FF: Hostage- PG 45- Part 19 (11/22/09) NEW!!! - Page 6

Originally posted by: blackdaughter

reserved!!! will comment soon! just got back from school!

I'm back now!!!!

OMG!!!!! Three cheers for Dr. Smart!!! 👏👏👏 That was such an awesome update!!!! I love Heer!!!! First i was confused as to how this could benefit Heer in anyway, but now that she can kick them out of her house.... YAY!!!

Thank you soo much....I know Heer has to be a little selffish...but I guess her selffishness is not over-powering the love that she feels.....Itsn't that cute

Of course i realized Heer was doing this becuase she wanted to and not for her benefit.... but still felt a little odd if she didn't get anything out of it!!!! Prem is sooo sweet!!!! That momentary anger shows that he has pride and doesn't want to owe anyone favors but i guess Preet's recovery is soooooo much more important!!!

Prem is a cutie pie......And he will make sure that preet recovers......but on his way of helping his brother, he might fall for this special someone......

Story is really starting to look up!!! By just a couple of changes and a couple of twists you have made sooo many doors open for this story!!! I can't wait till they are married!!!! I hope the next chapter is from Prem's POV!!!! I now know that full effect he has on Heer but what about the effect Heer has on him???

You captured the emotions very well!!!!! The tension between them is so apparent ( i think you know what i mean) 😉😳😆!!!!!!!

Great chapter and i hope you update soon again!!!! If you make a PM list please add me!!! Can't wait!!!

Originally posted by: sa123456789

Hi Nice FF. Enjoy reading it. However I am a bit confused about her age thing.

this makes sense:

My property, which would be all mine when I turned 22. But there was still one more year left. And the property paper says that if I decide to get married before the age of 22, then my property will get transferred to my husband. That's it.

this doesn't:

"We have to'..because in 2 days I turn 22'.then the property will get under my so-called dad's custody'.." I told him.

so in 2 days if she doesnt get married then the property should be hers right? and not her step dad's, and then she doesnt need to get married?

kep up the great work.

Originally posted by: rajave

K u asked for it...a LOOOOONNNGGG reply lol...love this concept, absolutely awesome! Ohh and I should thank you, you helped me procrastinate sooo much its not even funny. I mean that should be a bad thing since i have the biggest French oral of my life tomorrow (and the last one not to mention) but here i am writing a written commentary on mi views on this...please continue on, and add me to ur pm list???? (humbly requesting...please?) thnx again for such a great treat and...gosh what happened to all my smilies? NOOOOOOO.......!!! they vanished* pouts, this sucks! Arrgg anyways, great job!!! Hmm i should shut up now.! Bye!! <3

YOU R THE BEST....YOU GET THE AWARD FOR GIVING THE LONGEST AND CUTEST COMMENT.....HAHA....ANYWAYS...I WILL BE EXPECTING A SIMILAR ONE FOR THE NEXT PART....

Recap: And my prayer worked. All of the sudden, I remembered something. My property, which would be all mine when I turned 22. But there was still one more year left. And the property paper says that if I decide to get married before the age of 22, then my property will get transferred to my husband. That's it. This was the only way to get Prem out of this situation. And I would do it.....not because I felt sorry for him..................but because.....I am starting to fall for him......yes....Heer was falling in love with Prem......

K so yay!!!!!! What a genious Heer is lol..hmm but i found a mistake!!! YES! Soo proud of myself lol, hmm so here you say that there was a year left till Heer turned 22 right? K....if we go down a bit though, you say that she would be turning 22 in 2 days! Its been a year already ?? i'm so pleased with myself lol, but sadly to say other than that your story seemed flawless to me *pouts....arrrggggg that just makes me wanna love it more, i don't like this...tsk tsk...

Part 7

HEER P.O.V.

A sudden jolt of thunder makes him pull himself away from me. All I could feel was the incompleteness from being separated from him. He made me feel complete. He made me feel loved. He made me feel protected from the cruel world. I noticed his face. I saw that he was feeling very awkward and maybe even'''guilty. Guilty for hugging me. He was just glaring at the floor, avoiding any eye contact. I stood there without saying a word but then I got the urge to tell him that I could help him.

