FF: Hostage- PG 45- Part 19 (11/22/09) NEW!!!

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Mobina

@Mobina

Sparkler

Posted: 16 years ago

#11

Hey brilliant work can't wait for next update plz don't leave this FF in complete you have done a good job.

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@flowers4u

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 16 years ago

#12

hey im so happy to get hostage back i love da changes and i love ur concept keep it up

gud luk

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sonu

@sonu0511

Inactive

Posted: 16 years ago

#13

im so happy this ffs continuing and this part was awesome...

heer falling in love with prem...superb

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@shabo24

Rocker

Posted: 16 years ago

#14

WOW!

That was amazing, I loved the way you took the original and compeltly twisted it to fit into a different genre and style! The way you described all the feelings were just amazingly written and loads of twists and turns involved in it as well!

Thanks for the dedication, and no need to call me di. Shabz is fine. 😃

Good luck with it!

--shabz

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Maddy

@blackdaughter

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 16 years ago

#15

Interesting.... very interesting...

So basically now Ranvir and her father aren't heel bent on saving her but rather doing bhale bhale that's she is gone.......................... I like it!!!!! 😆😆😆

Like how the basics are the same for sure!!!!! You described everything really well and i really liked that!!!!

It was a long update too ( i really really like that)!!!!! 👏

Lets see where you are going with this!!! Hope you update soon and my best wishes with you!!!

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Dr.Smart

@Dr.Smart

Inactive

Posted: 16 years ago

#16

Originally posted by: sonu0511
im so happy this ffs continuing and this part was awesome...
heer falling in love with prem...superb

Thanks you so much for taking the time to read and comment. I really liked the concept and wanted to continue it so I did. But didn't know that I would get soooo many comments, especially good comments. I am happy that you liked it. Will try my best to keep updating. Thanks once again. Oh and its nice to make new friends on this forum.

Palchin

Originally posted by: zaibun
hey im so happy to get hostage back i love da changes and i love ur concept keep it up
gud luk

I am happy to see you happy. I put the changes in the story so that I could move it on. This way, I can start a new relationship being built between Premeer. Thank you for taking the time to read and comment. Love Ya!

Palchin

Originally posted by: Mobina
Hey brilliant work can't wait for next update plz don't leave this FF in complete you have done a good job.

Thank you Mobina. Thanks for all the compliments. And I will try my best to not leave this fanfic incomplete. But updating it on a daily basis is hrd but I will still try. Maybe on weekends and all. Hope you understand. Anyways, I am happy that you want me to continue.

Palchin

Originally posted by: amanaranjan
yay yay yay!!
ur continuing this ff
ooooooo i really like the turn of evnts here
heer is falling for prem?? i likey!
awwwwww prem is such a sweet heart.i love guys who come back to put ointment😆
but great job!
i loved it
continue asap
Amana

Awwwwwwww....Thanks a lot for liking it so much. I too want a guy like Prem. And it was a must to have him feel guilty and come back to put ointment.....It Prem ofcourse.I will try my best to continue aap. Thanks once again.

Palchin

Originally posted by: bd670816
hey,
it was so good.
it's really nice of u to continue this ff.
cont.soon.

Thank you very much for taking the time to read and comment.

Originally posted by: -Rani-
too good..it's really nice of u to continue the FF..because it was very different and u made it even special by adding ur views..looking forward to the next update!

I am happy to know that all of you were happy with all the twists and turns in the story. Didn't expect this much support. But a Bunch of thanks to you for accepting this part. I added my views to give it a different taste. Thanks once again.

Palchin

Originally posted by: purplestar22

Awww thast nice your gonna continue it.. I thought it was good!!

Thank you very much for taking the time to read and comment.

Palchin

Originally posted by: sugi77

hi palchin.thnk u🤗🤗🤗 soooooo much for continuing this ff.part 6 is exellent,superb,fantastic.i luvvvvved it sooo much.plzzzzz continue asap..

THANK YOUUUUUUUUUU!!!! Wow all the compliment are making me feel like I am on cloud 9. I will continue as soon as possible, but mostly on weekends. School you know. But Thank you so much for reading it and liking it.

