||Tujhe Yaad Na Meri Aayi|| Song Fic (Premeer) - Page 2

Originally posted by: indiandoll89

I'll comment back soon! 😃 But Khushi, that's the thing, I didn't want to give it a clear ending, he could not go and stay back or he could leave her there again...open ending! 😃

Originally posted by: blackdaughter

Oh........ that was so sad!!!!!! I'm upset at the story line right now!!!!!

There so much pain and frustration in this one-shot!!!! That was really nice!!!!! I hope you continue to write them!!!!

I really hope that Prem finds out that the docter lied!!!!! Curse you doctor ke nam pe ek daag!!!!!!

Nice one-shot though!!!!

Originally posted by: sourpuss

Heya! I was looking for the next part of Dhadke Jiya but I found this instead and hey, no regrets!

This is so sad...I liked the putting up a cold front parts, for some odd reason or another. And the ending was just fine! I think it does pretty much sum up Heer and how she feels...At any rate, the doctor must die.

Love,

Bhav (:

Originally posted by: purplestar22

omg that was sooooo sad...but i loved it

Originally posted by: Anhdara13

Meeru, the doctor must die. Has Bhav told you our plan? I've asked Jaz as well. If we can get many people, we can go throttle her *maniac laughter* Wow really Radz? I'm all for it!😆😆

Erm, right, anywho, what a tragic story, so sad, made me wanna cry. And the best part is, that's one of my favourite songs. Heh. I'm messed up. Thanks...but uh oh....it was tragic? Sorry!😳 Isn't it an awesome awesome AWESOME song?😳😆

The way you've expressed their pain, their anger at the situation, Heer's justified anger at Prem was wonderful. This is a brilliant piece of work, and the ending fit, it wasn't abrupt at all! Really? thank you so sooooo much Radz! 😃 Love you too 😳

Love,

Radz

Originally posted by: princess8

simply awsome..present track is soooo confusd..

sree

Originally posted by: shabo24

I get dibs on scraping the doctor's head against a cheese grater!

But that was just wow. One of the best traigc stories I've ever read, I really think you can write it all from intensity, slap-stick, fluff and tragic! You rock at it, and honestly this one-shot had me tearing at my insides, it was all so CRUEL and heartbreaking! =[

Loved it to bits!

--shabz

Originally posted by: Khushi34

Hey Meera!!

That was awesome....A really sad story bt hey who sed all love stories have a happy ending!!! L-o-v-e-d it to bits...

Khushbu x

Originally posted by: -Ravjot-

*comes flying in* I'm here!

Omg Meera that was soo sad! I LOVED it! That's all I'm gonna say cuz I'm pretty much speechless. I love how whatever you wrote went with the lyrics of the song. No wait! The lyrics of the song went with what you wrote😉😆 I dunno what I'm talking about😆 My arm is still a bit sore so I'm gonna stop blabbering on and on😆

-Agent Ravs😎

Originally posted by: munam_13

Hey Meera read the song fic and was totally fida.. coz it is one of my fav song as you know... and the way you showed the pain for each other... the way she said that she wants her Prem for the rest of the night made my heart pain... it was really a sad but an awesome song fic....

Originally posted by: *Shifali*

Meera, seriously, as Rads said, I wish the doctor died right there. I would kill her, but I don't even want to include her in this!😆

I seriously feel, you shall post a continuation of this, where Premeer ACTUALLY become one. You gave us pain in this one, and now, you yourself, shall give us happiness in the soon-to-come continuation of this Song-Fic.😳 A continuation? I'll think about it after the other SS!😳 But awww you felt the pain?😳 I just wanted to show what I felt would happen, in a way it did, but still kinda not...anyways, we'll see about the continuation!😃

Coming to the actual part, I LOVED it. Ok, I shall say I hated it for Premeer not coming together, but seriously, I LOVED the way the lyrics got incorprated into the whole shot. Awwww I know, I'm sorry for not bringing them together, wanted it to be realistic, cus you know...when Prem decides something, almost nothing will make him change his mnd, and so I'm glad you hated and liked it!😆😆😆

Heer telling herself that she can't let her Prem go, and then asking why her own Prem was running away from her...from HIS Heer...😭 That was just...😭 Awwww sorry! *kaan pakering*

The whole Vikas-Prem scene...I liked it. Then Heer comes...seeing Prem's smile turn into a cold one. Awww I'm glad, (I might've mentioned it somewhere..but seriously any scene with Harshad and kid, and I melt, he's got fabulous chemistry wtih them!😃

She runs to her room crying...and says "I did it before, but I won't be able to do it again..."😭 That seriously made me cry...👏 and this proves what good of a writer you are Meer👏 Awwww I'm sorry again Shifu! But I'm glad I got some emotions out of you!😳😳

Lovely!👏

You MUST continue this with a happy Premeer end!😳 I shall try my best to think of an idea, with an appropriate song!😛😳

~Shifu