FF: Sajna Aa Bhi Ja.......(Prt 2- Pg 3)

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Sajna Aa Bhi Ja..... (Title Credit goes to Shifalui! 😃)

This is a story of how Prem Falls in Luv with Heer at first sight, nd then doesn't see her again until after 2 months at a cultural show in his College, Where Heer is danceing, he tries to talk to Heer, But she being shy runs away. So Prem starts chasing after Heer, when ever he gets a chance. Finally one day Heer tells her older sis Meera abt him, Meera is married to Prems cousin Raj Malhotra, when she finds out that her Devar is after her lil Sis she brings her Matchmaking skills to bring the two together with the help of her friends Shifali nd Ravz!
Special thnkz to Shifali, Meera nd Ravz for letting me add them into my FF. 😃
They are officially the 3 Muskateers of KDMHMD forum...im my opinion! 😛😆😆

Charater Sketch!

Prem Juneja- He is 24, he just got back from London where he got his Masters in Business nd Management. That is why he was unable to attend the wedding of his cousin brother Raj Malhotra, his Mom's sister son.He is a really sweet guy, nd also very caring, but can be really talk-a-tive. Prem is an orphan his parents died in a car accident, nd since then has been living with his Kiran Maci nd her family. Prem has inherited Juneja Group of Companies from his dad, but since he was too young his Ranvir Chachu has been looking after it. Even tho he already has his Masters from London he wanted to take a class in the Uni. of Ludhiana that he felt he needed.

Himesh Juneja (Dada Ji)- he is Prems Dadu, Prem is his ladla, he is best friends with Krishan Maan, thats how Raj met Meera.

Kiran Malhotra- is a mother to Prem, after the death of her sister, she took Prem in, at the time his Chachu had been too young to do so. She is happily married to Aryan Malhotra, who owns Malhotra Inc. a mobile company. She has one son of her own Raj Malhotra, who is now married.

Raj Malhotra- is Prems cousin brother, him nd Prem are pretty close, he is two years older then Prem, he now works with his Dad after being happily married to Meera.

Meera Malhotra- she is the older sister of Heer Maan. She got married abt 6months back, nd now is happily living her married life. She still attends University of Ludhiana so she can get her bacheloret in Interior Designing. She is very close to her lil sis nd friends Shifali nd Ravz, nd luvs to "Help" them all.

Shifali Kapoor- a sweet nd outgoing gal, who is very caring nd acts mortherly to her friends, she loves her friends nd is the wisest of the lot, nd the one who keeps Meera nd Ravz undercontrol with the help of Heer.

Ravz Agerval- hyper, extremly active nd too outspoken gal, she is very sweet nd caring those she luvs nd can be total mirchi for those she doesn't like. She nd Meera together make plans that usually fail in bad ways, but they always mean good.

Heer Maan- is 22 nd a shy nd quite girl, she is very sweet nd caring as well. She is her Dadu's Ladli, nd is really close to her sis Meera nd friends Shifali nd Ravz. She is studing nursing at Uni. of Ludhiana. She plays the guitar nd sings really well.

Krishan Maan ( Dadu)- Heers Dadu is a strict old guy, but when it comes to his grandchildren he bends his straight stick as much as possible.Is best friends with Himesh Juneja

Balraj Maan- dad of Meera nd Heer, he has his own contruction company Maan Grp of Industries, he is strict on his two daughters bcuz his Dad has spoiled them enough already!

Teji Maan- is a proud wife of Balraj Maan, nd proud mother of Heer nd Meera, her daughters r the taj of her eyes. She is a very caring nd loving mother. She takes care of all the house things by herself.

Balwant Maan- older brother of Balraj, he works with his brother in the family business, is very sweet nd caring nd playfull.

Daljeet Maan- wife of Balwant Maan, she helps Teji around the house nd is quite sweet.

Yug Maan- son of Balwant nd Daljeet, he is really playfull nd outgoing, luvs his sister cousins alot nd Badai Ma/Badai Papa nd Dadu alot! He is friends with Arjun. He is older then both Meera nd Heer.

Arjun Punjj- best friend of Prem, they studied together in London nd now at Uni of Ludhiana, he also felt as if he needed the class that only this uni. provided. Is really playfull nd flirty.