Palchin

Originally posted by: pooji123456789
thank u soooooooo much palchin for continuing this ff
part 6 was super awesum
yay heer falling in love
once again thank u soooooo much palchin for continuing this ff

Thank you very much for your comments. Happy to know that you enjoyed reading it. And yep Heer is falling for him. Lets wait for the next part to see what HER plan is to get her property back and save Preet.

Palchin

Originally posted by: vrinda16
Hai,

Glad u r continuing this ff. I had read the earlier parts of this ff but was sad that it had been discontinued.

Must say u have written this part well.

Do continue.Waiting for the next part soon.

Vrinda

Hey I love you name.....Anyways thanks for commenting....I did the best that I could do to write this and I can see that it is appreciated by many. Thanks or reading it.

Palchin

Originally posted by: ~nikki1992~
hey.. im glad this FF is gonna continue!!😃..
and i have to say, ur doing a mindblowing job!!👏👏👏.

its sooo good.. i cant wait to see how thigns unfold!!

please do update soon and take care till then..

~nikki😳😃

Thank you nikki......Thanks for all the compliments......Well the story will unfold in the next part....so keep staying tuned to it. Love ya!

Palchin

Originally posted by: sweta2005
awesomeeeeeeeeeeee too good do update soon asap.

THANK YOU SWETA FOR READING IT!!!!!!!!!!!! LOve YA!

PAlchin

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Dr.Smart

@Dr.Smart

Inactive

Posted: 16 years ago

#17

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Originally posted by: shabo24
WOW!

That was amazing, I loved the way you took the original and compeltly twisted it to fit into a different genre and style! The way you described all the feelings were just amazingly written and loads of twists and turns involved in it as well!

Thanks for the dedication, and no need to call me di. Shabz is fine. 😃

Good luck with it!

--shabz

THE CREDIT GOES TO YOU FOR STARTING THIS FANFIC SO I HAVE TO DEDICATE IT TO YOU......I AM HAPPY TO KNOW THAT YOU LIKED THE TWISTS AND TURNS......I HAD TO ADD THEM TO MOVE THIS STORY TO WHERE I WANT IT TO GO......I FEEL LIKE I AM A TV SERIAL SCRIPT WRITER OR SOMETHING.......😆😆😆......ANYWAYS FEEL FREE TO ADD A PART FROM YOUR SIDE INTO IT.....AND IF YOU SAY SO THEN I WILL CALL YOU SHABZ....CUTE NAME.....😃

Palchin

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@shabo24

Rocker

Posted: 16 years ago

#18

^^Aww Palchin! So sweet of you, but really the changes were stuff I didn't even think off, so hats off to you! And you incorporated it really smoothly as well! I wouldn't DREAM of adding anything to this, it's YOUR fanfic now, take it and run!

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Dr.Smart

@Dr.Smart

Inactive

Posted: 16 years ago

#19

Originally posted by: blackdaughter
Interesting.... very interesting... Yes interesting it is......😆

So basically now Ranvir and her father aren't heel bent on saving her but rather doing bhale bhale that's she is gone.......................... I like it!!!!! 😆😆😆

Yep.....They want her out of their life now.......Cheap right.....anyways its Prem to the rescue.....And now wait and watch what they do to change their own lives.

Like how the basics are the same for sure!!!!! You described everything really well and i really liked that!!!!

Thank you for the compliment......I really liked the basics so would never touch to remover that..

It was a long update too ( i really really like that)!!!!! 👏

I think this will be the longest....I don't have anymore time to write such a long one.....but the next part will be a reasonable size....

Lets see where you are going with this!!! Hope you update soon and my best wishes with you!!!

Thank you very much for the Best wishes

Palchin

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Dr.Smart

@Dr.Smart

Inactive

Posted: 16 years ago

#20

Originally posted by: shabo24
^^Aww Palchin! So sweet of you, but really the changes were stuff I didn't even think off, so hats off to you! And you incorporated it really smoothly as well! I wouldn't DREAM of adding anything to this, it's YOUR fanfic now, take it and run!

I am on a run but for you.....I think I will run slowly....very slowly so that you can catch up ewhenevr you want to......😉