couple is not our Prem & Heer, they r some1 we can't relate or connect to, they simply have the faces of Premeer & their names that's all.
Where is that shy reserve Heer we knew? Who is this girl with all smirks & an all knowing attitude with a desperation?
Where is that serene calm sober Prem? We don't want a GS again in form of Prem.
So please give us back our Premeer!
No matter how long a couple is married & matures & opens up to each other still I think they don't talk about such personal moments so openly looking forward to it desperately. It ought to be felt not talked about & it takes place naturally with romance & can't be planned ahead like that! Its just my notion, that's all.
Anyway thanks for the post Svetlana!
Lana.
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Posted: 16 years ago
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@ Nadia and Lana: Even i was thinking it.I am married for past 4 years now but i never showed such desperation to my husband either.when two people are in relationship it does not need to be conveyed .it always begin with romance and love.These days particularly last 3 episodes i am not able to differentaite between prem -heer and rest of the couples like harman -maya, veera-nihal.
What creatives need to understand that if you make them vocal they will be like other BT couple.How will we be able to differentiate them with rest iof the couples in the show.
Beauty of their relationship remains in being and showing them non vocal not outspoken.
Creatives mend your ways of handling things specially with prem and heer.
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Posted: 16 years ago
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agreed! Not deperate..but natural and sweet!
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: lghosh

Thank u for this Svetlana! I couldn't have written better about this.

Well I have written ample number of times on this so won't pen down again. U just voiced my feelings perfectly to the core.
Creatives please give us back the essence & soul of our Premeer with whom we fell in love with, we got attracted to! This couple is not our Prem & Heer, they r some1 we can't relate or connect to, they simply have the faces of Premeer & their names that's all.
Where is that shy reserve Heer we knew? Who is this girl with all smirks & an all knowing attitude with a desperation?
Where is that serene calm sober Prem? We don't want a GS again in form of Prem.
So please give us back our Premeer!
No matter how long a couple is married & matures & opens up to each other still I think they don't talk about such personal moments so openly looking forward to it desperately. It ought to be felt not talked about & it takes place naturally with romance & can't be planned ahead like that! Its just my notion, that's all.
Anyway thanks for the post Svetlana!
Lana.




thank u sveta n lana.... i completely agree wid wat u've said....
n those dilouges r simply not meant for some1 like prem n heer... i sincerely wish dilouge writers keep da essence of premeer in mind n write lines.... we don't want to associate sumthing cheap wid premeer ever!!! n the new creative defo needs to keep re-watching old epi's..... sumtimes she gets it right n most of the time is failing dealing wid da chars!!!
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: Soaps1

I agree with you sweta...I think the new creatives don't understand what premeer mean to us, they mean purity, they gave us a new definition of love, of being together, of being one.....a couple that does not need dialogues to prove a point......this is something creatives and dialogue writers need to understand.

@Nandi...how many wives in india talk to their husbands so openly abt this thing even if married for years and years and having done the act countless times? The shyness remains there no matter what...but this is just my opinion you don't have to agree ofcourse

Yeppppp...I totally second that......

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