I absolutely LOVE how you describe heer's feeling incomplete here...made me wanna just sigh and awwww...for like a minute lol, of course i had the rest of the update to read so that was a good thing ehehe.

"I can help you'.." I whispered to him.

He looked straight at me with a confused expression. Those eyes''They were making me go crazy. He needs to stop making me melt like that with his look.

*sigh, i know how you feel Heer, totally understandable, the only difference is that once my brain is melted, it doesn't recover as fast as yours. xD

"I can help you save your brother''" I continued.

He grinned at me.

"You want to help the guy who kidnapped you''." He said while giving a slight laugh.

Ohh missing question mark tsk tsk...lmao! another mistake...i seriously love doing this...hmm, i can just IMAGINE our prem doing that, with a slight shake of head of course and his eyes giving like a billion+ emotions alongside this remark.

"Yes'..I want to help you''just because you are trying to save someone's life" I looked at him and his eyes were blankly staring at me.

Love how heer always feels that its necessary to explain herself to Prem, its a nice break from trying to understand what the characters are trying to say through body language and through their 'eye language' lol, i'm sorry ekta, its and awesome concept of a new language there but it takes time to understand the emotions an actor is portraying when a there is like a flood of them, gosh this little brain of mine hurts..*badly, ouchy! Even thinking about it. So all in all thank you making the characters SPEAK lol.

"And I WANT to help you because you are a good person" I finally said it. He stared at me with such intensity.

...and this is where your descriptions started to turn ME into mush....

"Wow'.I didn't know that kidnappers were nice people''and did anyone tell you that it is bad to eavesdrop in other people's conversation" He replied coldly and headed to leave the room.

Ohh did you know that i ADORE sarcasm, and corny jokes? Lmao, there hilarious! So u can just imagine my sheer joy at reading Prem's remark, he's soo cool like that, probably thinking, "kitha fasgia...(sorry thats Punjabi..hmmm.. kaha fasgia? *sigh i give up i can't spell) this girl is a creepo, imagine what she'd say to murderers or rapists...ugg...bad thought..but too lazy to delete that lol.

But somehow I caught his hand and stopped him. He turned around and looked at me again. Anger once again visible in his eyes.

Awww..doesn't Prem just look 'hot' when he's angry?? And everybody responds with a collective nod..yes GOOD worshippers of pure perfection, good...

"I told you that I will take you to your house tomorrow'..just mind your own business and go to sleep''" He slowly came closer to me and I slowly let go of his hand. He was angry but his sorrow was clearly visible in his eyes.

Ohh he's mad...i love how your actually making this realistic...hmm..i wonder what prem is thinking at this moment, oh could you please once in a while throw in a part with Prem's point of view? I trust you 100% to not make this into a fairytale love story lol, i would love to read how prem doesn't instantly fall in love with heer...oh please...pretty please???? With a cherry or better yet strawberry on top????:P

"I know that you want to get me in jail''And I might even end up there for kidnapping you so just stop this bull shit''" He whispered back.

Gosh i think i'm in love!!! Its great how Prem doesn't show anger physically which men are stereotyped to do...and he replies back in such a matter of factly tone..seriosuly u surprised me here, i was half expecting prem to just burst with anger, but this dude kept his cool, and 'whispered back'*sings in a very screechy voice... LOOOOVVVEEE ITTT....

He noticed the closeness between us and slightly moved back.

Yes! And he has manners too!!!! I love you for making him so /...perfect....*sigh

"I don't want to cause you any more problems''I just want to''..help" I said as I tried to sound calm.

Hehehe, this girl just doesn't give up eh? I would have been like 'go to hell!' then again, i'm not the most patient person alive lol..not at all

"Help?.You want to help me even after all this?..." he paused and looked at me with a confused expression then silently added "Why''?"

This is what i call an extremely slowmotion lightbulb moment...get on with it already, your hot....and a gentlemen...caring...selfless..and not miss have awesome eyes, who in their sane mind won't want to help you..budhu!

I straightened myself up and fixed my gaze to the floor.

Typical Heer*smiles

"I can't tell you why'." I looked at him. "But I can tell you that whatever I do, it will only help you..."

