(New FF) Iss Pal -Character Sketch, Pg 1

Jwalamukhi

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Posted: 16 years ago

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Patang Sang Ud Gaya Bachpan
Jhank Jhank Maan Dagar Suhani Re

Ladakpan Aaya Aab To
Kasak Masak Yeh Kya Mastani Re
Are Haaye Jawani Ki Hoti Hai Yehi Nishaani Re
Ki Chitwaan Tirchi Tirchi Hui Jaaye
Haan Ai Jaawani Re

Hello!

My 13th FF!😆

I personally have NO idea where this idea came from but it is there!😆😆😆 To tell you the truth, I was always a fan of re-incarnation FF's or TV shows because of the whole revenge thing. I tried to write Re-Incarnation stories before but I failed miserably.😳😆

Is Pal Mein Hoon Ya Tum Bhi Ho
Ya Dono Hoke Bhi Na Hain
Kyun Ho Kya Ho
Ho Bhi Ki Na Ho
Ya Kehna Sunna Mana Hain

This FF, as the title goes, is called Iss Pal. As it talks around the 'Time' and 'moments'

Aa AAa AaAa
Da Da Daa
Pa Dha Ni Sa Re Gaaa Aa A
Dha Ni Dha
Pa Daa Pa
Ma Pa Ma
Ga Ma Ga Re
Da Na Da Na Da Naa

In this FF, you will see Premeer re-incarnated. First, you will see them in their previous janam and then in their this janam which is this century, obviously.😆

No. This time, there will be no more "Opposites Attract" in this FF but it will all be about 'Misunderstandings' and how, 2 people don't have to be opposites to love each other.😉

Tumhein Dekhke Yaad Aai
Wohi Bishri Kahani
Deewane Ka Kissa
Ya Phir Ek Deewani
Dono Sang Sang Rehte Har Dum
Esha Yeh Mene Suna Hai

Character Sketches -

It is too hard to explain in character sketches, but all you have to know is that Premeer are one and they will not be seperated in this 2009 year.😆

Other important characters -

Rishabh Rampal - He will be there in the 1st Janam of Premeer and will be there to torture Premeer which will then be followed by him in their 2nd janam with Premeer taking revenge.

Sanjana is also there, but I don't know if I should put her in 1st or 2nd Janam.

Is Pal Mein Hoon Ya Tum Bhi Ho
Ya Dono Hoke Bhi Na Hain
Kyun Ho Kya Ho
Ho Bhi Ki Na Ho
Ya Kehna Sunna Mana Hain

Ishq Hua

Tum Bata Do Yaad Koi
Kya Purani Leke Aau
Ya Nishani Deti Jau
YA Kahani Leke Jau
Ya Ki Maan Chod Do Jaye
Yeh Jata ,jata Jahan Hai

You know, we have always seen the phrase of "Opposites Attract" ALOT of time, but here, Premeer are not opposites but people that will feel "Kuch Kuch Hota Hain" and then, follow there feelings to reach each other.

And yes, this WILL have revenge mood.😳

Is Pal Mein Hoon Ya Tum Bhi Ho
Ya Dono Hoke Bhi Na Hain
Kyun Ho Kya Ho
Ho Bhi Ki Na Ho
Ya Kehna Sunna Mana Hain

Is Pal Mein Hoon

Like it? Hate it? Do tell me.

Please watch this Videomix by Khushix:

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=OhnBxu7usJI

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Maddy

@blackdaughter

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Posted: 16 years ago

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reserved!

Not reserved anymore!!! 😆

Another one!!! * rolling up my sleeves and getting ready to face it*

YAY!!! It's one of those janam waala FF's!!!! I know it's dramatic but i personally love this concept!!! Aisa sirf movies ya kitabo mein hi to ho sakta hain (in our case FF 😆) ki do logo ka pyaar itna mesboot ho ki wo har janam mein saath saath ho!!!!! 😍

It's so perefect for Premeer because they have already proven that they would do anything for the sake of their love!!!! *sigh*

Ratpal bhi hai!!! *pouts* I guess the good comes as a package with the bad and ugly!!!! 🤢 😆

Is Sanjana an asset or a problem???? Still don't get her in the serial !?!?!

