FF: Jinxed IMP. Note on Page 18 =D - Page 13

Originally posted by: sanyoprithviraj

welcome back and a very awaited update
Aww, thanks bud!!! Thats so sweet of you!
lets c how heer wud deal with prem*giggles, yeah let's see.😛
waise does prem know abt heer and his marriage?seems like he doesUh, I don't know about that, maybe I should make him be unaware too? *ponders, I really have no clue😳 W.e it is though, I hope u'll like it! *hugs, thanks for commenting!😳

Originally posted by: shanu333

Avu Wavuuuu! 😃
Shivu, Wivuuu!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!😛
Look who's here 😛😆
I can't see you genious😆, but I think it may be..hmm..hard one..you? Shivani?🤓
I finally read Part 8...
haha! We're a tad bit slow eh?😛
Ooh... I love the song Ringa Ringa 😆
Me too!! I have NO idea what the person is singing but the song is darn catchy!
Haha... so Teji and Gayu are planning this huh?... Smart budhis i must say 😆
😆smart budhi's..good one!🤣 oh how'd ur exam go btw?
Prem playing football 😍 and that to with Preet? 😍 *goes off to dreamland*
😳😳😳I know! 😳😳 I couldn't stop giggling when I thought about it so didn't even bother trying to describe them 'playing' haha😆
okay, I'll go read part 9... after i finish dreaming..
You dream for a long time eh? just saying😛 Thanks for commenting though!
tah-tah
-Shivu Wivu *hugs! byes!!! -Avu Wavu!😳

Originally posted by: shanu333

* runs back in from dreamy land* 😍
Run as on a road? lol..u HAVE to tell me what road this is😆 I usually just get there and come back without any effort at all
hmm... I was actually the first one to reserve on this 😛 we're on the same line agen! 😆
*Sigh...I know😛
Hahaha! OMG! 🤣 Heer wants Teji to be fatter! 🤣 Just so that she can have a good pillow! 🤣🤣 Heer's just like my sis! =.= 😆
Haha..thats funny🤣🤣🤣
But that was so sweet... the way u described Heer telling Teji everything... so sweet 😳
They have a strong bond, what can I say?😳
🤣🤣 Smart budhis sending emails?! 😲 After watching the show, it's hard to imagine G3 and Teji doing that! 😆 But this is so cool 😎Yep, their cool Budhi's. lol..after like 20 years in Canada I think they should be able to use the internet...wait..i'm wrong, not true, scratch that😆

aww... Heer feels cheated?! I cnt wait to see how this unfolds!... update soon :Dyeah, I'm gonna update right this minute, two parts if I can.😃 Thanks for commenting Shivu!!! Oh and I added ur name in the next part just cause I felt like it😆, hope u don't mind😳 I shall edit it and take it out if u do...

Heer shook her head, trying to knock out all the self-pity thoughts out of her head. With a blink of an eye, Heer's eyes transformed completely, the rage evident, the determination shining through, the hurt, piercing. Two can play at this game!

~~A week later at school~~

Look at them; it's as if there both stuck to him by the hip; Meher on the left and Preet on the right.

Every time she tried to get even remotely close to Prem, Meher or Preet would show up and start having a full on fledged conversation with him. It was as if a new star had just entered this school, he was a celebrity, not being alone for even a second. Heer sighed, and turned away after what felt like ages of her staring at them. She quickly turned around to go and join her friends and hopefully enjoy her lunch if it was even remotely possible.

Don't they EVER get tired of talking? Yap yap yap, they have been bickering all day about god knows what. Heer rolled her eyes as she imitated Meher and them as she walked down the numerous hallways.

Seriously, all I need is one minute, that's it, just one minute with him ALONE, is that too much to ask? She thought while staring at the ceiling above, having her divine moment and then instantly wrinkled up her nose in disgust at seeing a spider web. When she finally reached her destination, Heer looked down to find her two friends sitting, talking to each other. She smiled at them, collapsing on the ground. She took out her Peanut butter and jely sandwich and pouted, instantly going off to la-la land again.

"Ah you funny duckling!" Shivani said out loud all of a sudden, finally taking a break from trying to make a conversation with Priya, who was engrossed in her math book. She giggled while smacking Heer, who in return almost jumped where she sat.

"What? What?" Heer almost yelled out, shocked, looking around the hallway, expecting a tsunami to come rushing her way.

"Nothing, I just felt like doing that." Shivani smiled. Heer rolled her eyes and after a moment added, "Thanks for tagging another picture of our shoes on facebook by the way."

"My shoes are prettier!" Shivani said while letting out a giggle at which Heer let out a mocked pout. "Oh yeah?"

"Yeah"

"Oh yeah?" Heer said again trying to surpress her smile.

"Yeah"

"Quit it you two." Priyamvada aka Priya said out of the blue in a monotone voice.

Shivani and Heer looked at each other smiling, and then in unison yelled "NO!"

Priya shrank where she was sitting "Sorry...ah...umm...Look! A flying chicken!"

Shivani and Heer looked at her as if she were crazy and then broke into a hysterical laughter, with Priya joining them a second later. While laughing, Heer looked at both of them, noticing how Shivani's eyes twinkled when she laughed and how her petite body curled up as one of her hands gripped her stomach from laughing so hard and the other grabbed Priya's shoulder for support. Priya on the other hand, was using her scarf to fan herself and slowly breathing in and out to calm herself down only to burst out laughing again when she saw Heer or Shivani. They continued to laugh like lunatics while other kids in the hallway looked at them as if they were crazy, making Heer laugh even harder.

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Meanwhile, Prem was standing in between two quarrelling bodies, Meher and Preet. For some reason, when they fought, a smile automatically found its way on Prem's face. During the course of just one week, Prem had realized that Preet was madly in love with Meher. Preet hadn't said that himself, but Prem could see the way his brother seemed to instantly relax as soon as Meher walked into the room, and also how he would kind of slump when Meher left or how his body would instantly get tensed when he saw Meher laying her head on Heer's shoulder, tired. The longing that he could see in his brothers' eyes whenever Meher hugged Heer or whenever Meher flung her head back while laughing with her friends was proof enough to tell Prem that Preet was hopelessly in love. Prem had to admit though, Preet made an excellent choice; Meher was the sweetest person he had met in his whole life, caring, beautiful and witty.

But, Prem wasn't quite sure if Meher liked Preet the way he did. If Preet automatically relaxed when he saw Meher, it seemed to Prem that Meher kind of got tensed, looking anywhere and everywhere except in Preet's direction. Naturally that hurt that flashed in Preet's eyes just before he looked away to make Meher a bit comfortable was enough to almost want to make Prem go up to Meher and yell at her. But then Meher would smile shyly at Prem and his anger would just vanish, over this week, one thing was determined, if he cared about Preet, he also cared about Meher, who always reminded him of his sister Kulraj. So engrossed in his own thoughts, Prem didn't even notice the sudden silence.

He looked at the two people standing in front of him, and saw them staring into each other's eyes, lost to world around them. He smiled and slowly backed away, giving them their privacy.

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^ woah! Mouse, ur fast!