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Posted: 16 years ago
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How about something like "Garmz Galore" 😆
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Posted: 16 years ago
#32
Ahahahhaha...sounds good!!! except ima change Garmz to Garima's so ppl can recognize me easily lolzz
Posted: 16 years ago
#33
Hey guys! 😃 Thanks for all the comments!

Now, this is just a smally, short lil one-shot, complete fluff, all Meet! 😉 I'm sorta on a craze right now! Hopefully we will get a scene this week? 😆 Anyway this is dedicated to -Ravjot- aka Ravz, who turns *whispers* old 😆 on the 30th. A lil teaser 😉

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"Dood lelo, dool lelo!" came the screeches from the street. It was early morning, nevertheless, the city was busteling, ready to face the day, a day full of new oppurtunities. Of course, if that's what the city was up too, how could the Juneja's be left behind? Prem and Heer Juneja were off with their parents shopping for various events coming up leaving Kuldi and Kiran to once again argue over who left the TV on last night and who last changed their kids underpants. Meher Juneja, stood in the kitchen, the door open, letting in a cool breeze, allowing her hair to dance behind her. Little did she know that her every move was being watched with a great deal of admiration.

Preet leaned his frame against the door, watching his wife idly stare out of the window. Her lips were turned in the smallest of smiles as she gazed out into nothingness, twirling a chunk of hair 'round and 'round her finger dreaming, completley oblivious to her surrondings. Smiling cheekily, his hands stuffed in his pockets he swaggered over so he was right behind her. Lowering his head to her ear, he whispered coyly;

"Meri bare mein sooch ri ho naa?"

Meher jumped a mile, upheaving a plate of cut vegetables. Swearing under her breath, she turned to see the chuckling figure of her husband, who was desperatly trying not to fall over laughing. She tried narrowing her eyes, trying to emit anger but failed miserably. It was a known fact in the area, staying mad at Preet Juneja was next to impossiable.

"Preet! Kya kare ho?"

Raising his eyebrows, Preet decided to comment instead on something else. "So Meher, I never knew my innocent wife had such a colorful and diverse vocabulary. Is this what they teach in the schools of India?"

Matching his cheeky smile, Meher patted his cheek and replied, "Funny. What are you doing here? I thought you were going to take Tannu out?"

"Oh wow, you're so much more trusting then any of my other girlfriends. You don't mind if I go out with another woman? With Tannu? What if she falls for my irresistable charm? My winning smile? My twinkiling eyes? My fab-"

Meher cut him off. "In this case, I'm not that worried. Tannu is smart. She will not fall for you. Trust me. The only one that would, and unfortunartly has is me. Get over it Preet."

"Ouch."

The banter continued back and forth, mischievous remarks flying as fast as their tounges could move. So engrossed both were in their flirting, none noticed the small, petite figure enter the door from outside. Dressed in white and green, she slowly slunk to the back counter, hoping not to interupt the young couple. But Ravjot had no such luck.

"Ravz!" The welcome was evident in Meher's voice. "Kaise ho? Aur Tommy? Sab theek thak hai naa?"

"Jee." meekily replied the frightened soul. Usually Ravjot would have sprung like a high wire cut loose but in the presence of Preet Juneja, the one she had admired from afar, hoping to catch a glimpse of, she had lost all ability of speech.

Not noticing her discomfort, Preet flashed a quick smile in her direction, eager to get back to flirting. But Meher had no such intention. Teasingly, she asked Ravjot;

"So?? What day is it today??"
she asked Meher in a sing-song voice.

Bewildered, Ravjot stared back at her, hoping with all her might, Meher wouldn't, wouldn't dare mention it in front of Pre-.

"Monday?"

Rolling her eyes, Meher said; "Nice try Ravz, I'm not going to forget that easily! Happy Birthday jaan!" she squeeled, rushing over to hug Ravjot, who, in surprise dropped all of her jugs. Hurriadly, she started wiping at the clean floors, hoping to hid her burning cheeks. Seizing the oppurtunity, Preet whispered to Meher;

"Who is she again?"