Okay, dead give away there lol...she's in lala land, where only love and prem exist...tresspaser! i'm having the urge to say that cheesy line to Heer atm..."violators will be shot, survivors will be shot again!" okay that is what i ccall corniness to the extreme.

"And how exactly are you going to help me'?" He looked at me straight in my eyes with a stern look.

Ehehe, you know a sarcastic remark after this like the one Heer made on Thursday? Friday, i forget..the one where she says..ur smar, u figure it out?t...lol...thank god you didn't put it in here, or would have completely ruined the whole romantic atmosphere for me and made me laugh my head off...gosh i get distracted easily!

"So you are ready to accept my help" I asked grinning at him.

He paused for a while.

I would be scared out of my wits by heer by now lol, Prem seems like a logical thinker. *Double sigh

"I promise that I won't add on to your problems... and anyways, I have a plan that will get both you and me out of this mess'" I assured him.

Genius. Plain old genius.

"And your plan is..." he waited for me to continue.

"Well...in order for me to get my property out of their hands is ONLY by marrying someone before I turn 22''.Whoever I choose to get married to will get all my property''" I explained to him hesitantly.

His eyes narrowed and he looked at me as if I was crazy.

I would too lol, not to add also slowly walk away...far far away from the crazy gal standing infront of me lol.

"So you want me to marry you..." He said making sure.

Yep, she's a psychopath, leave her, come to me lmao!!!!

"It's the only way out for me to help you..." I answered.

I love how she's sounding so innocent...we know the real intentions here Heer tsk tsk...*shakes head in disapproval.

He gave a smile and gave me an affectionate look.

*dies..comes back to life to read again...and faints this is just great! Good luck to me on my biggest Oral tomorrow lol.

"How can you trust me? I can do anything after I get YOUR property under my name...Don't you find yourself getting into a bigger mess from this?" he asked as he walked closer to me.

Yeah i agree, yeah your heart is telling you to trust him, but use the thing inside your head too! For all you know this guy could be faking all of it, run while u can Heer run1!!!! Get away from MY prem! Mwahahhaha...the queen of creating misunderstandings.

"I can trust you" I answered softly, barely loud enough for him to hear it. But he did.

"How?" he said being only inches away from me. "If you marry me, then I can take advantage of many things, even YOU''"

Yeah Heer HOW???*turns off the lights and turns on the bright florescent light in Heer's face...HOW?

He moved even closer closing the place between us. I slowly closed my eyes as I felt powerless in front of him. I could feel his warm breath against my cheek. I barely got the word to come out of my mouth.

And she's still standing...gotta give credit to this girl...impressive.

"My heart keeps telling me...you won't do anything wrong." I whispered back while still holding my breath. I felt him move back and I slowly opened my eyes. He looked at me and for the first time gave me a genuine smile.

This has got to be the best line throughout the whole update...it made my da...hmm night *sigh i really should be practising like crazy right now...*sigh oh well, i can do that later.. hehehhe

"Now will you stop staring at me and listen to my plan'.." I told him.

Wow, from one touchy comment above to a fiery, 'i'm in control now one...cool.

He smiled again. Oh my God'..he is making me feel numb. He seriously needs to stop all this. He slowly nodded.

Told you to GO AWAY!!! If u'd listened to me then you wouldn't be asking this question...sheesh why doesn't anybody listen to me...xD

"Okay'.tomorrow morning you can drop me at my apartment'.." I continued.

"Why an apartment'?" he asked.

"That's where I lived with my mom before she remarried''its still hers and I can live there''"

So is her mom still alive, if she is then she is a crappy mother..and kinda confused, you say, 'it's still hers', as in her mothers (after her death, or her mom just abondonned heer AND her apartment leaving it for heer? Or is the apartment Heer's? Hmm i think i just confused myself more there...anywhoo...

He listened careful. "Then I will call my lawyer and I can arrange the marriage papers''you can come to his office around noon and we can get''." I stopped. But he finished the sentence.

"Married'.?" He asked.

"We have to'..because in 2 days I turn 22'.then the property will get under my so-called dad's custody'.." I told him.

Heer, your turning 22 in 2 days or in a year? Can tell somebodies not so great with math skills lol...

"Then you will call my house and tell them that I have married you'.when I say you I mean you as in Prem'not a kidnapper'" I explained. Sweet...