Chapter- Page Numbers
Chapter One- Pg 1 Chapter Two- Pg 3
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Part 1

Prem sighed as he stepped out of his car that he'd parked onto the side of the road that led into the village nd picked up the packet his Dadu had told him to give to his friend Krishan Maan. He had come all the way here specially at the request of his Dada Ji, otherwise he had no idea what else could bring him back to this small village in Ambala. He hadn't been here since he'd moved in with his Maci. He knew this was were his Dada Ji had spent all of his youth nd most of his olddays at. As he glanced around, he felt relaxed not anxious like he thought he would. He'd been here with his parents every summer b4 they died, afterwards he was afraid the memories would haunt him nd so didnt come back. He saw girls by the well filling their pots up with water, they were watching him, with a weak smile, Prem looked away from them, he saw some men off to the far back with a herd of cattles nd watched one little boy get chased by his dog. This made him laugh, with a sigh he started heading in, It wasn't hard to spot the big white haveli his Dadi Ji had told him abt. Prem made his way to the gate nd rang the bell, it was opened instantly by a servant man.

'Ji? App koun?...', asked the servant.

'Mein Himesh Juneja ka potha Prem Juneja...', Prem introduced himself smiling at the other man.

'Oh Ok...ayai...', Prem was led in, as he walked through the gate nd into the yard b4 the haveli he wasn't surprised to see that it was a real Haveli, so big nd all, he'd already been warned by his Dad Ji. As he walked up to the haveli which was abt half a mile away from the gate, he looked around. The grass was a perfect green, to either side of the Driveway he was now walking on, "could have brought my car...", Prem thought, but it was too late now. He watched servants working, they were all laughing nd jokeing together by the looks of it. As he glanced around, a shinning glimmer from the terrace caught his eye nd he glanced up. A girl was sitting on a jhula on the terrace top, she was gently swinging as she read her book, he couldn't see her face, it was covered by the book in her hand. He watched as a guy abt his age, went up from behind nd snatched the book out of her hand. He stopped dead in his tracks, his jaw dropped open. Even from faw below he could tell she was gorgeous, she took his breath away. He heard her scream "Bhaiya..", as she jumped off her jhula nd chased her Bhaiya around trying to get her book back from him. She wore a simple red nd blue patyala shalwar that fitted perfectly hugging her curves at all the right places. Her hair was tied in a pony tail, but he could tell they were long very long in fact. nd get black, perfect against her creamy skin.

'Sab?...chale?...', the servant said to him, snapping his attention away from the terrace.

'Ha chalo...', Prem said to him, he looked up to take another look at the girl, but niether she nor the guy were in sight. "Did i dream them?...", Prem thought as he entered the huge hall of the haveli.

'Badai Sab.... Himesh Babu ka potha aya hai...', the servant beside him called in to a man who sat on a couch in the middle of the hall.

'Himesh ka potha?..Prem?..', called the older man.

'App Krishna Dadu hai kaya?...', Prem asked, moving forward to take the blessings of the older man. He wore a kurta nd dhothi tha normal gao outfit, he had a long beard nd mustache which were completely white, he had a cane beside the couch which he picked up b4 standing up by leaning on it, His Dada Ji had told him to call him Dadu, it was what he Prem had used to call him when he was little.

'Ha mein hi tera Krishna Dadu hoon!...', beamed the older man. He took his seat again nd ushered Prem to take one next to him.

'Woh Dada Ji ne appke liye ye packet bhejha hai...', Prem said, handing it over to Dadu, his responsibility fulfilled.

'Tho bata London kaise tha?...', Dadu asked him, Prem was shocked how had he known!?

'Appko kaise patha hai mein London?!...', Prem asked, voiceing his question.

'Himesh nai bathaya tha...rooz baath hothi hai meri usse...', Dadu explained to him.

'Oh Ok...well London...', Prem summarized his abroad experences to the older man. He felt he could totally open upto him for some reason. As Dadu ordered some drinks for Prem, he glanced around, Prem sat directly across from him, he faced the stairs that most likely led to the upper floors nd terrace, everything in the haveli was completely elegant nd nice looking, It felt like a home not just a house. Just then he heard a familiar but still unknown voice yell "Dadu!", from atop the stairs, he glanced up towards the stairs, nd saw her. She had big beautiful honey brown almond shaped eyes, a cute little nose, nd full lucious lips that were now turned down into a frown. Her hair flew behind her as she ran down the last few stairs, nd ran to hug her Dadu from behind. She was truly gorgeous beyond doubt or question, nd every move she made was graceful nd elegant.

'Dadu! Dekho na Bhaiya meri book nahin deh rahein!..', Heer whined. She'd tried unsuccessfully to get her book from Yug Bhaiya for the last 20 minutes or so, but he was too tall nd too fast for her.

'Yug!...', called her Dadu with strictness in his voice.

' Ji Dadu?...', came the reply from atop the stairs as her cousin brother stepped down the stairs with her book in his hand.

'Heer ki book tuhne kayun li?...', her dadu asked.

'Kabse keh raha tha isse...cricket khelai...lekin meri baat hi nahin sun rahi thi...issi liyai..', Yug smiled at his lil sis nd he told Dadu his storry.