Meher gave Preet a look of annoynce and sternly hissed under her breath so Ravz couldn't hear;

"Preet! Hamari doodwali hai! Ravjot!"

A lightbulb went off in his head, and he smiled, embrassed at Meher, who rolled her eyes. Meanwhile, Ravz had picked up her stuff from the ground and set the daily quota of the Juneja's milk on the counter. With a small smile to Meher, she turned to go when she was stopped by a voice that sent shivers down her back.

"Ravz?"

Beet red, she turned to Preet smiling cautionsaly at her, with Meher smiling encouraginly at him.

"Happy Birthday."

"Urm - erm ... " she stuttered. "You are welcome."

Preet's eyebrows crinkled. "Huh?"

Cursing herslef inside she muttered out, "I - I mean, thanks."

Smiling again at her, Preet wrapped his hand around Meher's waist and led her out of the kitchen, both waving back at Meher. Alone in the kitchen Ravjot tried to calm her breathing wondering, how the hell she was going to stop herself blushing now.

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Hope you guys liked it, specially Ravz! 🤗Happy early birthday!!!!!

Anyway, that was shorter then I thought it would be, but I coulnd't think of anything else to write! 😆Comment?

--shabz

Edited by shabo24 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
#34
*POKES*

LOL Me ish first!!! hahahahahaha

Okies....so first off THAT WAS SO C-U-T-E!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! eeehhh!! lol I LOVED IT!!!

Meher and her dreamyness...totally like me at school when im day dreaming about Prem when I'm actually supposed to be paying attention in class!!! LOL😆😆 good times good times....

Me loves Preet!!! He's such a flirt man!! I wish someone flirted with me like that!!😆 LOL yeah right like that's ever gonna happen.

I loved when he started listing his own traits!! Ahem Conceited much??😆😆 And I absolutely LOVED Meher's comeback!! It was a total "ouch"!!!! hahahha😆

WOW! Talk about Ravs embarassing herself!!! LMAO!!!🤣 I couldnt stop laughing at that part!! Ravs the dood wali!!! lol!!😆 Nice name for her no??😉

Bahahaha!!! A "welcome" instead of a "thank you!! ROFL!!! Omg! That's happend to me a billion of times on my previous bday's!! hahaha, i guess thats a normal thing!!! awww Ravsie couldnt stop blushing!! shoo cutee!!!! Me loved it!! It was really well written and absolutely adorable!!!

Good Job Shabzie!!😛 Me ish proud of you!!😆

Okie byee-byee!!!

Garmzzz!!😆


Edited by Garima93 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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I is here =)
Aww thanks Shabz🤗I'm just going to ignore the part about me being old😆 Btw I'm younger than Meera =)
Kuldi and Kiran arguing over who changed their kids' underpants?🤣 So...who changed it last?😳😆
Omg Meet! I love how Meher is so oblivious to her surrondings, not knowing she's being watched by Preet. Loved how he sneaks up on her and they start bickering😆
I'm the doodwali?!😲😲😃 Yay!!! This is like a dream come true for me😆
Ooh I have a crush on Preet? Nice to know he doesn't remember me😆 And thanks for having me make a fool of myself😆 Aww he wished me? So sweet😳
Thanks a lot Shabz! =) I love how you said Meera couldn't wait and posted early when you do the same😆 And just to let you know, I think Tommy feels special that you mentioned him😆 Oh and I'm still blushing btw, but cuz of another reason☺️ I just read your PM so you'll know why. I want an iced cap now😆 Would you like one?
Edited by -Ravjot- - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
#36