"You want me to tell them that you married some random guy and that now all your property is mine''?" he said giving me a smirk. Yeah prem, she lacks logic nah? I have tons of that! No worries...:P

"Well by then you will be the owner of everything'.so I want YOU to kick them out of MY house so that I can have all traces of them out of my life forever'.." I told him with a determined face.

Gotta hand it to her, nice plan. Love how she is so successful in completely convincing Prem that she's doing all this for her own purpose *very sneaky

"If you do this for me'then you can have as much of my money as you want for your brother'.." I looked at him to see if he was at all interested. To my surprised, he was.

"I just need 1 chore to save my brother's life'..the rest you can keep''" He said.

He's awesome! Speechless atm.

I looked at him admiring his sincerity.

Can relate...

"This is why I know that I can trust you'" I told him giving him a smile. I glared at the clock. It was about 12:30.

"I am going to sleep now'.and you better sleep too'..wake me up at 6 and drop me to my apartment" I said as I headed out of the room. But I instantly stopped when I heard his voice again.

"What are you going to do after all this'.." he asked worriedly. I knew exactly what he was talking about. I turned around and told him with a smile.

"You can divorce me and go back to living your life'..I will be happy with having a friend like you'.." I told him politely.

"You want me to divorce you" he said with a grin. "And I didn't know we were friends''"

Ouch...that hurt....deep down lol...but i don't believe a word of it...i have a feeling that you two are gonna..hmm i dunno have to live together? Make my prem fall in love with heer and make me turn into mush..permanently? i wonder why?

I felt like telling him what I have been hiding but I couldn't Of course I didn't want a divorce from him. You don't find nice guys like him that easily. For the first time, I found myself thanking God for getting me kidnapped by him or I would have never met him. Agree. I would go on my knees and thank god a billion times!

I didn't want to answer him. All I said was "Good night" and left.

Originally posted by: rajave

K u asked for it...a LOOOOONNNGGG reply lol...love this concept, absolutely awesome! Ohh and I should thank you, you helped me procrastinate sooo much its not even funny. I mean that should be a bad thing since i have the biggest French oral of my life tomorrow (and the last one not to mention) but here i am writing a written commentary on mi views on this...please continue on, and add me to ur pm list???? (humbly requesting...please?) thnx again for such a great treat and...gosh what happened to all my smilies? NOOOOOOO.......!!! they vanished* pouts, this sucks! Arrgg anyways, great job!!! Hmm i should shut up now.! Bye!! <3

Recap: And my prayer worked. All of the sudden, I remembered something. My property, which would be all mine when I turned 22. But there was still one more year left. And the property paper says that if I decide to get married before the age of 22, then my property will get transferred to my husband. That's it. This was the only way to get Prem out of this situation. And I would do it.....not because I felt sorry for him..................but because.....I am starting to fall for him......yes....Heer was falling in love with Prem......

K so yay!!!!!! What a genious Heer is lol..hmm but i found a mistake!!! YES! Soo proud of myself lol, hmm so here you say that there was a year left till Heer turned 22 right? K....if we go down a bit though, you say that she would be turning 22 in 2 days! Its been a year already ?? i'm so pleased with myself lol, but sadly to say other than that your story seemed flawless to me *pouts....arrrggggg that just makes me wanna love it more, i don't like this...tsk tsk...

Part 7

HEER P.O.V.

A sudden jolt of thunder makes him pull himself away from me. All I could feel was the incompleteness from being separated from him. He made me feel complete. He made me feel loved. He made me feel protected from the cruel world. I noticed his face. I saw that he was feeling very awkward and maybe even'''guilty. Guilty for hugging me. He was just glaring at the floor, avoiding any eye contact. I stood there without saying a word but then I got the urge to tell him that I could help him.

I absolutely LOVE how you describe heer's feeling incomplete here...made me wanna just sigh and awwww...for like a minute lol, of course i had the rest of the update to read so that was a good thing ehehe.

"I can help you'.." I whispered to him.

He looked straight at me with a confused expression. Those eyes''They were making me go crazy. He needs to stop making me melt like that with his look.

*sigh, i know how you feel Heer, totally understandable, the only difference is that once my brain is melted, it doesn't recover as fast as yours. xD

"I can help you save your brother''" I continued.

