PremHeer || Main Koi Aisa Geet Gaoon (a oneshot) - Page 2

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Posted: 16 years ago
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that was very interesting 😊

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Posted: 16 years ago
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@ ash08, Bul3, purplestar22, Intellienough: Thank you!

Originally posted by: sourpuss

Here I am again! (BTW is your phone off or something? I messaged you twice, one of them asking if you wanted to see a movie which starts in like ten minutes...😵) Yeah, I don't know why I didn't get the messages.. 😆

This one was so sweet. Prem didn't really forget did he? He just pretended that he did? Awww! I totally like the part where she's tossing his things down! Totally hilarious, a little reminiscent of the video by some chick whose name I can't remember that if I remember correctly starred Drew Fuller? Jeniffer Love Hewitt? I dunno. You get what I mean. It was Lindsey Lohan genius. And *fangirl giggle* Drew Fuller. He's in Army Wives you know? He looks so good. 😳 Thanks for the comments and compliments!
Love, love you too!
Bhav (:

Originally posted by: shabo24

🤣

I love pregnant stories. They so make my day! Was it only coincidence I have one planned for Meet? =] Oooh, cannot wait for that now!

Loved it so much, could imagien it completly, with Heer flying off the handle and then Preet bringing her back to earth. ☺️ Thanks, and I think you mean Prem. 😆 You have Preet on the brain. 😆

Great! Thanks sweetie!

--shabz

@ Ravzie: I know, cannot wait to see what you have to say!
Love,
Radz
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: indiandoll89

I have to reserve this one! 😳

Okay first of all...love the song, and iooooooooooo she's pregnant!! 😃 YAY!😳😳😳 Makes me happy, their kid....*snaps out of it* Uhem...back to the one shot.. 😆 Thank you! I think I know why you love the song. 😉😆

The lack of dialogues adds to the moments completely, and the way you described the entire scenerio!!!!👏 Aw, thanks so much! 😃 (You know, the honesty thing works both ways. 😆)

Awwww she threw his stuff down?😲😆😆 Poor Prem!😳 But can I die and go to heaven? No? Too bad!😆Yup, she's hormonal and angry. 😉😆 I had fun writing it.

What a brilliant anniversary idea Radz? Totally phroolworthy and completely phroozing!😳 Aw thank you! If you're using words from the PHictionary, you must have really enjoyed it!

There was no way Mr. Prem Juneja could EVER....EVER...EVER forget his anniversay!😳😳😳 *sigh* Thank you! There is no way that could happen. He's Prem!

Absolutely loved it, write more fluff soon! 😃Not yet. Though I think you'd be happy with Tuesday's update for CC. 😉 My next shot is a tragic one. 😆

Love you loads, love you too!

Meera😳

Originally posted by: blackdaughter

tango! =)

Omg, heer is scary when she is angry!!! *hiding behind my bed in fear* 😉😆 Awww, she thought he forgot their anniversary and to top it of she is pregnant!!!! Way to go to commit suicide Premu!!!! 🤣Yups. I had so much fun writing this. And aw don't worry, she's only mad at Prem. Unless you interfere. 😆
Shame on the people in the house getting enjoyement on Prem's expense (It's a whole different matter that i'm laughing as well)!!!!!! 😉😆 Yup, they are just like us no? 😆
I knew Prem would never forget their marriage anniversary, prem is to perfect for that *sigh, of in my dream land*!!!!!! *looks up at Maddy floating in her dream world* Come back to Earth! He's Heer's and only Heer's. 😆 Here anyways.
I could totally picture a hug like that, where they pour all their love in!!!! *doing tha nazar na lage gesture* Aw, so you liked? 😳
Nice one-shot and hope you write more!!!! *hug* *hugs back* Thanks sweetie! I shall, soon.

@ nav555: Thank you!
Love,
Radz
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Guess who finally unreserved 😆
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I know 😆 Took me more than a month 😆
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Originally posted by: -Ravjot-

OMG one of my fav songs!! That's kinda why I wrote it. You mentioned it once. 😆

Reserved😎
Me loved it! I could imagine it in my head and it cracked me up. The whole Prem trying to apologize and her not listening was awesome. I knew he didn't forget! It's Prem! He can't forget their anniversary😆 I loved the way you wrote it. It was so sweet =) 😆 Thank you! I know, he is THE Prem, how to forget such a thing? I'm glad you enjoyed it!
And I'll have you know, because of this, I have the song stuck in my head now. Did I tell you how I used to sing it to annoy one of my friends?😆 Awesome! Mission accomplished. 😆 Ooh, really? Do tell.

Love,
Radz

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Posted: 16 years ago
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Yeah, I noticed. Heh. Only you can do that. Hehe.

Love,
Radz

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Posted: 16 years ago
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I know eh? I learned it from you when I had a hard time trying to get you to update 😆 Oh and my friend didn't like the song so everytime I saw her, I would start singing it and she'd get mad 😆
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Oi, nice of you to blame it on me.

Smart! How can anyone not like this son? It's such a cute one. So sweet.

Love,
Radz

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Posted: 16 years ago
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How about I sing a line everytime I comment on your oneshots then? 😆

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