FF: Sajna Aa Bhi Ja.......(Prt 2- Pg 3) - Page 2

Originally posted by: pooji123456789

hey
interesting concept
awesum part and character sketch
premeer already met yay
nice loved it

Originally posted by: -Ravjot-

Ooh I'm one of the 3 muskateers😎

-Hehehehe.....😃😃

And we're going to be match makers? Yay! That sounds so cool! i've always wanted to hook people up but I'm bad at it😆 Though I am good at scheming

- Good Scheming is all u need! 😛😃....nd here u'll get what u wanted...hehehehe 😛😃

Love the character sketch and everything. Especially how close Me, Meera and Shifali are and how close Prem's family is and took care of him. And I see Yug is in it☺️

-Awww thnkzzzzz.... Well ur in it so OF Course Yug has to be in it! 😉

Ooh I see Prem's in Ambala. And it's all thanks to his Dadu! Yay!

-Hehehehe....oldies just cant seem to keep away? can they!...hehehe😆

And I see he met Heer and is already interested in her =) Poor guy thought he had imagined her😆

- Hehehehe...😉

I love how Prem can open up to Heer's dadu and what not. It'll make things easier in the future =) And I loved the teasing with Yug taking Heer's book and her chasing him. And I see Heer's a very shy girl, hiding behind Yug. And Prem couldn't stop staring at her either.

-Hehehe....wait nd watch!! 😛😉...... awww thnkz!..Its all the brother-sister teasing thing, completely natural nd expected itsn't it...hehehe 😛😃.....hehehehe😉

Can't wait to read more =)

- Thnkzzzzz......im working on the update!!😃😛

-Luv Pari😃

Originally posted by: indiandoll89

Awesome start Pari!!!! 👏

- Awwwww thnkz!!

The concept sounds totally awesome, Prem struck by love at first sigh! *sigh* And then the title, I absolutely love it! 😛 Did Shifu suggest it? awesome! 😃

- THnkzzzzzzz.... Hehehehe.....Shifu did sugest it.... shes awesome at it! 😃😛

Yay! I love being part of the 3 Musketeers! 😳 😳😃

-Hehehehe.....😃😛

Ahhh Raj....*drifts off into dreamland and then snaps back out of it* Sorry, I'm back, we're happily married? I loved that, and oh yay! you made the four of us all close, so I'm thinking me and Heer only have a little difference in age? 😳 Ohh interior designing cool! 😃

-Glad u liked it..... i was really waiting to see ur reaction to the married part!...hehehehe😆😃😛.... ya 2-3 yrs actually..... ill mention that soon so there wont be any confusion😃😛.....hehehe i thought it'd b interesting!😃😃

I love that Prem got taken in by his masi and her family, he deserves that totally! 😳

-Hehehe....Prem Haiiiiii😳😉

Oh Yug is here? And same with Arjun? Bound to be interesting! 😛 Awww Yug's our brother? cute! 😛

-hehehe...wait nd watch!! 😉😃

Awwww Prem's back in Ambala thanks to his dadu! 😳 And yay, he already saw Heer! 😃 but he thought he dreamnt about her? 😆 cute! 😛

-Dreams can b sooo nice sumtimes nd then sooo sad at times....believe me i've experiences it.....*Sigh*😃😛

Ohhh she's in a fantasy world too! 😃 Can't wait to see how you're going to take this story forward pari! 😃

-hehehe.......thnkzzzzzzzzzzz

Love you,

Meera

-Lur u lotsss Pari

Originally posted by: sugi77

beautiful😳.....start.luvved it soo much.plz continue asap...

Originally posted by: *Shifali*

Moi!

First of all, as Ravs said, 'We are the 3 musketeers'😆 and secondly, as Meera said, I love the relationship that we 3 portray, and the whole 'cupid thing between Premeer'.😉

-Thnkz soo much!! 😃

I can't wait till this story shifts to the town and the 3 musketeers can enter *dreams*😆

-Hehehehe😆

Coming back, I love the character sketches, and Heer's dreamlandness, Prem's Love at first sightness, and cuteness, not the mention😆😆😆

-Awww thnkzzz 😃

Prem's love at first sight...sooo...imaginable...😉

I like the way you showed Prem's 'Awe' towards Heer!😉

Yug entered! Yay!...Ravs ko toh apna pyaar mil hi gaya!😆 Now mine, Meera and Heer's turn!😆

-Just wait nd watch!! Hehehehe😃😛

~Shifs

Thnkz sooooooo much!!

-Luv Pari

Originally posted by: zaibun

hey sound rlly rlly gud cant w8 for part 2

Originally posted by: bd670816

hi,
awesome intro. loved it very much.
cont.soon