He grinned at me.

"You want to help the guy who kidnapped you''." He said while giving a slight laugh.

Ohh missing question mark tsk tsk...lmao! another mistake...i seriously love doing this...hmm, i can just IMAGINE our prem doing that, with a slight shake of head of course and his eyes giving like a billion+ emotions alongside this remark.

"Yes'..I want to help you''just because you are trying to save someone's life" I looked at him and his eyes were blankly staring at me.

Love how heer always feels that its necessary to explain herself to Prem, its a nice break from trying to understand what the characters are trying to say through body language and through their 'eye language' lol, i'm sorry ekta, its and awesome concept of a new language there but it takes time to understand the emotions an actor is portraying when a there is like a flood of them, gosh this little brain of mine hurts..*badly, ouchy! Even thinking about it. So all in all thank you making the characters SPEAK lol.

"And I WANT to help you because you are a good person" I finally said it. He stared at me with such intensity.

...and this is where your descriptions started to turn ME into mush....

"Wow'.I didn't know that kidnappers were nice people''and did anyone tell you that it is bad to eavesdrop in other people's conversation" He replied coldly and headed to leave the room.

Ohh did you know that i ADORE sarcasm, and corny jokes? Lmao, there hilarious! So u can just imagine my sheer joy at reading Prem's remark, he's soo cool like that, probably thinking, "kitha fasgia...(sorry thats Punjabi..hmmm.. kaha fasgia? *sigh i give up i can't spell) this girl is a creepo, imagine what she'd say to murderers or rapists...ugg...bad thought..but too lazy to delete that lol.

But somehow I caught his hand and stopped him. He turned around and looked at me again. Anger once again visible in his eyes.

Awww..doesn't Prem just look 'hot' when he's angry?? And everybody responds with a collective nod..yes GOOD worshippers of pure perfection, good...

"I told you that I will take you to your house tomorrow'..just mind your own business and go to sleep''" He slowly came closer to me and I slowly let go of his hand. He was angry but his sorrow was clearly visible in his eyes.

Ohh he's mad...i love how your actually making this realistic...hmm..i wonder what prem is thinking at this moment, oh could you please once in a while throw in a part with Prem's point of view? I trust you 100% to not make this into a fairytale love story lol, i would love to read how prem doesn't instantly fall in love with heer...oh please...pretty please???? With a cherry or better yet strawberry on top????:P

"I know that you want to get me in jail''And I might even end up there for kidnapping you so just stop this bull shit''" He whispered back.

Gosh i think i'm in love!!! Its great how Prem doesn't show anger physically which men are stereotyped to do...and he replies back in such a matter of factly tone..seriosuly u surprised me here, i was half expecting prem to just burst with anger, but this dude kept his cool, and 'whispered back'*sings in a very screechy voice... LOOOOVVVEEE ITTT....

He noticed the closeness between us and slightly moved back.

Yes! And he has manners too!!!! I love you for making him so /...perfect....*sigh

"I don't want to cause you any more problems''I just want to''..help" I said as I tried to sound calm.

Hehehe, this girl just doesn't give up eh? I would have been like 'go to hell!' then again, i'm not the most patient person alive lol..not at all

"Help?.You want to help me even after all this?..." he paused and looked at me with a confused expression then silently added "Why''?"

This is what i call an extremely slowmotion lightbulb moment...get on with it already, your hot....and a gentlemen...caring...selfless..and not miss have awesome eyes, who in their sane mind won't want to help you..budhu!

I straightened myself up and fixed my gaze to the floor.

Typical Heer*smiles

"I can't tell you why'." I looked at him. "But I can tell you that whatever I do, it will only help you..."

Okay, dead give away there lol...she's in lala land, where only love and prem exist...tresspaser! i'm having the urge to say that cheesy line to Heer atm..."violators will be shot, survivors will be shot again!" okay that is what i ccall corniness to the extreme.

"And how exactly are you going to help me'?" He looked at me straight in my eyes with a stern look.

Ehehe, you know a sarcastic remark after this like the one Heer made on Thursday? Friday, i forget..the one where she says..ur smar, u figure it out?t...lol...thank god you didn't put it in here, or would have completely ruined the whole romantic atmosphere for me and made me laugh my head off...gosh i get distracted easily!

