NEW FF MANNANT UPDT Part 7 Pg8 (APRIL 30th) - Page 4

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Posted: 16 years ago
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^ lol..fine..*hugs back* only cause u asked so nicely..well u see..when u reply there is that Email notify me of replies button..it automatically goes for me..so i just leave it there and i'm always on msn..for school work...*gr...so many group projects..anyways😆 when ever there is a new post, an e-mail gets sent to mi account..easy as that1! lol..wow i sound like a stalker..i'm Not *pouts..it happpens byitself..not complaining though!! Ps..people will reply soon, their probably just too lazy atm...don;t worry i don't have many people reply to mine too..its funny really! But me loves ur FF!😳 There are a lot of silent readers here..come on guys..make tina feel better!!!
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: urworstnitemare

^ lol..fine..*hugs back* only cause u asked so nicely..well u see..when u reply there is that Email notify me of replies button..it automatically goes for me..so i just leave it there and i'm always on msn..for school work...*gr...so many group projects..anyways😆 when ever there is a new post, an e-mail gets sent to mi account..easy as that1! lol..wow i sound like a stalker..i'm Not *pouts..it happpens byitself..not complaining though!! Ps..people will reply soon, their probably just too lazy atm...don;t worry i don't have many people reply to mine too..its funny really! But me loves ur FF!😳 There are a lot of silent readers here..come on guys..make tina feel better!!!

awwwwwwwwww thanks hun....hopefully i will get more replies..... thanx for ur help dat was easy.....i find myself really silly now😆...
hugs for u guyz🤗
luv
tina
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Awesome update continue soon and if you can please PM me!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Posted: 16 years ago
#34
Finally updated my comment! *holding my ears in apology*!!!!!! =(
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Posted: 16 years ago
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hey
awesum super update
wakey wakey lol
loved it toooo gooood
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Posted: 16 years ago
#36

thanks alot guyz for ur response.... well i m glad there are more ppl now. sorry for the delay as i was busy wid studies and job.... but here is the next par anyway😳😳😳

"I am telling u its this way."

"no sir, its this way"

"no, this way.. I m older than u should listen to me."

" no, its dis way, u always get us lost."

"enough of you two" said exhausted who was tired of moving his head from right two left in order to follow two confused drivers….

"PB, please help me these to nutheads are driving me insane." Said preet pleading his brother…

"calm down my preetu, first of all take a seat a have coke and take a chill pill.. look around this place is like the one in DDLJ. The yellow flowers the sweet air. So calm so quiet." Said prem closing his eyes feeling the cool breeze against his face……

" wah wah wah kya hasin nazara hai…. Kya phool hain , kya hawa and kya gadiyann hain yahan ki ? the cars like to broke down in middle of nowhere….. and the amazing thing is that even driver do not the way at all." Saying this frustrated Preet sat on the bonnet and took a sip from his bottle of coke…..

"Beeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeep beeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee." Suddenly a lil horn strike preet's ears. "arre hatto, yahan se hatto.. hey move….." a girl yelled whose face was covedred with her duppata up till her nose..

One of drivers decided to come stand in the middle of the road in order to stop the lady on lil pink active so he can findi the right way out….

" hey stop, suniye please" said the driver waving his both hands up in the air….

"eh , eh , eh, marne ka shonk hai to kissi truck ke saamne jaakar maro.. meri activa k saamne apka kuch nai hone waala…." Said the girl who was hurry and frustrated and trying to leave asap.

" madam please help us actually we are tryin to find our way out and trying to see if we can find a garage here to fix our car…." Said the man pleading.

" uffffo. Kya musibat hai? Kya hua apki car ko…." The girl asked annoyingly.

" ji , wohh ….. ek to petrol khtam ho gyaa hai or dusra engine ki ek wire kharab ho gayi jo kissi garage se hi mill sakti hai." Explained the driver…

" ok listen I m goin to market and if u want u can send some1 wid me to get your stuff . I think there is a garage on my way to the market." Said the girl calming her self…

" ok give me five mins.. I will see if my partner would let me go." Said the driver winking @ the gurl…..