'Usse nahin khelna tho force maat kar... chal abb deh iski book isse!..', Heer smiled as her Dadu ordered Bhaiya to give her the book back. Heer took her book back with a smile nd turned to head back up the stairs to the terrace, when her Dadu called her.

'Heer... Yug.. Isse milo... Yeh hai Prem.. Himesh ka Potha...', Heer slyly glanced around her Dadu, who blocked the guest, Prem? She'd heard abt him plenty of times from her Dadu when he taked abt Himesh Dada Ji. She now finally got a chance to see/meet him. Heer went to go stand behind her Yug Bhaiya to hide as she took a look at the guest. He seemed like her Bhaiya's age around 24 maybe? He had big round chocolately eyes, that were now staring at her, he did look good tho, his hair kept so that they fell right over his eyes. He wore dark blue jeans nd a red Abrocrombie nd Fitch t-shirt that helped outline his muscles. Heer lowered her eyes as he kept staring at her, nd turned a little red. She was hinding behind Bhaiya now, but he still looked as if he could see her, whenever Heer would meet a new person she'd hide behind someone usually Yug Bhaiya, today was no exception. But today the person did not look away. With a soft "Hi.." nd then "Bye..", Heer fled up the stairs nd back into her fantasy world. Where hopefully she could get the chocolately brown eyes out of her head!

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Hey Guys,
Hope u all like it!!........ plzzzzzzzz for give me for any mistakes! again special thnkx to Shifu, Meera, nd Ravz!!... i was going to start this after i finished HumDum... but just couldn't wait any longer! lolzzz 😆........plzzzzzzz comment! me waiting!!
-Luv Pari
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Posted: 16 years ago
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hey pari nice intro... loved the way you started it... it was relly awesome..continue soon =)
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Posted: 16 years ago
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hey
interesting concept
awesum part and character sketch
premeer already met yay
nice loved it
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Ooh I'm one of the 3 muskateers😎

And we're going to be match makers? Yay! That sounds so cool! i've always wanted to hook people up but I'm bad at it😆 Though I am good at scheming

Love the character sketch and everything. Especially how close Me, Meera and Shifali are and how close Prem's family is and took care of him. And I see Yug is in it☺️

Ooh I see Prem's in Ambala. And it's all thanks to his Dadu! Yay!
And I see he met Heer and is already interested in her =) Poor guy thought he had imagined her😆
I love how Prem can open up to Heer's dadu and what not. It'll make things easier in the future =) And I loved the teasing with Yug taking Heer's book and her chasing him. And I see Heer's a very shy girl, hiding behind Yug. And Prem couldn't stop staring at her either.
Can't wait to read more =)
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Awesome start Pari!!!! 👏

The concept sounds totally awesome, Prem struck by love at first sigh! *sigh* And then the title, I absolutely love it! 😛 Did Shifu suggest it? awesome! 😃

Yay! I love being part of the 3 Musketeers! 😳 😳😃

Ahhh Raj....*drifts off into dreamland and then snaps back out of it* Sorry, I'm back, we're happily married? I loved that, and oh yay! you made the four of us all close, so I'm thinking me and Heer only have a little difference in age? 😳 Ohh interior designing cool! 😃

I love that Prem got taken in by his masi and her family, he deserves that totally! 😳

Oh Yug is here? And same with Arjun? Bound to be interesting! 😛 Awww Yug's our brother? cute! 😛

Awwww Prem's back in Ambala thanks to his dadu! 😳 And yay, he already saw Heer! 😃 but he thought he dreamnt about her? 😆 cute! 😛

Ohhh she's in a fantasy world too! 😃 Can't wait to see how you're going to take this story forward pari! 😃

Love you,

Meera
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Posted: 16 years ago
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beautiful😳.....start.luvved it soo much.plz continue asap...
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Moi!
First of all, as Ravs said, 'We are the 3 musketeers'😆 and secondly, as Meera said, I love the relationship that we 3 portray, and the whole 'cupid thing between Premeer'.😉
I can't wait till this story shifts to the town and the 3 musketeers can enter *dreams*😆
Coming back, I love the character sketches, and Heer's dreamlandness, Prem's Love at first sightness, and cuteness, not the mention😆😆😆
Prem's love at first sight...sooo...imaginable...😉
I like the way you showed Prem's 'Awe' towards Heer!😉
Yug entered! Yay!...Ravs ko toh apna pyaar mil hi gaya!😆 Now mine, Meera and Heer's turn!😆
~Shifs
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Posted: 16 years ago
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hey sound rlly rlly gud cant w8 for part 2
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Originally posted by: munam_13

hey pari nice intro... loved the way you started it... it was relly awesome..continue soon =)

Hey,
thnkz soooooo much!.... glad u liked it!! 😃😛... ill update as soon as i get a chance to!
-Luv Pari

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