*Premeer FF* To Love & Honor**p1B pg6 updt 4/28

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@DrModel

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Posted: 16 years ago

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@ meera--will wait for ur comment..hehe..

@purplestar---thanks...hope u like the coming parts and do keep commenting...

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@butterfly_16

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Posted: 16 years ago

#22

I love this ff!!! It's going to have a place in my favorites with Destiny and Mannat!!! I'm already addicted to it. Pls continue!! 👏👍🏼👏

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@DrModel

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Posted: 16 years ago

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Originally posted by: butterfly_16
I love this ff!!!thank you😳 It's going to have a place in my favorites with Destiny and Mannat!!!awww i m glad to hear that😃😃 I'm already addicted to it. Pls continue!! 👏👍🏼👏
thanks will continue soon😊

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tina

@kvashishat

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Posted: 16 years ago

#24

reallyu nice part cant wait for more...............

plz cont soon

lots of luv

tina

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@DrModel

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Posted: 16 years ago

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Originally posted by: Sunehari*Rose
reallyu nice part cant wait for more...............

plz cont soon

lots of luv

tina

thanks tina, will try and update soon😊😊

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@blackdaughter

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Posted: 16 years ago

#26

Salsa!!! 😉 Don't worry, you'll get used to my bizzare ways of reserving soon!! 😆 Will comment tomorrow!!

It's a great story so far!!! You have captured Prem's emotions in the first part really really well!!! His pain, frustration, anger!!!!! *thumbs up* 👏 I really liked the flashback!!!!

It's so perfect how Heer captured Prem's attention so easily!!!! Our Heer always has that effect on Prem!!!!! 😉😆

Will you be continiuing in flashbacks and switching or what!?!??! By the way, OMG Heer was shot in the stomach!!!!! Why did anyone want to hurt Prem in the first place!?!?!?!? 😕😭 I'm so sad, they lost their baby!!!!!! 😭

Great story, please update soon!!!!

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Meera

@indiandoll89

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Posted: 16 years ago

#27

No need to wait now S! 😃

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PH4EVR

@PH4EVR

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Posted: 16 years ago

#28

Hello S

i just read your FF and im lovin it already please continue its wonderfully written i like the suspense and story line and the way your taking it forward. please continue soon.

and thanks for sharing a wonderful FF with all of us :D

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@DrModel

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Posted: 16 years ago

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Originally posted by: indiandoll89
my spot! 😃

*unreserved* ok so i m a dunderhead--i kept thinking you would reply on the post on pg 4 and then realised--oh wait maybe her reply is on her reserved post😆😆

Teehee, I loved the way you showed Prem totally bowled over by Heer a week after he's seen her, such a Prem thing!😆😳😳lolll really?I hoped to get that effect...

Okay that whole terrace meeting was just like super sweet, because despite not knowing each other that connection was beautiful!😃 the way you wrote it, was just really well written!👏👏👏thanks-since they just met--there could be no hugs but he had to reach out😳

I love all the cute moments you've added here S! 😃aww thanks They're all so super romantic, that it physically pains me to realize what he must be going through in the present! 😔 yes it makes me sad as well when i write allll those sad bits..poor guy, but a lot of stuff will happen that is sweet to lead upto their love for each other so his present pain is rather unbearable😭

Awww Go Prem! 😃 Such a laadla beta na? 😃yes he is awesome, The way you've described his entire personality is awesome and the relationship with G mom and Lalit, that I'm very😕 about everything else!😆😆yes yes i know...😆😆

This line totally got me though!😳 " if she took care of him like this, he'd get used to it. "😳 so cute!😆😆awww😳

Awww she wasn't asleep? That's cute!😉😃well she was resting her eyes And awww I love the way you wrote her hesitations, on how he might feel about marrying her! 😛aww well i guess she needs to know that they both want to be in this together..she may ask him about this soon?

Continue soon S!will do