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Priyadarshini Basu

@munam_13

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Posted: 16 years ago

#21

Originally posted by: nitzi
hey priyo...i jus loed it..btwn put another part which has prem breaking off his engagement with ash or wid sum happeir ending

niti

Thanks for commenting niti... well I dont want to continue this shot more..but will write more shots for sure.😃

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Priyadarshini Basu

@munam_13

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Posted: 16 years ago

#22

Originally posted by: kis desh Rocks!
it was really emotional.

Thanks😃

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Priyadarshini Basu

@munam_13

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Posted: 16 years ago

#23

Originally posted by: Sunehari*Rose
it was soo gud ....... luved it😉

Thanks for commenting dear😳

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Priyadarshini Basu

@munam_13

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Posted: 16 years ago

#24

Originally posted by: d@niy@
hey priyo... its so sweet.....amazing....👏👏👏

Thanks daniya😃

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Priyadarshini Basu

@munam_13

Dazzler

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Posted: 16 years ago

#25

Originally posted by: brokenheart61
you r a talented writer must say dear . very well written .

Thanks a lot Nadia😃

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Priyadarshini Basu

@munam_13

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Posted: 16 years ago

#26

Originally posted by: Intellienough
hey that was nice but sad update.But this is not done.Don't separate heer and prem for ever.come up with another shot where prem realises that he loves heer and ends up being with her for ever.I am waiting for the second part.

Hey lana..thnks fo commenting...well for 2nd shot I need to think whether to do it or not😃

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Priyadarshini Basu

@munam_13

Dazzler

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Posted: 16 years ago

#27

Originally posted by: amanaranjan
ooooooooooooo ur dimag doing bakwaas again huh??
lol i love it, u tell it that
fab part priyo
how do u come up with such distinct one shots so fast??
ur really a phenomenal writer
keep up the great work!
Amana

Hey Amana..yes my brain was as usual doing bakwaas again... well dont know hhow do I get those ideas...and thanks for your compliment😃

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Bulbul

@Bul3

Rocker

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Posted: 16 years ago

#28

Hey I just read zaibun's love will find a way (one shot= premeer) and it has almost the same story..yours is posted before and is short..but both one shots are awesome..loved your one shot's last scene and your narration of the scene..lovely..I request you to continue it and give it a good ending..I want Premeer together(plzz)..Well Keep up the good work👏!👏!👏

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Khushbu

@Khushi34

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Posted: 16 years ago

#29

Hey Priyo!!

Haila, What a good writer u r?? Dat was very well written....Poor Heer, Bechari, Prem misunderstood her!!! Awww They'r not going to be together??? Nahiii...Lol Jokes apart it was realli good!!! If you find the time then do write the next part...You no just to say why Prem marrying ash n not heer etc etc...But that totally up to u....

Overall Short but Great....

Take care