"So you are ready to accept my help" I asked grinning at him.

He paused for a while.

I would be scared out of my wits by heer by now lol, Prem seems like a logical thinker. *Double sigh

"I promise that I won't add on to your problems... and anyways, I have a plan that will get both you and me out of this mess'" I assured him.

Genius. Plain old genius.

"And your plan is..." he waited for me to continue.

"Well...in order for me to get my property out of their hands is ONLY by marrying someone before I turn 22''.Whoever I choose to get married to will get all my property''" I explained to him hesitantly.

His eyes narrowed and he looked at me as if I was crazy.

I would too lol, not to add also slowly walk away...far far away from the crazy gal standing infront of me lol.

"So you want me to marry you..." He said making sure.

Yep, she's a psychopath, leave her, come to me lmao!!!!

"It's the only way out for me to help you..." I answered.

I love how she's sounding so innocent...we know the real intentions here Heer tsk tsk...*shakes head in disapproval.

He gave a smile and gave me an affectionate look.

*dies..comes back to life to read again...and faints this is just great! Good luck to me on my biggest Oral tomorrow lol.

"How can you trust me? I can do anything after I get YOUR property under my name...Don't you find yourself getting into a bigger mess from this?" he asked as he walked closer to me.

Yeah i agree, yeah your heart is telling you to trust him, but use the thing inside your head too! For all you know this guy could be faking all of it, run while u can Heer run1!!!! Get away from MY prem! Mwahahhaha...the queen of creating misunderstandings.

"I can trust you" I answered softly, barely loud enough for him to hear it. But he did.

"How?" he said being only inches away from me. "If you marry me, then I can take advantage of many things, even YOU''"

Yeah Heer HOW???*turns off the lights and turns on the bright florescent light in Heer's face...HOW?

He moved even closer closing the place between us. I slowly closed my eyes as I felt powerless in front of him. I could feel his warm breath against my cheek. I barely got the word to come out of my mouth.

And she's still standing...gotta give credit to this girl...impressive.

"My heart keeps telling me...you won't do anything wrong." I whispered back while still holding my breath. I felt him move back and I slowly opened my eyes. He looked at me and for the first time gave me a genuine smile.

This has got to be the best line throughout the whole update...it made my da...hmm night *sigh i really should be practising like crazy right now...*sigh oh well, i can do that later.. hehehhe

"Now will you stop staring at me and listen to my plan'.." I told him.

Wow, from one touchy comment above to a fiery, 'i'm in control now one...cool.

He smiled again. Oh my God'..he is making me feel numb. He seriously needs to stop all this. He slowly nodded.

Told you to GO AWAY!!! If u'd listened to me then you wouldn't be asking this question...sheesh why doesn't anybody listen to me...xD

"Okay'.tomorrow morning you can drop me at my apartment'.." I continued.

"Why an apartment'?" he asked.

"That's where I lived with my mom before she remarried''its still hers and I can live there''"

So is her mom still alive, if she is then she is a crappy mother..and kinda confused, you say, 'it's still hers', as in her mothers (after her death, or her mom just abondonned heer AND her apartment leaving it for heer? Or is the apartment Heer's? Hmm i think i just confused myself more there...anywhoo...

He listened careful. "Then I will call my lawyer and I can arrange the marriage papers''you can come to his office around noon and we can get''." I stopped. But he finished the sentence.

"Married'.?" He asked.

"We have to'..because in 2 days I turn 22'.then the property will get under my so-called dad's custody'.." I told him.

Heer, your turning 22 in 2 days or in a year? Can tell somebodies not so great with math skills lol...

"Then you will call my house and tell them that I have married you'.when I say you I mean you as in Prem'not a kidnapper'" I explained. Sweet...

"You want me to tell them that you married some random guy and that now all your property is mine''?" he said giving me a smirk. Yeah prem, she lacks logic nah? I have tons of that! No worries...:P

"Well by then you will be the owner of everything'.so I want YOU to kick them out of MY house so that I can have all traces of them out of my life forever'.." I told him with a determined face.

