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Originally posted by: Garima93

*POKES*

LOL Me ish first!!! hahahahahaha LOL, congratulations! 😉

Okies....so first off THAT WAS SO C-U-T-E!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! eeehhh!! lol I LOVED IT!!!Thank oo!

Meher and her dreamyness...totally like me at school when im day dreaming about Prem when I'm actually supposed to be paying attention in class!!! LOL😆😆 good times good times....aha we are in the same boat hun!! It happens to all of us!

Me loves Preet!!! He's such a flirt man!! I wish someone flirted with me like that!!😆 LOL yeah right like that's ever gonna happen. WHY NOT? It so could jaannnnnnn!

I loved when he started listing his own traits!! Ahem Conceited much??😆😆 And I absolutely LOVED Meher's comeback!! It was a total "ouch"!!!! hahahha😆LOL, *sigh* I love Meet.

WOW! Talk about Ravs embarassing herself!!! LMAO!!!🤣 I couldnt stop laughing at that part!! Ravs the dood wali!!! lol!!😆 Nice name for her no??😉Hey she always wanted to be a doodwali so here it is! 😃

Bahahaha!!! A "welcome" instead of a "thank you!! ROFL!!! Omg! That's happend to me a billion of times on my previous bday's!! hahaha, i guess thats a normal thing!!! awww Ravsie couldnt stop blushing!! shoo cutee!!!! Me loved it!! It was really well written and absolutely adorable!!!Really??? :S:S Never happened to me...am i missing something usually condisered normal? =] LOL, thanks!

Good Job Shabzie!!😛 Me ish proud of you!!😆LOL< why??? 😆

Okie byee-byee!!!

Garmzzz!!😆

Originally posted by: -Ravjot-

I is here =)

Aww thanks Shabz🤗I'm just going to ignore the part about me being old😆 Btw I'm younger than Meera =)No problem Ravz! But it's more fun making fun of you! Meera would just be like "yea..."

Kuldi and Kiran arguing over who changed their kids' underpants?🤣 So...who changed it last?😳😆The doodwaali. 🤣

Omg Meet! I love how Meher is so oblivious to her surrondings, not knowing she's being watched by Preet. Loved how he sneaks up on her and they start bickering😆LOL, typicall couple with a lil twist ;)

I'm the doodwali?!😲😲😃 Yay!!! This is like a dream come true for me😆ROFL, I know. 😆

Ooh I have a crush on Preet? Nice to know he doesn't remember me😆 And thanks for having me make a fool of myself😆 Aww he wished me? So sweet😳No need to thank me. It's what I do. 😉

Thanks a lot Shabz! =) I love how you said Meera couldn't wait and posted early when you do the same😆 And just to let you know, I think Tommy feels special that you mentioned him😆 Oh and I'm still blushing btw, but cuz of another reason☺️ I just read your PM so you'll know why. I want an iced cap now😆 Would you like one?No problem-o! HEY, well..yea that;s right...but still...I just thought iof it last night so didn't want to forget it or anything!! Ohh give Tommy a hug from me! And go dunk your head in water to stop bushing! 😃No thank you, I already had one today!

Originally posted by: Pyari_Zahra

Goo Goo Gaa Gaa!! xx

*EDIT*

First of all:

😆

I'm guessing you liked it?

Ravz as a doodwali??!! 🤣 LOL, she finally got her wish!! And you made her a blushing doodwali??! PERFECT- you decribed her perfectly down to every detail- I especially love the last line- how will she stop the blushing now? 😆I am the fuifiller of the wishes! 😃It's what I do,....ohh I like that line as well!

Anyway, let's go from the start!! I loved how you started it with the dood being sold- I immediately thought of Ravz at that point and laughed, LOL!! I really laughed on the Kuldi and Kiren fighting part- trying to remember who changed their kids' underpants last??!! LMAO!!LOL, that was the point to remember Ravz and then bring it back up later...!

Meet are so cute!! 😍 She's lost in thoughts of Preet, even if she won't admit it, and it's so cute how he is just intensely watching her. 😳 I loved it!! And then their little jokes to each other!! Really well written!!Thanks Zahra!! 😃

When Ravz entered, I was like 'Yeh Kahaan Se Aa Gayi??!' 😕 Then to find out she is their doodwali I was like 🤣!! Aaaww, she has little Tommy in here aswell, how cute!! Loved how she was so shy and reserved around Preet- so sweet!!Who wouldn't be? I know I would...!

