FF: Hostage- PG 45- Part 19 (11/22/09) NEW!!! - Page 20

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Hey guys!!!! I am back from my vacation in India. It was awesome. But then I got so bucy with school work that I couldn't make an update. And plus, my computer crashed and I have to do system recovery to fix it up. My updated parts were erased so now I rewrote it in a different way. Its a little short but I will make it into Part 15 A and B. Please leave all yoiu wonderful comments and criticism. Love you all and enjoy this part!

Part 15: A

Narrator P.O.V

The sun rose early the next morning. Sunlight flashed through the windows and slid across Prem's face. Prem squint his eyes as the sunlight spread throughout the room. As he opened his eyes, he could feel a wonderful type of freshness. As he opened his eyes, he could feel a wonderful type of freshness. He had never felt this content before. Prem glanced at the clock and quickly got up. It was already 7:00. Today was his day off so he had decided to spend the entire day with Preet. He had been waiting for so long to see his brother in a good condition. All the medial formalities were now over and Preet would be recovering pretty soon. One car accident had changed his brother's entire life. But now, everything was getting back on track. Preet would be fine now. His mom would not feel depressed anymore. And all his stress would be gone. This was only possible because of her. She had come into his life like an angel. Prem didn't know how to repay his kindness. It was something he wouldn't be able to pay back to her even by giving his life.

Prem quickly got a shower and dressed himself. He wore a maroon colored sweatshirt and casual blue jeans. He looked at himself in the mirror. His hair had been freshly washed and his clean shave gave him a childish look. He sprayed some Jean Paul perfume. Looking as cute as possible, Prem picked up his car keys as well as his cell from his side table and headed out. He was about to open the door to go out of the house when he remembered her. He went to his room to see her. As he slowly opened the door and peeked in, he saw her sleeping peacefully on his bed. She was wearing a silky, light pink churidar with his dupatta resting on the side table. The blanket was covering her up to her waist. He hands were resting peacefully on her stomach. Her head was slightly tilted and a few strands of her silky long hair were resting on her cheek. Her soft lotus eyes were closed and an innocent smile played on her lips. In one word, Heer looked ultimately sensational.

He figured out that the best thing to do right now was to stop looking at her. It was becoming really hard for him to resist her. He was tempted to fall crazily in love with her. But he also knew his limits and these limits he would never'..never ever cross. Smiling at the beautiful girl in front of him, Prem slowly closed the door and decided to leave a note to her on the dining table before leaving.

Prem drove for about 30 minutes before he reached the hospital. Today was Friday and it was long weekend time so everyone was on for their vacation so there was a lot of traffic. When he finally reached the hospital, he found his way to his brother's hospital room. Knowing him quite well, he knew that his brother would be awake by now. Preet had always been the first one to wake up and the first one to fall asleep.

Prem opened the door to Preet's room and instantly stopped in his track. Here was his chotu, playing a round of carom with other patients. He looked so happy and the glow on his face told Prem that his recovery was going on pretty fast. Preet was so much into the game that he didn't notice Prem come in. Prem couldn't help but smile at Preet. He looked adorable and full of life. Before he went up to him, he thanked Heer once again in his mind. After that, he most importantly thanked the one above for sending her as an angel into his life.

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It was as if she heard Prem call her. Heer slowly opened her eyes at the sound of her name being said by him. Heer stretched out in the bed and groggily got up. She glanced at the clock and jumped. It was already 7:35. Oh God'.Prem must have left by now. She knew that he was going to meet Preet today. Heer cursed herself for not getting up on time. Heer went to Maa's room where Prem had been sleeping and found it empty. He must have left without disturbing her. How could she be so careless? Heer thought.

After taking a shower and freshening up, Heer dressed herself into a beautiful cream colored faux churidar which was embroidered with tiny, glittering ticks everywhere. She combed her hair straight and pined back her bangs with a tiny clip. After putting on her kajal and perfume, she came out of Prem's room and went straight towards the mandir. After praying for Prem and Preet's well-being, she took a tiny pinch of sindoor from the aarti thali and filled her maang. This had become a daily routine for now and it somehow made her feel proud to be a married woman. As Heer was about to go towards the kitchen, her cell phone started ringing. She found it sitting on the dining table and she quickly ran there and picked it up.

"Hello'" she said. Heer hadn't looked at who the called was before picking up.

"Hey Heer'...it's me'" said a cheerful Maya on the other side. Feeling the strong pull of friendship towards her, she sweetly replied.

"Hi Maya'How are you?"

"I am perfectly fine'.um'.Heer'.um are you busy today'" she asked.

Heer thought for a while. Prem wasn't going to be home before the evening and she knew that Preet and Prem were going to have a good time together as such a long time. Finding nothing important to be done, she agreed to the proposal.

"That's great'just come over as soon as possible'.I have to discuss something really important with you'." Maya said and she quickly hung up, not giving Heer a chance to even ask what the matter was.

Heer smiled at Maya's cuteness and placed her cell back on the dining table. That's when her eyes fell on a note that had Heer written on it. Heer gently picked up the note, opened it, and smiled at the familiar handwriting.

Good Morning Heer'

Sorry for just leaving without telling you. But you were in deep sleep. I didn't have the courage to come and wake you up. I hope you don't mind. But if you want to join me here, then you can. But just tell Arjun and Maya to come with you. And DON'T hesitate even a bit to call me up for any reason. Take care and don't go anywhere alone.

Prem

Every single word written by him made her smile. Can this person get any cuter then cute itself?

Please comment on how it was. Baqi ki story in Part B which I will update pretty soon-----hopefully!
Love Ya!
Palchin

Edited by Dr.Smart - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
very nice
do update soon
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Posted: 16 years ago
I just started reading this and i love it! very interesting! okay I will comment more once i finish it!
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Posted: 16 years ago
lovely update..waiting for part B
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Posted: 16 years ago
Hey awesome update! Continue soon!! Can add me to ur pm list pls??

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