Gotta hand it to her, nice plan. Love how she is so successful in completely convincing Prem that she's doing all this for her own purpose *very sneaky

"If you do this for me'then you can have as much of my money as you want for your brother'.." I looked at him to see if he was at all interested. To my surprised, he was.

"I just need 1 chore to save my brother's life'..the rest you can keep''" He said.

He's awesome! Speechless atm.

I looked at him admiring his sincerity.

Can relate...

"This is why I know that I can trust you'" I told him giving him a smile. I glared at the clock. It was about 12:30.

"I am going to sleep now'.and you better sleep too'..wake me up at 6 and drop me to my apartment" I said as I headed out of the room. But I instantly stopped when I heard his voice again.

"What are you going to do after all this'.." he asked worriedly. I knew exactly what he was talking about. I turned around and told him with a smile.

"You can divorce me and go back to living your life'..I will be happy with having a friend like you'.." I told him politely.

"You want me to divorce you" he said with a grin. "And I didn't know we were friends''"

Ouch...that hurt....deep down lol...but i don't believe a word of it...i have a feeling that you two are gonna..hmm i dunno have to live together? Make my prem fall in love with heer and make me turn into mush..permanently? i wonder why?

I felt like telling him what I have been hiding but I couldn't Of course I didn't want a divorce from him. You don't find nice guys like him that easily. For the first time, I found myself thanking God for getting me kidnapped by him or I would have never met him. Agree. I would go on my knees and thank god a billion times!

I didn't want to answer him. All I said was "Good night" and left.

I watched her go out of my room without answering my question. Now what was that supposed to mean. And why was she looking at me like that. Did she find out what I thought of her? If she did then why didn't she ask me? Anyways at least she is the way I thought of her as being. For the first time in these two days, I noticed how pretty she was, how caring she was.

I lay on my bed, caring less about changing my clothes.

I tried to sleep and the minute I closed my eyes, I saw her innocent face flash in my mind. I jolted my eyes open trying to stop the image from coming. But it wasn't working. Great, just great. Now she won't even let me sleep. I tossed and turned until I gave up and decided to check up on her. I slowly got up and opened the door of my room. I slowly walked out without making any noise, headed towards the living room where she must be sleeping on the sofa. This thought kept bothering me. I made her sleep on an uncomfortable sofa while I myself was sleeping on a cozy bed. When my eyes caught her sight, it seemed as if I froze. There she was, lying on the sofa with the blanket only covering her up to her waist. Her half-sleeve orange t-shirt was making her shiver in the cold.

All of the sudden, I found myself coming closer and closer to her. I couldn't resist myself. I came and kneeled down in front of her, just to stare at her. Yes, she was beautiful. Especially under the dim moonlight that was shining on her face through the window.

I couldn't stop myself from wondering how she was able to sleep so peacefully while she ruined my sleep. Why couldn't I sleep as peacefully as she is?

Suddenly I noticed her shiver and backed of a little. Wait, she was cold. I found my hands pulling the warm blanket over her and cover her up to her shoulders. In this process, a few strands of her hair ended up landing over her eyes. A frown came on her face as those strands bothered her. I just smiled at her cute face. She looked even more beautiful in that frown. I gently pulled the strands back and revealed her glowing face.

Stop Prem. She's just a girl. Nothing else. My brain kept telling me this. But I guess I let my heart take over. What is happening to me? I slowly traced my fingers down her soft, chubby cheeks. She smiled in her sleep the moment I touch her skin. Her skin felt like feathers and just the touch of her urged me to want more of her. And that smile was giving me an urge to do something I would have never even thought of.

Now this is super weird. No girl ever had this effect of me. But what was up with her? Why did I want to touch her, to be close to her, to lo---? That's when my brain took over my desires. That's it. I can't do this and I shouldn't be here. I took my hand away from her and stood up. I turned around to leave and walked off from there after taking one glance at her. And now I knew for a fact that I was getting addicted to her. And this is what I would call it. This was just a mere infatuation, not love. I can't love her. I just have too many responsibilities. I just can't love her.

I kept saying this to myself but whatever I did, I couldn't make my heart understand. This heart of mine was just acting too stubborn to even react to what my brain said. I went back to my room and tried to find my lost sleep….but I knew that now it was going to be hard to find it.