I just loved it Shabz- it really made me laugh!! Can't wait to see how Ravz reacts to it, 😆!! Thanks for the PM!! 😃LOL, I'm glad Zahra...thanks and no problem!

Love Zahra xx

Originally posted by: indiandoll89

hello! 😛

*unreserved*

I like this sentence A LOT! "Little did she know that her every move was being watched with a great deal of admiration. "😳😳😳 Ahhhh the way Preet and Meher flirt....is too cute!😃😳 And I loved how she mentioned him taking Tannu out, and them pretending that she'd never fall for him, 😆😆😆 It was a totally cute conversation!😃😳You know what I like? How you oick random sentences I didn't even think about then analze them! =]

Ahhhh Ravz is the doodwali! 😛 I love it!😃😳 Is it sad that I was sorta blushing during the whole part with Preet?😆 but seriously the "who is she again" Was sad!😆😆😆LOL, no it's ok...I blush all the time, so no surprsie that a fictional charachter is making us blush!

But damn he's soo sauve!!!😳😳 She said youre welcome??🤣 Aww ravsie! 😆 That's hilarious!😆😆😆I thought it was what Ravz would do.😆

Loved the entire thing Shabo! 😃 Yes it was short, but still totally sweet!😃😳Thanks Meera!!!

Write more soon! 😃

Love you loads,

Meera😳

P.S. Ravz is right....you posted yours a week before her bday too!😆😆😆 and sssh Ravs, I'm not old!😆
Whatever...I couldn't wait. 😆And yesh you are sorta old, but you are more dignified....😆

Originally posted by: munam_13

What?????LOL what? 😆


Ravz....a doodhwali????😆 *wipes off the sweat from the forehead due to laughing*... this one was vey hillarious post... I loved the teasing you portrayed between Meet... btw was Ravz eavsdropping ?... bechaari bilkul tamatar jaisi laal ho gayi thi!!! LOL, tell Ravz that! I'm glad you liked it....sure I guess she could be evesdropping, I mean if Preet was there...wouldn't you?😆
Poor Ravz ... Preet doesnt know her... but at last he wishes her b'day😳.... this would have been the best b'day gift for her... so sweet... LOL, glad you liked it!

Luv ya Shabo and avz😳😃
Meeee too! 😉

Originally posted by: sourpuss

Hellooo hunny! I wanna a PM too! Your works are fab, and you always have Preet shirtless... 😳 I would say more, but I don't know what else to say. Seriously. I need a brain transplant. Mine is waaay too conked out, even though I had plenty of rest last night. (I mean, I slept before KDMHMD started!!) Muh. See you at your next fic!
I'm guessing you wrote this before you realized I posted a fic? 😆 Aha I get those days too! Where you wish womeone would just knock you out! Aha Preet shirtless. 'nuff said. 😆

Love,

Bhav (:

Edit: Okay so I just read the fic. AWESOME! Absolutely awesome, and it really made me laugh. (P.S. Happy 6-days-before-your-birthday, Ravz!) So wishing I could be Meet's doodhwali now...Sigh...Haha. Anyway, I'm really sorry for not being able to write much more except that it was so awesome. I'm going to go help mummy peel carrots now. It's brainless and there's no chance of getting hurt. 😛
Thanks a ton BD! 😳😳😆Glad you liked it, and who doesn't wish that huh?? Ohh have fun! Well with you...you never know!

Love,

Bhav (:

Originally posted by: Anhdara13

I love the way you started with the dood being sold. Made everyone who knows Ravzie's obsession with doodwalas' think of her, me included. 😆 Of course, I didn't expect her to be the dood wali!LOL, that's the point naa?

Seriously Shabz, I loved the way you wrote it. Describing what everyone is doing, (Kiran-KulDi arguin over who last changed their kids' underpants?? *collapses in fits of giggles*) and then having Preet stare at Meher daydreaming, then scare the living daylights out of her. She's going to have to cut the veggies again no? 😆 And he nicely compliments himself, and she bursts his little bubble of delusions. I love the way you wrote their bickering.Honestly, sometime I don't know how to reply to your comments...😆Thanks a billion,trllion,gazillion....blah. 😆I loved the Kuldi-Kiran part! 😃

And then, the best part EVER! Ravjot the doodwali! 😆 OMG, Shabzie, that was brilliant! *wipes tears of laughter* And she has a crush on Preet, who doesn't even recognise her! And of course she will fumble for words. Absolutely side-splitting Shabz.LMAO, that was my fave part as well because it is so like Ravz to mess up a simple conversation when she is too busy blushing! 😉

Love,

Radz