Goo Goo Gaa Gaa!! xx

*EDIT*
First of all:
😆
Ravz as a doodwali??!! 🤣 LOL, she finally got her wish!! And you made her a blushing doodwali??! PERFECT- you decribed her perfectly down to every detail- I especially love the last line- how will she stop the blushing now? 😆
Anyway, let's go from the start!! I loved how you started it with the dood being sold- I immediately thought of Ravz at that point and laughed, LOL!! I really laughed on the Kuldi and Kiren fighting part- trying to remember who changed their kids' underpants last??!! LMAO!!
Meet are so cute!! 😍 She's lost in thoughts of Preet, even if she won't admit it, and it's so cute how he is just intensely watching her. 😳 I loved it!! And then their little jokes to each other!! Really well written!!
When Ravz entered, I was like 'Yeh Kahaan Se Aa Gayi??!' 😕 Then to find out she is their doodwali I was like 🤣!! Aaaww, she has little Tommy in here aswell, how cute!! Loved how she was so shy and reserved around Preet- so sweet!!
I just loved it Shabz- it really made me laugh!! Can't wait to see how Ravz reacts to it, 😆!! Thanks for the PM!! 😃
Love Zahra xx
Edited by Pyari_Zahra - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
#37
hello! 😛

*unreserved*

I like this sentence A LOT! "Little did she know that her every move was being watched with a great deal of admiration. "😳😳😳 Ahhhh the way Preet and Meher flirt....is too cute!😃😳 And I loved how she mentioned him taking Tannu out, and them pretending that she'd never fall for him, 😆😆😆 It was a totally cute conversation!😃😳

Ahhhh Ravz is the doodwali! 😛 I love it!😃😳 Is it sad that I was sorta blushing during the whole part with Preet?😆 but seriously the "who is she again" Was sad!😆😆😆

But damn he's soo sauve!!!😳😳 She said youre welcome??🤣 Aww ravsie! 😆 That's hilarious!😆😆😆

Loved the entire thing Shabo! 😃 Yes it was short, but still totally sweet!😃😳

Write more soon! 😃

Love you loads,

Meera😳

P.S. Ravz is right....you posted yours a week before her bday too!😆😆😆 and sssh Ravs, I'm not old!😆
Edited by indiandoll89 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
#38
What?????


Ravz....a doodhwali????😆 *wipes off the sweat from the forehead due to laughing*... this one was vey hillarious post... I loved the teasing you portrayed between Meet... btw was Ravz eavsdropping ?... bechaari bilkul tamatar jaisi laal ho gayi thi!!!
Poor Ravz ... Preet doesnt know her... but at last he wishes her b'day😳.... this would have been the best b'day gift for her... so sweet...

Luv ya Shabo and avz😳😃


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Posted: 16 years ago
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Hellooo hunny! I wanna a PM too! Your works are fab, and you always have Preet shirtless... 😳 I would say more, but I don't know what else to say. Seriously. I need a brain transplant. Mine is waaay too conked out, even though I had plenty of rest last night. (I mean, I slept before KDMHMD started!!) Muh. See you at your next fic!
Love,
Bhav (:
Edit: Okay so I just read the fic. AWESOME! Absolutely awesome, and it really made me laugh. (P.S. Happy 6-days-before-your-birthday, Ravz!) So wishing I could be Meet's doodhwali now...Sigh...Haha. Anyway, I'm really sorry for not being able to write much more except that it was so awesome. I'm going to go help mummy peel carrots now. It's brainless and there's no chance of getting hurt. 😛
Love,
Bhav (:
Edited by sourpuss - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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I love the way you started with the dood being sold. Made everyone who knows Ravzie's obsession with doodwalas' think of her, me included. 😆 Of course, I didn't expect her to be the dood wali!
Seriously Shabz, I loved the way you wrote it. Describing what everyone is doing, (Kiran-KulDi arguin over who last changed their kids' underpants?? *collapses in fits of giggles*) and then having Preet stare at Meher daydreaming, then scare the living daylights out of her. She's going to have to cut the veggies again no? 😆 And he nicely compliments himself, and she bursts his little bubble of delusions. I love the way you wrote their bickering.
And then, the best part EVER! Ravjot the doodwali! 😆 OMG, Shabzie, that was brilliant! *wipes tears of laughter* And she has a crush on Preet, who doesn't even recognise her! And of course she will fumble for words. Absolutely side-splitting Shabz.
Love,
Radz
Edited by Anhdara13 - 16 years ago

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