The bright sun's ray fell on my face. I could feel the heat that the light was radiating. I slowly opened my eyes and sat up. Today was going to be a long day I thought. But there was this excitement inside me for some reason. I didn't know what this excitement was towards. Was it for the fact that today my brother's money problem will be solved or was it because of me getting married to Heer?…..I instantly accepted the first option. But for how long was I going to make myself believe that?

I looked at the clock. It was only 5:30 am. So that meant I did find some sleep. I got up and headed towards the bathroom to quickly freshen up and take a shower. After about 15 minutes, I came out trying to figure out what I would wear. I walked over to my closet and picked out a pair of dark blue jeans, a white shirt, and a black sweatshirt.

By the time I was dressed, the clock read 5:55 am. I walked out of my room and went to check out on Maa. Uh oh…..She still doesn't know about Heer. I looked at the clock again. And I bet she is awake by now and has already seen her sleeping in the living room. Great! Now what the heck am I going to tell her?

I quickly rushed out of the room and went to the living room. And now another shock. Where is she?

I glanced all around and heard some noises coming from the kitchen. I hustled there to find who the noise-makers were.

There she is…..Wide awake and smiling……Her face had a certain hesitance present on it. And what she he** is she talking about with my mom?

"Maa……" I said trying my best to sound calmly.

She turned around and looked at me. That's when I noticed the smile on her pleasant face. For the first time in many years….I found a genuine smile on her face. The sight of her made me smile.

"Prem…." She said softly…."Idhar aao beta….." I slowly approached my steps towards her, paying no attention to Heer. I couldn't let my mom see my eyes when I looked at Heer. She would instantly read them and know my feelings. I stood in front of her and gave her a smile.

"Maa yeh……" I started but she cut me off.

"Mai sab jaanti hu beta……Heer ne mujhe sab bata diya hai…" she said while looking at Heer. I looked at Heer as well with a confused expression. What did tell her…?"Sab bata diya"……

I saw her eyes assuring me that it was fine.

"Mai bahot khush hu beta…..Tune apne bare me sochna shuru kar diya……Heer bahot acchi ladki hai…..Aur mai bahot khush hu ke tu isse shaadi kar raha hai…." She said while tenderly patting my cheek.

Shaadi…..? What the he** is happening? I gave her a questioning look as Maa left the kitchen to get something.

"You told her everything" I said serenely. She smiled at me. She sure knows how to make me feel weak.

"Yes I told her everything besides……" she stopped and gave me a glance. Her face was looking fresh. But I could tell that her sleep wasn't as peaceful as I though it was last night. Who would sleep peacefully if they knew that they were about to marry their own kidnapper?

"Besides…?" I tried to make her finish her sentence.

"I didn't tell her the kidnapping part……but there is another problem…" she said making the cutest face ever.

"What…?" Something was sure fishy.

"She thinks that we love each other and that's why we want to get married…" she said tentatively. "I didn't know what to say to her…..so I stayed quiet…"

She had her eyes lowered and was a little nervous. Now what? Did she think I was going to scream at her? No way.

"It ok….I will tell her the truth later….." I said assuring her with a smile. "Are you ready to go to your mom's apartment..?"

"Yeah…."

As we were about to leave, I saw Maa coming towards us. She was holding a bag in her hands. Oh God…Please help me.

"Heer..." she said in a motherly way. "Yeh lee….Tumhare liye saree hai…..aaj isse hi pehenaa…."

I saw her take it with a smile. Saying this she blessed us both and then left.

"You don't have to wear that you know….." I said.

"I know…..but I want to wear this…." she told me flashing back an awkward glare. I couldn't stop myself from wondering what was going in her mind. Why doesn't she say no to anything? Does she want all this to happen? Does she really want to marry me? I smacked myself in my mind. Stop Prem. Heer seems to be like those one-night stands. If she really had some self-respect, she would never talk to a stranger like this. What was it that she wanted besides her own money back? I don't like the feeling that I get when I am around her. It makes me feel weak or even uncontrollable. Is she trying to lure me into this relationship?

I looked at her with a glance. My brain was going haywire with these thoughts. But when I looked at her, my heart just seemed to reject all these thoughts. All my heart kept saying was that she trusts me and maybe understands what I am going through. And I would make sure that I don't mess up with this.