YAY!!! There is a proper revenge too!!! That's good, kyunki serial mein koi bharosa nahi hain ki hum ek proper revenge dekh payange ya nahi!!!!

Well hope you update soon, my best wishes with you!!! Lage Raho MunnaBhai!!!!!

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And I should tell you because...?

@shabo24

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Posted: 16 years ago

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Ufff. I got no words beside YOU ARE CRAZY!

I love the idea of Premeer in multiple janams so we can trule see how strong their love it, and I'm glad you introduced this "not always opposite attract" its more about compatability!

Can't wait to see how it evolves and for Sanajan, I say don't hae her. RR is enough. 😆

--shabz

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Ravjot

@rainydays.

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Posted: 16 years ago

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I was supposed to be first *pouts*

Ooh me love the concept and everything! And RR and Sanjana are in it?😲 You already know how much I love the idea =) Can't wait for you to start writing the first update. It seems very intriguing (yes I know I used a big word😆 Didn't expect that now did you?😆).

Btw did you know I have the whole Iss Pal dance sequence from Aaja Nachle memorized in my head?😆

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Meera

@indiandoll89

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Posted: 16 years ago

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mine! 😛

*unreserved*

I love the way you add the lyrics with basically tidbits about the story!😳 It really adds more to it!😆

Okay let's get the bad stuff out of the way....RR AND Sanjana??? WHY ???😕 And ooh She shud be in the first janam please...or way actually...I decided...that in the second one would be better, it adds more spice then!😉😆 Not that you have to listen to me!😆

But I'm very happy that you said they won't get seperated in the 2nd Janam!😃😃 gives me a sense of much needed relief....and ooh revenge? It is going to be OSO style?😆

Continue soon!

Love you,

Meera😳

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Priyadarshini Basu

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Posted: 16 years ago

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13th?????😲... congratulations... awwww reincarnation... that's one of my fav subject... would love to read the rest..but pls dont put sanjana in this janam🥱...continue soon😃

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Jwalamukhi

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Posted: 16 years ago

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Originally posted by: blackdaughter
reserved!

Not reserved anymore!!! 😆

Another one!!! * rolling up my sleeves and getting ready to face it*

Ha, another one😆

YAY!!! It's one of those janam waala FF's!!!! I know it's dramatic but i personally love this concept!!! Aisa sirf movies ya kitabo mein hi to ho sakta hain (in our case FF 😆) ki do logo ka pyaar itna mesboot ho ki wo har janam mein saath saath ho!!!!! 😍

But it can be reality you know...and that is what I believe...of it being a reality😆

It's so perefect for Premeer because they have already proven that they would do anything for the sake of their love!!!! *sigh*

True. Premeer are one and we know it.

Ratpal bhi hai!!! *pouts* I guess the good comes as a package with the bad and ugly!!!! 🤢 😆

What shall we do Maddz? We need someone to be angry at, don't we?

Is Sanjana an asset or a problem???? Still don't get her in the serial !?!?!

Problem

YAY!!! There is a proper revenge too!!! That's good, kyunki serial mein koi bharosa nahi hain ki hum ek proper revenge dekh payange ya nahi!!!!

Here, we DO have revenge😆

Well hope you update soon, my best wishes with you!!! Lage Raho MunnaBhai!!!!!

Thanks Madz

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Jwalamukhi

@-Jwalamukhi-

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Posted: 16 years ago

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Originally posted by: shabo24
Ufff. I got no words beside YOU ARE CRAZY!

I love the idea of Premeer in multiple janams so we can trule see how strong their love it, and I'm glad you introduced this "not always opposite attract" its more about compatability!

Can't wait to see how it evolves and for Sanajan, I say don't hae her. RR is enough. 😆

--shabz

I am not crazy Shabz..I am MAHA crazy😆

Yes, it is not always about Opposites attracting😉

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