" hey mister I m trying to help u here. Not here to play these winking sessions wid u…I m leaving . I m not goin to go wid you." Said the girl angrily.

" so may be I can go wid you" said preet after eh saw some1 arguing wid the Driver….

" ummm if you don't mind maam, actually we need you help deseperatly." Said Preet trying to imagine the face behind the dupatta.

" gosh she has the beautiful pairs of eyes ever." Preet smiled on this thought of his…

" yes beta if u could help us dat would be great" said lalit pleadingly." Ur aunty here is not really a big fan of heat. So it will be a gr8 favor u will be doing for us beta."

The girl coudnt say no to pleading old man and she gave a quick look to gaya3 who was really not looking gud at all.

" umm is she fine? u noe wat I will give him ride and also I will fetch some medicines and cold water for aunty if u like." Said the girl blinking her eyes several time.

" dat would be gr8 hun… Preet tu ja iske saath or dekh tang mat karma. She is nice lil girl who is helping us in this hard time… okkk?" said lalit.

" ji Bauji" preet said smiling @ the way she blinked those eyes several time.

" ok ab jaldi karo g app. I m getting late as I need to get something home ASAP." Said the girl to Preet who was still trying to figure out a way to see the face…

" sure lets go" saying this Preet sat on the back seat of Pink Activa and the girl drove fo too the main road…

It was awfully quiet ride to the market and preet wanted to start a conversation so bad with the girl.

" so. Its ur first visit to Amabala?" asked the girl which ofcourse shocked Preet. But handling himself well he answered." Its our first visit to India..."

" ahhhhhhhh, so where u from?" the girl got more curious…

" umm Canada, my family wanted to come here for sometime so we did. And I must say I like it very much" said preet

" so u mean to say dat its ur first time in India?" asked confused Girl….

"yep it is, BTW I m …." Before Preet could finish his sentence.

" Preet.. I know.. I found out wen ur bauji were telling u to take ride to market wid me. He seems nice." Said the girl..

" ummm thanks, he is pretty nice but I luv to bug him all the time.BTW Wats ur name?" suddenly he jolted to front wen th gurl hit the brakes.

" we have reached the destination… please proceed with causations" giggled the gurl… while Preet got off from his seat.

" I m mehar" said the girl extendin her hand forward….which Preet took delighlty.

"And u like to help ppl undercover?" said preet poiting at her duppatta…

" oh this well u noe its really polluted here so while I m driving I put this on my nose in order to save my self." Said mehar while taking off her duppatta from her face…..

"Wow is she ever the most beautiful young lady ever I have seen" thought pret while observing her beautiful face…

"ahem ahem…r u here?" said meher waving her hand in front of Preet's eyes and snapped in order to bring him back to reality…

" ummm sorry I was just ummm." Said preet cursing himself in his mind about his reaction.

" ok so we will meet here in 15 min since I have to get back home b4 sunset. So u get watevr u want. Ok ?" mehar asked and Preet nodded in reponse…..

Well dat all for now.. I noe its ntn much but I will post another part 2morow for sure…. Plz do comment…

Luv

Tina

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Posted: 16 years ago
#37
hey another fab update keep up da gud wrk
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Posted: 16 years ago
#38
hi, this is gettin interesting by the updates lol
btw can u add me to ur pm list?
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Hey,
First thing first *hug*!!!!!! 😆, i read the convo between you and Avi and she is right, we do have cameras installed everywhere!!!! Muhahahahaha!!!!!! 😆😳
Anyways, great update yaar, i loved it!!!! It was like a reverse use of Namastey London!!!! Brilliantly written!!!!!! 👏 *hands over a cookie in reward* That's what Avi would do!!!!! 😆
Awww, Preet is totally lattu over Meher already!!! 😆 Loved how Meher is kinda into her own stuff but as soon as Lallu talks to her she becomes all serious and worried for G-mom!!!!! Very sweet!!!! *thumbs up*
I am sooo curious to see Premeer's first meeting!!!!! I can totally imagine Lallu and Balraaj when they meet!!!!!
Great update and eagerly waiting for the next part!!! *hug* 😊
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Posted: 16 years ago
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just read ur ff and it is awesome cont soon plz!!!!!!👏

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